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DIRECTING
ACTORS
CREATING MEMORABLE PERFORMANCES
FOR FILM AND TELEVISION
JUDITH WESTON
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Directing Actors
Persistence of Vision
The Digital Videomaker’s Guide
Shaking the Money Tree
Film Directing: Shot by Shot
Film Directing: Cinematic Motion
Fade In: The Screenwriting Process
The Writer’s Journey
Producer to Producer
Film & Video Financing
Film & Video Marketing
Film & Video Budgets
The Independent Film & Videomaker'’s Guide
DIRECTING ACTORS:
CREATING MEMORABLE PERFORMANCES
FOR FILM AND TELEVISION
BY JUDITH WESTON
TABLE OF CONTENTS
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
INTRODUCTION
Directors in Jeopardy
Actors: The Mysterious “Other”
The Craft of Directing
The Actor-Director Relationship
What Do Actors Want?
What Is In This Book?
ACTORS’ CHOICES
Questions
Opposites
Judgment
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Need 98
Spine 99
Objective 102
Action Verb 103
Unconscious Objectives 103
Choosing Objectives 105
Images 107
Obstacle 114
Facts 119
Sense Of Belief 121
Adjustments 122
Subtext 124
Physical Life 126
What Do You Mean “Specific”? 130
VIII: CASTING
IX: REHEARSAL
Rehearsal Plan
Full Cast Read-Through
Scene Rehearsal
Opening Remarks
First Reading Of Scene
Through Lines
Layers
Working In Beats
Rehearsal Guidelines
Improv
Blocking: Physical Objects and Physical Activity
Resistances
Episodic Television
Summary
X: SHOOTING
EPILOGUE
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APPENDIX C: 302
SHORT LisT OF ACTION VERBS
SAMPLE SIMPLE OBJECTIVES
MORE ACTION VERBS
FILMOGRAPHY 308
BIBLIOGRAPHY 311
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ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
This book would not exist without some five hundred or so direc-
tors who have taken the Acting for Directors course and the Script
Analysis and Rehearsal Techniques workshops. It takes courage for a
director to study acting, to allow himself or herself to be on the other
side, to partake in the vulnerable condition of the actor. I am always
moved that students put themselves in my care and allow themselves
to go places and do things they may have never done before. Even
when I was completely unknown as a teacher, they were trusting and
eager to learn. They constantly pushed me to define everything and
to create tools that would be specifically useful for directors. They
have truly taught the teacher as least as much as I taught them. I love
and thank each one of them individually.
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But none of this was anything like a book until Michael Wiese
came along, and | thank him from the bottom of my heart for every-
thing — for being the genuine article, for trusting his intuition, for
believing in me, and especially for his patience and support when the
writing took a little longer than we thought it would. Ken Lee, of Michael's
office, was a constant source of assistance, enthusiasm, and tact.
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INTRODUCTION
DIRECTORS IN JEOPARDY
“T knew exactly what I wanted, but I couldn't verbalize it clearly." "I
thought I was describing it exactly as I wanted it, and the actor said, 'Yes, I
understand,’ and then he didn't do anything like what we'd talked about.
So I just kept repeating the direction and the performance got worse and
worse.” "The actor was a star and she wouldn't rehearse, wouldn't take
direction. She did it her way and that was that." "How do I establish cred-
ibility with the actors on the first day of rehearsal?” "Sometimes I can tell
that something is untruthful or not working, but then I don't know what to
do.” “How much should I tell them? How much should they tell me?"
"Sometimes under the pressure of being on the set, it's hard to see the per-
formance — I can't see what's happening in front of me." "The production
and financing problems took up so much of my energy that, once I got to the
set, | was exhausted, I had no energy for the moment." "On a television
series, the regulars already know their characters, they won't take direc-
tion." "How do I keep performance consistent, get them there and keep them
there?" "T think I talk too much. It's easy for me to direct someone right
out of the role, tell them too much." "I think I overdirect." "How do you
rehearse? When do you say what?" “I need to know how to give the actor
an on-the-spot solution, the one word that brings his performance to life."
"Where is the button you press to achieve results fast?” "What do you do
when you give a direction that worked in rehearsal and now that it's time
to shoot the scene, the performance doesn't work anymore?” "The actors
loved me and I felt very comfortable on the set, but when I got to the editing
room it was all crap." "I think I overrehearsed." "When we don't have
time, where should we put the main energy?” "I didn't want it to go that
way, but I had no chotce."
