Talk:Western Marine Shipyard

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Intuivo in topic Projects

Neutrality

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Article currently appears to have edit wars relating to loan defaulting. Description of shipyard is also too promotional. Tacyarg (talk) 03:00, 1 February 2018 (UTC)Reply

Editor Jdmbet has been warned against going beyond what reliable sources say and against pushing a personal point of view (according to their user page they are "on a mission" to "expose the corruption scandals"). --Worldbruce (talk) 15:02, 29 April 2018 (UTC)Reply
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In the first paragraph of the body, "Gradually the company developed as a shipbuilder with its own shipyard" is lifted verbatim from the cited thesis. The remainder of the article needs to be checked. Much of the text may be removed to deal with WP:PROMO problems. If that's done first, it may take some of the close paraphrasing with it. --Worldbruce (talk) 19:30, 10 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

Projects

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I have gone through the sources of this section of this article, Many of these are unsourced and also like a brochure with specifications.--PARVAGE talk! 11:26, 8 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Agree, it sounds promotional and also a lot of details which i felt were unnecessarily descriptive to be placed on wikipedia. Intuivo (talk) 07:26, 31 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

Promotional Style of writing

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A lot of these sources cite the daily star (Bagaladesh) so I'm not sure how credible/verifiable these are as per wikipedia's guidelines. Also a lot of the writing sounds like it is promotional and advertising the company without citations. Rec for someone who knows more about this topic to review the article thoroughly to remove/rewrite those portions which sound excessively optimistic and promotional. Intuivo (talk) 07:25, 31 July 2023 (UTC)Reply