Paragraph Writing
Paragraph Writing
Paragraph Writing
Paragraph Writing
What is a paragraph?
It is a group of sentences that introduces, presents and develops one main idea about
the topic. And it can be divided into three major parts.
A. The Topic Sentence
They are sentences used to support the main idea stated in the topic sentence.
They give more information about the main idea through examples.
They say in details what the topic sentence says in general.
They should be clear evidence that what the topic sentence says is trustworthy.
They should be strong convincing points on which the topic sentence can rely upon.
In this stage it is important to specify the topic you are intending to tackle.
Take a sheet of paper and just start jotting down notes that have tight
connection with your topic.
In this stage, mistakes and word-order are to be overlooked momentarily.
After you gathered the data necessary for your topic the next step is to be
taken.
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Jauhar College of Education & Sports
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Topic Sentence
Choose a topic sentence for your paragraph that states the main idea of your topic.
Supporting Details
These are sentences that support the topic sentence. They give
information that reinforces the main idea stated in the topic sentence. So
there should at least be three supporting details because one or two make
the paragraph less convincing and not worth the effort done to build it. Thus
the students are strongly advised to provide at least three strong details
which can support the main idea. The students can use all the writing
techniques necessary to make the paragraph sustainable and eligible:
descriptions, definitions, examples, elaboration and exploration. If any of the
supporting details doesnt correlate with the main idea or does not support
it, it will break the unity of the paragraph.
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Concluding Sentence
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Jauhar College of Education & Sports
Sciences, Jauharabad 0454721472/03334906002
This is the last sentence of your paragraph and it should reflect what
you have talked about in your paragraph and it should echo the topic
sentence in a way or another.
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III. AFTER WRITING:
Reviewing
This final step can be called the editing step. This is a very crucial stage of your work
process as you should review what you have done and make sure the paragraph is eligible,
technically speaking. Among the things that this stage is about are:
o Coherence and cohesion of the content
o The stability of the form
o The linking words
o Grammar, spelling and punctuation.
o Clear handwriting.
Apart from these essentials, other factors are to be mulled over:
1. Your main idea should be expressed in the topic sentence in a full, clear
declarative sentence.
2. Your topic sentence should in no way be a purpose statement such as:
The purpose of this paragraph is
I will prove in this paragraph
In this paragraph, I will tell
Show but dont tell.
3. Dont repeat yourself now then thinking that you are reinforcing your point.
4. Dont use complex or far fetched terms that may puzzle the corrector.
5. Dont use long winding sentences. Keep simple.
6. Instead of giving definitions, its better to explain and give examples.
7. Your supporting details shouldnt be too excessive.
8. Try not to be redundant or out of point. Stick to your topic.
9. Never introduce or present new ideas.
10. Irrelevant supporting details should immediately be discarded.
Finally, you can transform your concluding sentence into a thought provoking
statement that the reader may find appealing.
Practice
Imagine you are asked to write a paragraph about ASPIRIN, which of the following topic
sentences you would prefer to open your paragraph with:
1. Aspirin is a pain killer drug, but it has side-effects.
2. Aspirin can be a fatal poison.
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3. Aspirin is used to calm down headaches but it attacks the stomach.
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If you take the first one, you are not really successful in your choice because this one
is not brainstorming enough for the readers. It doesnt motivate them to continue reading your
paragraph for theres nothing inspiring about it.
Now if you choose the second one, to my mind, the reader will want to discover in
what way Aspirin is a killing poison. This topic sentence is more powerful, provoking,
exciting, inviting and motivating one.
Like the first, the third topic sentence doesnt predict any significant information. All
is said in it. It doesnt trigger the readers curiosity to know more.
The style employed in initiating your topic is the most important of all. It bears the most
important part of the work. If the topic sentence is a failure, the whole paragraph will collapse
no matter what excellent supporting details you provided.
As you know there are many ways -or say styles- to say the same thing. However, authors
are said to be writers because they can write it the right way. They make use of the most
appropriate and the most suitable styles to write something the other people know about but
they cannot express it the same way. Their styles make them different. Once the style is
eloquent, attractive and full of adequate language tools, the readers look like reading the
product with pleasure. The student is not expected to be a writer but should at least follow
the same path to make his or her writing worth reading.
SAMPLE PARAGRAPH:
Now I am inviting you to read what a student has written about ASPIRIN and see if she
has respected the layout and the steps and finally if you like her paragraph:
Aspirin can be a fatal poison. People are used to taking aspirin whenever they
feel pain. It is true that aspirin is an efficacious pain-killer for example in headache
cases. However, aspirin is like any other medicine can be dangerously harmful. Any
unregulated use of it may result into the damage to the lining of the stomach,
prolonged bleeding time, nausea, vomiting, ulcers, liver damage, and hepatitis. It is
scientifically proven that excessive use of aspirin turns it into a toxin. Its toxic effects
are Kidney Damage, severe metabolic derangements, respiratory and central nervous
system effects, strokes, fatal haemorrhages of the brain, intestines & lungs and
eventually death. Thus, the careful and regulated use of aspirin is most advisable so
as not to turn into a deadly poison.
Recapitulation
Try, as hard as you can, to make your paragraph unusual, in the positive sense of the word.
Never launch your paragraph with an idea people already know. They won't be willing to read
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Jauhar College of Education & Sports
Sciences, Jauharabad 0454721472/03334906002
along. However, if you throw at them a provoking Topic Sentence, the reader would accept
the challenge and gets impatient to know what you want to say. If the reader is faced with a
topic sentence such as,
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Aspirin is a medicine.
Aspirin has a lot of side effects.
Aspirin can cure headaches.
The reader won't be enthusiastic as to go on reading your paragraph. If, on the contrary,
your paragraph starts like this for instance,
The reader, I guess, would be fervent to know in what way this is possible. What you have
to do, then, is to prove your topic sentence valid and scientifically proven by giving
sustainable and convincing supporting details. You may prefer to quote a Doctor so as to make
your statement reliable and authentic.