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Persons Unknown
Persons Unknown
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Persons Unknown

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THE SUNDAY TIMES BESTSELLER

A brutal murder. A detective with no one left to trust.

‘[Steiner] solidified the promise of last year’s debut, Missing, Presumed, with another hyper-realistic police procedural’ Guardian: Books of the Year 2017

A YOUNG MAN MURDERED
A city banker bleeds to death yards from a Cambridgeshire police headquarters.

A DETECTIVE OUT OF HER DEPTH
DI Manon Bradshaw’s world is turned upside down when the victim turns out to be closer to her than she could have guessed.

WHO SHOULD SHE BELIEVE?
When even her trusted colleagues turn their backs on her, it’s time to contemplate the unthinkable: are those she holds dear capable of murder?

Manon Bradshaw is back.

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'Steiner has a quirky, evocative prose style that is often very funny and her novels are highly entertaining and full of memorable, well-rounded characters' Sunday Express

'Bradshaw is an engaging heroine, full of self-doubt and contradiction, but whose caustic wit gleams through the grim murder inquiry' Daily Mail

'Winning prose, sympathetic characters and an appreciation of life’s joys as keen as a knowledge of its dangers' Wall Street Journal

‘An ingeniously and extravagantly plotted, multi-voiced thrillride … wise and witty … beautifully written’ Irish Times

‘I loved it … Persons Unknown is like walking on quicksand, for reader and detective alike' Val McDermid

'A smart and funny rumination on motherhood' New York Times

'Strikingly modern…It is refreshing to see a detective grappling with real life dilemmas but they never get in the way of the plot, which is clever and original. A series to watch from a confident writer who draws even minor characters with care and sympathy' Sunday Times

‘By turns tense and tender, gripping and moving, and always beautifully written. I didn’t read this book so much as live it: DI Manon Bradshaw is so convincingly human that I often wonder what she’s up to now’ Erin Kelly

‘The best new crime series in years’ Sarah Perry

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Release dateJun 29, 2017
ISBN9780008123352
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Susie Steiner

Susie Steiner began her writing career as a news reporter first on local papers, then on the Evening Standard, the Daily Telegraph and The Times. In 2001 she joined the Guardian, where she worked as a commissioning editor for 11 years. Her first novel, Homecoming was described as 'truly exceptional' by the Observer.

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  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I liked the mystery in this and the character development. The momentum kind of putters out near the end, which is unfortunate, but overall I enjoyed it.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I liked Persons Unknown even more than the first. Some great insights on human behavior. Manon and Fly's relationship is fragile and I can't help but root for them because it is so beautiful. An issue that I noticed with Missing, Presumed and this book is the conclusion to the mystery, it's a bit anti-climatic, but the lead up to it is outstanding and the character development so good that I can overlook that slight flaw. Maybe I just wanted to see one of the characters get their due and that didn't happen. I will definitely be reading the third in the series. So sad to hear of Steiner's death, huge loss as she was so talented. Sadly there will not be a fourth in the series
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I do like Manon Bradshaw, in spite of her so-mixed-up self! I’ve enjoyed both books, and I’m waiting eagerly for Ms. Steiner to finish the third.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Second mystery featuring Manon Bradshaw. A complicated plot that resolved in a satisfying way, though there was a big logic problem concerning the arrest of Manon's adopted son. Like the first book, the characters were well done as individuals with quite different voices. Manon is pregnant during this book and I grew really irritated with all the mentions of how tired she is, how fat, how uncomfortable. It felt like she was practically in a coma through the last part of the book. I guess if you have a pregnant protagonist, that can't be helped, but it was boring.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I'm a bit torn on this one. Up until pretty close to the end, I was into the story and feeling Manon's frustration and heartbreak and anger and all the rest. I was empathizing with Davy and cheering for Mark. But the way the reasoning behind the arrest was completely glossed over left me calling bullshit. As upset as Manon was about it, I have a hard time believing she wouldn't have pushed for more of an explanation. Particularly since it was so close to her personal and professional lives.

    I would go 3.5 stars if I could. When I started writing this review, I had already marked the book as 4 stars but just dropped it to 3 because I can't get past the handling of the arrest and the resolution with the conspirators. I don't want to give any spoilers away so I can't get more specific than that.

    Was the writing good and the mystery interesting, yes. But between the stuff I already mentioned and having one-to-three POVs too many, I feel comfortable with the 3 stars. The extra POVs weren't really that bad but I would have liked to have stayed with either Manon or Davy and had the story unfold from their POVs instead.

    All this being said, I will certainly still read the next in the series. I like Manon. Flawed, bitchy, rude, assholish Manon.

    Thanks to the publisher, and NetGalley, for the opportunity to read and review this book.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Manon Bradshaw returns in a gripping police procedural that hits her very close to home.

