8 Misplaced and Dangling Modifiers

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Misplaced and Dangling

Modifiers
MODIFIERS

Modifiers are words or lengthy phrase that says


something specific about a word or another phrase.
Modifiers should be as close as possible to the word(s)
they modify.
 Adverbs verb, adjectives and another adverb

Adjectives noun or pronoun


Misplaced Modifiers

Misplaced modifiers are words


that, because of awkward placement,
do not describe what the writer
intended them to describe.
Misplaced modifiers can make a
sentence confusing and funny.
EXAMPLE

Lost deep in a daydream, Ed’s boss startled him


when she walked into his office.

 Lost deep in a daydream, Ed was startled when his


boss walked in.
Misplaced Modifiers
MISPLACED WORDS CORRECTLY PLACED WORDS
George couldn’t drive to work in With a broken leg, George
his small sports car with a couldn’t drive to work in his
broken leg. small sports car.

The toaster was sold to us by a The toaster with a money-back


charming salesman with a guarantee was sold to us by a
money-back guarantee. charming salesman.

He nearly brushed his teeth for He brushed his teeth for nearly
twenty minutes every night. twenty minutes every night.
Misplaced Modifiers
MISPLACED WORDS CORRECTLY PLACED WORDS
George couldn’t drive to work in With a broken leg, George
his small sports car with a couldn’t drive to work in his
broken leg. small sports car.

The toaster was sold to us by a The toaster with a money-back


charming salesman with a guarantee was sold to us by a
money-back guarantee. charming salesman.

He nearly brushed his teeth for He brushed his teeth for nearly
twenty minutes every night. twenty minutes every night.
Dangling Modifiers

Dangling modifiers are descriptive


(adjectives) words, phrase or clause
that open a sentence but do not
describe what the author intended
them to describe.
Dangling Modifiers

Lurching violently in the waves,


the captain was afraid of capsizing.
With the boat lurching violently in
the waves, the captain was afraid of
capsizing.
Dangling Modifiers

After seeing the flooded


basement, the house was taken off
the market.
After the inspector saw the
flooded basement, the house was
taken off the market.
Dangling Modifiers
DANGLING CORRECT
Shaving in front of the steamy Shaving in front of the steamy
mirror, the razor nicked Ed’s chin. mirror, Ed nicked his chin with
the razor.
While turning over the bacon, While I was turning over the
hot grease splashed my arm. bacon, hot grease splashed my
arm.
To impress the interviewer, To impress the interviewer, you
punctuality is essential. must be punctual.
Dangling Modifiers
DANGLING CORRECT
Shaving in front of the steamy Shaving in front of the steamy
mirror, the razor nicked Ed’s mirror, Ed nicked his chin with
chin. the razor.
While turning over the bacon, While I was turning over the
hot grease splashed my arm. bacon, hot grease splashed my
arm.
To impress the interviewer, To impress the interviewer, you
punctuality is essential. must be punctual.
Exercise on Misplaced
and Dangling Modifiers
Instruction
For numbers 1-8, Write C if the
sentence has no misplaced or dangling
modifier, and I if it has a misplaced or
dangling modifier.
For numbers 9-10, make the changes
needed to correct the misplaced or
dangling modifier in each sentence.
1) I ordered from the mail-order catalog a new
telephone shaped like a cartoon character.
2) While reading newspaper, my dog sat with me
on the steps.
3) Boring and silly, I turned the TV show off.
4) After dieting for several months, a loss of
twenty pounds was Susan’s reward.
5) Munching leaves from a tall tree, the giraffe
fascinated the children.
6) Looking through the door’s peephole, I couldn’t
see who rang the doorbell.
7) The crowd watched the tennis players with
swiveling hands.
8) The novel was about a pioneer family that Annie
had borrowed from her cousin.
9) The photographer pointed the camera
at the shy deer equipped with night-
vision scope.
10)Treated with a new drug, the doctor
was confident that his patients would
recover.

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