A Christmas Carol
A Christmas Carol
A Christmas Carol
CHRISTMAS
CAROL
A Christmas Carol is the text that you’re studying for section
Literature Paper 1, section B (19th- century novel).
The Paper:
Hour of Interval for Time for Interval for Time for Interval for Time for
Rising. Breakfast. setting to Dinner. leaving off Supper. going to Bed.
Work. Work
25 March to 6 o'clock. From ½ past 6 7 o'clock. From 12 to 1. 6 o'clock. 6 to 7. 8.
29 Sept to 7.
Workhouse inmates — at least those who were capable of it — were given a variety of
work to perform, much of which was involved in running the workhouse. The women mostly
did domestic jobs such as cleaning, or helping in the kitchen or laundry. Some workhouses
had workshops for sewing, spinning and weaving or other local trades. Others had their
own vegetable gardens where the inmates worked to provide food for the workhouse.
Workhouse Food
More often than not, meals followed a weekly rota, with meat featuring on only a limited
number of "meat days".
N. B.. None are Stinted as to Quantity, but all eat till they are satisfy'd.
Pease-Porridge
•A baked vegetable product, which mainly consists of split yellow or Carlin peas, water, salt, and
spices, often cooked with a bacon or ham joint.
Hasty-Pudding
•A pudding or porridge of grains cooked in milk or water.
Frumety
•A dish consisting of wheat, milk, sugar, and spices.
Broth
•Meat liquor, 1 pint; barley, 2 oz; leeks or onions, 1 oz; parsley and seasoning.
Gruel
•Oatmeal, 2 oz; treacle, ½ oz; salt and sometimes allspice; water.
Thomas Malthus
• In his book, The Reverend Thomas Robert Malthus (13 February
1766 – 23 December 1834) observed that an increase in a nation's food
production improved the well-being of the nation’s people, but the
improvement was temporary because it led to population growth.
• In the past, populations grew until the lower classes suffered hardship
and want. At this point, they became vulnerable to famine and disease –
and often died.
• For our purposes, it’s important to see the big influence it had on
Charles Dickens.
How does the story link to
money?
Think about what Dickens might have been
trying to say about social injustice.
To summarise…
• Dickens felt very strongly about the gap
between rich and poor.
• He wrote ‘A Christmas Carol’ to try and highlight
the difference, and make people think
differently about their actions.
• Why do you think he chose to set his book at
Christmas time? What does Christmas mean in
our society?
The BIG What kind of story is A
Question: Christmas Carol?
Keywords: Genre, Gothic, Staves .
• Before Victorian times the setting for Gothic novels was generally a
castle, or somewhere in the countryside that was dark, creepy and
lonely.
WHAT DO WE
ASSOCIATE WITH
CHRISTMAS?
What do you already know about this
text?
Scrooge
Temperature Weather
Cold within him
No warmth could warmth No falling snow was more intent
He iced his office No pelting rain
Blue lips
Stave 1 What impression do you have of
Scrooge from Stave 1?
IMPRESSIO EVIDENCE COMMENT / EFFECT
N
Disliked “a squeezing, wrenching, The use of list here infers that Scrooge has many
grasping, scraping, negative qualities. The verb “squeezing” implies that …
clutching, covetous, old
sinner!”
The BIG Can I analyse an extract?
Question:
Keywords: Palpable, ruddy, morose.
There are two sections to the question that
you will be asked to answer on the text.
• The extract.
• The whole text.
TASK:
5 MINUTES – you
and your partner need
to annotate (highlight
and comment) your
extract looking at the
presentation of the
setting.
Before we feedback, explore some of
these questions to see if you can
develop your annotations further.
Explore how
Dickens presents
the setting in the
extract.
Write about:
• How Dickens presents the
greed in this extract.
• How Dickens presents the
impacts of greed in the rest of
the novel.
STRUCTURE:
• Point you’re going to tell me clearly how the
character is initially presented in this chapter.
• If required, you are going to give additional
information about the chapter so it makes sense,
but you are definitely not retelling the story.
• Evidence direct from the chapter and must be
exact.
• Terminology.
• Explain this needs to be clear, succinct yet
developed. Show me your full understanding.
• Link you’re going to make a clear link to
historical context and how the character reflects
the time the text was written.
• Link you’re now linking to somewhere else in
the text.
• Link select evidence that shows this.
• Link terminology
• Link explain. Just like your previous
explanation it needs to be clear, succinct yet
developed.