    In Susie Steiner’s previous novel, Missing, Presumed, Detective Manon Bradshaw adopted young Fly Dent, left orphaned with the deaths of his mother and his brother, Taylor. In Persons Unknown, Manon and Fly, Manon’s sister Ellie and Ellie’s toddler son Solomon have left central London and taken up residence together in a house in Cambridgeshire. Manon, several months pregnant, is desk-bound and working cold cases. Having given up on the notion of finding a suitable male life-partner, she has opted for artificial insemination. When a young, very wealthy banker from London dies of a stab wound in a nearby park, Manon—who is not part of the investigative team—finds herself on the outside looking in and suffering a shock when facts come to light connecting Ellie to the victim, Jon-Oliver Ross. Then the investigation—which is being led by her colleagues Harriet Harper and Davy Walker under the direction of Detective Chief Superintendent Gary Stanton—takes an even more alarming turn when Fly, caught on CCTV footage in the park at the time of the murder, is arrested. Manon, fed up with the physical and emotional burden of her pregnancy, rattled by guilt over Fly’s obvious unhappiness with the move to Cambridgeshire, and incensed by how Fly is being treated in custody, embarks against policy on an off-the-books investigation and soon finds herself stumbling along a dangerous path toward several unpleasant truths, one of which has the power to shatter her faith in what she thought were solid family ties. Manon Bradshaw, with her impulsive, intuitive bull-in-a-china-shop investigative approach, is someone with whom the reader instantly connects and comes to care about, as a cop, as a woman, and as a mother. The London setting, expertly evoked, drips with atmosphere. Persons Unknown is a carefully crafted, smart and engrossing entertainment: a complex tale of corruption full of twists and turns, briskly paced, and bustling with sympathetic characters whose pain and daily struggles are real.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Interesting read. The characters are real, almost too real. The story keeps your attention.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Persons Unknown is the 2nd book in the Manon Bradshaw series. Manon is 5 months pregnant, and is feeling a bit out of sorts. A dead body is found in the park. This person happens to be involved with her family.
    Manon is not allowed to be involved with the case, due to her proximity to the victim. So many things are happening at once, and it leads to a seedy story of money laundering, prostitution, murder, and affairs.
    Manon feels betrayed by her friends on the force and by her family. Things are falling apart.

    This is a well crafted story and I really enjoyed it. It is full of twists and turns and interesting characters as well as interesting family dynamics.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Persons Unknown by Susie Steiner picks up where her debut novel Missing, Presumed leaves off. Manon Bradshaw has adopted twelve year old Fly (from the previous book) and moved back to Huntingdon, living with her sister and nephew Solly. When a finance executive is stabbed to death in a local park, Fly is charged with the murder, even though there is no evidence to support the charge. He was seen walking in the park at the time of the murder and his footprint was found in some blood on the ground.

    Manon, five months pregnant, is obviously beside herself, bemoaning the move which was theoretically to benefit Fly by getting him out of his old neighborhood. Barred from participating in the murder investigation, she of course, does so anyway, along with hired attorney Mark Talbot.

    There are a lot (a lot) of twists and turns in Persons Unknown, that’s for sure. And it is a good read. However, it is short on solving the mystery and long on Manon’s bemoaning her fate: single, pregnant, tired, not keeping Fly safe in his new environment…and the list goes on. So, here you have the plusses and minuses. Do what you will.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    This is one helluva thriller. It's the second (after Missing, Presumed - and this is even better!) featuring the same lead character, detective Manon Bradshaw, jaded and cynical, whose life is going in many crazy directions. She's the adoptive mother of Fly, a black twelve year old, and she's yanked him from London's gang influences to a suburb where he is surrounded by no one who looks like him. And she's moved to cold cases, since she's also become pregnant. Manon and Fly live with her sister Ellie, who is also a single mom to Solly. The story opens with the murder of Ellie's ex, Simon's father Jon-Oliver.

    There are so many excellent supporting characters here, and the most fantastic writing, chock full o'Brit-isms that made me flush with pleasure when I could figure them out.

    Dear reader, we've got another Kate Atkinson here!
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I really enjoyed the first book (Missing, Presumed) in Susie Steiner's new series featuring Cambridgeshire Detective Sergeant Manon Bradshaw. Manon returns in this second book - Persons Unknown.

    Manon has relocated from London back to Cambridgeshire and taken a position in Cold Cases. She figures the locale change will be better for her adopted son Fly and the baby she's expecting in five months. Her sister and her young son are living with them as well.

    But, old habits die hard. When a businessman dies just steps away from the police station, Manon can't help herself - she sits in on the briefings. Things get real personal when it's discovered that the victim has ties to Manon's family - and that Fly is a suspect. That's just the beginning. Lines are crossed and boundaries broken in so many ways in this latest.

    Oh, where to start? I adore Manon. She's dogged, determined, feisty, fierce and loyal. Exactly the person you would want in your corner. Her pregnancy adds a level of difficulty, but also some funny moments on the way to solving this latest mystery. As with Missing, Presumed, there's an excellent. well-plotted mystery at the heart of the book, but Steiner's novels are definitely character driven. And for me, that's why I am enjoying her writing so much. I was glad to see Davy and Harriet (both police officers) return. They too have 'full' personalities and lives. Davy is also given a voice and POV in this book. And I really like the developments and relationships that Steiner has inserted into Manon's life.

