.Iam Right

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.Iam Right

.Iam Right

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Written by

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Arien Galdikhani. Armin Snyder.

Gregory Burton. Tanisha Bronson. Bradly Stue Stierlinger. Melanie Woodfield.

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FADE IN:

THE BEGINNING :  Iam Right !

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EXT. NEW WEST CHARTER SCHOOL - OUTSIDE SCHOOLYARD - WEST LA CA - MORNING

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At school ... Ben is at the schoolyard...

Ben walks through the corridor where some metal

shelves are at the side, he goes to his shelves ...

But then he sees Janette Its a beatyfull girl with

some other girls they walking in a group together

at the corridor to the classes ...

They talk about ... Some Boys they had met yesterday.

ROSY

(talking to Madeline)

That·s Jerome whos is inviting us ? ...

And is he driving a Car ?

ROSY

(talking to Madeline)

How old is he ?

MADELINE

(answering)

18 !

I thought he was an even

younger !

JANETTE

(talking to Madeline)

Yes his car ? Nice even as his look !

ROSY

(asking)

from his daddy maybe ?

The Car ?

MADELINE

(answering)

No Idea ! But Today he invites us to his home ...

Youre coming with us ? Janette ?

Where you looking at ?

Ben is also looking at Janette ... From a distance

as he cames near to her and the other two girls

also seen his coming ...But then from a sudden !

A student pushes him from behind ! against the girl students group ...

they laugh their heads off... Ben flies with his

Body on one of the Girls at the group... He hits on a

Girl...She falls and spills her drink on her body

they fly there on ground... It’s Madeline, next to her is

another girl it’s Janette...Janette looks at Ben.

because he is laying there now ... Ben is at the

ground and Madeline also next to him, the content

of that drink ... was spread at her shirt ...

... The boy and his group laughing about Ben ...

Ben gets angry while he stands up ... And grabs a

book from the girl next to him.

she holds an Schoolbook at the other and while her left with the drink spilled on her clothes.

As Ben gets up he hits the boy with the book from her in his face,

his lips already gets hurt ,and its bleeding the boy lifts his hands to protect his face , as well but it was to

late ... Because Ben throwed it by much force, so the boy gets bleed on his lips...

.. his nose is bleeding also a bit... as he looks at ben with some breathing ... and some of a scared look....

One of the other guys that was involved of that funny action is Tom he says ...

TOM

(calling)

Are you dumb or

something ?

BEN

I beat you too !

You Sucker !

Then after that offensive conversation they get to

clinch to each other ... Ben downs his ellbow and

backs of one step to side and punches the other guy

at his chin ...

The third guy of these boys ... takes Ben and throws him away to get his Friend Tom free of that

Clinch ...it is Chris He says ...

CHRIS

(calling)

Stop It right now !

Theyre are whitnesses

Just what you·ve done !

Look at him !

BEN

(calling)

Shut up you punk !

Camera scene ends for now !

And moves to other scene !

CAMERA IN THE CLASS !

INT. NEW WEST CHARTER SCHOOL - INSIDE CLASS ROOM 8 - WEST LA CA - MORNING

Ben and his students are supposed to write essays...

PUPIL STEVEN

Mister...Collins...how many essays

should we write ... ?

The teacher says ...

MR COLLINS

you can ask later !

when the topic is raised ! now let’s start with literary artists !

The teacher interupts Stevens question while

skipping to the literary thematics and says...

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MR COLLINS

Who knows Oscar Wilde ?

Many Pupils don’t lift hands up... But some do...

someone answers and says ...

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PUPIL RIC

Oscar Wilde has

... written over 5000 books ...

The teacher corrects and says ...

MR COLLINS

5100 correctly!

Excellent ! ...

Golding ? Who knows about these Man ?

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Many do not answer, again some

but.

one says ...

JIMMY

(calling)

gold dick !

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many students start laughing...

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the teacher interrupts and says ...

MR COLLINS

(calling)

hey !

hey stop ! ... The next one flies out ...

Okey ! Be aware !

sooo...

We gone through the next one ! Homer ... ?

Does some one knows him !

...

Many say yes... but few say no

TREY

who doesn’t know this homo ? ...

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many students

laugh ! ...

MR COLLINS

who was that pal ? ...

Trey ? ... You dont ! ... Go out ! Right now !

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TREY

Please Mister !

MR COLLINS

.... Hmmm Okay ! next time I write a red letter to

your parents ! You understand ! What this means

Boy !

MR COLLINS

So ! If the next one ... Calls again something

Dumb Trey gets out and also the called one ! ...

MR COLLINS

Sooo Lets make us go ahead ! ... Those both now

wrote above 9000 Books Do some one knows them ?

MR COLLINS

Dickens ... Charles ?

Many Pupils calling yes ...

JIMMY

8293 ? ? ? ...

MR COLLINS

Ooo just close ... 1000 More ! But Good ...

CHRIS

9502 Books ? ...

MR COLLINS

Just O Bullseye ! 9953 ... But Very Good ! Chris !

PAUL

A Tale of two cities !

He wrote that ? ? ?

MR COLLINS

Wonderfull ! ... Paul was correct ...

Charles John Huffam Dickens ...

Many Pupils laughing ! ! ! ...

MR COLLINS

Why you laughig ! ...

