Nina Speech Fortnight Exam
Nina Speech Fortnight Exam
Nina Speech Fortnight Exam
Cambridge IGCSE
FORTNIGHT TEST
Anna has recently arrived in New Zealand. It is 8:25 and she is being interviewed by a local radio station.
‘And special guest, Anna McNuff, joins us in the studio right now. Anna, you’re running the
entire length of New Zealand, starting today?’
‘Yes! In forty-five minutes, I’ll be on the start line at the trailhead signpost, at Stirling Point.’
I was sitting, star-struck, in the Southland FM’s Invercargill studio, marvelling at radio host
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Rach’s seemingly exotic accent. I already loved the way that people here pronounced my
name as: ‘Inna!’ I grinned widely from behind a microphone bigger than my head.
We talked about my reasons for the run: my amazing childhood with access to sport and 10
the outdoors, the benefits of exercise, and raising awareness for organisations that support
individuals recovering from accident or illness to take on a physical challenge. I explained
that I’d be visiting schools along the way.
‘It just comes down to a choice about how you live your life,’ I shrugged. ‘I’m a
‘‘work-it-out-when-I-get-there’’ kind of person.’
This was perhaps the reason why I’d failed to read even 10 per cent of the trail notes before 25
setting out. And possibly why a perceptive work colleague had introduced me to Kevin who
would meet me at the airport.
Local expert Kevin had quizzed me about sections of the trail. Mostly my responses were:
‘Umm, I’m not too sure on that particular bit.’
No, I’d no idea what speed I would do carrying the backpack. I’d wildly over-estimated and 30
certainly hadn’t accounted for the massive mountains sprawled across the landscape like
giant sleeping tarantulas with their hairy tussock-covered legs forming sharp ridges and deep
basins, punctuated by icy streams and seas of chest-high grass. Trails were easy to follow
at first using those orange trail-markers designed for tourists but would peter away leaving
a confusing connection of gaps in the complex maze of slippery roots and leaves covering 35
the forest floor, any of which could have been trails themselves.
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Yes, I did consider purchasing a GPS at one point, but decided that wasn’t entirely in keeping
with the ‘adventurous spirit’. No, I was a paper maps and compass kind of girl. The explorers
of old did things that way, and I wanted the same thrill of ‘discovery’. Kevin had looked
concerned, though seemed comforted by the fact I had an SPT-tracker, which would let
friends and family know I was okay. 40
We’d chatted more about the differences between trails in New Zealand and those in Europe.
My new friend Kevin explained how so many people doing the trail were entirely unprepared,
narrowly avoiding disaster through sheer luck. ‘They start the trail expecting it to be a
well-graded highway. Of course, most are coming south, so by the time they get down here
they get it. But it’s the ones starting off with no idea from this end that I worry about.’ He 45
looked at me. I nodded and looked away quickly.
I hoped, but didn’t know for sure then, he’d be impressed when next we met. Having watched
my parents be showered with respect over their years of Olympic achievements, I would
soon have some of my own.
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Re-read Text C, Running for my life, in the insert and then answer Question 3 on this question paper.
Question 3
You are Anna. After completing your run successfully you return to the UK and are asked to give a
motivational speech to young people.
• explain the details of the challenge you undertook and the reasons you wanted to do it
• evaluate your preparation for the challenge and what you wished you had done or realised
beforehand
• discuss the highlights of the whole experience, what you gained and why you would recommend
your audience to take on challenges.
Base your speech on what you have read in Text C, but be careful to use your own words. Address
each of the three bullet points.
Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 10 marks for the quality
of your writing.
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Content - 10
18/25 72%
Language - 8
Total 18/25 Please read the comments given after the speech on the areas of
improvement. Ensure you go through the mark scheme attached too.
Compass
guiding
Good use of personal
pronouns
Picked exactly from the text. Please avoid this, although it is a point, you ought to write it in your own words
You did not cover the third bullet point comprehensively. You left ot
too much information Nina. You need to ensure that you cover all the
As I conclude my speech... three bullet points sufficiently.
Good speech Nina, but there is still too much to learn on speech writing.
A2: preparation for the challenge and what Anna wished she had done or
realised
reading trail notes (det. only read 10% of notes) [dev. should have been
better prepared / wished paid more attention / worked out ok / need to
know where to go when markers peter out]
differences between trails in NZ and Europe (det. forests, mountains)
[dev. not used to this terrain / no idea beforehand]
maps / compass (det. old fashioned navigation techniques/ no GPS)
[dev. may have been foolhardy / romanticised idea]
safety arrangements (det. spot tracker) [dev. useful / necessary /
sensible precaution]
practised more with backpack (det. over-estimated speed she could
travel carrying all her gear) [dev. backpack slowed her down / should
have made other arrangements for picking up supplies]
started the other end of the trail (det began at Stirling point) [dev. less
time to acclimatize / more challenging route from the outset]
A3: highlights of the whole experience, what Anna gained and why she
would recommend her audience to take on challenges.
radio interview (det. Southland FM’s Invercargill studio, meeting radio
host Rach) [dev. enjoyed fame and attention / new cultural experience]
discovery / adventure (det. wild, beauty of landscape) [dev. taking
some risks can be worth it / pushing yourself is important]
confidence / sense of achievement (det. own ‘Olympic’ achievement)
[dev. able to work through problems faced / overcome problems in own
life / positive mindset brings success]
support from others (det. support from friends, family, work
colleagues) [dev. gained their respect / inspiring others]
learned from Kevin (det. local expert, new friend) [dev. pleased she
met him / grateful for his advice]
1 1–3 The response is either very general, with little reference to the
text, or a reproduction of sections of the original.
Content is either insubstantial or unselective.
There is little realisation of the need to modify material from the
text.
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