User talk:Run desdemona/sandbox
Hi Lici,
I really liked your expanded plot summary of the play. I feel that you added a lot of important background information, which helps a non-reader of the play understand the author's symbolic intentions. You introduced many more characters, and you explained their significance within the greater framework of the play in the analysis section. Also, I recommend that you split of up the plot summary using the three acts of the play as subheadings. This change would highlight the analysis you provide in the following section about how the set changes from act to act.
Furthermore, your analysis of the play is well organized and definitely adds to the former contributors comments. I like the fact that you used the analysis of literary/drama critics in order to provide expert interpretations of the play. And I thought that your examination of the set as well as the deeper symbolic meaning behind each of the characters was interesting and informative.
Colter
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