Tam Ngueyn Bai Mau Task 1 - Ip

2016
B BI MU WRITING TASK 1
IELTS Tm Nguyn
Contents
1. UK students destinations ....................................................................................2
2. Energy use and greenhouse gas emissions ..........................................................3
3. Market share ........................................................................................................5
4. Migration in the UK.............................................................................................6
5. Japanese tourists ..................................................................................................7
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1. UK students destinations
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The two bar charts compare UK graduates and postgraduates in terms of what they did
after their graduation from college in 2008.
It is clear from the first graph that the number of UK graduates pursuing further
education was highest in 2008, while only a few of them engaged in voluntary work. It is
also noticeable from the second chart that the number of postgraduates choosing to work
part-time was similar to the figure for further study.
In 2008, 29,665 graduate students continued to study further, while only 3,500 of them
worked voluntarily. The figures for those who chose part-time work and those being
unemployed were similar, at 17,735 and 16,235 respectively.
There were 2,725 UK postgraduates who pursued further education, which was the
highest figure, whereas the figure for the unemployed was significantly lower, at 1,625.
The number of postgraduate students who engaged in voluntary jobs was lowest, at only
345. Meanwhile, 2535 students worked part-time after they graduated from college.
(162 words)
2. Energy use and greenhouse gas emissions
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The first pie chart compares different usages of energy in a typical Australian household,
and the second pie chart illustrates the proportions of greenhouse gas emitted as a result
of such usages.
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It is clear from the first chart that the energy used for heating accounts for the largest
percentage. It is also noticeable from the second chart that water heating emits the largest
amount of greenhouse gas.
42% of the total energy is used for heating purposes, while the figure for water heating
accounts for the second highest percentage, at 30%. An average Australian household
uses only 2% of the energy for cooling, and this is similar to the 4% figure for lighting.
The Australian also use a relatively small amount of energy for refrigerator and other
appliances, making up 7% and 15% respectively.
Water heating is attributable for 32% of the total greenhouse gas emitted, whereas the
figure for other appliances is slightly smaller, at 28%. The proportion of greenhouse gas
emissions from household refrigerators is 14%, and the percentage of heating is 8%.
Cooling and lighting result in a small amount of greenhouse gas emitted, at 3% and 8%
respectively.
(193 words)
3. Market share
The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer
market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
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The table compares the proportions of market share of different brands of notebook
computer between 2006 and 2007.
It is clear that HP had the highest market share in both years, while the figures for
Fujitsu-Siemens were lowest. It is also noticeable that the market share of Dell rose
significantly from 2006 to 2007.
In 2006, the market share of HP accounted for 31.4% of the total, while the figure for
Fujitsu-Siemens was only 4.8%. 6.2% of the total market share belonged to Toshiba, and
this was similar to the 6.6% figure for Lenovo. Other companies had a total market share
of 22.8%.
In the next year, the market share of HP increased and reached 34%, whereas FujitsuSiemens experienced a fall of 2.5% and became the lowest figure. By contrast, there was
a considerable rise in Dells market share, from 16.6% in 2006 to 20.2% in 2007.
Meanwhile, the figure for Lenovo declined slightly and stood at 6.2% in 2007.
(160 words)
4. Migration in the UK
The line chart gives information about the number of immigrants, emigrants and
the difference between them in the UK from 1999 to 2008.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart compares the number of the British migrating internationally and the net
increase in the UKs population between 1999 and 2008.
It is clear from the graph that the number of people immigrating to the UK was higher
than the figures for the emigrants in all of the years. It is also noticeable that the
difference between immigrants and emigrants was relatively constant throughout the
period.
In 1999, around 450 thousand citizens immigrated to the UK, while only 300 thousand
British people moved to other countries, leading to a net increase of over 150 thousand
people in the UKs population. Over a period of five year, the rise in the UKs population
was almost constant, at 150 thousand people in 2003.
However, in 2004, the number of immigrants was greatly higher than that in 1999, at
nearly 600 thousand people, whereas the figure for emigrants was only around 320
thousand citizens. The difference between these figures was around 250 thousand people,
which was an increase in the UKs population. This net increase in population then fell
and remained stable from 2005 to 2008.
(184 words)
5. Japanese tourists
The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between
1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart compares figures for the Japanese who travel to other countries from 1985
to 1995, and the line graph illustrates the proportions of Japanese tourists coming to
Australia.
It is clear from the bar chart that the number of Japanese people travelling abroad
increased over the 10-year period, except in 1991. It is also noticeable from the line graph
that the percentage of Japanese travellers coming to Australia fluctuated during the same
period.
In 1985, nearly 5 million Japanese people travelled abroad, and only 2 percent of them
came to Australia. The number of Japanese tourists and the proportion of those travelling
to Australia both increased gradually from 1986 to 1988, reaching over 8 million people
and nearly 5 percent respectively.
While the figure for Japanese people going abroad continued to rise to nearly 10 million
in 1989, only over 4 percent of them travelled to Australia, which was a decline of 1
percent compared to 1988. From 1990 to 1993, the number of the Japanese travelling
abroad fluctuated and stood at 12 million, whereas the percentage of those travelling to
Australia went up constantly and reached its peak at over 6 percent in 1993.
(197 words)
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