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ESSAY 2

The Gap Year: A Smart Choice for the Uncertain Graduate


The path to a successful career isnt as clear as it used to be. Years ago,
to get a good job, you went to a 4-year college and that was that. Now more
people seem to be advising against college: They say its gotten way too
expensive, and if you have good business sense or tech skills, you can make a
ton of money without ever attending a single college class. Trying to decide if
college is right for you can be overwhelming, but if you take a gap yeara
year-long break between high school and collegeit doesnt have to be. A gap
year will give you time to save money, a clearer sense of what career path you
want to take, and if you do eventually decide to go to college, youll probably
get better grades than if youd gone straight there from high school.
One of the most practical reasons to take a gap year between high
school and college is saving money. Suppose you got a 40-hour-per-week job
that paid $10 per hour. Youd make $400 per week, which is about $1,600 per
month. Over the course of one year, thats a total of $19,200. Now of course,
youd have to take taxes out of that, and you probably wouldnt save every
penny of it, but even if you could save half$9,600that could pay for a year
of in-state tuition at many public 4-year colleges, and it could pay for even
more if you went to a community college first. Making college more
affordable definitely makes it a more attractive option, and if you end up not
going to college, youll still have some good savings, so the time you spend
saving will not have been wasted.
A gap year can also help you figure out what you want to do with your
life. Colleen Conroy, who took a gap year after taking a few college courses,
describes how her time off helped her discover her true passion. Before her
gap year, when she traveled through Southeast Asia, she says, I was a rockloving geology major. I still adore volcanoes and glacial fields, but I realized

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halfway down the Mekong that Id way rather write about the people and
cultures I was encounteringnot the rocks lining the banks. When my
journey came to its end, I returned to California mentally recharged and
prepared to take on all the academics necessary. My gap year saved me a year
of floundering amid wasted loans and missed opportunities (Conroy). Like
Colleen, many people need more time and life experience to decide what
career they want to pursue. Instead of starting college right after high school,
then switching majors several times and possibly wasting tuition money, you
could use a gap year to determine the right path for you.
Finally, taking a gap year may actually help you get better grades if you
do decide to go to college. A study conducted by Sydney University of over
900 first-year college students found that many of those who took a gap year
performed better in their first year of college than those who went straight to
college from high school (Bodkin). If you choose not to go to college, you
wont be any worse off, but if you do, its likely that youll get more out of it if
you take a gap year first.
Going to college doesnt have to be an all-or-nothing thing. By taking a
gap year, youll save money and get a better idea of what career you want to
pursue. And when the time comes to go to collegeif thats what you decide
to doyoull be more successful as a college student. By taking a little extra
time to make this important decision, youre making the path toward a
satisfying career much easier to navigate.

Works Cited
Bodkin, Peter. Sydney University Study Reveals Students Who Take Gap Year Enjoy
Better Results." Herald Sun. News Corp, 17 Sept. 2013. Web. 01 Dec. 2015.
Conroy, Colleen. Why I Took a Gap Year (And You Should Too)." The LaLa. The Lala
Media Group, 14 April 2015. Web. 1 Dec. 2015.

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