User contributions for 86.136.110.44

29 July 2014

• 16:4616:46, 29 July 2014 diff hist +1 Open Diary shut down is verb. shutdown is noun.
• 02:0802:08, 29 July 2014 diff hist −1 Active Denial System →Concepts for use: grammar: "need" is singular
• 01:3201:32, 29 July 2014 diff hist −1 Virginia Water →Demography and housing: bad comma
• 01:3101:31, 29 July 2014 diff hist +2 Virginia Water →Trumps Green: grammar
• 01:3001:30, 29 July 2014 diff hist +1 Virginia Water →Famous residents: comma
• 01:3001:30, 29 July 2014 diff hist +2 Virginia Water typo
• 01:2201:22, 29 July 2014 diff hist −90 Super Noodles "Any brand of dehydrated instant noodles may be colloquially referred to as Super Noodles" -- not sure this is true/sourceable
• 01:1901:19, 29 July 2014 diff hist +6 Gem squash grammar, & avoid repetition
• 01:1701:17, 29 July 2014 diff hist +1 Heirloom plant comma
• 00:4600:46, 29 July 2014 diff hist +3 Musk mallow typo
• 00:3700:37, 29 July 2014 diff hist −445 Pink Friday (fragrance) →Reception: I don't see why a random Yahoo poster's review is notable

28 July 2014

• 23:4423:44, 28 July 2014 diff hist −1 Murder of Dawn Olanick →Case: lying not laying
• 21:3021:30, 28 July 2014 diff hist +1 Individual Computers Catweasel comma
• 17:1717:17, 28 July 2014 diff hist 0 Crime Museum →Some Featured cases on exhibit: caps
• 17:0617:06, 28 July 2014 diff hist 0 Summer with Monika →Synopsis: hyphen: it's a "working-class milieu", not a "class milieu" that happens to be working

27 July 2014

• 00:5900:59, 27 July 2014 diff hist −1 Man Dancin' typo

26 July 2014

• 23:2623:26, 26 July 2014 diff hist +2 Black Warrior grammar
• 19:5019:50, 26 July 2014 diff hist −3 Coastrange sculpin comma reqd
• 18:0718:07, 26 July 2014 diff hist −1 Kuwanon G bad comma
• 15:4915:49, 26 July 2014 diff hist −355 When life gives you lemons, make lemonade way too wordy!
• 12:3212:32, 26 July 2014 diff hist −141 Uni →Entertainment: remove "famous blogger" that nobody has heard of -- self-promotion -- barely 100 hits on Google
• 12:2312:23, 26 July 2014 diff hist +3 Camper Van Beethoven →Inactive period (1990–1999): grammar

25 July 2014

• 22:2422:24, 25 July 2014 diff hist +239 Wikipedia:Reference desk/Science →Would a "mirrored" human body work?: Wow, I can't believe "Chemical chirality in popular fiction" is an article. WP really has everything. Thanks for that.
• 17:2517:25, 25 July 2014 diff hist +715 Wikipedia:Reference desk/Science →Would a "mirrored" human body work?: new section
• 16:1816:18, 25 July 2014 diff hist +10 Acorna →Acorna's appearance: grammar
• 12:0012:00, 25 July 2014 diff hist −22 Ambridge Extra →Reception: trim
• 11:5911:59, 25 July 2014 diff hist 0 BBC Radio 4 Extra bad comma

24 July 2014

• 22:2022:20, 24 July 2014 diff hist −1 Huli-huli chicken "Worcestershire sauce" not -chester
• 21:3821:38, 24 July 2014 diff hist +6 Space Raiders (snack food) style, grammar, etc.
• 20:0420:04, 24 July 2014 diff hist −255 Major Grey's Chutney rm irrelevant microtrivia Tag: section blanking
• 08:4508:45, 24 July 2014 diff hist −3 Mortal Love "sonority" is the property of being sonorous -- a technical term, like how a piece of metal rings. change to the "sound" of a band.
• 04:1504:15, 24 July 2014 diff hist +322 Talk:Jean-Michel Jarre →Rampling her son: new section
• 03:4803:48, 24 July 2014 diff hist +6 Fischerspooner "spiking"... what? what could that possibly mean? changing to "influenced by"
• 00:1300:13, 24 July 2014 diff hist +252 Talk:Robocopy →Pun on RoboCop?: new section

23 July 2014

• 23:2923:29, 23 July 2014 diff hist +12 Transgender youth →Socio-legal perspectives: grammar
• 22:1222:12, 23 July 2014 diff hist −198 Cassandra (Doctor Who) →Character history: remove bizarre original research about transgenderism!
• 21:2721:27, 23 July 2014 diff hist −702 List of HTTP status codes →4xx Client Error: remove 420 -- this is not part of the HTTP standard, and should not be listed here. perhaps put it in a side-note at the bottom, but not amid the real, legitimate statuses.
• 20:0720:07, 23 July 2014 diff hist −3 Army of Darkness →Critical response: grammar
• 05:0505:05, 23 July 2014 diff hist −23 Deer Cave fix some grammar etc.
• 03:5303:53, 23 July 2014 diff hist −1 Grimm (TV series) →Critical reception: bad comma
• 03:5003:50, 23 July 2014 diff hist −6 Silkie (disambiguation) No edit summary
• 02:4902:49, 23 July 2014 diff hist −46 Kevin & Perry Go Large →Plot: more grammar fixes
• 02:4802:48, 23 July 2014 diff hist −75 Can't Cook, Won't Cook →Can't Smeg, Won't Smeg: rm informal comment
• 02:4702:47, 23 July 2014 diff hist +2 Kevin & Perry Go Large grammar etc.
• 02:0202:02, 23 July 2014 diff hist −1 Popular sermon →Audience: "lewd" not the right word here -- it means dirtily sexy/salacious. say "lay" i.e. unskilled in religious matters
• 01:4201:42, 23 July 2014 diff hist −1 Swedish krona →The euro: "Notwithstanding" is 1 word
• 00:3100:31, 23 July 2014 diff hist −15 Alligator snapping turtle er, if it's the "largest turtle in the world based on weight", surely that just means it's the "heaviest"

22 July 2014

• 23:1623:16, 22 July 2014 diff hist −2 Pyrrhocoridae typos / vandal?
• 21:5221:52, 22 July 2014 diff hist +6 Simpson family →Strangles: him-vs.-it confusion
• 20:4720:47, 22 July 2014 diff hist −15 Glyceria No edit summary