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Most directors know that they could benefit from better commu-
nication with actors. The horror stories of breakdowns in communi-
cation between actors and directors are legion. It's easy to see how
this can happen when inexperienced directors are paired with experi-
enced, high-profile actors. I heard one story of a major star with a
tough-guy image who, every time the director took him aside, would
look up and say, loud enough for the crew to hear, "You want me to
suck what?" Now maybe the veteran actor was trying to relax the
young director by teasing him out of some of his earnestness — or
maybe he was crudely letting the poor fellow know how stupid he
thought the director's input was.
You have chosen a profession where mistakes are not always bad.
For brain surgeons or airplane pilots, mistakes are nearly always a bad
thing. But for those of us lucky enough, foolish enough, to follow our
dreams into the entertainment industry, a mistake can be a blessing in
disguise; it can jolt our attention away from preconceived ideas and
into the present, it can open us to a new creative path. Sometimes a
mistake is our subconscious speaking, and we ought to listen to it. If
anything, an artist needs to get kind of excited by mistakes.
INTRODUCTION
Some students tell me that the ideas and techniques I put forward
seem at first radical and destabilizing. One young writer said she
found the things I was saying “counter-intuitive.” At first I was sur-
prised, but then I realized that many people mistake opinion for intu-
ition. Opinions are easy to have; they require no reflection.
Sometimes people think intuition is the first idea that comes to you,
that intuition requires no reflection. This is not the case. In order
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When you are not working well, you may confuse intuition with
assumptions, you may mistake prejudice for vision. So I invite you to
break habit; I invite you to question conventional wisdom, to get
beyond your prejudices and assumptions, to go below the surface, and
awaken your intuition at a new, deeper level. In other words, learn
the rules. Then forget them.
This takes work, probably more work than you realized was
involved in directing. But I'm going to take you through it, step by
step. Once you get on the inside, you will feel liberated. And if you
are among the happy few who already have a directing technique that
works, then you already know how important it is to keep learning
and growing; for you, the proposals and exercises of this book are
intended to challenge, retresh, and stretch your skills and imagination.
INTRODUCTION
Just one warning: I'm not going to teach you how to be “com-
mercial." Trying to be commercial is just an excuse for not doing the
hard work of being original. No one knows what's commercial
anyway, not until the weekend box office figures are printed in the
newspaper on Monday morning. In this business, people who claim
they can assure you commercial success are not to be trusted.
The very best actors make it look easy. Their technique is invis-__
ible, they seem to “become” the character, they seem tospeakand a |
move out of the character's impulses and needs, their feelings well up
strong and apparently unbidden. They don't look rehearsed, they
seem to be speaking their own words, they seem to be improvising.
To the general public it probably looks as though the actor must be
just like the character and must not have had to do any work to play
the role. To people knowledgeable about the demands of per-
forming, such a seamless portrayal is a touch of the divine, a miracle.
Acting and directing are two very different jobs. It is exactly because
I think the director and the actor each should be — must be — free to
do his own work that I believe directors should know more about
actors and acting. This is why even actors themselves don't automat-
ically know how to direct other actors. They are two separate skills.
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You are the one who gets to say, who has to say, "Yes, that's okay.
Print,” or "No, let's take it again.” It's a giant responsibility. It's hard
for a director who has never acted to understand its magnitude. You
are the protector; only you can say whether the work is good enough.
You must make sure the work is good and that the actor looks good,
and so you have to know what is good work and what isn't.
But if you are the viewer and they are the viewed, shouldn't you
be able to tell actors when their performance is not good enough?
And if you saw them floundering, if you saw them having trouble get-
ting where they need to go, and if you knew how to help them —
wouldn't that be great? You could help each other. For example,
blocking (i.e., staging the physical movements of the actors) is part of
the director's job but a lot of times the actors will help you with
blocking. They'll say, "I have an impulse to move over there on that
line,” and you'll say, "Wow, that solves all kinds of problems."
On a practical level this could mean that an actor agrees that your
direction is logical and apt, and wants to please you, yet cannot find
a way to execute it and still be truthful to her impulses and under-
standings. This is because we are not dealing with chemistry for-
mulas here; we are dealing with human beings.