JENNY

Because of his tall name ! ...

MR COLLINS

Yes ! some Earls and Cunnings from former England

had such long names ... Or also Irish Mc Arthur

Mc Cloud ! ... Some how we get busy with him next

Time

...Okay !

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(as the teacher says these last sentences he just

looking to Paul ... Because he wants to get busy

next time also with the Pauls one called A Tale of

two cities ! ... But after the conversation

he continues to another autor ...

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MR COLLINS

Mr Dickens and his history !

Now to another one !

Shakespeare ? ...

...

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many answer yes, few

with no! ....

BEN

15043 books ...

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teacher says ...

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MR COLLINS

almost ... 15443 ...

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O o o not so fast...

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the students pack everything in their bags because it

ringing soon...

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MR COLLINS

It’s about to ring. Then you can go... Ben

you stay here for a moment,,,,

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the students leave because the bell rang...

.... As the students leave, Ben says...

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BEN

yes, mister..

Collins

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BEN

I was.... I was just defending myself...

COLLINS

I heard that differently Ben! ....

You’ve been noticed before, boy! Why are you making everything so difficult for yourself ? ... They want

get rid of you here ben do you know that ? ....

BEN

Mister Collins I’m not wrong!

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MR COLLINS

wrong...

teacher says ...

you’re right you think ...

after all you did here at school

had ... !

BEN

... What can i do now ! Sir ! ....

Teacher...says ...

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MR COLLINS

you can’t change the things that happened Ben but....

BEN...

Yes sir !

COLLINS

But you can ...get done something for your future

to change it right now ...

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BEN

and how ? how do you mean that Sir!

...

MR COLLINS

I’ll give you a chance... Write essays...

BEN

About what? ...

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MR COLLINS

about that

What’s important to you... you asked me something at the beginning, well, about the ...

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BEN

Am I right? .... teacher yes ! I am

Right !

Write these essays and then we’ll see

further ! Ok ...

Ben

Ok Sir ! ....

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EXT. NEW WEST CHARTER SCHOOL - OUTSIDE ENTRANCE - WEST LA CA - MORNING

Ben gets picked up by his uncle Jeremy at school.

They drive ... away from the school ... To another

location ... while they drive they speak together

and Jeremy chewing a gum.

JEREMY

How you doing at school ...

BEN

Today i had get much homeworks ...

And some Girl I met It was .... HHHhhhmmm

Janette ! ...

JEREMY

Yes ! It is the doughter of my Women ! Sarah !

But not your ...

BEN

Okay ! So ... Not even my relatives !

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JEREMY

Yes but you can understand with her good ! ...

Because you will see her maybe ? ...

So what did happened to your arm ...

why you stroke it ! Did you fall ? ...

Bens Arm is hurt a bit because he was pushed from

behind ... Than he fell also visuable at his

arm is a scratch too !...And Jeremy sees it because

he strokes his arm a bit.

BEN

No ! I dont fell ...

Some one pushed me from behind i didnt do anything

they just want to angry me !

Also i through some book at him.

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JEREMY

Okay !

But you just defend your self ?

BEN

They do it often ... So i seem to act like someone

that can defend his self I feel right !

JEREMY

I do also understand ! ...

In my school times ... I had many such problems

But today i defend my self another way !

BEN

How do you threath this actions ?

JEREMY

I have an attorney They get everyone in jail !

Yes also by a scratch like your arm ! ...

BEN

Do they can get him at jail ?

JEREMY

No because he is a kid you know ! That·s another

kind of matter ! ...

BEN

And why such adults can get in jail ? ...

JEREMY

That you will get understand ... If you had some

experience ... I mean am i study ? ... am i also

get a good job im an suitcase man ! And Police also

Attorneys are different races to Robbers and Jerks ! ... Like rats and birds ...

BEN

Laughing

Suitcase man ! ... haha .. hah !

JEREMY

yea h just look ....

Ben looks at his suitcase ... while Jeremy shows it

EXT. JEREMY·S HOUSE OUTSIDE PARKING LOT - WEST LA CA

- MORNING

JEREMY

Im a suitcase man !

Now we here kid get out i must drive to other

location ! Bye ...

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SOUNDTRACK STARTS...

IT IS THE MOVIE SOUNDTRACK AND AS BACKGROUND

PLAYED.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7vQARNQjzb0

((((((((( CAMERA SEQUENCE CHANGES

AND SHOWING THE CITY OF TORRANCE CA ))))))))))

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EXT. ABOVE THE CITY - TORRANCE CA - MORNING

It lasts about 10 seconds and then, the camera, shows ! Jeremy at his car a loading of a gun

0:11 JEREMY STARTS TALKING

TO HIS SELF

(CLICK CLACKhhh !)

JEREMY

(talking to his self)

HEY ! DONT MOVE !

GET OUT OF THE CAR !

0:15 JEREMY·S GUN AT THE SIDEMIRROR TO SEE !

Jeremy is in the car he has a suitcase there !

He looks in the backmirror and moves ...

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The actors and their names

Credits all further captions!

come to light while ...the camera is

pose from above in los angeles showing at TORRANCE CA

AND FLIES (DRONE VIEW FLIGHT) TO HERMOSA BEACH !

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IT FOLLOWS JEREMY‘S CAR AND UNTILL HE ARRIVES