Hi - in this edit you removed tags and added Template:Ll. Thanks for adding that template, which I often forget about. I wondered why the sentence needed the translate tags removing though - it looks like it could be marked for translation again now that this template has been added, or am I missing something?
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The portions that should not be translated needed to be enclosed in <tvar>...</tvar> tags. Additionally, there might have been other necessary corrections, so I temporarily excluded the translation unit from the translation and then marked the page for translation.