Clarity: By: Albestor, Gerolin, Garceniego, Tortosa, Moraña, Macainan Abpo3A
Clarity: By: Albestor, Gerolin, Garceniego, Tortosa, Moraña, Macainan Abpo3A
Clarity: By: Albestor, Gerolin, Garceniego, Tortosa, Moraña, Macainan Abpo3A
Clarity(Clarity)
(n) - the quality
of being clear,
in particular.
Clarity
Length
Example
Too wordy:
It seems to me that it does not make sense
to allow any bail to be granted to anyone
who has ever been convicted of a violent
crime.
Just Right:
Bail should not be granted to anyone who
has ever been convicted of a violent crime.
Unity
Examples:
The main idea must have a connection
with all your succeeding phrases.
Confusing:
The eagle soars high and the bees revolt
in the heat of the sun.
Much Better:
The eagle soars high in the heat of the
sun.
Coherence
The Quality of the sentences in a paragraph when all parts and ideas
are clearly connected.
Example:
Poor Coherence
The power to be heard, the power to decide and, ultimately, the power
to shape events. For a politician, power is the name of the game. A
politician without power is like a yachtsman with no wind becalmed,
bemused, going nowhere.. Without power, what use are policies?
Good Coherence
For a politician power is the name of the game. The power to be heard,
the power to decide and, ultimately, the power to shape events.
Without power, what use are policies? A politician without power is like
a yachtsman with no wind becalmed, bemused, going nowhere..
Emphasis
Examples
Little Emphasis: The train was travelling so
fast that it derailed.
Better Emphasis: The train was travelling at
speeds in excess of 160 Kilometers per hour
and it became derailed.
sources:
http://www1.aucegypt.edu/academic/writ
ers/language_clarity.htm
http://grammar.about.com/od/tz/g/Wordi
ness.htm
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