Descriptive Paragraph Analysis

Descriptive Paragraph
Analysis
What should you do?
1. Download the paragraph planner.
2. Read the four paragraph carefully.
3. Analyze and put sentence(s) of each paragraph into the right
section in appropriate section in the paragraph planner., e.g. main
idea, details, and concluding sentences
4. Send your work to schoology.
My bedroom is comfortable place to take a rest because it is a good place
for relax and sleep in the night, and I can do everything that I want in my
room (topic sentence). In the right side of my bedroom, next to the door
there are my favorite equipments. It's full with one set of television and
playstation (detail 1). Beside the equipment, there is a small wardrobe that
contains my clothes, books, and other tools to study. I put all my necessary
equipment in that small wardrobe. Above the wardrobe, I hung a kaligrafi
picture on the wall (detail 2). Next to the wardrobe there is a small bed that
very comfortable for me to sleep. At night, my bed feel very cold.(detail 3)
In the corner of my bedroom, there is a window and the sun light in the
morning can through into my bedroom.(detail 4) Next to the left wall, I
hung a clock, calendar, and a small photo of my friends (detail 5). And the
last there is a big cupboard that full of my family's possesion.(detail 6) All
these things make me feel warm and comfort everytime. It's a best room in
my home.(concluding sentence)
On one corner of my dresser sits a smiling toy clown on a tiny
unicycle―a gift I received last Christmas from a close friend. The
clown's short yellow hair, made of yarn, covers its ears but is parted
above the eyes. The blue eyes are outlined in black with thin, dark
lashes flowing from the brows. It has cherry-red cheeks, nose, and lips,
and its broad grin disappears into the wide, white ruffle around its
neck. The clown wears a fluffy, two-tone nylon costume. The left side of
the outfit is light blue, and the right side is red. The two colors merge in
a dark line that runs down the center of the small outfit. Surrounding
its ankles and disguising its long black shoes are big pink bows. The
white spokes on the wheels of the unicycle gather in the center and
expand to the black tire so that the wheel somewhat resembles the
inner half of a grapefruit. The clown and unicycle together stand about
a foot high. As a cherished gift from my good friend Tran, this colorful
figure greets me with a smile every time I enter my room.
If I have to choose one thing that is important in my life, it is my
notebook computer. It is an Acer notebook running Windows 7. It’s a
fairly cheap notebook that I bought about four years ago. It’s black
and thin and has rounded edges that are soft and smooth when you
pick it up. It’s also light enough for me to carry in my backpack.
Moreover, it can do nearly everything I need it to do. For
example, I can create documents, design new pages on my website,
make recordings and download TV shows. In addition to many files I
have saved for my work, it contains a lot of photos and music.
However , its not a perfect computer . It crashed a few years ago
and since then it’s been much slower. Furthermore, it has
downloaded some programs that I hate. I don’t know how to get rid
of them. Overall though, this computer is pretty reliable, convenient
and allows me to work anywhere I go.
Cafes are essential places for students and teachers who want to have a
break. Although they are just small shops, they have a special
atmosphere. You can smell the aroma of coffee and they are often
located in a green part of the university surrounded by trees. The best
cafes are air-conditioned inside but they have a deck outside which is
where bigger groups like to hang out and chat. Inside where it is 5 cool
other students read books, work on computers or check their messages
on their smart phones. The service is usually quick and friendly.
Moreover, if you are tired from studying, you can usually find a café
wherever you are in the university. The cafes are not just shops; they
are an important part of university culture.

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