Rachel's Reviews > Dark, Witch & Creamy

Caitlyn’s old, vampire uncle, Viktor, sounded like he would add some interest to the story. Unfortunately, Caitlyn keeps telling him to leave her alone and go away.

And too many things didn’t track for me. Two examples:
-In an extremely juvenile turn of events, the town Mean Girl (an adult woman) and her adult friends come into the chocolate shop and start breaking goods. Why don’t The Widow Mags or Caitlyn insist they pay for the damaged items or call the police?
-This town is so small, and so hard to find it takes Caitlyn three drive-bys to see the sign. Yet, the day after she arrives there are multiple times when groups of tourists flock to the chocolate shop.

I read about half, then skimmed the rest.