    I always enjoy British police procedurals - the focus is not on blood or gore, but on the clues, the investigation, and the players. There are many ways things could have played out in Persons Unknown. I had my suspicions about whodunit, but was quite happy to be not completely right.

    Persons Unknown was another excellent read from Steiner - and I'm really looking forward to the third book. Absolutely recommended.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I received a free advance e-copy of this book and have chosen to write an honest and unbiased review. I have no personal affiliation with the author. This is a very well written police procedural crime thriller. Excellent plot and great character development. Full of twists and turns. I couldn’t put it down. I never knew what was going to happen next. So many secrets and surprises. A mother will do anything to save her son. Do we ever really know our own family members, their motivations, and what they are willing to do for a buck? This book is well worth the read and I look forward to reading more from Susie Steiner in the future.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    Steiner has created a character who is very easy to relate too, she has so many contrasting characteristics to her personality, tough and yet compassionate, fearless except when it come to a certain twelve year old. Fly, a young black male that she adopted in the previous book, but their relationship is a work in progress. The case in this book will hit very close to Manon's home and heart. A very timely case concerning racial bias and Manon will find out who her friends are, those who are willing to help despite consequences to themselves and their own jobs.

    Second book in this series, and though I really didn't want to pick up another series, I am quite taken with this one. Well written, alot of heart and interesting scenarios make for a good read.

    ARC from publisher.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    Like the author's first book, this one was okay for me. A good read for the most part. A little lengthy in some parts.

    I liked how the author handled the chapters with the different characters and yes, I even liked poor Birdie.

    Manon did get on my nerves a few times, but it wasn't so annoying that I cringed everytime the story came back to her. It is a series that I would read more of.

    The ending was something that I didn't see coming - well not entirely all of it.

    Thanks to Random House and Net Galley for providing me with a free e-book in exchange for an honest, unbiased review.
  • Rating: 3 out of 5 stars
    3/5
    I’ve been in a bit of a slump lately. The last few books I’ve read have been ok…nothing wrong with them but not anything that made me lock myself away & force abandoned family members to forage for themselves ’til I was done.

    When I read the blurb on this, I was hoping for an exciting & complex police procedural that would keep me guessing. Sadly, it was not to be. Yes, Manon Bradshaw is a cop but despite the fact it opens with a body this is much more about the MC’s domestic situation than hunting down bad guys.

    To be fair, she is forgiven for being a bit scattered & preoccupied. Manon is 42, 5 months pregnant & lives with sister Ellie, nephew Solly & adopted son Fly. She recently left the bright lights of London for a slower life with the police force in Huntingdon. Her crushing workload at the Met has been replaced by regular hours spent combing through cold cases. Impending single-motherhood is daunting enough. So she really doesn’t need the added stress of Ellie’s problems, Solly’s tantrums & Fly’s troubles at school. The proverbial icing on the cake is provided when the body is identified as Ellie’s ex.

    That’s just the beginning of a convoluted story line that will cause Manon’s professional life to come crashing into her personal one. The author has a very distinctive writing style, often in present tense with characters’ random thoughts popping up in the narrative. Chapters alternate narrators so you get multiple POV’s. The investigation throw up a few surprises but you’ll have your suspicions early on as to who is involved. Instead of being full of suspense, it’s more of a vehicle to foreshadow big change to Manon’s home life.

    The case is wrapped up by the end but several other plot lines are left open. I haven’t read the first in the series & perhaps that’s why I had a hard time connecting with the MC. That’s on me. It all comes down to the fickle element of personal taste & if you read & loved “Missing, Presumed”, no doubt you’ll find much to enjoy here.
  • Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
    2/5
    I had a hard time getting through this book. It seemed that each chapter was being told by multiple points of view. I also got annoyed at the way the pregnant title character was portrayed. I felt that just because she was pregnant she was given a lesser role in the book.
    I love British mysteries but was very disappointed with this one.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    Persons Unknown is the second in the DS Manon series from Susie Steiner and easily matches the first volume, Missing, Presumed, in both plot and character development.

    Steiner tends to give readers an in-depth look into how her characters think whether those thoughts are related to the case or not. This may well be what some people find tiring in her novels but it is what I find most interesting. In this case, however, everyone should be satisfied because the case is very personal for Manon so her thoughts all, to some degree, pertain to the case.

    I think her use of each chapter being from the perspective of a different character works very well. It allows us to not only know recurring characters even better but lets us know some of the case-specific characters a lot better. I am thinking of Birdie here in particular.

    As with many mysteries, especially police procedurals, many social and cultural issues are addressed. This is true here as well and the extra depth of character development allows those issues to have both an organizational/societal aspect as well as personal aspects on both sides of any debate.

    I would recommend this to readers of both mysteries and general character-driven novels. There is plenty to appeal to both groups.

