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I.

Identification

The Title of jurnal : THE IMPROVING OF STUDENTS ABILITY IN WRITING RESEARCH BACKGROUND OF
CLASSROOM ACTION RESEARCH PROPOSAL BY USING SCIENTIFIC APPROACH

The Autors : fenty debora napitupulu

Publisher : 2021

Reviewer : Kharisma

II . Main idea :

Language is one of the most important aspects of human’s life. Without language, people cannot
communicate with the others. By language, people can share their experiences, their feelings, their
opinions, and also their needs to each other by spoken and written.

Teaching writing is an activity where the focus is on something such as language practice in expressing
our feelings. The purpose of teaching writing is to develop student’s skill in writing English effectively.
Teachers ask the students to write the dialogues as good possible. Students work to make a dialogues
and where possible the teachers goes to help the students in writing. In teaching writing, teacher should
introduce the material to the students. One material that learned in English Department is making
scientific writing of Classroom Action Research. Students are expected to be able to write a proposal of
classroom action research that can be descibed and narrated based on students experience.

The main idea of the journal titled "The Improving of Students' Ability in Writing: Research Background
of Classroom Action Research Proposal by Using Scientific Approach" centers on the enhancement of
students' writing skills. The research explores the background of the study and presents a Classroom
Action Research (CAR) proposal. The primary focus is on implementing a scientific approach as a means
to improve students' proficiency in research writing. The journal likely delves into strategies, methods,
and outcomes associated with this approach to elevate the overall quality of students' writing abilities in
a classroom setting.

II . Critcal :

Stregth : 1. Describing the Research Content: Even though it is long, this title generally reflects the
research content related to improving the ability to write research proposals with a scientific approach
in a class.
2.Use Important Keywords: Keywords such as “Classroom Action Research Proposal” and “Scientific
Approach” reflect important elements of the research that may be of interest to readers interested in
the topic.

Disavabtages : 1.Long and Complicated: The title is too long and complicated, it is difficult to
immediately understand the content of the research just from the title.

2. Less Specific: This title does not provide specific enough information about the research subject or
methods used.

3. Tenses Error: There is a tense problem in this title, it is better to replace "Improving" with
"Improvement" to match the English tense.

https://www.researchgate.net/publication/
356805234_THE_IMPROVING_OF_STUDENTS_ABILITY_IN_WRITING_RESEARCH_BACKGROUND_OF_CLA
SSROOM_ACTION_RESEARCH_PROPOSAL_BY_USING_SCIENTIFIC_APPROACH

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