Our Pipes Annotations
Our Pipes Annotations
Our Pipes Annotations
by Henry Lawson
OUR PIPES-CONTEXT AND SYNOPSIS
� Taken from ‘While the Billy Boils’ book, the short story ‘Our
Pipes’ is told in the first person and both the narrator and Jack
Mitchell are depicted as swagmen. This is the same Jack
Mitchell that we saw in ‘Shooting the Moon’.
� Through their mutual connection as swagman, they are able to
identify with each other as kindred spirits and like minded
men.
� Whilst nothing very physical happens within the short story, it
doesn’t need too as we are constantly shown the collective
unity that both men share.
� The smoking of the pipe becomes a clear symbol of mateship,
commonality, defiance, resilience and hardship.
OUR PIPES-CONTEXT AND SYNOPSIS
� We are told of Mitchell’s trials in smoking and the angst that it
caused his mum but the jubilation that it gave his dad. We see
gender specific roles playing out in terms of mother being a
separate entity to the male bonding that exists between father
and son. The fathers joy is seen as a reflection of himself in
being denied the very thing that Mitchell seeks.
� The end of the story can be seen to convey ideas of loss as
Mitchell speaks of his father and the mutual respect that they
had.
� The fact that Mitchell says that he is yet to find a replacement
to share a smoke with suggests that Mitchell and the narrator
whilst close, do not share a bond as strong as that between
father and son.
Language, Culture and Identity
THE MOON rose away out on the edge of a smoky plain, seen
through a sort of tunnel or arch in the fringe of mulga behind
which we were camped—Jack Mitchell and I. The timber proper
was just behind us, very thick and very dark. The moon looked Imagery
like a big new copper boiler set on edge on the horizon of the
Alliteration plain, with the top turned towards us and a lot of old rags and
straw burning inside.
We got the billy boiled first, and some leaves laid down for our
beds and the swags rolled out. We thanked the Lord that we had
some cooked meat and a few johnny-cakes left, for we didn’t feel
equal to cooking. We put the billy of tea and our tucker-bags
between the heads of our beds, and the pipes and tobacco in the
crown of an old hat, where we could reach them without having to
Colloquialism get up. Then we lay down on our stomachs and had a feed. We
didn’t eat much—we were too tired for that—but we drank a lot of
tea. We gave our calves time to tone down a bit; then we lit up and
began to answer each other. It got to be pretty comfortable, so long
as we kept those unfortunate legs of ours straight and didn’t move
round much.
Alliteration
We cursed society because we weren’t rich men, and then we felt
better and conversation drifted lazily round various subjects and
ended in that of smoking.
“We lived in Sydney then—Surry Hills. Those were different times; the place was
nearly all sand. The old folks were alive then, and we were all at home, except
Tom.”
He reflected.
Lack of “Ah, well! . . . Well, one evening I was playing marbles out in front of our house
emotion when a chap we knew gave me his pipe to mind while he went into a church-
around
death
meeting. The little church was opposite—a ‘chapel’ they called it.”
He reflected.
Motif – repetition of the idea that he
‘reflects’ on his ideas – reflecting
requires more thought than
remembering
The pipe was alight. It was a clay pipe and niggerhead tobacco. Mother was at work
out in the kitchen at the back, washing up the tea-things, and, when I went in, she
said: “You’ve been smoking!”
“Well, I couldn’t deny it—I was too sick to do so, or care much, anyway.
“‘Then I’ll give it to Jim Brown,’ she said; and she did; though it wasn’t
Jim’s fault, for he only gave it to me to mind. I didn’t smoke the pipe so
much because I wanted to smoke a pipe just then, as because I had such
a great admiration for Jim.”
Mitchell reflected, and took a look at the moon. It had risen clear and
had got small and cold and pure-looking, and had floated away back out
amongst the stars.
Personification
“I felt better towards morning, but it didn’t cure me—being sick and
nearly dead all night, I mean. I got a clay pipe and tobacco, and the old
lady found it and put it in the stove. Then I got another pipe and tobacco,
and she laid for it, and found it out at last; but she didn’t put the tobacco in
the stove this time—she’d got experience. I don’t know what she did with
it. I tried to find it, but couldn’t. I fancy the old man got hold of it, for I
saw him with a plug that looked very much like mine.”
He reflected.
He reflected.
Hyperbole – to show how grand
things seem to children
Dialogue – long sentence
“Well, one day I was having a smoke out at the back, when I heard her
coming, and I pulled out the stem in a hurry and put the bowl behind the
water-butt and the stem under the house. Mother was coming round for
a dipper of water. I got out of her way quick, for I hadn’t time to look
innocent; but the bowl of the pipe was hot and she got a whiff of it. She
went sniffing round, first on one side of the cask and then on the other,
until she got on the scent and followed it up and found the bowl. Then I
had only the stem left. She looked for that, but she couldn’t scent it. But
I couldn’t get much comfort out of that. Have you got the matches?
Reference
to Shooting
the Moon “Then I gave it best for a time and smoked cigars. They were the safest
and most satisfactory under the circumstances, but they cost me two
shillings a week, and I couldn’t stand it, so I started a pipe again and
then mother gave in at last. God bless her, and God forgive me, and us
all—we deserve it. She’s been at rest these seventeen long years.”