    Reviewed from a copy made available by the publisher via NetGalley.
  • Rating: 5 out of 5 stars
    5/5
    I was delighted to get the opportunity to read an advance copy of Persons Unknown as I had read and liked Missing, Presumed. I thought Persons Unknown was even better. Although it is considered a sequel, I found it was perfectly fine as a stand-alone novel. I couldn't put the book down; the characters and plot were unique and compelling. I found the realistic insights into a murder investigation from many perspectives interesting. I liked both the interracial adoption issues and single motherhood experience. I also appreciated the story line of the shopkeeper and her loneliness. This book was much more than a mystery/thriller, largely due to the great writing and interesting characters. I highly recommend it.
  • Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
    4/5
    I received a copy of this novel from the publisher via NetGalley.

    DI Manon Bradshaw has returned to Cambridgeshire and is living with her sister Ellie, Ellie’s son Sol, and Manon’s adopted son Fly. Because she now has Fly, she is working cold cases to keep her hours manageable. The body of a man is found in a park and it turns out to be Ellie’s ex/Sol’s father. Then Fly is arrested for his murder.

    I found the beginning a bit slow; I was enjoying the bits from Davy’s perspective, when actual police work was being done, but these were interspersed with Manon obsessing endlessly about her pregnancy and how tired/ungainly it made her feel and how she wished she weren’t shut out of the murder case. Once Manon started helping the defence lawyer, Mark, and doing investigating of her own, the pace picked up.

    I found the plot interesting and coherent, with some excellent twists, although Ellie’s love life turned out to have been improbably exciting for the single mother of a toddler working as a nurse. I liked the Manon/Mark storyline, but there was something off for me about Manon’s relationships with Fly and her unborn baby. I can’t remember too much about the first novel in this series, but here Manon’s distress about Fly’s arrest and remand seemed out of all proportion to the way she related to him at the beginning of the book. As for the baby, she was either obsessing endlessly about it (see above) or wishing she had never got pregnant because of the effect on Fly, now the apple of her eye.

    Recommended. I hope the next one has lots more of Davy.

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Persons Unknown - Susie Steiner

14 December

Jon-Oliver

Down. Dizzy. Pitching left. He is draining away like dirty water, round and round. Stumbling not walking, the ground threatening to come up and meet him. And yet he presses on. Something’s not right.

He is swampy, heavy-footed. His shin is throbbing. A scuffle – like being spun in blind man’s buff – so quick that when it was over he thought he’d been mugged, but he patted himself down and his wallet and phone were there all right.

His muscles are soupy, unresponsive. His legs wade, the landscape too broad for him to make headway. The air is close like a wet web. He can barely draw breath.

He stumbles to the right, into a muddy wooded area in a direction he hadn’t intended to take and it’s as if the ground is reaching for him. Is it quicksand, not mud?

He’s really scared now; nervously places a hand to his chest. His shirt is wet through but it’s not raining. He looks at his hand. It is glistening dark; the colour unclear because of the dark and the orangey street lighting.

He starts to panic, cannot fill his lungs. What is happening to him?

He falls into the mud, feels some arms take him up and cradle him, looks up to see blonde hair. The alien scent of perfume.

Saskia?

‘Sass?’ he whispers, confused. Is she the cause of this, after all her stupidity? She went too far and he couldn’t stop her.

‘Sass?’

His sight dims, he is too tired.

The world dips.

Manon

Crisp in one hand, sandwich in the other; the tickle and press of light internal kneading around her pelvis, like butterflies in a sack. Seems typical that pregnancy has brought zero in the way of nausea but has instead turbo-charged Manon’s appetite.

She becomes aware of Harriet and Davy talking, urgent and low, on the other side of the open-plan office. Something’s up. They’re quickening. Manon elongates her neck, craning to hear, but her colleagues are too far away.

As they pass her desk she says, ‘Anything up?’

‘Job’s come in,’ Harriet says, but it’s clear she can’t be bothered to fill Manon in.

‘Ooh, who is it?’ Manon says, full mouth.

They ignore her.

She looks at Davy, full of himself these days; Detective Sergeant Davy Walker, promoted by the super, Gary Stanton. He might as well call Stanton ‘Daddy’. Well, he’s welcome to it. Manon is in hot pursuit of the work–life balance: desk job, regular hours, house full of children. She wants to focus on whether to sign up for an organic veg box or whether this would be taking her personal reinvention too far. You can lead a horse to uncooked beetroot …

And yet she is straining out of her seat to overhear the conversation between Harriet and Davy.

‘I could be special advisor at the scene, brackets, teas,’ she offers.

When she’d first begged Harriet for a job back in the Major Crime Unit, determined to leave behind the misery of the Met (awful boss, crushing workload) and the cost of London living, she said she’d do anything, didn’t care how boring. Cold cases.

‘You don’t want to do cold cases,’ Harriet said. ‘There is no greater career cul-de-sac than cold cases.’

‘I do, seriously. Boring dead-end redundancy’s where I’m at.’

And cold cases is where she’s ended up, while her belly enlarges (now at the five-month mark), spending quite a few of her days following her satnav inexpertly around the Fens – turn around where possible – to interview people who couldn’t remember much about last week, never mind a decade ago. Telling herself this is fine. This is what’s called Having It All (though most of the time, it feels like having small slivers of the duller bits) – home by five, pick up some Persil non-bio. You have reached your destination on your right.