STRUCTURE:
• Point you’re going to tell me clearly how the
character is initially presented in this chapter.
• If required, you are going to give additional
information about the chapter so it makes sense,
but you are definitely not retelling the story.
• Evidence direct from the chapter and must be
exact.
• Terminology.
• Explain this needs to be clear, succinct yet
developed. Show me your full understanding.
• Link you’re going to make a clear link to
historical context and how the character reflects
the time the text was written.
• Link you’re now linking to somewhere else in
the text.
• Link select evidence that shows this.
• Link terminology
• Link explain. Just like your previous
explanation it needs to be clear, succinct yet
developed.
STRUCTURE:
• Point you’re going to tell me clearly how the
character is initially presented in this chapter.
• If required, you are going to give additional
information about the chapter so it makes sense,
but you are definitely not retelling the story.
• Evidence direct from the chapter and must be
exact.
• Terminology.
• Explain this needs to be clear, succinct yet
developed. Show me your full understanding.
• Link you’re going to make a clear link to
historical context and how the character reflects
the time the text was written.
• Link you’re now linking to somewhere else in
the text.
• Link select evidence that shows this.
• Link terminology
• Link explain. Just like your previous
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developed.
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• Point you’re going to tell me clearly how the
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information about the chapter so it makes sense,
but you are definitely not retelling the story.
• Evidence direct from the chapter and must be
exact.
• Terminology.
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the time the text was written.
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the text.
• Link select evidence that shows this.
• Link terminology
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information about the chapter so it makes sense,
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• Evidence direct from the chapter and must be
exact.
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the time the text was written.
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the text.
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exact.
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the time the text was written.
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the text.
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the time the text was written.
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Skill Achieved
A – Acknowledge a strength in the Convincing statement that answers the question
(AO1)
paragraph Relevant quotation that links to the question
___________________________________ (AO1)
_________________ Confident and perceptive explanation of what
the quotation shows (AO2)
How is
Scrooge
changing
here?
Read Stave 2 – 48-55
How is Scrooge being presented differently in
stave 2 in comparison to stave 1?
Can you discuss with your partner how you would analyse your
quotation? Remember to incorporate language analysis in your
discussion.
The BIG Can I explore an extract and link
it to Scrooge elsewhere?
Question:
Keywords: Love, regret, remorse.
What impressions do you
have of Scrooge so far in the
novel?
Decide in your own words what points you would make. Jot these down.
page 67
From what we’ve ready so far, what is your
opinion of the Cratchit family?
IMPRESSION EVIDENCE LANGUAGE EFFECT
(PG NO) TECHNIQUE
Can I analyse and respond to an unseen extract?
What impression
is given of
Scrooge here?
Think about:
• His actions
• What others say about him
"If these shadows remain unaltered by the Future, none other of my race," returned the Ghost, "will
find him here. What then? If he be like to die, he had better do it, and decrease the surplus
population." How does Dickens
Scrooge hung his head to hear his own words quoted by the Spirit, and was overcome with penitence
and grief.
present Scrooge in
"Man," said the Ghost, "if man you be in heart, not adamant, forbear that wicked cant until you have
discovered What the surplus is, and Where it is. Will you decide what men shall live, what men shall
this extract?
die? It may be, that in the sight of Heaven, you are more worthless and less fit to live than millions
like this poor man's child. Oh God! To hear the Insect on the leaf pronouncing on the too much life
among his hungry brothers in the dust."
Scrooge bent before the Ghost's rebuke, and trembling cast his eyes upon the ground. But he raised
them speedily, on hearing his own name.
"Mr Scrooge!" said Bob; "I'll give you Mr Scrooge, the Founder of the Feast!"
"The Founder of the Feast indeed!" cried Mrs Cratchit, reddening. "I wish I had him here. I'd give
him a piece of my mind to feast upon, and I hope he'd have a good appetite for it."
"It should be Christmas Day, I am sure," said she, "on which one drinks the health of such an odious,
stingy, hard, unfeeling man as Mr Scrooge. You know he is, Robert. Nobody knows it better than you
do, poor fellow."
"I'll drink his health for your sake and the Day's," said Mrs Cratchit, "not for his. Long life to him.
A merry Christmas and a happy new year! -- he'll be very merry and very happy, I have no doubt!"
The children drank the toast after her. It was the first of their proceedings which had no
heartiness. Tiny Tim drank it last of all, but he didn't care twopence for it. Scrooge was the Ogre
of the family. The mention of his name cast a dark shadow on the party, which was not dispelled for
full five minutes.
