Val's Reviews > Ariana

Room for improvement

3.5 rounded to 4. I have mixed feelings about this book. It’s a sweet love story albeit a bit predictable. There were a couple of things that drove me absolutely batty. One is that there seemed to be some issue with typos in regards to exclamation points and question marks. When it seemed a question mark would be appropriate, there was an exclamation point and vice versa. Weird. The other thing that drove me crazy was the number of times the author used the phrase “sucked air through his teeth”. I’m not altogether certain what that actually means but it has to have been written at least 30 times in this story. Okay, to be fair, I don’t know exactly how many times it’s in the book but it is used a shit ton of times!