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15:4115:41, 26 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Flow battery removed spurious hyphen: usually-water -> usually water Tag: Manual revert
15:3815:38, 26 November 2024 diff hist 0 Flow battery Undid revision 1259694413 by V35b (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted
15:3715:37, 26 November 2024 diff hist 0 m Flow battery deleted spurious comma: usually-water -> usually water. Tag: Reverted

18:3318:33, 11 November 2024 diff hist +1 Rate of heat flow minor: made "watt" plural: measured in watts Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17:0417:04, 1 November 2024 diff hist 0 Steam turbine →History: minor: Added hyphen: In 1672, an impulse turbine driven small toy car ... -> In 1672, an impulse turbine-driven small toy car Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

01:5301:53, 11 October 2024 diff hist +137 m Ćuk converter Added general comment regarding average inductor voltage
01:3801:38, 11 October 2024 diff hist 0 m Ćuk converter move "either" inside the prepositional phrase, where the either/or selects one of two objects.

17:1117:11, 27 September 2024 diff hist +1 Frank Whittle →After the war: Minor: Made parenthetical sentence stand alone. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:0817:08, 27 September 2024 diff hist −1 Frank Whittle →After the war: Minor: RPMs -> RPM. "RPM" is already plural: revolutions per minute Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:0717:07, 27 September 2024 diff hist 0 Frank Whittle →Nationalisation: Minor: shortened long sentence into two sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:0117:01, 27 September 2024 diff hist +72 Frank Whittle →Nationalisation: Minor: Revised confusing, difficult-to-parse, sixty-four-word sentence into three smaller, parsable sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16:4116:41, 27 September 2024 diff hist +3 Frank Whittle →Continued impact: Minor: "A No 4 Augmentor ... included an afterburner, was the design powerplant for the Miles M.52 project." -> "A No 4 Augmentor ... included an afterburner and was the design powerplant for the Miles M.52 project." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16:3716:37, 27 September 2024 diff hist −15 Frank Whittle →Rolls-Royce: Minor: removed misplaced and redundant reference to Whittle's sons David and Ian Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16:3316:33, 27 September 2024 diff hist 0 Frank Whittle →Development of the turbojet engine: Minor: moved "only" net to noun it modifies. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16:3216:32, 27 September 2024 diff hist +17 Frank Whittle →Development of the turbojet engine: Minor: "Whittle received a report noting the limitations in it said ..' -> "Whittle received a report noting the limitations in his concept. The report said ..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
16:2616:26, 27 September 2024 diff hist +16 Frank Whittle →Development of the turbojet engine: Minor: sought to consolidate confusing references sometimes to "the letter" and sometimes to "Griffith" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:5715:57, 27 September 2024 diff hist −1 Cavity magnetron →Common features: Minor: changed "sizes of the resonant cavities" to "size of the resonant cavities. The cavities are all the same size. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:5515:55, 27 September 2024 diff hist 0 Cavity magnetron →Cavity magnetron: Minor: changed "arching" to "curved" to avoid possible confusion of "arcing" with an electrical discharge, as in a "carbon arc." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:5415:54, 27 September 2024 diff hist −1 Cavity magnetron →Cavity magnetron: Minor: "the parallel sides of the slot acts ..." -> "the parallel sides ... act ..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:5115:51, 27 September 2024 diff hist +1 Sperry Corporation →Early history: Minor: added a colon; changed a "who" to "which" (its antecedent is a company, not a person; Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:4615:46, 27 September 2024 diff hist 0 De Laval nozzle →Conditions for operation: Minor: Split sixty-six-word sentence into two shorter sentences. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:4315:43, 27 September 2024 diff hist +1 De Laval nozzle →Exhaust gas velocity: Minor: move "only" next to the prepositional phrase it modifies. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:4115:41, 27 September 2024 diff hist 0 De Laval nozzle →Conditions for operation: Minor: moved "only" next to clause it modifies Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
15:3915:39, 27 September 2024 diff hist 0 De Laval nozzle →Operation: Minor: moved "only" next to prepositional phrase it modifies. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

17:5817:58, 25 September 2024 diff hist −1 Ptolemy →Mathēmatikē Syntaxis: Minor: "The earliest person that attempted ..." -> "The earliest person who attempted ..." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17:5517:55, 25 September 2024 diff hist −4 Euclid Minor: "new inovations" is redundant since an innovation by definition is new.; removed the "new." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