Initially Scrooge appears to be
remorseful for his actions, the Ghost
repeats a phrase that Scrooge used
earlier within the text and now that
Scrooge is beginning to change he
seems embarrassed by his previous
lack of empathy. Scrooge was
“overcome” with emotion; this verb is
suggesting that his “grief” was
overwhelming to him.
A01
A02
A03
TASK:
You are to write 2 more paragraphs answering the question: How does Dickens present Scrooge in this
extract?
You need to ensure that you are extracting evidence and commenting on the effect.
STRUCTURE:
• Point you’re going to tell me clearly how the
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exact.
• Terminology.
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the time the text was written.
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the text.
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• Link terminology
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developed.
STRUCTURE:
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• Terminology.
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the time the text was written.
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STRUCTURE:
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Skill Achieved
A – Acknowledge a strength in the Convincing statement that answers the question
(AO1)
paragraph Relevant quotation that links to the question
___________________________________ (AO1)
_________________ Confident and perceptive explanation of what
the quotation shows (AO2)
THE
RESPONSIBILI IMPORTANCE THE MEANING
TY OF FAMILY OF
CHRISTMAS
FIVE MINUTES: on your tables, what examples / evidence can you find to support?
Let’s explore them in detail
Quotation Theme Explanation
Dickens’ initial description of
Scrooge sets him out as solitary.
He is cold and hard and this
“secret, and self-contained, and characterisation is created by
Isolation
solitary as an oyster” the simile. Scrooge is empty of
love, family and a sense of
(page 1) community. He must come out of
his “oyster” shell and learn to
engage others by embracing the
Christmas spirit.
“What Idol has displaced you?”
“A golden one.”
(page 22)
“A merry Christmas, uncle! God
save you!”
(page 2)
Let’s explore them in detail
Quotation Theme Explanation
Dickens’ initial description of
Scrooge sets him out as solitary.
…but he was a tight- He is cold and hard and this
fisted hand
“secret, at the and
and self-contained, characterisation is created by
Isolation
grindstone
solitary as an oyster”
the simile. Scrooge is empty of
love, family and a sense of
(page 1) community. He must come out of
his “oyster” shell and learn to
engage others by embracing the
Christmas spirit.
No beggars implored
him to Idol
“What bestow a you?”
has displaced
trifle…
“A golden one.”
(page 22)
What right have you
got to be merry?
“A merry Christmas, uncle! God
save you!”
(page 2)
Let’s explore them in detail
Quotation Theme Explanation
Dickens’ initial description of
Scrooge sets him out as solitary.
He poked the fire, He is cold and hard and this
and extinguished
“secret, theand
and self-contained, characterisation is created by
Isolation
last frail spark
solitary as an oyster”
the simile. Scrooge is empty of
love, family and a sense of
forever.
(page 1) community. He must come out of
his “oyster” shell and learn to
engage others by embracing the
‘Let me hear another Christmas spirit.
sound from you…
“What Idol has displaced you?”
and you’ll keep
Christmas by one.”
“A golden losing
your situation!’
(page 22)
I want nothing from
you; I ask
“A merry nothing
Christmas, ofGod
uncle!
you; whysave cannot
you!” we
be friends?
(page 2)
Poverty
Dickens was deeply concerned by the plight of the poor and so used Scrooge to
exemplify the callous attitude of the more affluent to the poor.
USEFUL EXAMPLES:
• How he speaks to the charity collectors.
TASK:
• Bob Cratchit symbolises the typically
exploited worker at the mercy of his Find quotations that link to the
tyrannical employer. He does not complain
about their situation as this would seem
theme of poverty and would help to
ungrateful. support a discussion regarding one
• Infant morality rate among poor Victorians of these areas of poverty.
was high and so Tiny Tim represents the CHALLENGE: Can you start to pick apart these
potential fate of many sick children living in quotations?
poverty. Scrooge realises his thoughtless
words about the poor when he watches the
Cratchits.
• Ignorance and Want.
Skill Achieved
A – Acknowledge a strength in the Convincing statement that answers the question
(AO1)
paragraph Relevant quotation that links to the question
___________________________________ (AO1)
_________________ Confident and perceptive explanation of what
the quotation shows (AO2)
Reminder
Who are the children under the Ghost of Christmas Present’s coat?
e) Poor and Destitute
Of Stave f) Hope and Charity
g) Ignorance and Want
Three
h) Goodness and Light
Which line does the Ghost of Christmas Present repeat to Scrooge?
i) “Are there no prisons? Are there no workhouses?”
j) “Christmas? Bah humbug!”
k) “Decrease the surplus population.”
l) “You may be a bit of undigested beef.”