Christ, really?

Harriet has marched off in a hurry.

‘Davy; oi, Davy,’ Manon hisses at him as he thumbs his mobile phone and Davy – who used to work for her, who used to do her bidding while she shushed him – shushes her with his finger. Now he’s the DS running the job while she … Well, she is quite tired to be fair.

‘Just tell me what’s up,’ she says when he’s off the phone.

‘Stabbing, male, in Hinchingbrooke Park.’

‘Nice of him to kark it so local.’

‘Actually, he might not even be dead yet,’ says Davy, eyes darting with all the thoughts he’s having, checklist and scene log and SOCO, no doubt. ‘Right by the forensics lab as well. We can all walk it from here. Really couldn’t be more convenient.’

And he is back on his mobile, heading for MCU’s double doors.

Her Nineties house, squat in its tray of mown turf, the very image of a child’s drawing complete with pitched roof and windows like eyes. Not too bright: a stoic face, happy with its lot. Around the lawn is a frill of box hedging, so low you could step over it – and what’s the point in that, she wonders, remembering the burglary prevention advice she used to dole out when she was in uniform. Plant prickly bushes under windows. Halt! This is a shrubbery!

Her key in the plastic door with its fake leaded lights, letting herself in and noticing that the reality is a step removed from what she’d hoped for, moving back to Huntingdon. She thought it would be all spacious living and glorious rural(ish) childhoods for Fly and Solly.

‘I don’t want to bring up a black boy in London,’ she said to her sister Ellie at the start of her campaign for them to move back to Cambridgeshire. This had followed Manon being summoned to the headmaster’s office at Fly’s vast, terrifying comprehensive school and an encroaching fear that he was getting in with the wrong crowd, or possibly that he was the wrong crowd.

‘That’s exactly where you should bring up a black boy,’ Ellie said.

‘And watch him get stopped and searched every five minutes of his life? Arrested for stuff he didn’t do? Looked at by old ladies who think he’s going to mug them? I watch them, you know, giving him a double take, and it breaks my fucking heart.’

‘So what, you’d rather take him out to the UKIP heartlands, would you, where he’ll be the only black boy for miles around?’ Ellie said. ‘You should see the old ladies out there.’

‘We can’t afford to stay here. The rent’s crippling me. It’s crippling you as well. Come on, we could get a big house, the four of us. Fly would never agree to leave Sol, you know that.’

Ellie looked uncertain. ‘It is astronomical,’ she admitted. ‘But God, I hate being uprooted. Having to start again somewhere new, making new friends. Makes me feel exhausted just thinking about it. I’ve got a group of mums I feel comfortably ambivalent about, right here.’

‘We could get a mansion in Huntingdon or Ely or Peterborough,’ Manon pleaded. ‘You could—’

‘Start a course of antidepressants?’

‘Go back to work.’

Their charmless four-bedroom house opposite police HQ in Hinchingbrooke is costing a fraction of what they were spending on two flats in the capital, and is more than double the size. They each – her, Ellie, 12-year-old Fly (whose trainers alone, like cruise ships adrift, have their own housing needs) and Ellie’s nearly-3-year-old Solomon – have a capacious bedroom, hers and Ellie’s both with en suites. The house has one of those bolt-on hexagonal conservatories made from uPVC and, beyond, a 150-foot lawn dotted with menacing conifers. The Bradshaws can even boast a utility room (and what says you have arrived more than a utility room?) with grey marble-effect laminate worktops.

Manon calls ‘Hello?’ into the volume of the house, clattering her keys onto a glass-topped console in the hallway (an irritant none of them could be bothered to remove – whatever domestic improvements are hatched in the utopias of the night are laid to waste in the harum-scarum day). She smells cooking – whatever Solly has just had for tea.

She stands in the doorway to the lounge, already disappointed by the scene in front of her: an oatmeal vista, its candelabra lights descending stiffly from the low ceiling (a persecution of a ceiling – she feels at times as if it is lowering in real time and will one day crush her). The three-piece suite, extra wide and squat, is the most engulfing Manon has ever sat in, so much so that she often feels she is being consumed by it. Everything beige, so that the whole atmosphere is one of porridgy comfort. They’ve lived here for five minutes, and she’s already nostalgic for the high ceilings of Victorian London.

‘Oh Fly, don’t play Temple Run with him,’ she says, removing her coat. ‘His brain’s not even formed yet.’

‘He loves it,’ Fly answers without looking up from the iPad he is hunched over, Solly nestled in his lap. Manon walks back out to hang her coat on the banister and to drop her bag at the foot of the stairs. Where is Ellie? At work? Her shifts run from 7.30 a.m. to 3.30 p.m. or 1.30 p.m. to 8.30 p.m., and this is considered part time. The entire shift usually on her feet, sometimes with no chance for a break. When she’s on nights, she’ll often have Solly all day the next day because she’s trying to save money on the childminder (Ellie’s sense of impoverishment is their microclimate). She’ll doze on the sofa while he plays in front of rolling episodes of Peppa Pig. There has never been a worse time to work for the NHS, Ellie says. The management obsessed with targets and budgets, every shift short-staffed. No love, only constraint and a communal sense of harassment. Yet her sister has also been a master of evasion lately, time thick yet hollow. The stresses and strains mingled with absences unexplained. ‘Shift ran over, sorry.’ Or, ‘Training. Kept me late.’

