Talk:Shō Hashi

Shō Hashi is currently a World history good article nominee. Nominated by Generalissima (talk) (it/she) at 19:54, 13 November 2024 (UTC)

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 19:54, 13 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Borsoka (talk · contribs) 05:43, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Remarks

Some background to the small kingdoms and their relationship with each other and China could be helpful (not more than two or three sentences).
Introduce the Ryukyu Kingdom as an island nation in the West Pacific.
Introduce Kyushu as an island.
Link and introduce Okinawa as an island.
Introduce Kyuyo.
Explain gusuko with one or two words.
Introduce and link Chuzan.
Bunei, the king of Chūzan, had several men castrated and sent to serve as eunuchs in the court of the Yongle Emperor in 1406. The emperor reacted poorly to this, ordering them returned and stating that it was intolerable that innocent men should be subjected to such treatment. Relevant? If yes,

Make it clear the the Yongle Emperor ruled China.
...ordering them returned... Is this grammatical?

Borsoka (talk) 05:52, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

What does a longevity adviser?
Introduce the Ming Veritable Reports.
...Ming Veritable Records record... Rephrase.
Explain aji with one or two words.
Introduce Yomitanzan and I doubt he was a castle (as the links suggests).
Sanzan kingdoms?
Introduce Hashiman. Borsoka (talk) 07:37, 6 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]