Read Stave 4 – 93-94
How is the Ghost
presented in the
opening of stave 4?
Does this differ
from the other
ghosts we have
met?
Ghost of Christmas Past Ghost of Christmas Present Ghost of Christmas Future
They left the busy scene, and went into an obscure part of the town,
• Annotate your copy what can you
where Scrooge had never penetrated before, although he recognised its select that shows ‘thought’?
situation, and its bad repute. The ways were foul and narrow; the shops • What would you refer to from the
and houses wretched; the people half-naked, drunken, slipshod, ugly. whole text to further support your
Alleys and archways, like so many cesspools, disgorged their offenses
of smell, and dirt, and life, upon the straggling streets; and the whole view?
quarter reeked with crime, with filth, and misery. • What would you include that
focuses on:
Far in this den of infamous resort, there was a low-browed, beetling • AO1?
shop, below a pent-house roof, where iron, old rags, bottles, bones, and
greasy offal, were bought. Upon the floor within, were piled up heaps of
• AO2?
rusty keys, nails, chains, hinges, files, scales, weights, and refuse iron of • AO3?
all kinds. Secrets that few would like to scrutinise were bred and hidden • What level would these be
in mountains of unseemly rags, masses of corrupted fat, and sepulchres comments be at? What are you
of bones. Sitting in among the wares he dealt in, by a charcoal stove,
made of old bricks, was a grey-haired rascal, nearly seventy years of aiming for?
age; who had screened himself from the cold air without, by a frowsy
curtaining of miscellaneous tatters, hung upon a line; and smoked his
pipe in all the luxury of calm retirement.
STRUCTURE:
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the time the text was written.
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the text.
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Skill Achieved
A – Acknowledge a strength in the Convincing statement that answers the question
(AO1)
paragraph Relevant quotation that links to the question
___________________________________ (AO1)
_________________ Confident and perceptive explanation of what
the quotation shows (AO2)
Build a
vocabulary/definition list: Humanitarianism - the promotion of human welfare.
Aristocracy
Gentry Workhouse - a place where those unable to support
Industrial Revolution themselves were offered accommodation and employment.
Factory Acts
Workhouse
Baby Farms The Industrial Revolution was the transition to new
Humanitarianism manufacturing processes in the period from about 1760 to
22 sometime between 1820 and 1840.
Inequality
Dickens writes about childhood in many of
his novels. Make notes on how children are
presented in the following scenes:
• How men like Scrooge and Marley became wealthy through shares
and loans
• The lack of protection for workers, especially children, and the long
hours and poor pay (Cratchit)
• The fear of debt and unable to pay, as this would mean prison
(Caroline and her husband)
• The lack of education and protection for children in poverty
(Ignorance and Want)
• The effects of poverty on families (Tiny Tim, their clothes, their
dinner, etc.)
• The living conditions of the poor.
You could finish on the difference Scrooge was able to make when he
cared.
Read Stave 5
Divide your page. In the first column find a quotation
from early in Stave 1, and in the second find a
quotation from that shows the difference in Scrooge
in Stave 5.
How does Dickens present
Scrooge’s transformation
throughout the novella?
Stave Five
Preface of the novel
I have endeavoured in this Ghostly little book, to raise the Ghost of an
Idea, which shall not put my readers out of humour with themselves, with
each other, with the season, or with me. May it haunt their houses
pleasantly, and no one wish to lay it.
Their faithful Friend and Servant, C.D.
December, 1843.
1. After reading the preface, why do you think Dickens wrote the novel?
Justify your answer with a quotation.
2. P. 117- why does Scrooge state he is ‘quite a baby’?
3. P.118- how does this description of the weather compare with the
description at the start of the novel (p.4)?
4. Why would a Victorian reader be so shocked by Bob’s payrise?
5. What would you say the novel teaches us about? Think of three key
ideas.
6. Choose a selection of words that Dickens uses to describe Scrooge’s
behavior in this stave that show a clear change in his character.
Can I analyse an unseen
extract?
No warmth could
warm, no wintry Ebenezer Scrooge
weather chill him.
Stave 1
To edge his way along the crowded paths of life, But why do spirits walk the
warning all human sympathy to keep its distance, earth, and why do they come
was what the knowing ones call nuts to Scrooge. to me?''
