User contributions for Bill Williams

8 December 2024

• 05:3205:32, 8 December 2024 diff hist −33 Syrian civil war not reliable sources to claim the US actively supported SDF and SFA offensives, one article shows its bias clearly with "On 1 December, the Syrian National Army launched Operation Dawn of Freedom against the PKK/YPG ***terror group*** in the Tel Rifaat district of Aleppo’s countryside, liberating the area from ***terrorist*** elements." Tag: Visual edit

3 December 2024

• 01:0501:05, 3 December 2024 diff hist −25 Tulsi Gabbard ce Tag: Visual edit
• 00:5100:51, 3 December 2024 diff hist +415 Talk:Elon Musk →How to appropropratly document the perception of Musk as an oligarch in this article ?
• 00:5000:50, 3 December 2024 diff hist −1,328 Elon Musk Removed mention of "oligarch" in lead. BLP violation to use two opinion pieces, a news source quoting one of the opinion writers, and one other news source for a serious attack. SUMMARY violation to put this in the lead when it's nowhere to be found in the body. Tag: Visual edit

1 December 2024

• 20:4920:49, 1 December 2024 diff hist −23 2024 Georgia House of Representatives election →Predictions: fixed predictions
• 20:4820:48, 1 December 2024 diff hist +3 2024 North Carolina House of Representatives election Fixed predictions section current
• 20:4520:45, 1 December 2024 diff hist −26 2024 North Carolina House of Representatives election →Predictions: fixed date
• 20:4320:43, 1 December 2024 diff hist −6 2024 North Carolina House of Representatives election →Predictions: CNalysis rated the chamber as Solid R
• 20:4220:42, 1 December 2024 diff hist −6 2024 Georgia House of Representatives election →Predictions: CNalysis rated the chamber as Solid R
• 20:4220:42, 1 December 2024 diff hist −7 2024 Georgia State Senate election →Predictions: CNalysis rated the race as Solid R
• 20:3420:34, 1 December 2024 diff hist −6 2024 Florida House of Representatives election →Predictions: CNalysis rated the chamber as Solid R
• 20:3320:33, 1 December 2024 diff hist +1 2024 Florida Senate election →Predictions: CNalysis rated the chamber as Solid R, not Tilt R Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• 04:2604:26, 1 December 2024 diff hist −93 Israel–Hezbollah conflict (2023–present) The task force is led by the United States, not just temporarily by the administration of Joe Biden, so I don't know why this was hyperlinked and specified Tag: Visual edit
• 04:0104:01, 1 December 2024 diff hist +319 Talk:Tulsi Gabbard →Edits in Lead need to follow WP:NPOV and WP:BLP

30 November 2024

• 04:3604:36, 30 November 2024 diff hist −52 Talk:Tulsi Gabbard corrected signature and pinged person I replied to Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App talk source
• 04:3104:31, 30 November 2024 diff hist +517 Talk:Tulsi Gabbard →Edits in Lead need to follow WP:NPOV and WP:BLP: Reply Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App talk reply
• 04:2904:29, 30 November 2024 diff hist +128 Disney and Florida's Parental Rights in Education Act clarified section on settlement with LGBT advocates, current wording is false (none of the law was overturned) hence I specified that the settlement clarified that the law allows for LGBT books/discussions Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App section source

29 November 2024

• 23:5723:57, 29 November 2024 diff hist −66 Nayib Bukele improved wording across the third and fourth paragraphs of the lead for clarity and concision Tag: Visual edit
• 23:4823:48, 29 November 2024 diff hist +10,032 N User talk:Bill Williams/Archive 3 archiving previous discussions current
• 23:4623:46, 29 November 2024 diff hist −10,033 User talk:Bill Williams Archiving previous discussions current Tag: Replaced
• 23:3223:32, 29 November 2024 diff hist +756 Tulsi Gabbard added sentence to the body mentioning criticism of her statements on the russia-ukraine war (currently the section just quotes her with zero analysis) and mentions her statements similar to russian conspiracy theories about ukranian biolabs. Also renamed the section to the "russian invasion of ukraine" because it isn't about anything else relating to "russia and ukraine" Tag: Visual edit
• 23:2423:24, 29 November 2024 diff hist +442 Tulsi Gabbard →Middle East: added "assad is not the enemy of the united states" comment to body and lead, since that is notable as one of the key comments that she is often cited as saying when the media/opponents criticize her for her stance on syria Tag: Visual edit
• 23:1723:17, 29 November 2024 diff hist −280 Tulsi Gabbard Highlighting specific Republicans/Democrats opposing/supporting is not DUE for the lead when both parties have seen some conflicting opinions on her, hence this belongs explained in the body. Also cut the chunk of text explaining what DNI is, that isn't concise for the lead and readers can click the hyperlink to learn more. I further clarified the concerns are over her statements on Syria and Russia, not just "Ukraine and Russia. Tag: Visual edit

