Template:Did you know nominations/Campaign 74B

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The result was: promoted by Jolly Ω Janner 03:17, 12 March 2016 (UTC)

Campaign 74B

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• ... that during Campaign 74B, smog from swidden farming clogged the air?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Found and Lost (opera)
• Comment: Earwig's Copyvio score = 2%

Created by Georgejdorner (talk). Self-nominated at 16:49, 5 February 2016 (UTC).

• Although the article itself is fine (long and new enough, no problems with the prose) and a QPQ is done, sourcing appears to be correct and no copyvios are found in either article of accompanying image, I do have some concerns over the hook. I wouldn't necessarily call it descriptive, as it makes no reference to the bigger war its a part of. How about this:

• ALT1 ... that during Campaign 74B in the Laotian Civil War, smog from swidden farming clogged the air?

• Please review.—♦♦ AMBER^(ЯʘCK) 12:05, 4 March 2016 (UTC)

• Looks like this has languished a while and needed a new reviewer due to the changed hook. All checks out so APPROVED with ALT1 hook. Montanabw^(talk) 19:10, 9 March 2016 (UTC)