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Abstract. This paper is aimed at describing the parts (paragraphing and contents) of
problem-solution short essay necessary for the assessment and analyzing the approach
used in designing the rubric. The data are taken from the sample of problem-solution short
essay which belongs to the argumentative writing. The data were collected by using the
documentation method and was analyzed qualitatively. The results show that there are two
main parts in the analytical assessment rubric for the problem and solution short essay
namely contents and grammar with the percentage values 60% and 40% respectively. The
assessments of contents cover the suitable Title of the essay, Paragraphing, and Task
response. Each of them has scoring scales. Meanwhile, grammar assessments that contains
omission, addition, selection, ordering, plus the use of capital/small letters are measured by
counting the numbers of errors. In order to get the total score of the essay, the excel
sheets with certain formula are made. The top-down approach is appropriate in designing
the analytical rubric for this type of short essay. It comprises of four steps, they are 1)
choosing a framework for the intended assessment, 2) determining the criteria of the
assessment, 3) adapting an existing rubric and designing the rubric for the specific learning
purposes, and 4) use the rubric. The last step requires further observation and evaluation to
test the effectiveness of the rubric that has been designed.
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INTRODUCTION
Writing has been the most difficult productive skill for most English
language learners, especially for students who learn English as a second language,
as they need to meet certain criteria of assessment, such as to respond the task
correctly, put paragraphs in a good order, and write good thesis statement and
topic sentences with correct sentence structures and grammar. In order to enhance
students’ writing performance, using an assessment rubric for the specific area with
various important elements can be useful for teachers to show evaluation to
students (Obeid, 2017:175), so that student may realize their problems in writing,
that they can avoid making the same mistakes by learning and practicing more.
An assessment rubric is a scoring tool that is useful for teachers to evaluate
student’s performance based on definite criteria and description in order to achieve
certain outcomes (Muhammad, et.al., 2018:1418). It is important to show the
objectivity and transparency in scoring the student’s performance and avoid the
subjectivity. Jung (2016, 1) states that conducting assessment helps students
develop their English writing skill and to monitor their writing. It is also necessary
for students to measure their own ability and preclude them having the same
mistakes or errors from the contents, style up to form of writing (Sumarti and
Widodo, 2020:217; Thresia, 2013:137-138), as well as the rhetorical and linguistic
problems (Wei, 2017:2).
Chowdhury (2018: 64) states that there are four benefits of using
assessment rubrics. The first one is it notifies students of expectations, in which
teachers inform students how to respond the task and identify the criteria to be
assessed. The second one is to provide informative and timely feedback that
teachers can give feedback by highlighting the strengths and weaknesses for
students’ improvement. Yumin, et.al. (2019, 106) said that in order to identify the
strengths and weaknesses of language use in students’ writing, a diagnostic
language assessment can be designed. The third one is to help maintaining grading
consistency, which means that rubric can be used as a standard scoring tool to
reduce grading inconsistencies, save time and avoid writing long comments on each
assignment. The last one is that fair assessment fosters student learning, it can help
students determine their learning targets and identify their improvement. Nkhoma
(2020:239) also said that scoring rubrics are beneficial for students in learning and
achieving better results, besides that they know how teachers and educators make
accurate assessment about their performances. Hence, the uses of assessment
rubrics are very useful both for teachers and students.
Assessment rubrics can be divided into two types, analytic and holistic.
Chowdhury (2018:62-63) further distinguishes between the two types of rubrics.
The criteria in an analytic rubric are evaluated separately, while in a holistic rubric,
they are evaluated simultaneously that result in a single overall score that do not
provide clear information about where or how improvements can be achieved.
Therefore, an analytic rubric is highly recommended for more effective
assessments. It is true that teachers need more time to apply an analytic rubric in
assessment, but the results are worth it.
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Essay sample
“An increasing number of people in developing nations are buying
motorcars for the first time. The primary problem of this phenomenon is
increased air pollution caused by exhaust fumes and the most viable solution
is to educate their citizens about the dangers of polluting the atmosphere
The most obvious problem associated with an increase in car
ownership in emerging markets is the deterioration of the quality of the air.
That is to say that as more people buy private vehicles they use fewer non-
polluting modes of transportation, such as bikes and walking, and instead
burn fossil fuels in order to power their vehicles. For example, it is estimated
that 5 million new motorists will take to the roads in China in the next few
years. This results in millions of tonnes of carbon monoxide and carbon
dioxide being released into the air.
A long term solution to this predicament is to educate young people
about the dangers of polluting the air that we breathe. Children in schools
could be taught about how to reduce their CO2 footprint by using public
transport or carpooling. They are also likely to teach their parents about the
things they learned at school and adults will also be influenced by this
initiative. For example, school children in California were taught about the
consequences of driving cars excessively and this has resulted in nearly 50% of
people now sharing rides together instead of driving solo.
