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Creating a unique, immersive setting one culture at a time
A guide for authors, gamers, and hobbyists
Written to help fantasy and science fiction storytellers, game designers, gamers, and hobbyists, CULTURES AND BEYOND (THE ART OF WORLD BUILDING, #3) is a how-to guide for filling an imaginary world with fascinating societies. It includes chapters on creating culture, organizations, armed forces, religions, the supernatural, magic systems, technological and supernatural items, languages, names, and various systems our world will have, from health, educational, legal, and commerce, to information systems. You'll learn how to leverage real world cultures while making them seem original. Even those who've never invented a world will soon be masters as the author's decades of experience walk readers through using pre-made templates that make world building faster, better, and easier to complete.
Invent interesting laws, crimes, and punishments that involve imaginary creatures or technologies, and learn how to leverage trial by ordeal and other judicial acts from Earth's past. Determine how much education is available and what form it takes. Create currencies for different places while keeping them easy for your audience to fathom, plus learn how to determine the value to assign labor, materials, products, time, and more. Master the art of creating naming styles for different societies. Fashion new military groups in gritty detail. Dream up sensible rules for magic, its practitioners, the supernatural and what happens when things go wrong. Learn what kind of files you'll need to create, how to organize them, and get jump started with a dozen free templates you'll use again and again.
CULTURES AND BEYOND is the third volume in THE ART OF WORLD BUILDING, the most in-depth, multi-volume series of its kind.
Build better, faster.
Randy Ellefson
Author and world building strategist Randy Ellefson has written fantasy fiction and created fictional worlds since the 1980s. In addition to authoring the most detailed world building books available, he's the founder and lead instructor at World Building University, blogs regularly on the subject, and hosts a popular podcast. The Writer's of the Future contest has recognized his writing three times.He has a Bachelor’s of Music in classical guitar but has always been more of a rocker, having released several albums and earned endorsements from music companies.A professional software architect, he has worked for NASA, the State Department, and White House, and run a successful consulting firm in the Washington D.C. area. He loves spending time with his son and daughter when not writing, making music, or playing golf.
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Cultures and Beyond - Randy Ellefson
CULTURES AND BEYOND
The Art of World Building
Volume 3
by Randy Ellefson
Copyright © 2020 Randy Ellefson / Evermore Press
All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means; electronic or mechanical, including photography, recording, or any information storage and retrieval system, without permission in writing from the author.
This book includes fictional passages. All names, characters, locations, and incidents are products of the author’s imagination, or have been used fictitiously. Any semblance to actual persons living or dead, locales, or events is entirely coincidental and not intended by the author.
Publisher’s Cataloging-In-Publication Data
(Prepared by The Donohue Group, Inc.)
Names: Ellefson, Randy, author.
Title: Cultures and beyond / Randy Ellefson.
Description: [Gaithersburg, Maryland] : Evermore Press, [2020] | Series: The art of world building ; volume 3
Identifiers: ISBN 9781946995056 (Amazon paperback) |
ISBN 9781946995346 (IngramSpark paperback) |
ISBN 9781946995117 (IngramSpark hardcover))
Subjects: LCSH: Fantasy fiction--Authorship. | Imaginary
societies. | Imaginary places. | Creative writing. |
Storytelling.
Classification: LCC PN3377.5.F34 E453 2020 |
DDC 808.38766--dc23
Endorsements
Bestselling Author Piers Anthony
I have been writing and selling novels for more that half a century, and I have been learning things here. I recommend all three for background reading for those who are serious about the worlds they create. The present volume is amazingly informative.
Ed Greenwood, Inventor of The Forgotten Realms® and dozens of imaginary worlds
Ellefson continues his masterful overview of worldbuilding, carefully and coherently dealing with every last detail...that...Creating Life and Creating Places haven't covered. All three are essential reference works...Ellefson is a master of this craft, and it shows. Highly recommended!
Table of Contents
Introduction
Where to Start
About Me
Free Book
Disclaimers
The Chapters
Templates and Newsletter
Creating Life (Volume One)
Creating Places (Volume Two)
World Building University
The Podcast
YouTube Channel
Chapter 1—Cultures
What is Culture?
