Nice! The hallway one is *super* ominous!
Thank you! Originally, I had it say, "I don't remember this part? Do you?" But I later decided to use that idea for the mystery door and redid the hallway's phrase.
I like to imagine that the person speaking to you in the hallway is standing right behind you.
I like that!
I reviewed your seed and others here: https://intfiction.org/t/pinkunzs-seed-catalog/66029/5?u=pinkunz