At this point the actor and director can clash — or they can col-
laborate. I don't like to use the word "compromise" because that
suggests that both of you are settling for something less than what
you desire and believe in. It's more like a synthesis. Actor and director
are thesis and antithesis; each prepares, each brings to the table his
best understanding of the script and his own sovereign imagination;
they face each other and give each other everything. Then something new
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comes out of that, ideas for the characterization that are perhaps
better than either one of you thought of separately. The happiest
response an actor can make to one of your directorial suggestions is,
"That gives me an idea for something to work on."
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to say when the performance has life, and when what the actor is
doing tells the story. To a really good actor, the worst sin a director
can commit is to be satisfied with less than the very best the actor
has to offer.
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Of course actors also need you to know where to put the camera
and how to tell a story filmically. Where to put the camera is not
dealt with in this book at all; Iam going to assume that you already
have some knowledge of the technical side of filmmaking.
You don't have a choice about how much talent you are
born with — that's already been taken care of. You do have a
choice about whether or not to develop the talent you have.
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about life. It denies any life to the characters beyond the four edges
of the script’s pages.
Telling the actor what effect you want him to have on the audience
is a perfect example of directing by describing a resu/t. Instructions
of this ilk — such as “This scene should be funny,” or “I need you to
be more dangerous,” or “Can you give him an epic quality?” — make
an actor’s heart sink. The director wants him to do something dif-
ferent from what he is doing — what can it be? From this point the
actor-director relationship dissolves into a guessing game, because
the direction is so vague. The actor tries something — is this it?
Usually it never is, because the actor has begun to watch himself, to
worry about how he is doing, and what the performance looks like. It
is death to an actor's gifts to put his concentration on the effect he is
having on the audience.
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actors who try to play a mood can end up evoking exactly the oppo-
site of what the director was hoping for: efforts to “look” serious
often produce an unintentionally comical eftect; efforts to “be” light
and frothy can prove heavy-handed. This is because the attention is
wrongly placed; the actors’ eagerness to please you by coming up
with the desired effect has caused them to concentrate on the effort
itself; consequently the effort itse/fis the effect that finally reads.
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And actors, when responding to these directions, can fall into bad
traps. Asking for “more energy” can cause them simply to add
emphasis to the uninteresting choice they have already made. “Take
it down” may be interpreted as a request to flatten their affect or say
the line in a monotone, and dampen their expressive fires. How can
that be a good thing for an actor to do?
This is called giving the actor a line reading, that is, telling the
actor what inflection to give to a line. For the line “You always do
that,” there are at least four different line readings, because there are
four different words you can inflect: “You always do that,” “You
always do that,” “You always do that,” or “You always do that.” And
the different readings make the line mean different things.
The meaning of the line, not the inflection, or result, is what the
director should be communicating to the actor. It is the actor’s pre-
rogative to create the delivery that conveys the meaning that the
director wants. The worst problem with giving line readings is that
they may signify that the director doesn’t really know what the line
means, or what the intention of the character is, or what the scene
is about.
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Emotion and impulse are the very province of the actor. The
ability to be emotionally free and available to many subtleties of
feeling is central to her talent. But feelings are pesky critters, crop-
ping up inconveniently, and then disappearing just when you want
them. And the thing both terrible and wonderful about feelings is
that they change. You have seen it in real life; a person can be crying
one minute and laughing the next. In fact the more you let yourself
feel whatever you are actually feeling, the more available you are to a
new feeling. This goes double for actors.
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5) “When she tells you that she doesn’t have the money, you
get angry.”
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This is what I call a fully loaded emotional map, outlining all the
feelings and reactions you have decided the character is supposed to
have in the scene.
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At first glance, emotional maps look innocuous enough. You may
be asking yourself, what could be wrong with this? How else would
you describe a character’s behavior? Everybody talks about charac-
ters this way, don’t they?
In fact, people in real life talk about each other like this too. It’s
called gossip. Now gossip in real life can be harmless and fun, but it
is not productive, and it can be harmful. Gossiping about characters
— i.e., mapping their emotional terrain, or explaining their psy-
chology — is likewise, at best, an uncreative waste of time.
In the same way that we don’t get to decide how to feel, we don’t
get to decide how or what to be. Just think of New Year's resolutions:
sometimes people make a resolution that they are going to become
“a nicer person,” or “more decisive.” It never works, does it?
