Chris Jeffreys's Reviews > All of Me

Let me start first with the fact that I really like shifter fiction, and there are some authors who really write it well. There are other authors who want to dabble in shifter fiction and do a really bad job. This job falls squarely into the latter category.

Kai and Abel are scheduled to be the alphas of their respective shifter packs. When the time comes for their bonding ceremony, Abel sees that Kai is screwing around with three other men who are taking him in every possible orafice. Watching his betrothed screwing three other men at the same time is simply not acceptable, and Abel properly leaves with the intent of never returning.

Fast forward twelve years . . . Something is not right and Kai's sister comes to Alpha Abel for assistance. (Actually, she behaved like a rude bitch who should have been killed on the spot, but we leave that for another time.). Well, it seems like Kai is screwed up badly, and is craving to be with his one true love. (Yawn Yawn Yawn -- Boring.). 

Well, in a completely non credible scene, Abel puts aside more than a decade of deceit and completes the bonding process with Kai. It is all very convenient and incredibly unbelievable. There is a willing suspension of disbelief when reading any story -- especially a Cardeno C. Story -- but this story is just bad.

At barely over 80 pages in the iPad this story drags on forever. It is just a badly conceived and written story. I just can't recommend it.