25 November 2024

• 03:1803:18, 25 November 2024 diff hist −64 Donald Trump sexual misconduct allegations Editorializing that Trump was heard “bragging about kissing and groping women without their consent” is UNDUE since the sentence includes a direct quote. it’s also also a BLP violation in Wikivoice, since Trump claims it was just a general observation Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App section source
• 02:1702:17, 25 November 2024 diff hist +691 Tulsi Gabbard added sentence specifically on her Russia-Ukraine commentary and therefore trimmed final sentence of lead to simply state scrutiny surrounds her syria and russia comments Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 02:0502:05, 25 November 2024 diff hist +12 Tulsi Gabbard ce Tag: Visual edit
• 01:5901:59, 25 November 2024 diff hist +486 Tulsi Gabbard added that her nomination drew criticism for her statements on syria and russia, this should be in the lead considering it's 95% of the media commentary on her nomination Tag: Visual edit
• 01:4301:43, 25 November 2024 diff hist −1 Tulsi Gabbard ce Tag: Visual edit
• 01:4201:42, 25 November 2024 diff hist +987 Tulsi Gabbard clarified (with sources) vague paragraph with two sentences on her views on syria. her opposition to military intervention should be specified in the first sentence, and clarification on how she was criticized for supporting assad and later called him a dictator is necessary. currently the reader would have no idea what she said, even though this is one of the biggest things that dominates most media coverage around her. Tag: Visual edit
• 00:4100:41, 25 November 2024 diff hist −77 Elon Musk Antisemitic trope is redundant with right wing conspiracy theories, and he has done significantly more of the lattes vs. one allegedly antisemitic tweet. This is not covered enough in the body or the media vs. the rest of the lead to be WP:SUMMARY/DUE Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App full source
• 00:3300:33, 25 November 2024 diff hist +355 User talk:Rhododendrites →“Don’t Say Gay”: new section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit App talk topic

24 November 2024

• 18:3218:32, 24 November 2024 diff hist −187 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act cut down excessively long section on the house/senate vote in the lead (the lead is already enormous and in desperate need of concision) Tag: Visual edit
• 18:3118:31, 24 November 2024 diff hist −38 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act ce on polls section since it is currently too verbose and unclear Tag: Visual edit
• 18:2718:27, 24 November 2024 diff hist −10 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act ce of final sentence of lead Tag: Visual edit
• 18:2518:25, 24 November 2024 diff hist +320 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act added citation on the settlement clarifying the terms of the law and made this more concise and less redundant. the same citation also backs up having the beginning of the article state that the law was labeled "don't say gay" by critics. This term is commonly used, but this is not mutually exclusive with it being labeled by critics. It is misleading without mentioning who labeled it as such, implying that the creators of the law or the media began calling it "don't say gay." Tag: Visual edit
• 18:1718:17, 24 November 2024 diff hist +3 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act ce Tag: Visual edit
• 18:1718:17, 24 November 2024 diff hist −5 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act Clarified a false wording of final paragraph of lead. the law never prohibited discussions about LGBT community/rights and never banned books on these subjects, the settlement did not change that (current wording of the lead says the settlement "once again allowed" these), it simply clarified existing state law. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:1318:13, 24 November 2024 diff hist −184 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act →Lawsuits: removed speculation on appeal's court's potential verdict in the body, this isn't even backed by the cited source and is asinine to include in any article about any lawsuit Tag: Visual edit
• 18:1118:11, 24 November 2024 diff hist −2,261 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act removed mention of advocacy group's support for other groups' lawsuits, since this is redundant with the previous paragraph listing out opposition to the act. also removed speculation over how an appeal's court would have ruled, that is absurd and does not belong in the article, much less the lead Tag: Visual edit
• 18:0918:09, 24 November 2024 diff hist −72 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act reworded sentence on Disney opposition to cut down excessive length and improve clarity Tag: Visual edit
• 18:0518:05, 24 November 2024 diff hist −228 Florida Parental Rights in Education Act reworded section of lead. the law is most notable for the classroom discussion prohibition, with the disclosure portion being rarely mentioned and the lawsuit burden by the schools being mentioned even less. hence I removed the lawsuit portion from the lead and trimmed and reworded the other sections for clarity. Tag: Visual edit
• 17:5517:55, 24 November 2024 diff hist −74 Federal prosecution of Donald Trump (election obstruction case) "given that Trump as president will not allow the prosecution to continue" is not accurate since the primary reason the DoJ is winding down the investigation is because of its policy on not prosecuting incumbent presidents Tag: Visual edit
• 17:5117:51, 24 November 2024 diff hist −35 Donald Trump reworded sentence on jan 6 and impeachment for concision Tags: Reverted Visual edit
• 17:2617:26, 24 November 2024 diff hist +110 Donald Trump The lead is not chronological and does not flow properly by mentioning Trump's 2021 impeachment above the section that details his late and post-presidency efforts to overturn the election. It may also be a BLP violation to use Wikivoice to state that Trump "facilitated" the Jan 6 attacks, which relates to his current criminal trial. Hence I moved the impeachment to the same paragraph as his election denial, and specified that he drew accusations of incitement that led to impeachment. Tags: Reverted Visual edit

15 November 2024

• 23:4923:49, 15 November 2024 diff hist −246 Donald Trump This lead is already one of the largest of every article, so putting civil trials in the same sentence as a felony criminal trial is misleading and an unnecessary use of space. These have nowhere near the relevance of anything else in the same paragraph, with far lower news coverage and less significance placed by analysts compared with the felony criminal trials. Tags: Reverted Visual edit

31 October 2024

• 20:5720:57, 31 October 2024 diff hist −267 José Antonio Kast the lead is a summary of the body, and writing an entire sentence that is based on two sentences (his father and his uncle) in the lead of HIS article does not make sense, considering the body is made up of hundred of sentences and 1/2 cannot be in the lead Tag: Visual edit

15 October 2024

• 20:4720:47, 15 October 2024 diff hist +348 Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Tim Sheehy (businessman) voted Keep

22 September 2024

• 00:0200:02, 22 September 2024 diff hist −402 Donald Trump writing that the campaign did not disclose medical records after the attempted assassination is not something notable that news sources reported much on, so it does not belong in this brief section Tags: Reverted Visual edit

14 July 2024

• 08:2908:29, 14 July 2024 diff hist −2 Attempted assassination of Donald Trump in Pennsylvania changed wording in second paragraph in lead for readability and clarity Tag: Visual edit
• 08:2508:25, 14 July 2024 diff hist +68 Attempted assassination of Donald Trump in Pennsylvania ce and improving clarity and readability of shooting section of lead Tag: Visual edit