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The actor and director need to break down their ideas about the
character into a series of playable tasks. This takes insight and
knowledge of human behavior, and it takes time. It is the actor's job
to translate the director's result-oriented direction into playable tasks.
But if actors keep getting result direction thrown at them just before
the camera is about to roll, there may not be time to make it playable.
So it helps a lot if the director gives direction in playable terms.
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You could call this the fine wine direction — “This character is
frightened, but determined.” “She is in love with him, but doesn’t
want to hurt her sister.” “He is defensive yet vulnerable.” “She is
catatonic, yet curious.”
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Directors think that by giving a direction like this they are calling
attention to the complexity of the character, but in reality they are
asking for something completely confusing and unplayable.
People are surely complex, but they are not actually able to.do
two things at once. ‘They may say one thing while doing another. Or «
~they may rapidly alternate what they are doing from one thing to _
another. But that’s not the same thing as being “cautious yet
cheerful” at the same time.
An actor can’t play two things at once. The two things cancel
each other out. Or the actor ends up faking one or both of them.
Now, of course there isn’t only one way of creating complexity in a
character — after all, it’s complex. We'll investigate this issue more
fully in Chapters on Actor’s Choices and Script Analysis.
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YY 9) “He’s a punk.” Or, “She’s self-destructive.” Or, “He’s a
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nebbish.” Or, “She’s a castrator.” Or, “He’s stupid.”
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These are negative judgments on the character. Judgment is the
most dangerous consequence of deciding “what the character is like.”
who, like all of us, has both good and bad sides; they approach the /
character experientially, placing him in a situation, allowing him to
have needs and make choices — and not judging him.audience
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__gets to make the judgments, to decide who is weak, strong, ambitious,
lazy, etc.
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events are private and emotional. When the actor judges a character
and telegraphs to the audience, “I’m the good guy,” “I’m the loser,”
or “I’m the villain,” he is playing a caricature — who can care what
happens to him? When the director directs by telling the actors:
“You are the hero,” and “Y villain,” he is setting up a situa-
rem war .
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and freedom where the actors can engage and play off each other.
* * *
When you ask for a general result, the worst thing that can
happen is that you might get what you have asked for: a generic
brother-sister relationship, a clichéd villain, actors emoting, pos-
turing, telegraphing the dramatic moments and forcing the humor,
with no connection to the other actor or to the words or situation
of the character.
[f, on the other hand, you want to save time on the set, it is vitally _
important that you spend time ahead of shooting to prepare and to
know your script and characters inside and out, and to learn how to
give direction in playable terms. It’s not just a question of vocabulary,
it’s a different way to approach a created reality.
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But I can give you a quick way to spot general, result direction in
the way you talk to actors about their characters: train yourself to
notice when you are using adjectives and explanations; ~ ~~~ >
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ADJECTIVES
You can easily get off on the wrong foot with an actor by cri-
tiquing his performance using adjectiv es, for example by telling him,
“No, not like that. Play it sexy.” What if the actor thinks he already
was playing it sexy? If so, he will have one of two reactions. Either
he will start to doubt himself, thinking, “I’m not sexy enough for this
role. The director doesn’t think I’m sexy.” Or he will make a mental
note about you: “What's wrong with this guy? He doesn’t know sexy
when he sees it.”
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Verbs, facts, images, events, and physical tasks are more playable
than adjectives and explanations because they are choosable and
repeatable. They are more specific than adjectives and explanations.
They work because they are active (verbs), objective (facts), sensory
(images), dynamic (events), and kinetic (physical tasks).
then another take may be needed for some other reason, and the per-
formance vanishes. Everyone involved is mystified and depressed.
VERBS
Anyone who has taken a writing course has heard the teacher say
that writers should whenever possible select verbs over adjectives and
adverbs. Why shouldn’t the same be true for directors? Actions
speak louder than words. Verbs describe what someone ts doing, so
they are active rather than static; they describe experience rather than
a conclusion about experience.
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But the action verb “to accuse” does also have a physical compo-
nent, in that it is something you do in the other person’s presence.
What if, during a conversation with B, A raises the accusation that C
has stolen money from him? Although A is accusing C, since C is not
present, we still have work to do to figure out A’s action verb toward
B, which will tell us what is the emotional transaction of the scene.