Ebenezer Scrooge
``But you were always a good man
Stave 1
of business, Jacob,'' faultered
Scrooge, who now began to apply
this to himself.
``Was it a dream
``I was bred in this place. or not?''
I was a boy here!''
Ebenezer Scrooge ``Ding, dong!''
``These are but shadows of the Stave 2 Scrooge sat down upon a
things that have been,'' said
the Ghost. ``They have no form, and wept to see
consciousness of us.'' his poor forgotten self
``Nothing,'' said Scrooge. as he used to be.
``Nothing. There was a boy
singing a Christmas Carol at
``A solitary child, neglected my door last night. I should
by his friends, is left there like to have given him
still.'' something: that's all.''
His face had not the harsh and rigid lines of later Clear away! There was nothing they
years; but it had begun to wear the signs of care wouldn't have cleared away, or
and avarice. There was an eager, greedy, restless couldn't have cleared away, with old
motion in the eye, which showed the passion that Fezziwig looking on
had taken root, and where the shadow of the
growing tree would fall. ``No. I should like to be able to say
a word or two to my clerk just now!
That's all.
Ebenezer Scrooge
And perhaps it was the
pleasure the good Spirit Stave 3
had in showing off this
power of his, or else it ``If these shadows remain unaltered by the
was his own kind, Future, none other of my race,'' returned the
generous, hearty nature, Ghost, ``will find him here. What then? If he
and his sympathy with all be like to die, he had better do it, and
poor men, that led him decrease the surplus population.''
straight to Scrooge's
clerk's
Scrooge hung his head to The children drank the toast after ``He has given us plenty
hear his own words her. It was the first of their of merriment, I am
quoted by the Spirit, and proceedings which had no sure,'' said Fred, ``and
was overcome with heartiness. Tiny Tim drank it last it would be ungrateful
penitence and grief. of all, but he didn't care twopence not to drink his health.
for it. Scrooge was the Ogre of Here is a glass of mulled
the family. wine ready to our hand
at the moment; and I
Scrooge had his eye say, ``Uncle Scrooge!''''
upon them, and
especially on Tiny Ebenezer Scrooge
Tim, until the last. Stave 3
``I was only going to say,'' said Scrooge's
nephew, ``that the consequence of his
There might have been twenty taking a dislike to us, and not making merry
people there, young and old, but with us, is, as I think, that he loses some
they all played, and so did Scrooge; pleasant moments, which could do him no
for, wholly forgetting in the harm. I am sure he loses pleasanter
interest he had in what was going companions than he can find in his own
on, that his voice made no sound in thoughts, either in his mouldy old office, or
their ears his dusty chambers.
Although well used to ghostly
``I am in the presence of ``You are about to
company by this time,
the Ghost of Christmas Yet show me shadows of
Scrooge feared the silent
To Come?'' said Scrooge the things that have
shape so much that his legs
not happened, but will
trembled beneath him, and
happen in the time
he found that he could
before us,'' Scrooge
hardly stand when he
pursued. ``Is that so,
I only know he's dead prepared to follow it.
Spirit?''
Ebenezer Scrooge
``What has he done
``Ghost of the Future!'' he
exclaimed, ``I fear you more
Stave 4 with his money?
than any spectre I have seen.
But as I know your purpose is to
do me good, and as I hope to live It's likely to be a very
to be another man from what I cheap funeral,'' said the
same speaker; ``for upon he resolved to treasure
was, I am prepared to bear you
my life I don't know of up every word he
company, and do it with a
anybody to go to it heard, and everything
thankful heart. Will you not
he saw
speak to me?''
Every person has a He frightened every one The case of this
right to take care of away from him when he was unhappy man might be
themselves. He always alive, to profit us when he my own. My life tends
did was dead! that way, now.
Ebenezer Scrooge
Stave 4 Somebody was fool
enough to do it, but I
why wasn't he natural in his took it off again.
lifetime? If he had been,
plundered and bereft,
he'd have had somebody to
unwatched, unwept,
look after him when he was
uncared for, was the body there lay a something
struck with Death, instead of
of this man. covered up, which,
lying gasping out his last
there, alone by himself. though it was dumb,
announced itself in awful
language.
if this man could be raised up ``Spirit!'' he said,
now, what would be his ``this is a fearful place.
foremost thoughts? Avarice, In leaving it, I shall not
hard-dealing, griping cares? leave its lesson, trust
They have brought him to a me. Let us go
rich end, truly!