Manon frowns at the children: ‘He’d also love to bury his face in Haribo; doesn’t mean he can, does it?’ She strides over and lifts the iPad out of Fly’s hands and Solly – predictably – howls, launching himself, starfish-shaped, to the floor. The passion erupting from him, their three-foot Vesuvius. Solomon Bradshaw is either happy or angry. There appears to be nothing in between.

‘See what you did?’ says Fly.

Home three seconds, and already she’s the object of hatred.

‘Where’s Ellie?’ Manon asks, keeping hold of the iPad and wondering where she can hide it this time. Out in the shed? In the freezer? This is the wonder of parenting: behind every new low is a lower low, to which you thought you’d never stoop.

‘Gone out.’

‘Out? Where? Working?’

‘Dunno.’

‘Well, how long did she leave you alone with Solly?’

If she’s on a shift, she should have cleared it, made sure Manon could cover her. Or is she having some fun – heaven forfend! – leaving Manon sore, bicep straining as she holds aloft her measuring jug of what is owed and what’s been taken. A life with children has brought out in Manon her meanest spirit – never a moment when she isn’t keeping a tally.

Fly has got up, lifting Solly’s stiff body off the floor. ‘Not long,’ he says. ‘Anyway, I don’t mind. Come on dude, time for the bath.’

Manon watches them walk out towards the stairs, Solly’s puce face, his breathing juddering with outrage, his little splayed fat hands on Fly’s close-cut hair.

Flumping into an armchair, Manon feels her tiredness mingle with affection for her adopted son; so much older than his years. She’s often washed over with it – pride in his reading, in his gentleness, his soft manners, his decency, his care of Solly.

Solly’s mission statement, bellowed while trying to climb the cupboard shelves towards the biscuit tin, is MY DO DAT! He can turn purple at the prospect of being denied complete autonomy – for example, not being allowed to start the car or push his buggy blindly into oncoming traffic; eat a snail or run off with the back-door key. Hot cheeks, angry square face torn up with his despair; trousers descending below the nappy-line, impossibly short legs. His unreasonableness smiled at (most of the time), especially when, tears spurting, he rubs furiously at his eyes and shouts ‘MY NOT TIRED!’ as if the mere suggestion is a gross slur on his toddler honour.

She could sleep right now.

She could sleep walking up the stairs.

She could sleep stirring a pan at the stove.

The baby squirms, bag of eels.

Yes, it’s laughable that she should consider herself the author of Fly’s best qualities. She’s been his mother for such a short time she can no more claim credit for his good qualities than his bad. His goodness is courtesy of his alcoholic mother, Maureen Dent, slumped with her bottle of Magners in front of Cash in the Attic (no cash in their attic, in fact no attic), and down to his brother Taylor, who loved him, who took care of him, probably in much the same way Fly cares for Solly now she thinks about it – you love in the way you have been loved, after all. Taylor turned tricks on Hampstead Heath and was murdered because of it – the homicide that brought Manon and Fly together. Perhaps his goodness is down to the genes of a Nigerian father Fly has never met. The more Manon lives with children, the more she believes in the determination of genes.

Neither a child nor a teenager, though if she has to pick, Manon would place Fly closer to the adolescent camp. People who meet him think him nearer 15 than 12. She has come to realise adolescence is not switched on at once – it seeps, gradually, during late childhood. There are glimpses from age 10. Some say earlier, though she doesn’t know about that. It’s more like a litmus paper turning blue, as the hormones leach.

Fly can read a room before she can. If there is an accident in his vicinity, he acknowledges vicarious feelings of guilt; can trace the root of awkwardness in a conversation. He once said of a rather sadistic PE teacher, ‘She’s mean to us because she had an injury and now she can’t be an athlete.’ He can identify envy without judging a person for it. All this he does quietly, and though she has always thought of empathy as imbued or developed, with him it seems innate. Its flip side is heightened sensitivity – an aversion to high collars and the congestion of cuffs under his coat, which means he wears only a fraction of his wardrobe: one beloved pair of tracksuit bottoms and one hoodie – with the hood down, Manon is forever insisting, though he takes less and less notice of her. Tall black youth with his hood up? He might as well wear a sign saying ‘Arrest me now.’

Stork-like, he is all limbs. Silent much of the time and unknowable. Fly is unhappy – she knows that much, knows too that she is the cause, and this she can hardly bear. She has uprooted him, unfurled his sensitivities like wounds open to the air. He is not himself. She hopes he’ll settle in.

Even so, he has his playful moments – has begun taking pleasure in irony: putting his arm around her shoulder, towering lankily above her, and saying, ‘I’m just off out,’ and her saying, ‘No you’re not,’ and him saying, ‘That’s right, I’m not, I don’t know where that came from.’ Both of them smiling at each other. They can begin to enjoy a new kind of conversation, with meanings other than what is said.