Of course we know from life that sometimes when a person is mad at
someone who is not present, he takes out his anger on the person who
is present. So the action verb for A toward B might be “to accuse,’
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There are two lists in the Appendix, a Short List of Action Verbs
and a list of More Action Verbs. Let's say you find yourself inclined
to describe a character by saying he is “being defensive.” See if you
can translate that into a verb by consulting the Short List. Now you
might say that the right verb is not on that list; you might find your-
self inclined to say that the appropriate verb translation for “being
defensive” is to defend or to protect or to deflect. ‘These are verbs and
they do take an object, so they are candidates. They are a little bit
intellectualized, however, and not quite as muscular and immediate as
the verbs on the Short List.
I certainly don’t claim that the Short List (or even the longer list
of More Action Verbs) comprises all of human behavior, but I have
found it helpful to ask students, when they are learning to use more
verbs, to start with the Short List and at least for a while restrict
themselves to it. It’s like a musician sticking to scales when she is first
learning a new instrument.
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about verbs is that they focus the actors’ attentions on their scene
partner. This allows the actors to affect each other and thus to create
the emotional events of the scene.
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Verbs can be used as a quick fix, but they are also important to the
basic understanding of a character. Verbs belong to the constellation
of through-line, need, objective, intention and are a very useful way
to structure a characterization as well as a way to structure a scene. I
will be talking more about structure in later chapters. Here I want to
give you a short list of ways that verbs can be alternatives to common
result directions.
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cActors actually hear directors saying things like, “Yes, you should
be mean to him, but not that mean.” Can you hear how hard it would
be to interpret this direction? Verbs can help. You may notice,
though, that it will take more thought on your part to articulate pre-
cisely what it is that you want using verbs instead of adjectives. The
extra mental exertion is good for you! Directing is not supposed to
be easy.
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Actors sometimes resist this idea. You'll hear them say: “My
character would never manipulate — she’s too nice.” Or, “My char-
acter wouldn’t flirt — he’s uptight about his sexuality.”
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Actors and directors who get bogged down in “what the character
is like” miss entirely what a tangle of opposites humans really are.
Indeed, actors and directors who get bogged down in explanations
have a terrible time when they want to describe a complex char-
acter. They psychologize the character to death, piling convolution
upon convolution.
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FACTS
There are two kinds of facts that are useful to directors and
actors: facts that are in the script, that is, factual backstory and the
events of the script; and facts that are not in the script, that is, imag-
inative backstory choices.
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She wrote a letter to her mother every day of her honeymoon. That's
an example of a fact. Doesn’t that fact evoke her nature more vividly
than the psychological description that “she is very attached to her
mother”? Even a full explanation of the origins of this attachment
would just get long-winded and intellectual. The honeymoon letters,
unadorned, are more eloquent.
I was working with two acting students on a scene from the movie
“When Harry Met Sally”; Sally and her friend Marie are discussing
Marie’s married boyfriend. I asked the actress playing Sally what she
thought were the facts of the scene. She said, “Sally’s best friend is
dating a married man, and she disapproves.” (I have added italics to the
unnecessary embellishment.) Every woman I know, if her best girl-
friend was dating a married man, would have some reaction, without
needing to be instructed to have one. Adding the embellishment waters
down the direction. The situation itself is more vivid and evocative
than its embellishment. Directors often think they are sharpening
the focus by adding the explanation of the character’s state of mind,
but actually they are blurring it.
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Waterfront.” In the class discussion the next day, we were going over
the events of the movie in order to determine the spine of the char-
acter Edie (Eva Marie Saint). We were listing some facts of Edie’s
background, e.g., that she has been kept from the world of the docks
by her father, who used his savings to send her to Catholic schools.
But look at the evidence. The next scene after the fade-out has
Terry coming to talk to the priest. The priest mentions that Edie has
an appointment with him and is on her way. . Here is the fact we
should look at: the next day they are both coming to talk to the priest!
This is evidence that something happened on the roof that was trou-
bling. If we look back at the scene and decide that nothing troubling
happened in the scene, then something troubling must have hap-
pened after the scene ended. At this point we look at Edie, educated
by nuns, sheltered by a doting father, and realize that a girl with that
background might, the morning after her first sexual experience,
make an appointment to meet with her confessor.
