Sample Essay 2
Sample Essay 2
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halfway down the Mekong that Id way rather write about the people and
cultures I was encounteringnot the rocks lining the banks. When my
journey came to its end, I returned to California mentally recharged and
prepared to take on all the academics necessary. My gap year saved me a year
of floundering amid wasted loans and missed opportunities (Conroy). Like
Colleen, many people need more time and life experience to decide what
career they want to pursue. Instead of starting college right after high school,
then switching majors several times and possibly wasting tuition money, you
could use a gap year to determine the right path for you.
Finally, taking a gap year may actually help you get better grades if you
do decide to go to college. A study conducted by Sydney University of over
900 first-year college students found that many of those who took a gap year
performed better in their first year of college than those who went straight to
college from high school (Bodkin). If you choose not to go to college, you
wont be any worse off, but if you do, its likely that youll get more out of it if
you take a gap year first.
Going to college doesnt have to be an all-or-nothing thing. By taking a
gap year, youll save money and get a better idea of what career you want to
pursue. And when the time comes to go to collegeif thats what you decide
to doyoull be more successful as a college student. By taking a little extra
time to make this important decision, youre making the path toward a
satisfying career much easier to navigate.
Works Cited
Bodkin, Peter. Sydney University Study Reveals Students Who Take Gap Year Enjoy
Better Results." Herald Sun. News Corp, 17 Sept. 2013. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.
Conroy, Colleen. Why I Took a Gap Year (And You Should Too)." The LaLa. The Lala
Media Group, 14 April 2015. Web. 1 Dec. 2015.
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