‘You are so down with the kids,’ he’ll say to her when she puts some kind of easy-listening mum-pop on the iPod.

Not yet old enough for a man, nor young enough for a boy. What is that? Lines from Twelfth Night embedded in her brain. Funny that she’d resented all the drumming and drilling at school, the tittering and yawning in uniforms as lines were delivered by lacklustre boys and girls leaning back in their chairs. The essays on Coriolanus or Much Ado. She hadn’t realised those lines would be the ones to comfort her most in the second half of her life. Perhaps the teachers knew; had thought to themselves, ‘You’ll thank me one day.’

Davy

It’s good to have Manon back, he thinks, striding across the police station car park towards the featureless grass expanse of Hinchingbrooke Park. He plans to cut through to the wooded area where the body has been found – quicker than trying to walk the enormous curve of Brampton Road. That road is gridlocked with rush-hour traffic, the headlights of school-run mums and commuters out of Huntingdon. Only around five-ish – an unusual time of day for someone to meet a violent death. And opposite a school, too.

He’s anxious to get there, to be the first. He breaks into a jog. In the distance, he can see blue lights illuminating the trees in a rhythmic sweep, the flash of a couple of fluorescent jackets.

It’s good to have her back, but Manon has to understand that things have changed. He isn’t her DC any more – she can’t sit in a car the way she used to and bark orders at him. He’ll likely be leading this case – not as SIO, that’ll be Harriet – but on the ground, running the constables. The thought makes him jog faster. He wants to get there, get started. But his excitement – or is it a stitch? – is tugged at from below by something like aversion. His body pushes forward but his inner self pulls back. He can’t do it. He isn’t up to it. He’s been over-promoted by the super, who thinks of him as a son.

Davy is panting (it’s a wonder he passed his last bleep test); his heart knocking with impatience to master the scene, and with fear also. He might be unmasked at any moment.

‘The shallowness deep within,’ Manon said, ages ago now – just after his promotion – when he’d discussed his Imposter Syndrome with her. ‘You’re not the only one, you know.’ And he’d wondered whether she meant, ‘You’re not the only one who thinks you’re a useless twat.’

Why does he keep thinking about her? He wishes she was here, that’s why. She seems a more substantial person than he does. He slows to a walk because the stitch is really painful now. Even more substantial these days: her breathing laboured, her breasts enormous. He doesn’t want to be one of those men, but it’s like trying to pretend you’re looking out to sea when there’s a vast mountain range right in your sightline.

He comes alongside the body. Looks around him. Harriet’s not here, nothing’s started yet. Within half an hour this place’ll be crawling with uniforms. Looking down, he sees the clothing has been cut open so paramedics could work on the victim’s chest – white shirt, suit jacket, wool coat, Ozwald Boateng written on the purple shimmering lining. The eyes are open, mouth too, the chest caked in dried blood and the small incision of the wound itself, evidently from a knife, like a cut in an uncooked joint of pork. Small red opening in waxy yellow flesh.

Davy looks around him again.

He crouches down unsteadily, and a gust of wind nearly pushes him on top of the corpse. He puts a hand out to balance himself. You don’t want to contaminate the scene – isn’t that the first rule, the only thing they drum into you at training? Keep your hands in your pockets.

If only he could cop a glance at that wallet that he can see poking out of the purple silk lining – then he could get started. If he could get a name off a bank card, an ID, then the story can start and this is a whopper. This one’ll be all over the news. The pressure, he can feel it already popping at his temples, is going to be massive. Keep your hands in your pockets, Davy Walker.

‘What the fuck are you doing, Davy?’ It is Harriet.

He jumps up. ‘Nothing,’ he says. ‘I’m not doing anything.’

‘Yeah, well, step away from the evidence until SOCO gets here,’ she says.

‘Know who he is?’ Davy asks.

‘Not yet. But he’ll still be dead in an hour after forensics have got what they need so there’s no need to be patting him down.’

He takes a step back.

‘We need to cordon this section of wood, make it wide,’ Harriet says. ‘Where’s your notebook, Davy? C’mon, or do you not want to run this scene? First priority is hands-and-knees search for a weapon. No point getting the dogs out, too many people around. But we do need community policing down here – I want the public reassured by not being able to move for police officers. We need a community inspector to go into the school, talk to the head, make sure all the kids get home safely. Same at the hospital.’

‘We should check Acer Ward,’ Davy says.

‘Yes, good thought. See if you can track down the consultant psychiatrist, ask him if they had any psychos go walkabout this afternoon. I didn’t just use that word, by the way.’

‘What about an ARV?’

‘No, leave them out – what can armed response do, realistically? Let’s not blow the budget. I want scene guards on the cordon, not the idiots we had on the last one. There’s a lot of footfall, I don’t want this scene contaminated, OK?’

‘Who found him?’