Cultural Scope
The Ideas
Culture vs. Custom
Cultural Vision
Culture Depictions
Visible
Audible
Performed
Social Classes
Creating Culture
How Much Culture to Invent
The Body
Greetings and Farewells
Language
Daily Life
Pastimes
Rituals, Festivals, and Ceremonies
Folklore
Architecture
Where to Start
Chapter 2—Organizations
Group Types
Forces for Evil
Forces for Good
Common Traits
Goals
Enemies and Friends
Power Structure
History
Origins
Actions
In and Out
Joining
Leaving
Where to Start
Chapter 3—Armed Forces
Location
Terrain
Special Sites
Transportation
Their Weapons
Their Defenses
Armor
Skills
The Road to Enlisting
Prerequisites
Characteristics
Initiation Tests
Training
Final Tests
Identifiers
Colors
Symbols
Those Who Serve
Members
Important Members
Relationships
Military Units
Troop Numbers
Ranks
History
Famous Deeds
Lore and Myths
World View
Languages
Place in Society
Customs Among Them
Where to Start
Chapter 4—Religions
History
Creation
Destruction
Beliefs
Names
Followers
Becoming a Follower
Leaving
Expulsion
Worship
Holidays
Locations
Identifiers
Colors
Symbols
Clergy
Important Members
Sects
Relationships
World View
Languages
Place in Society
Customs
Outreach
Combat
Weapons
Armor
The Afterlife
Where to Start
Chapter 5—The Supernatural
Supernatural Energy
Magic Paths
Alternate Realities
Supernatural Beings
Demi-gods
Creatures
Figures of Note
Superheroes
Familiars
Prevalence
The Impact
Where to Start
Chapter 6—Magic Systems
Principles of Good Magic Systems
Sanderson’s Three Laws
What’s a Law?
Local Laws
Laws of Magic
World Building Laws
Ellefson’s Seven Laws
First Law
Second Law
Third Law
Fourth Law
Fifth Law
Sixth Law
Seventh Law
Do We Need a Magic System?
Types of Magic
White and Black Magic
Alchemy
Witchcraft
Necromancy
Shamanism
Psionics
Elemental Magic
Magic Prevalence
Where Does Magic Come From?
Origins
Sources
The Cost of Magic
Social Aspects
What’s in a Name?
Are Spells Needed?
Spells Are Needed
Spells Are Not Needed
The Life of Magic-Users
How the Ability is Gained and Lost
Training
Height of Power
The Waning Years
Attire
Creating Limits
Get Organized
Pros and Cons
How to Invent Spells
Where to Start
Chapter 7—Items
Ownership
Regular Items
Magic Items
Properties
Origins
Form
Users
Technological Items
Technological Prevalence
Properties
Origins
Form
Users
Creating an A.I.
Where to Start
Chapter 8—Languages
Should We Create One?
The Medium
Our Options
How to Hire Someone
Option 1
Option 2
Option 3
Option 4
Where to Start
Chapter 9—Names
People Names
How Many Names?
Given Names
Surnames
Place Names
Using Events
Using People
Adding Suffixes and Prefixes
Compound Names
Uniqueness
Leveraging Existing Names
General Tips
Keep it Short
Keep it Simple (Apostrophes and Hyphens)
The Issue of Similarities
Sound
Appearance
Techniques for Inventing Names
Silent or Repeated Letters
Vowel Substitution, Addition, or Subtraction
Capitalize Another Letter
Switching First Letters
Add Suffixes or Prefixes
Breaking Known Words Up
Foreign Languages
Be Consistent, Just Not Too Much
Name Generators
Where to Start
Chapter 10—Other Systems
Education Systems
Basic Education
Special Education
The Apprenticeship
Other Concerns
Health Systems
Medical
Mental
Legal Systems
Types
How to Create Laws
Trials
Commerce
A Monetary System
Relative Value in Currency
Information Systems
SF
Fantasy
Where to Start
Chapter 11—Conclusion
Goals
Abide by Rules
Tying It Together
Approaches
Top Down
Bottom Up
Random
Which to Do?
File Storage
Hard Drives
Websites
My Approach
Get Organized
Folder Structure
Suggested Files
World Building Coalitions
What Is It?
