Talk:Antimonumento 5J

Latest comment: 4 months ago by Arconning in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Launchballer talk 02:12, 24 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

 
Antimonumento 5J
  • ... that the Antimonumento 5J (pictured) was installed to commemorate police repression during a protest in response to Giovanni López's arrest four years ago today and his subsequent death? Source: Milenio[1]: "se realizó un acto de memoria pacífica donde también se develó un antimonumento con el objetivo de no olvidar los actos de opresión que ejercieron las autoridades de seguridad pública en contra de ciudadanos manifestantes durante el 4, 5 y 6 de junio del 2020, protestas que se realizaron en torno al asesinato de Giovanni López a manos de policías municipales de Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos." (Translation: "an act of peaceful remembrance was held where an anti-monument was also unveiled with the objective of not forgetting the acts of oppression exercised by public security authorities against protesting citizens during 4, 5 and 6 June 2020, protests that took place around the murder of Giovanni López at the hands of municipal police officers of Ixtlahuacán de los Membrillos.")
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(CC) Tbhotch 07:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC).Reply

I recommend promoting this on 5 June, the anniversary of its installation.--Launchballer 16:24, 4 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
Yes, if valid and if required: (CC) Tbhotch 17:52, 4 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Nominator: Tbhotch (talk · contribs) 21:45, 6 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 15:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Tbhotch Here are my comments. :) Arconning (talk) 13:08, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Prose and MoS

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Lead and infobox

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  • protests of 4, 5, The artwork was installed on 5 June 2023, authorities removed the sculpture, add a comma at the end.
  • monument be reinstalled,, add to after monument.
  • Optional. Citation in the lead is alright but if you could mention it in the body and remove the citation in the lead, that would be alright.
  • Removed. It was for the DYK.

Background

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  •  Giovanni died of head trauma from a blunt object, , remove comma.
  • Mex$, US$, link to the denominations.
  • Somebody once told me that money would fall into WP:OVERLINK
  • According to the family, they refused the payment,, After Floyd's murder,, remove comma.
  • The video became viral,, change became to went, and remove the comma.
  • who were reported as forcibly disappeared., replace as to to have.
  • "El Halconazo" , add a comma at the end.

History and installation

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  • on the opposite side of the State Government Palace, add a comma at the end.
  • another anti-monument, add was at the end.
  • Giovanni's case was not isolated and, add that at the end.
  • the lights in the plaza were turned off, add a comma at the end.

Replica and ordered reinstallation

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  • for installation was submitted , add a comma at the end.
  • consult with the state civil protection, remove the.
  • Firefighters rejected the reinstallation, add a comma at the end.
  • and that (being made of steel) it could cause electric problems,, remove comma.
  • is one meter shorter, convert to imperial system as well.

Images

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  • All have proper licenses, just be careful on the second to last one.

Refs

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  • Random reference check: 1, 8, 15, 19, 27, good!
  • Earwig and manual check seems great.

Misc

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  • No ongoing edit war, broad and focused information about the background of the topic and the topic itself, neutral.
@Tbhotch You should mention in the body that the monument was built due to his death and the protests relating to his death. I believe that's my last comment, and we'll be set! Arconning (talk) 04:21, 4 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
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