‘Judith Cole, over there,’ Harriet says, nodding towards a woman whose hair is matted against her head with blood. It’s smeared down her cheek and has soaked the collar of her coat. She has the distant look of a person who has yet to take in what has happened to her. Someone – a paramedic, probably – has placed a foil blanket over her shoulders of the kind used by runners at the end of a race.

‘She’s significant, obviously – last person to see him alive. We need her clothes for forensics.’

‘Why is there blood on her face and hair?’

‘She cradled the victim, tried to listen to his last words apparently.’

Davy is writing furiously, his hand cold and shaky. Harriet doesn’t stop, rat-a-tat-tat. ‘Also at the hospital, let’s check to see if anyone’s self-admitted. Knife wounds.’ She nods at the executive detached homes curling around the cul-de-sac adjacent to the school. ‘Over there, Snowdonia Way, that’s where I want house to house to start. And we can warn them to be vigilant while we’re at it. Set up a roadblock. We want witnesses, people who were driving in this direction.’

Davy is writing down Acer Ward while his brain tries to keep a tab on the subsequent items on the checklist. Nothing must fall off the checklist. He’s thinking Snowdonia Way, that was next, then – what? – something to do with clothes.

At the same time some other part of his brain is thinking, this isn’t a tidy one: not the usual kind of murder where the person who did it is lying smashed next to the victim or is making a cack-handed run for it towards a waiting panda car or where their perp is just, well, obvious because of the backstory: in a relationship with the victim, threatened them with it last time, just did a massive drugs deal and owed someone money. Sent a text saying, ‘I’ll get you, you’re for it.’ Their perps, often, were not the brightest bulbs in the chandelier and the cases were tidy. Dirty but clean, as in ring-fenced, not leaching towards the executive new builds of Snowdonia Way with their gas barbecues and two-car garages. Davy feels the anxiety reach its fist around his stomach.

‘So that woman Judith Cole,’ Harriet is saying, while Davy scribbles hosp – knife wounds? ‘He died in her arms apparently. At least, he was dead by the time the paramedics arrived. They tried to resuscitate him but no luck.’

‘Funny place to die,’ Davy says.

‘Yes. Very public. Who the fuck is stabbed at half four in the afternoon?’ Harriet’s swearing always peaks at a crime scene. ‘Let’s start with a statement from Mrs Cole, down at the station. Send someone to get her a change of clothes. She only lives over there, 5 Snowdonia Way.’

‘He looks well-to-do, not our usual lot,’ Davy says, nodding at the body.

He steps across the seeping ground to take a look at the man’s face the right way up. He has pouches beneath his eyes the size of teabags, a Roman nose. In fact the whole head seems Roman: his hair, cut close, curling forwards towards his forehead like Caesar’s crown of leaves. What was it made of? Manon would know.

As she walks away, Harriet adds, ‘Need to get the CCTV off the road and this footpath, if there is any.’

Time is of the essence, even when your victim is dead. Witnesses move, rain washes fibres away, memories fade. The commuter who might have noticed something vital goes home to his family, eats dinner, watches TV and soon cannot distinguish between Tuesday and Wednesday. CCTV gets inadvertently wiped by a shopkeeper who knows no better; car number plates are forgotten, descriptions blurred with other memories. They don’t call them the mists of time for nothing.

Investigations, Davy realises as he looks at his checklist without knowing quite where to begin, run on the energy of time, run against it sometimes if a living person’s in danger – a kidnap, say, or a kiddie lost. Other times it’s justice that runs against the clock. Given time, your perp can get rid of the weapon, wipe down his prints, cook up an alibi or hot-foot it to somewhere sunny. The Costa Brava is bristling with British timeshare criminals.

Time blunts all.

It’s a relief, now, to be in the warmth of the major crime unit: frying drips on the coffee-machine hotplate; the clack of fingers on computer keys; muffled mobile calls saying, ‘No I won’t be home, job’s come in.’ There is no one for Davy to call, no one who minds whether he stays out all night. There’s been no one since Chloe, and that ended more than a year ago. Not so much that she put him off all relationships, more that he didn’t get back on the horse, and now he’s not even in the vicinity of a stable.

As with investigations, so it is with heartbreak: time drains the sharpness from the picture. When Davy’d first broken up with Chloe, she was in every thought he had. He cried every day when they separated, even though it was his choice (doom balloon that she was). Nowadays, he can think of her dispassionately as a significant ex, could even bump into her without a rise in his vital signs. The love has run cold, just like it will with the evidence if he doesn’t get a shifty on.

Davy glances at his watch – 8 p.m. Being outside for three hours has made his checklist damp. He spent it standing in that patch of wood, sometimes taking a break to sit in an unmarked car, receiving updates from his DCs. Nothing from the hospital; nothing from house to house, except varying degrees of alarm; nothing from the roadblock.

He’d spotted a scene guard smoking a fag and throwing it to the ground.

‘What’s that?’ he asked, pointing at the fag butt.

‘What? Nothin’ to do with me,’ the chap said.

‘Better not be,’ Davy said, ‘because it’s going to be tested by forensics and if your DNA is anywhere near it, you’ll be in big trouble.’

‘OK, well, actually it might be mine,’

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