Debra's Reviews > Aza Comics The Keepers: Origins

Interesting premise and an easy read. It definitely could have used some more editing though. There were spelling and grammatical errors throughout the book. Additionally, (view spoiler)[ at one point Kiran mentions that he eliminated one of the five new Askari girls on Dunia; however, this was never mentioned before and never again. And all five Askari women are alive at the end of the book. I'm not sure what that oversight was. I also assume Ixchel is Colel's daughter. While there is a chapter named after her, he name was never actually used anywhere in the book. (hide spoiler)]