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MAGNIFICENCE
Magnificence is a short story by the cebuano
writer estrella D. Alfon (1917-1983). It's one of the stories contained in her short story collection
Estrella D. Alfon (1917-1983)
Freytag’s Pyramid describes the five key stages of a story, offering a conceptual framework for writing a story from start to finish. These stages are: 1.Exposition 2.Rising Action 3.Climax 4.Falling Action 5.Resolution Estrella Alfon Estrella D. Alfon (July 18, 1917 – December 28, 1983) was a Filipina author who wrote in English. She held an AA degree from the University of the Philippines and was a member of the UP Writers Club.In spite of having only a basic A.A. degree, she was eventually appointed as a professor of Creative Writing at the University of the Philippines, Manila. She held the National Fellowship in Fiction post at the U.P. Creative Writing Center in 1979. She would also serve on the Philippine Board of Tourism in the 1970s. Magnificence Vicente, a young man who worked as a bus conductor during the day, offered to help a young girl and her brother with their Math and English language assignments. In the evenings, he would go to their house, and over a huge study table, he would help them solve fractions and mull over language phrases. He also bought them pencils which were all the rage at the siblings' school. However, it turned out that there was a dark motive behind Vicente's kindness and gentleness towards the two kids. Magnificence One evening during a tutoring session, Vicente tricked the boy into leaving the room and then proceeded to molest the girl. The mother caught him performing the deed. Angered by what she saw, the mother slapped Vicente many times and drove him out of the house. The story ended with the mother tucking her daughter in her bed. Exposition The story starts with a man named Vicente, who comes to the house of the two children, Oscar (a little boy) and an unnamed little girl, to tutor them. The family trusted the man because even though he was just a conductor, he appeared to be gentle and kind, and it seemed like there was nothing to fear when he was around. Rising Action One evening, Vicente came earlier than usual. The children immediately put their lesson down and told him the envy of their classmates from the pencils he gave them. He then asked Oscar to get him a glass of water. Climax Vicente got the trust of the little girl because he gave him three pencils (he only gave two pencils to Oscar) . He then held the little girl by the arm, took her up lightly and held her to sit down on his lap. Then the little girl kept on squirming and for some reason, she felt uncomfortable. Vicente’s face was wet with sweat and his eyes looked strange. Falling Action The girl jumped away from Vicente’s lap then her mother came down the stairs holding their “merienda” or snack for them. She sends the children upstairs and then she talked to Vicente. She slapped him a couple of times, without him resisting or defending, then sends him away. Denouement The mother bathed the little girl and dressed her in new clothes. The little girl went to sleep. The mother then took the pencils and the clothes her daughter have worn and put it aside for tomorrow. Tomorrow came and she put it in the fire. Test your skills! 1. What figure of speech is established in the first line of the short story? 2. Why pencils are recurring objects in the story? 3. How does the short story reveal gender roles? 4. Cite lines in the story that suggests foreshadowing.