User contributions for 109.79.169.171

30 August 2024

• 04:3104:31, 30 August 2024 diff hist +263 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Rocky Balboa (film)/1 →Rocky Balboa (film): Soundtrack debate?
• 04:2704:27, 30 August 2024 diff hist +96 Rocky Balboa: The Best of Rocky needs more sources. needs a better source than a customer review on a shopping site.
• 04:2504:25, 30 August 2024 diff hist +12 Rocky Balboa (film) →Music: Add section heading for Score.
• 04:2404:24, 30 August 2024 diff hist +76 Rocky Balboa (film) Citation needed. Behind the scenes documentary should be properly reference with specific DVD details and also relevant timestamp to give other editors some chance of being able to WP:VERIFY
• 04:2104:21, 30 August 2024 diff hist +341 Rocky Balboa (film) Restore Christy Lemire deleted without any explanation 5 December 2018 by anon ipv6 editor.
• 04:1504:15, 30 August 2024 diff hist +8 Christy Lemire Currently? Since when? WP:RELTIME fail.
• 04:1304:13, 30 August 2024 diff hist −7 Rocky (franchise) Copyedit. We don't really know for sure how "actively" these projects are being developed. Don't assume.
• 04:1204:12, 30 August 2024 diff hist 0 Rocky (franchise) Typo. Better reference needed
• 04:1104:11, 30 August 2024 diff hist +67 Rocky (franchise) Better reference needed. An empty search box is not and has never been a good reference due to WP:LINKROT.
• 04:1004:10, 30 August 2024 diff hist +4 Rocky Balboa (film) →Plot: again MOS:NUMERAL use words in large prose sections for better readability.
• 04:0704:07, 30 August 2024 diff hist −62 Rocky Balboa (film) Remove WP:ELDUP Referenced in article body, no need to repeat in External links section.
• 04:0704:07, 30 August 2024 diff hist +249 Rocky Balboa (film) This article passed GA review in 2009 despite no reference for film critic Kenneth Turan of the Los Angeles Times and this omission was overlooked for 15 years.
• 04:0304:03, 30 August 2024 diff hist +48 Rocky Balboa (film) LA Times review never properly cited. Putting two critics in one long sentence helped cause this oversight.
• 03:4403:44, 30 August 2024 diff hist +19 Rocky Balboa (film) →Marketing: this either needs to be properly cited and verified WP:V or it has to go.
• 03:4303:43, 30 August 2024 diff hist +1,011 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Rocky Balboa (film)/1 →Rocky Balboa (film): WP:OVERSECTION
• 03:3003:30, 30 August 2024 diff hist −10 Rocky Balboa (film) →Spin-off: Again MOS:SLASH. You can type this but try reading it out loud.
• 03:2903:29, 30 August 2024 diff hist −32 Rocky Balboa (film) →Possible sequel: MOS:SLASH copedit and cleanup. Remove weird paragraph break, still talking about the same thing and relying on the same reference.
• 03:2003:20, 30 August 2024 diff hist −7 Rocky Balboa (film) Gross. Use same figures consistently.
• 03:1903:19, 30 August 2024 diff hist +3 Rocky Balboa (film) MOS:NUMERAL use words in large prose sections
• 03:1403:14, 30 August 2024 diff hist −111 Without Remorse (film) Please follow the WP:SIMPLE rules and explain your changes with a meaningful edit summary. Embedded sub Infobox added recently by User:Spartan231297 appears entirely redundant and unnecessary. Tag: Reverted
• 03:1103:11, 30 August 2024 diff hist −17 P.S. I Love You (film) No need to repeat full film title, I'm sure normal readers haven't forgotten it already by the second paragraph.
• 01:2401:24, 30 August 2024 diff hist +151 Star Wars Outlaws Restore expand section tag deleted without any explanation. Many editors seem unfamiliar with the Wikipedia project guidelines WP:PROSE and WP:VG/REC
• 01:1901:19, 30 August 2024 diff hist −98 Dustborn Things that didn't happen. Remove mention of PS4 and Xbone, no reviews, no mention (it doesn't seem as if the game was released on those platforms at all).
• 01:1601:16, 30 August 2024 diff hist +168 Dustborn Metacritic. Specific reference for each platform.
• 01:1201:12, 30 August 2024 diff hist +1,292 User talk:Binglederry →Note: WP:FORBESCON: new section Tag: New topic

29 August 2024

• 19:5519:55, 29 August 2024 diff hist +22 User talk:Evope No edit summary
• 19:5419:54, 29 August 2024 diff hist +870 User talk:Evope →Failing to round numbers in the normal way: new section Tag: New topic
• 19:5019:50, 29 August 2024 diff hist +2 It Ends with Us (film) Gross. Use same figures consistently. $245.6 million rounds up to $246 million, it is misleading inaccurate and unnecessary to truncate it to $245 million. Please round numbers in the normal way MOS:LARGENUM
• 19:4219:42, 29 August 2024 diff hist +544 Talk:Spider-Man: Into the Spider-Verse →Don’t know whether this should be added or not? current
• 19:3519:35, 29 August 2024 diff hist +3 The Creator (2023 film) Please follow the WP:SIMPLE rules and your changes with a meaningful edit summary. Previous phrasing was intentionally mirroring the wording at Metacritic. Tag: Undo
• 19:3219:32, 29 August 2024 diff hist −1 Avatar: Frontiers of Pandora WP:VG/REC "Including the number of reviews that are computed to create the review aggregator score can be helpful"
• 19:2219:22, 29 August 2024 diff hist +128 Concord (video game) Add warning comment to WP:VG/REC "Including the number of reviews that are computed to create the review aggregator score can be helpful" Some editors appear to be unfamiliar with the project guidelines.
• 19:1919:19, 29 August 2024 diff hist +732 User talk:210.204.118.139 →Prose before tables: new section current Tag: New topic
• 19:1119:11, 29 August 2024 diff hist +233 Star Wars Outlaws Reviews are supposed to be added to the article body BEFORE creating these tables. WP:PROSE and WP:VG/RS "Only include reviews in this table if they are cited within the text."
• 19:0819:08, 29 August 2024 diff hist +67 Concord (video game) Please follow the WP:SIMPLE rules and your changes with a meaningful edit summary. Number of reviews counted to create the scores is important context in an encyclopedia. A higher review count is more significant than a low review count. Tag: Undo
• 19:0219:02, 29 August 2024 diff hist −1 Bellagio (resort) Copyedit. current