Why Do It
Who Does It
The Covenant
World Types
Roles
Creations
Lifecycle
Coordination
Last Words
About The Author
Randy Ellefson Books
Randy Ellefson Music
Acknowledgments
Bibliography
Appendix 1—Culture Template
Appendix 2—Organization Template
Appendix 3—Armed Forces Template
Appendix 4—Religion Template
Appendix 5—Supernatural Energy Template
Appendix 6—Supernatural Land Template
Appendix 7—Magic System Template
Appendix 8—Spell Template
Appendix 9—Legal Template
Appendix 10—Monetary Template
Appendix 11—Education Template
Appendix 12—Game Template
Introduction
With creating life and places covered in volumes one and two, we turn our attention to everything else about setting that characterizes our world, inhabitants, and storylines.
In this volume, we’ll discuss:
•Cultural vision, scope, origins, and manifestations
•Organizations like organized crime or secret sects
•Armed forces (the army, navy, and air force)
•Religions and how to leverage deities we’ve invented
•The supernatural and its impact
•Items, whether supernatural, technological, or neither
•Languages and the impact they have on setting
•Names and techniques to invent them
•Educational, legal, commerce, health, and IT systems
•Approaches to managing our world building development
Examples included in the text were created specifically for this guide and are not drawn from any setting I’ve created, or stories I’ve written or published.
Chapter 1 from Creating Life (The Art of World Building, #1) includes discussion of some principles referred to here, the main one being the use of analogues. This means inventing something that is based on an Earth equivalent but making enough changes to it that people are less likely to recognize the influence. This is known as the Rule of Three.
The book has a website where you can find additional resources and information on other volumes in this series:
http://www.artofworldbuilding.com
Where to Start
The series and chapters within each volume can be read in any order but are arranged according to what might come first in a world’s timeline. This volume is an exception; one chapter has little to do with the next. If you have an idea for something covered herein, write down everything you’re thinking of before reading about other things you might consider. This will keep you from forgetting your idea or becoming overwhelmed with feelings of needing to get it right;
there’s really no such thing. Then you can read on for new ideas to enrich your setting.
So where do you start? Where your heart lies.
About Me
By profession I’m a software developer, but I’ve been writing fantasy fiction since 1988 and building worlds just as long, mostly one planet called Llurien. Yes, I am crazy. But I love what I do. I didn’t intend to work on it for so long, but when life has prevented me from writing, I’ve worked on Llurien. I’ve done everything in these chapters and authored two hundred thousand words of world building in my files. Llurien even has its own website now at http://www.llurien.com. I’ve written six novels and over a dozen short stories over the years, and have just begun my publishing career with a novella that you can read for free (see below).
I’m also a musician with a degree in classical guitar; I’ve released three albums of instrumental rock, one classical guitar CD, and a disc of acoustic guitar instrumentals. You can learn more, hear songs, and see videos at my main website:
http://www.randyellefson.com.
Free Book
If you’d like to see a free sample of my own world building efforts in action, anyone who joins my fiction newsletter receives a free ebook. That’s a separate newsletter from The Art of World Building at https://artofworldbuilding.com/newsletter/.
Figure 1: Free Book
Disclaimers
While some authors prefer the term races
to species,
I’ve used the latter term throughout most of the series except for the section in the first volume discussing the merits of both terms. This book uses SF
to abbreviate science fiction. SF is broadly defined herein as a setting with technology far in excess of current capabilities. Fantasy is loosely defined in this book as a setting using magic, knights, and lacking modern technology. As a stylistic point, to avoid writing he/she,
I’ve also opted for he
when discussing someone who could be either gender.
The Chapters
What follows is a brief summary of what’s included in each chapter in Volume Three, Cultures and Beyond.
Chapter 1 – Cultures
This chapter discusses the differences between a culture and a custom, and that morals, values, and beliefs underlie everything. World builders can determine the scope of an invented culture, as some are regional or extend throughout a sovereign power. Cultural depictions can have visible, audible, and behavior aspects that can be defined. These include issues such as body language, hair styles, gestures, clothing, and more. Greetings and farewells should be defined because characters will use them. Similarly, swear words, slang, verbal expressions, and colloquialisms can be created to characterize interactions. The daily life of a culture is depicted in dining, bathing, sleeping, employment, and transportation rituals and behaviors; pastimes, holidays and more create a respite for the everyday activities. Even architecture can be influenced by culture.
