Unit 4 2020 Academic Writing

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UNIT 4

ACADEMIC WRITING
IRE407C/INR 10AB
Common problems

Proper language editing!


Plagiarism
Sentence construction (s/c)
Quoting of sources
Incorrect use of punctuation
Pointers
Paragraphs
Look at the following sentences (Source
inside/part of sentence):

 According to (Nel, 2013) he says that learner


aggression has become endemic.

 According to (Nel, 20-13) learner aggression


has become endemic.

 According to Nel (2013) learner aggression


has become endemic.
Example 2
 Learner aggression has become endemic (Nel,

2013).(End of sentence)

 Learner aggression has become endemic (JW


Nel, in Journal for child studies, 2 September
2013).

 Learner aggression has become endemic


(Johanna W Nel & Sylvester Phoza, in Journal
for child studies, 2 September 2013).
REPORTING
(without plagiarising)
Original text
Social capital and socio-political trust should be regarded as a
consequence of an individual's perception of the political
world and the effectiveness of political institutions.
Democracies are expected to recruit trusted leaders and to
surround them with an institutional order which would impose
sanctions if they performed inadequately.
Newton, 2015
Paraphrased version
Newton (2015) points to the importance of people’s
perceptions of the effectiveness of political institutions,
because this will ultimately determine the level of their
socio-political trust and social capital. According to him
democratic countries are expected to elect trusted leaders
who should be held accountable if they do not perform
adequately.
REPORTING (example 2)
(without plagiarising)
Original text
A well-functioning post-school education system is a key lever
to break out of poverty and inequality and sustain a consistent
development trajectory. With a record high unemployment rate,
inequality and poverty in South Africa, school leavers are about
to enter a world beset with uncertainty and volatility, where they
will need every opportunity to realise their educational goals.
Paraphrased version
To break the endless cycle of poverty and inequality in South
Africa, a well-functioning higher education system is crucial for
consistent social and economic growth. School leavers are
faced with the harsh realities of an uncertain and volatile
society. To this end, they should have ample opportunity to
realise there educational goals.
QUOTING
Badenhorst (2015:72) formulates her view as follows:(more than
three lines)

A well-functioning post-school education system is a key lever to


break out of poverty and inequality and sustain a consistent
development trajectory. With a record high unemployment rate,
inequality and poverty in South Africa, school leavers are about to
enter a world beset with uncertainty and volatility, where they will
need every opportunity to realise their educational goals.

BUT
However, Badenhorst (2015:72) believes that “school leavers are
about to enter a world beset with uncertainty and volatility, where
they will need every opportunity to realise their educational goals”.
POINTERS
 Instead of “said” use :

 Emphasised
 Highlighted
 Point out/pointed out
 Recalled an incident
 Feels that/ Felt/was of the opinion
 Suggests/ed
 According to
 Mentioned
 Summaried/summarises/motivates… his views as
follows
 
POINTERS (cont.)

Phrases to use or start a sentence:


 Accordingly
 Similarly…. (When you want to confirm what a researcher has said)
 Likewise…
 Importantly
 In accordance with the advice of Mc Millan……
 The views expressed by …….
 It was revealed that . . .
 OR
 it transpired that . . .
 it emerged that…
 Data strongly suggest that . . .
 In keeping with Atkinsons theory . . .
 A similar view was expressed by . . .
 This was supported by . . .
 From the discussions it is evident that . . .
 Research findings indicate that . . .
 It is clear that . . .
Do Not start a sentence with:

But this is not true.


Rather:
However, this is not true.

And learners are so aggressive nowadays that teachers


become afraid.
Rather:

In addition, learners are so aggressive nowadays that


teachers become afraid.
Or just leave it out and start directly with sentence

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