07:0207:02, 16 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Kater's pendulum →Repsold–Bessel pendulum: Replaced "finite diameter of the knife edges" with "non-zero radius of the knife edges." One speaks of the radius (of curvature) of knive edges, not the diameter of knife edges. Using "non-zero" rather than "finite" eliminates the need to rely on context to discern whether finite means non-infinite or, as it is sometimes carelessly used, non-zero.
06:5606:56, 16 August 2024 diff hist +2 m Kater's pendulum →Experimental procedure: replaced "finite" with "non-zero." Finite really means non-infinite, although it is occasionally misused to mean non-zero.
06:5206:52, 16 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Kater's pendulum →The pendulum: moved "only" next to the word it modifies.

00:4700:47, 15 August 2024 diff hist −3 Oblasts of Russia →Overview: Minor. Split one sentence into two shorter sentences. The topic of the first is "Krais"; that of the second is "oblasts." current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23:3023:30, 11 August 2024 diff hist +1 m Iodine-129 →Release by nuclear fuel reprocessing: Replace "they" with its singular antecedent.

18:2518:25, 6 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Tretinoin →Skin use: moved "only" next to phrase it modifies.

07:4907:49, 27 July 2024 diff hist 0 Agatha Christie's Marple →Overview: Moved "only" next to the word in modifies. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

16:3816:38, 16 July 2024 diff hist +33 m Indoor mold →Mycotoxins: citation needed

21:2921:29, 13 July 2024 diff hist +4 m Binary offset carrier modulation →Design: replaced a comma with a semicolon to avoid a run-on sentence. current
21:2721:27, 13 July 2024 diff hist 0 m Binary offset carrier modulation →Design: "with BPSK-modulated signal, which has a" -> "with BPSK-modulated signals, which have a" to be consisstent with "BPSK-modulated signals" in the following sentence.
18:5718:57, 13 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Binary offset carrier modulation "setup" -> 'set up." "Setup" is a noun. The verb-form equivalent is "set up."

18:1218:12, 6 July 2024 diff hist −25 m Doctor of Osteopathic Medicine →Education, training and distinctiveness: Unlinked Doctor of Medicine because it has been linked previously
18:0918:09, 6 July 2024 diff hist −4 Doctor of Osteopathic Medicine →History: Unlinked Doctor of Medicine because it has been linked already

01:4501:45, 24 May 2024 diff hist +32 m Paninternational Flight 112 "the tank for the water-injection engine thrust-augmentation system had inadvertently been filled with a mix of water and kerosene" -> "one or two two of the five tanks for the water-injection engine thrust-augmentation system had inadvertently been filled with kerosene" as spelled out in references 1 and 2.
01:1101:11, 24 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Paninternational Flight 112 →Accident: Expanded statute- and nautical-mile values to two signicant digits, the same as the given metric value.
00:5600:56, 24 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Shock diamond →Mechanism: Removed spurious comma

22:3322:33, 23 May 2024 diff hist −9 m Margaret Sullivan (journalist) →Columbia University: Updated "Sullivan will begin her role as executive director for the Craig Newmark Center for Journalism Ethics and Security at Columbia University on Jan. 1, 2024" to "On Jan. 1, 2024, Sullivan began her role as executive director for the Craig Newmark Center for Journalism Ethics and Security at Columbia University." Reference: t.ly/85SYM

17:2217:22, 17 May 2024 diff hist −4 m Minimum control speeds →Physical description: Remove spurious "for"

17:1017:10, 6 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Homologous chromosome "A pair ... are a set" -> "A pair ... is a set"

17:4917:49, 19 April 2024 diff hist −1 m Multi-junction solar cell "can not" -> "cannot"; cannot is generally preferred.
17:3117:31, 19 April 2024 diff hist +6 m Bifacial solar cells →Invention and first devices: formatted 1mm × 1mm × 1mm
17:2717:27, 19 April 2024 diff hist +13 m Bifacial solar cells →Invention and first devices: Added two additional first names
17:2417:24, 19 April 2024 diff hist +7 m Bifacial solar cells →Invention and first devices: Added Gerald Pearson's first name, to be consistent with other named individuals

22:5222:52, 13 April 2024 diff hist −8 m .22 Winchester Magnum Rimfire →Firearms using .22 WMR: Marlin firearms Company -> Marlin Firearms; to be consistent with earlier references

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