Chapter 2 – Organizations
Organizations for good or evil are a staple of both fantasy and SF. This chapter discusses both group types and their world views, plus common traits like goals, enemies, friends, and their source of (and quest for) power. How members join and leave such groups is an important element; some organizations might prevent or inhibit departure. Prerequisites can also bind a member to the group. The history and actions of a group are an important part of its reputation.
Chapter 3 – Armed Forces
Military groups such as the army, navy, air/space force, and knights are a staple of both fantasy and SF. We can leverage existing ideas or craft our own. Doing so means deciding how someone joins and leaves a military group, including requirements, tests, and training. Some species and races might be forbidden or assigned special roles. Throughout history, famous members can inspire pride or loathing. When devising military units and ranks, it helps to understand Earth analogues, so some basics are included in this chapter. The world view, locations, place in society, and symbols are all important elements of memorable armed forces and this chapters covers them all.
Chapter 4 – Religions
While some aspects of the societies we create have history as a minor element, history is crucial with religions, so first we look at where and how the religion formed, including a prophetic figure and the role of a god, should one exist. Creation and end of world myths, and the afterlife, are important elements that potential followers consider, along with the requirements for worship and the penalty for failing to follow the rules. How someone joins and leaves a religion can be trivial or significant and includes the possibility of expulsion. We’ll need holy sites, too, and a decision on holidays, customs, sects, relationships with everyone from species to other religions, and what members of the clergy are like and their role in society. Most importantly, we need the symbols and beliefs of this religion.
Chapter 5 – The Supernatural
Supernatural elements exist in both fantasy and SF and can be used to add surprises. The audience may expect magic, for example, but not our version of it, so there’s room for originality here. We can create energies that give rise to phenomena, beings, or places like magic pathways or alternate worlds and realities that impact our setting and stories. How much impact and prevalence these supernatural elements have, and how to determine this, are an important focus of this chapter.
Chapter 6 – A System of Magic
Magic systems can be simple or complex, but they should always be consistent. This chapter discusses the methods and principles of good systems and how to create them. This includes the importance of naming them, deciding if spells are needed and what those are for, whether spells can go wrong and how, and different types of magic we might want to include in our settings. We’ll also look at how much training someone might need, what forms that training takes, and learn how to decide what’s right for our setting. And no discussion of magic is complete without a look at how to invent spells.
Chapter 7 – Items
Whether magical, technological, or more ordinary, memorable items exist in our setting even if we don’t mention them. SF likely expects them, and fantasy often has at least one magic item someone has or covets in a story, but even ordinary items can be given significance through association with important people, places, or events. This chapter discusses how to invent their properties, origins, and form, and how to determine who is likely to use or want them. The creation of an A.I. is included.
Chapter 8 – Languages
Creating a language is one of the most challenging aspects of world building, but it’s also one of the few that we can outsource; how and where to do so is discussed. Even so, some basic terms must be understood so we know what we’re buying and receiving from our expert. If we choose to do it ourselves, we should consider whether it benefits our audience and how, or even whether it’s a burden that we can save both them and ourselves. This chapter will not teach world builders how to invent a language because there are entire books on the subject, and those are referenced here, but it will discuss the pros and cons of constructing a language and what we lose by not having one (or more).
Chapter 9 – Names
Many techniques exist for creating names of people, places, and things, and all of them leverage our creativity to make the results and process more satisfying than using name generators, which are also discussed. Caveats and pitfalls abound, for while a great name elevates our story, bad ones turn off audiences, or keep them from talking about a character with an unpronounceable or unspellable name. We look at the differences between given names, surnames, compound names, and different ways to use parts of our invented world for all of them. The tips in this chapter will make this required activity fun and rewarding.
Chapter 10 – Other Systems
Other systems exist in our setting and warrant development. We’ll examine educational systems and their impact on employment, plus where and how people are getting educated or being disqualified from it. Health systems include medical and mental, and they range from great to terrible, each having significant impacts on lives. Information systems aren’t just for SF, because fantasy settings need to disseminate information, too, and have their own ways of doing so. Understanding monetary systems and how to keep them simple is another focus of this chapter and includes how to determine the value of time, labor, and materials. And no world is complete without laws, crimes, and punishments, so developing a legal system is a critical world building task we breakdown into a manageable one.