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From there, you may ask questions: How many previous con-
versations? What was actually said? Under what conditions? Did
character B, who was told the information and yet is asking about it
again, not believe character A? Or not listen? Was she distracted by
some other secret concern? Facts and questions will begin to create
a set of given circumstances that generate behavior that implies a
point of view. Fresher, more vivid performances will result.
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\
minated. Let’s say that the boss only appears in this scene. You could
add texture to a sketchy characterization of the boss by asking the
question, “What if her own father had been fired from his job when
she was a child?”
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The kinds of images that speak to the actor are 1) the images of
the text, that is, the images created by the words of the script, and 2)
the images that the actor brings to the script, which become the
images of the script’s subworld.
‘To give you an example of images in the text, let’s take this line
(from Arthur Miller’s “Death of a Salesman”): “To suffer fifty weeks
of the year for the sake of a two-week vacation, when all you really
desire is to be outdoors, with your shirt off.” This line is full of
images: “outdoors” is an image, with sensations that include sound
and smell and tactile sensations as well as visual information; “shirt
off” is an image with many associations; “two-week vacation” is an
image with memories of many emotuonal colors for most people;
even the two verbs “desire” and “suffer” carry images. In later chap-
ters [Il talk more about how exploration of the images of the text can
deepen and expand vour understanding of the script.
Here are a few ways that directors can use images that spring
from the character’s subworld to open up and tap into the actor’s
emotional resources and help her connect her own imagination to
the imagined world of the script.
Images can call forth expressive behavior from an actor and make
his deep emotions available. For example, I was directing for a work-
shop a scene from “Orpheus Descending” by Tennessee Williams
(made into the movie “The Fugitive Kind”). At the beginning of the
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scene Lady, who thinks she is alone, says, “T wish I was dead.” Val,
who has overheard her, steps out of the shadows and says, “No you
don’t, lady.” After a few rehearsals | was not happy with what the
actor was doing with this line; it kept sounding like a line in a play,
rather than anything a person was actually saying to another person.
When I mentioned to him that I thought the moment was not yet ful-
filled, he began to speak the line with more emphasis, which only
made things worse; he was adding a fake urgency to a moment for
which he had not yet found an emotional reality. Finally I took him
aside and, on an impulse, looked him in the eye and asked, “Have you
ever seen a dead person?”
Let’s say you are directing a movie with a main character whose
backstory is that at the age of four she was left with an unpleasant rel-
ative for six months during her mother’s hospitalization for polio.
You might find yourself wanting to explain to the actor the character
in terms of the psychological effects of her abandonment — with-
drawn, suspicious, self-destructive — whatever. But instead of
spending hours psychologizing (intellectualizing) the character's deep
emotions, you could invoke an image, perhaps that of the door
closing on the child’s father as he leaves her there, or the last light of
his attempt at a smile.
Such images live with people (characters) the rest of their lives.
Summoning the images associated with important events much more
closely approximates the workings of these events on actual human
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A way to use an adjustment if you want the actor to play the char-
acter with more “cheer” might be to suggest that she take the adjust-
ment that everything the character opposite her is saying is really
good news.
EVENTS
Every scene has a central event. The central event of a scene may
be that one galaxy overthrows another galaxy’s way of life, or it may
be that one character makes another character blush. Creating the
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events of the script is the most important job of the director for
two reasons:
Telling the actors that the scene is about a fight between two
people who used to love each other can help them rally the personal
and imaginative resources they need to create the poignancy you are
looking for in the scene, whereas telling them you want the scene to
be poignant or giving them an emotional map will be subtly less
exciting and less generative of good acting. It takes imagination and
insight and thinking to change your perception of a scene from an
adjective or an emotional map to a sense of event. Luckily the
process itself is invigorating and stimulating.
Even when you know how to articulate the events, bringing them
to full and vivid life is not necessarily easy. A director needs to be on
the lookout for the fake confrontation, the clichéd apology, the
“movie” love scene. We don’t want to indicate the event; we want to
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make it happen in the here and now and let the audience in on it. [’ll
be talking more in the next chapter about ways to ask for, recognize,
and encourage the honest, moment-by-moment acting that creates a
genuine and dynamic sense of event.
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attention on, the words were freed from the actor’s preconceived
notion, and the scene played simply and naturally.