In conclusion, many more people in poorer countries are now driving
their own cars resulting in huge amounts of greenhouse gases being expelled
into the atmosphere and the best way to curb this dilemma is to teach the
public how to use their cars more responsibly.”
285 words
(https://writing9.com/text/5d2175ffa0d8370017b5e059)
The sample essay given is considered as the clear answer and easy to
understand by students. Here is the breakdown of each paragraph with its parts.
a. Introductory paragraph
Paragraph 1/part 1 (1/1) paraphrase of the statement of the question
“An increasing number of people in developing nations are buying motorcars
for the first time.”
Paragraph 1/part 2 (1/2) a thesis statement: stating the problem occurs and its cause,
also solution
“The primary problem of this phenomenon is increased air pollution caused by
exhaust fumes and the most viable solution is to educate their citizens about
the dangers of polluting the atmosphere.”
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b. Body paragraph 1
(2/1) The topic sentence stating the problem
“The most obvious problem associated with an increase in car ownership in
emerging markets is the deterioration of the quality of the air.”
(2/2) A supporting sentence for the problem
“That is to say that as more people buy private vehicles they use fewer non-
polluting modes of transportation, such as bikes and walking, and instead
burn fossil fuels in order to power their vehicles.”
(2/3) An example related to the topic sentence and the supporting sentence
“For example, it is estimated that 5 million new motorists will take to the
roads in China in the next few years.”
(2/4) Result of the problem
“This results in millions of tonnes of carbon monoxide and carbon dioxide
being released into the air.”
c. Body paragraph 2
(3/1) A topic sentence for the solution
“A long term solution to this predicament is to educate young people about
the dangers of polluting the air that we breathe.”
(3/2) Supporting sentences for the solution
“Children in schools could be taught about how to reduce their CO2 footprint
by using public transport or carpooling. They are also likely to teach their
parents about the things they learned at school and adults will also be
influenced by this initiative.”
(3/3) An example related to the solution
“For example, school children in California were taught about the
consequences of driving cars excessively and this has resulted in nearly 50% of
people now sharing rides together instead of driving solo.”
d. Concluding paragraph
(4/1) Paraphrase of the statement of question (re-affirmation) and result of the
problem
“In conclusion, many more people in poorer countries are now driving their
own cars resulting in huge amounts of greenhouse gases being expelled into
the atmosphere.”
(4/2) Paraphrase of solution as conclusion
“And the best way to curb this dilemma is to teach the public how to use their
cars more responsibly.”
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b. Criterion 2 Paragraphing
There are 11 parts that should be met by students in the short essay writing
as shown in the sample answer of the essay. Here are the descriptions of the score.
Table 3 Description of Scoring Essay’s Paragraphing
score description
1 has the introductory paragraph with general statement (1/1: paraphrase of
the statement of the question)
1 has a good the thesis statement in the introductory paragraph (1/2:
problem and solution)
1 has a good topic sentence/main idea stating the problem in the body
paragraph 1 (2/1)
1 has a good supporting sentence(s) for the problem in the body paragraph
1 (2/2)
1 has a good example related to the problem in the body paragraph 1 (2/3)
1 has a good result of the problem in body paragraph 1 (2/4)
1 has a good topic sentence/main idea in the body paragraph 2 (3/1: stating
the solution to the problem)
1 has a supporting sentence(s) in the body paragraph 2 (3/2)
1 has a good example in the body paragraph 2 (3/3)
1 has the concluding sentence(s) with the paraphrase(s) of the general and
thesis statements (4/1)
1 has the paraphrase of the solution as the conclusion (4/2)
In order to get the total score of the grammar (Y), the total number of
words written by student in his/her essay subtracts the total number of error in
criteria 4-8, then the result is divided with the total number of word again, times it
with 10, and finally times it with 40%.
Y = 3.5
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work. The analytical rubric is considered more complicated than the holistic rubric,
however, it enables teachers to give objective assessment to students’ work and
can show the evaluative feedback to students so that they can improve their
performances.
CONCLUSION
The results show that the analytical assessment rubric for the problem and
solution short essay is divided into two main parts namely contents and grammar
with the percentage values 60% and 40% respectively. The assessments of contents
cover the suitable Title of the essay, Paragraphing, and Task response. Each of them
has scoring scales. Meanwhile, grammar assessments that contains omission,
addition, selection, ordering, plus the use of capital/small letters are measured by
counting the numbers of errors. In order to get the total score of the essay, the excel sheets
have been prepared. In designing the analytical rubric for this type of short essay, the top-
down approach is applied. It has for steps, they are 1) choosing a framework for the intended
assessment, 2) determining the criteria of the assessment, 3) adapting an existing
rubric and designing the rubric for the specific learning purposes, and 4) use the
rubric. The last step requires further observation and evaluation to test the
effectiveness of the rubric that has been designed.
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