Chapter 11 – Conclusion
In the series conclusion, we look at how to organize our files of world building notes so that the info glut doesn’t become overwhelming; this includes some tools others have created, whether free or not, and the pros and cons of using them. We’ll also look at different approaches to world building and how each affects our working methodology and results. Final thoughts include the merits of following our own rules and whether partnering with another world builder is a good idea or not.
Templates and Newsletter
Effective world building requires having written down details about the created world. To help you organize and jumpstart your efforts, each volume in this series includes templates in the appendices. This volume includes twelve: cultures, organizations, armed forces, religions, supernatural energies, supernatural lands, magic systems, spells, legal systems, monetary systems, education systems, and games.
Rather than typing these up yourself, you can download these templates for free by joining the newsletter for The Art of World Building at http://www.artofworldbuilding.com/newsletter/. As each volume is published, whether you’ve bought the book or not, subscribers will automatically receive an email with links to download the templates as Microsoft Word files, which you can repeatedly use.
Creating Life (Volume One)
Everything we need to know about how to create gods, species/races, plants, animals, monsters, heroes, villains, and even undead is included in Creating Life (The Art of World Building, #1). Some basic techniques are also discussed, such as using analogies and deciding how many worlds to build in a career. As with every volume, it includes reusable templates that can help you build better, faster.
Creating Places (Volume Two)
The life we create needs to originate from somewhere on a planet: an ocean, a continent, in a land feature (like a forest or mountain range), in a kingdom, or in a settlement. Creating Places (The Art of World Building, #2) goes into detail about inventing such locations and figuring out how long it takes to travel between them by various forms of locomotion: foot, horse, wagon, dragon, wooden ship, spaceship, and more. The overall rules of our world are also considered, along with inventing time, history, various places of interest, and how to draw maps. We can start our work with any one of those subjects and crisscross between places and life, for one often impacts the other.
World Building University
World Building University (WBU) has online courses that provide step-by-step instruction on how to create all aspects of great fantasy and science fiction worlds. Each includes a series of video lessons, quizzes to test your retention of what you’ve learned, and assignments designed to make your creation a reality instead of a dream. Courses are intended for both authors, game designers, and hobbyists.
To learn more, please visit www.worldbuilding.university.
The Podcast
The Art of World Building podcast expands on the material within the series. The additional examples offer world builders more insight into ramifications of decisions. You can hear the podcast, read transcripts, and learn more about the episodes at http://www.artofworldbuilding.com/podcasts.
YouTube Channel
The Art of World Building YouTube channel now has videos that also expand on the material within the series. Check out the growing playlists and subscribe. Videos include replays of webinars that feature a Q&A, lessons from the books, previews of WBU courses, and tips from the book, 185 Tips on World Building.
Chapter 1—Cultures
There are so many customs and culture-related items that we could disappear down a research rabbit hole, so we’ll focus on things likely to be useful as storytellers and gamers. In addition to working out details in advance, world builders can refer to this chapter when creating scenes.
While much of culture can be invented when we need it, the disadvantage is inconsistency if we’re not careful and take notes. We can invent something earlier in a story or series, then forget and contradict it later. Generally, people (like our characters) don’t care about customs until encountering ones different from theirs or when expectations are not met. In the latter case, judgment about the offender results. This is one value to us as storytellers.
If we need a reason for characters to not be accepted warmly, failure to follow customs is a solution. This can be individual characters or whole groups rejecting someone. It can be wise or fun to include a character who is more well-traveled than other characters and understands how to navigate other lands without offense. This requires at least two cultures: the one our characters are from and the one in which the story takes place.
What is Culture?
Culture is an abstract, complex concept. Most of us have a vague understanding of what it means, but when we’re building cultures, we need clarity to know what elements to invent, why, and how. Culture is a social group’s lifestyle. It is symbolic communication and often taken for granted, which is one reason we have troubling grasping the concept. It is a set of expectations. It evolves over time, though slowly, sometimes with bursts of social change. It not only differs across sovereign powers, but within regions and settlements. The culture of football players is different from that of rock musicians. Nonetheless, if they exist in the same society, they’ll share other elements of culture; to coin a term, we might call this cultural scope,
which will be discussed further in this chapter.