Ebenezer Scrooge
``It's only once a year,
sir,'' pleaded Bob,
Stave 5
appearing from the Tank. Scrooge was better than his word.
``It shall not be repeated. He did it all, and infinitely more;
I was making rather merry and to Tiny Tim, who did not die, he
yesterday, sir.'' and it was always said was a second father. He became as
of him, that he knew good a friend, as good a master,
how to keep Christmas and as good a man, as the good old
well, if any man alive city knew, or any other good old
possessed the city, town, or borough, in the good
knowledge. old world
``Are there no prisons?'' ``And the Union workhouses?'' demanded
asked Scrooge. Scrooge. ``Are they still in operation?''
I don't make merry myself at Christmas and I ``If they would rather die,'' said
can't afford to make idle people merry. I help to Scrooge, ``they had better do it, and
support the establishments I have mentioned: they decrease the surplus population
cost enough: and those who are badly off must go
there.''
Ebenezer Scrooge
On poverty
``It's enough for a man to understand his
own business, and not to interfere with
other people's. Mine occupies me constantly.
If I could work my will,'' said The owner of one scant young nose, gnawed and mumbled
Scrooge indignantly, ``every by the hungry cold as bones are gnawed by dogs, stooped
idiot who goes about with down at Scrooge's keyhole to regale him with a Christmas
``Merry Christmas'' on his carol: but at the first sound of God bless you, merry
lips, should be boiled with his gentleman! May nothing you dismay! Scrooge seized the
own pudding, and buried with ruler with such energy of action that the singer fled in
a stake of holly through his terror, leaving the keyhole to the fog and even more
heart. He should!'' congenial frost.
Fred
uncle!'' merriment, and passed the bottle
joyously.
``I want nothing from you; But I am sure I have always thought of Christmas
I ask nothing of you; why time… as a good time: a kind, forgiving, charitable,
cannot we be friends?'' pleasant time: the only time I know of, in the long
calendar of the year, when men and women seem by
one consent to open their shut-up hearts freely,
and to think of people below them as if they really
``A merry Christmas, uncle! God
were fellow-passengers to the grave, and not
save you!'' cried a cheerful voice.
another race of creatures bound on other journeys.
And therefore, uncle, though it has never put a
scrap of gold or silver in my pocket, I believe that
``Nephew!'' returned the uncle, it has done me good, and will do me good; and I
sternly, ``keep Christmas in your say, God bless it!''
own way, and let me keep it in
mine.''
``What of that, my dear!'' said Scrooge's
He's a comical old fellow,''
Bob told them of nephew. ``His wealth is of no use to him.
said Scrooge's nephew,
the extraordinary He don't do any good with it. He don't
``that's the truth: and not
kindness of Mr make himself comfortable with it. He
so pleasant as he might be.
Scrooge's nephew, hasn't the satisfaction of thinking -- ha,
However, his offences
whom he had ha, ha! -- that he is ever going to benefit
carry their own punishment,
scarcely seen but Us with it.''
and I have nothing to say
once
against him.''
Old Fezziwig
Then old Fezziwig stood out to dance with ``Why! Is it not? He has spent but a
Mrs. Fezziwig. Top couple, too; with a good few pounds of your mortal money: three
stiff piece of work cut out for them or four perhaps. Is that so much that
he deserves this praise?''
Tiny Tim
``God bless us every I am sure we shall none of
one!'' said Tiny Tim, us forget poor Tiny Tim --
the last of all. shall we -- or this first
parting that there was among
us?
he was very light to carry,''
she resumed, intent upon her
work, ``and his father loved
him so, that it was no
trouble: no trouble
It opened; and a little girl, much ``She died a woman,'' said the Ghost, ``and had, as
younger than the boy, came I think, children.''
darting in, and putting her arms ``One child,'' Scrooge returned.
about his neck, and often kissing ``True,'' said the Ghost. ``Your nephew!''
him, addressed him as her Scrooge seemed uneasy in his mind; and answered
``Dear, dear brother.'' briefly, ``Yes.''
Belle
for the love of him you
once were.''
``Belle,'' said the husband, turning to
his wife with a smile, ``I saw an old ``Our contract is an old one. It was
friend of yours this afternoon.'' made when we were both poor and
content to be so, until, in good season,
we could improve our worldly fortune by
our patient industry. You are changed.
When it was made, you were another
man.''
Marley was dead: to begin with. Old Marley was as dead as a door-nail.