The case can be made that values, beliefs, and morals are the origins of culture. These are ideas. And they manifest as rituals, habits, customs, art, music, and the use of language. When broken down this way, it becomes easier to determine what work must be done, and in what order: the ideas, then the manifestations. This is how we’ll approach inventing culture, rounding out our concepts before deciding what they’ve resulted in.
Even if inventing the ideas first is helpful, we may have a few of the resulting manifestations in mind because we thought of them first, but this is fine. We can work backwards from them and try to determine what ideas they imply. For example, if rigid formality exists in greetings, we can infer that people feel oppressed or suppressed, or that open expression of feelings is frowned upon. This can help us create more manifestations, but it can also suggest some values: that emotion is considered weak, that dignity is prized, or that appearance is important. We’ll look more closely at this.
Cultural Scope
Every culture exists somewhere: in a sovereign power (or several), a region, a settlement, a social group, or a race or species, to name a few. Every sovereign power has a form of government, which will greatly impact the cultures within it. We must therefore know what this is. Residents of a democracy have leeway to create culture whereas a totalitarian government may be forcing culture upon people; the culture will be very different.
Creating Places (The Art of World Building, #2) detailed our primary government options and, at a high level, what life is typically like for inhabitants of each. We want to consider how much freedom and control people have over their lives. The less freedom, the less variation in culture at the lower levels of region, settlement, and social group. And the more oppressive and rigid a government, the more likely residents live in fear and avoid any violation of expectations, which could result in imprisonment, torture, forced labor, or death. Before embarking on the invention of a culture, decide what the sovereign power’s government is, even if you’re creating culture at the social group level. It’s wise to create culture in the following order:
Sovereign power
Regional
Settlement
Social group
The reason is that ideas and manifestations at the sovereign power level influence the regional level, and so on down to the smallest social group. If this seems like a lot of work, most of what we need to invent is at the top level and, being inherited by lower levels, only needs modification as appropriate if our tale or characters need it. Each person will belong to every level above their social one.
For example, Kier could be in the knight social group while Antar is in the archer one, but both are in the warrior one, the settlement culture, the regional one, all the way up to the sovereign power level. Some elements can be true in multiple cultures, such as nerds acting roughly the same way in Japan as in the United States; in reality, each will have its own nerd culture, but we’d still recognize some similar elements, in theory.
We may want to invent the most universal items early, then more localized variations. But we should always make a note about scope in our files. For example, Throughout the Empire of Antaria (including sovereign powers and settlements that once belonged to it), wedding bands are worn on so-and-so finger.
Every species and race is likely to have variations. The elves and humans in Kingdom Illiandor will not have the same dining etiquette, but some similarities will exist, just as the elves of Illiandor will share some dining etiquette with elves in another kingdom. This means that we could scope certain aspects as being typically elven and others as being of Illiandor. For example, let’s say that all elves drink only from the right hand, place a napkin in their lap, and never talk with food in their mouth, regardless of the elf’s origin (never mind that individuals can defy these customs). But all species of Kingdom Illiandor swear an allegiance to the king prior to dining. While more involved, this is believable depth.
The Ideas
There are arguably three types of cultural sources: beliefs, values, and morals, with some overlap. Deciding which of each matters to a group depends on what impression feels right to the world builder. Think about the group’s role in society and its goals and motivations. We needn’t feel locked into our decision. If we don’t think of a manifestation of a specific value, that’s okay. These are guiding ideas that we’re unlikely to explain to an audience anyway, unless a character is monologuing their thoughts, which is a great way to reveal these ideas.
Morals and Values
An individual’s values come from within, can change over time, and are personal principles. By contrast, morals are taught by society, are usually deep seated and slow to change, if at all, and guide us on how to live rightly. Morals sometimes result from a fictional or true story; the fictional ones are often designed to demonstrate a moral. While these differences between morals and values exist, we can treat them the same when using them to invent culture. Here are some traits we can leverage:
Acceptance
Compassion
Cooperation
Courage
Dignity
Equality
Fairness
Generosity
Gratitude
Honesty
Integrity
Kindness
Justice
Perseverance
Politeness
Respect
Responsibility
Self-control
Tolerance
Trustworthiness
A more high-minded society will value different traits (like dignity, equality, politeness, and tolerance) than a barbaric one, which might value self-reliance, courage, respect, and integrity. A society with more freedom might value most items on that list while individuals in an oppressive one might value courage, responsibility, politeness, and perseverance, while longing for things denied them, like kindness, dignity, and quality. The oppressive society itself might prize obedience, humility, and sacrifice, expecting citizens to adhere to these. The society’s government may prize values that are different from its inhabitants.
Beliefs
Many beliefs in culture originate from religions; those beliefs and how to invent them are discussed in chapter four in this volume, on creating religions. As we invent our world, we can take any religious idea and make it more cultural. An example would be Christmas; most would agree that the religious nature of this holiday has been taken over by the cultural aspects of it. There are other concepts from Christianity that permeate life in the U.S., including heaven, hell, the devil, and common swears. Religion’s influence on culture runs from holidays to working schedules and beyond. Leverage the beliefs of a dominant religion to create parts of a culture.
For example, if one day a week is for religious observance, or a few hours of every day are for prayer, then many will have work schedules structured around this. Even those who don’t practice the religion will be aware of these times if widespread. We tend to expect fewer people at stores or on the roads on a Sunday due to church goers, just as stores are often closed on Christmas. Our world’s inhabitants will be aware of these times and may plan for them, which is one way to sneak cultural elements into a scene.
As for non-religious beliefs, some are based in superstition. For example, walking under a ladder is considered bad luck, as is breaking a mirror, stepping on a crack, or a black cat crossing our path. If we’ve invented an animal for our world, we can use it in the same way, choosing a physical trait that makes it ominous, such as one type being poisonous when the rest aren’t (such an animal should be somewhat uncommon but not too rare or it never comes up).
Understanding the origins of such ideas can help us invent our own. Some are practical, like passing under a ladder being unsafe. Some may originate from a nursery rhyme. Then there’s the talisman that can keep evil away, whether it’s garlic and crosses for vampires or a rabbit’s foot. Associate an animal with something good like a benevolent deity and a piece of one’s body can become a talisman. Perhaps a plant has a root shaped like a humanoid and therefore any part of the plant, like garlic, is seen in either a good or bad light.
The black cat idea likely came from being associated with witches, so if we have a world with magic and a type of animal is often seen with wizards, who are also considered dangerous, a similar belief can arise; we can make this true in one culture and the belief may spread across others even if wizards elsewhere don’t often have such animals with them.
The idea that bad luck comes in threes is an example of confirmation bias, where we believe something and then look for the pattern, such as two bad things happening, prompting us to look for the third item. There’s debate as to the origin of this one, but the trinity is important in Christianity and we can do the same thing with a different number in our world. If we go with three, we earthlings will associate it with Earth.
Touching wood for good luck also has debatable sources. Some say it dates from when relics that were believed to be pieces of the cross Jesus was crucified on were sold. Some religions also worship nature and believe trees had spirits in them. Churches of wood were once used as sanctuary and knocking on them in a specific pattern was a signal for entrance. Perhaps pirates (who are notoriously superstitious) knocked on their ships before a bad storm. We leverage rationales but it’s important to note that not only do most of us have no idea where these superstitions originated, we don’t care, simply accepting them. Our characters will be the same, but our audience may wonder at the new ideas we invent, but explaining is best done in a single sentence, like this:
As she’d done since childhood, Tianna clapped her hands twice for luck, like the famous knight Kier had done to summon the horse he rode to glory at the famed Battle of Evermore.
The breaking of a mirror is another superstition, which arose after we stopped gazing in water to see our reflections. Technology provides ever greater possibilities for image capturing, and at my local Renaissance Festival, there’s a running joke that photographers are stealing the souls of those whose picture they take. Such literal interpretations are less common in a more educated world like ours, but they can be fun and useful to remember for fantasy settings. Disturbing that which holds the image, such as breaking glass or causing ripples in the water, is seen as sinister portent. Leverage such a belief as desired, forecasting how many years of misfortunes are thus foretold.
Friday the 13th is considered bad for reasons that aren’t agreed upon, but again, examples can give us ideas. Perhaps it’s due to Christ having supposedly died on a Friday, or one of his twelve disciples betraying him (13 were around the table, including him). Some speculate that 13 full moons in