At this point I ought to talk about verbs again. Verbs are an emo-
tional and imaginative extension of physical tasks. The more physical
the verb is the better. If you want to punish someone, getting him to
feel punished is a task, like making a sandwich or potting a plant, only
it is a psychological task, not a physical one. A measure of how skilled
an actor is is how effectively he can make that psychological leap so
that an imaginative choice has a sense of task. Even if he is getting
result direction, he automatically translates the result into a playable
task; for example, if told to be angrier, he starts punishing the other
character; if told to be sexier, he seduces the other actor. He works
moment by moment, putting his concentration on the other actor.
Afterward he feels tired, just like after a demanding physical task.
Directors are not the only ones who give actors result direction.
Actors do it to themselves! Actors routinely come into casting ses-
sions and immediately ask, “What's this character like?” In rehearsal
or on the set you might give a solid, specific direction that with care
and feeling creates the images and factual circumstances of the char-
acter’s situation, only to have the actor respond, “You mean you want
it more sarcastic?” or “You want me to pump it up?” He has fallen
into “playing the result.”
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The very best way to direct is not by giving direction at all, but
by asking questions. All the devices I have been discussing — verbs,
facts, images, events, physical tasks — function best in the form of
questions to the actor: “Do you think these characters have ever™
pulled off a robbery before?” “Do you think he wants to pick a fight
or is he hoping she will stay calm?” “What if the character is lying
when she says this line?” “What if she just received a crank phone
call?” “What does the image ‘cherry orchard’ conjure up for you?” ,
“What's important about this scene?” “Do you have any impulse to
turn away from her when she says that?”
In order to get the use of the full creative potential of your actors
you must be prepared for some of the answers to these questions not
to be the ones you were expecting. You have to give up your char-
acter-in-the-sky and the version of the film you have running on the
inside of your forehead. You can learn how to give direction in such
a way that the actor ends up feeling that his performance is his own,
and yet feels firmly supported by a smart, well-prepared director with
an authentic authority, who can offer the crucial “quick fix” because
she has done the groundwork.
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"Of course the film director should know acting, its bistory
and its techniques. The more he knows about acting, the more at
ease he will be with actors. At one period of his growth, he should
force himself on stage or before the camera so he knows this
experientially, too.
"Some directors, and very famous ones, still fear actors instead
of embracing them as comrades in a task. The director must know
how to stimulate, even inspire the actor. Needless to say he must also
know how to make an actor seem not to act, how to put him or ber
at their ease, bring them to that state of relaxation where their cre-
ative faculties are released...
"All in all he must know enough in all these areas so his actors
trust him completely." — Elia Kazan
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can connect and collaborate more deeply with actors to make their
movies better and their own job more creatively rewarding.
“Almost every actor goes into almost every picture very fright-
ened. He is positive he really can’t do it. The bigger the star, the
more frightened he is.” — Paul Mazursky
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RISK
When actors can’t trust the director for honest and competent
feedback, they may become cautious. Cautious acting is not very
good acting because in real life people incautiously make a lot of mis-
takes. In order to bring a character to life, there needs to be risk, mis-
take, serendipity, idiosyncrasy, surprise, danger. These things give a
performance the texture of real life — and “edge.” When the acting
has risk, it makes drama more moving, comedy more surprising,
adventure more thrilling, mystery more suspenseful.
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choice. They don’t “put out.” Because here’s one of life’s little
unfairnesses: If an actor takes a big risk and it’ worksit,is much better
acting than cautious acting. But if an actor takesa big risk and it
doesn’t work, it looks much worse than cautious acting.
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with Poitier, convinced her to take the bigger risk of facing and
finding truthfully the behavior of a person without self-awareness,
without guilt — with the hollow moral center of a bigot. She won
her second Oscar for that role.
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Actors often have their own highly private routines to get them-
selves below the social mask and ready to perform, ready to put out,
ready to disturb molecules. Sally Field says that as soon as she knows
she is going to be in a movie — no matter whether it is a big emo-
tional role or a lightweight comedy — she begins a process that she
calls “rawing myself up.” Even if the subject matter- the of
movie is
not painf ul she goes through her emotio
or difficult, and nal
imagina-
tive storage banks to get herself connected to whatever for her.is basic
about life, to separate herself from mundane concerns, such as fax
machines, phone messages, etc. It is a process of disobligating her-
self to the social realm so she can enter the creative realm. It’s a way
of turning off the “automatic pilot” that gets one through the routine
of daily life, so that she can be “in the moment.”
This is the ground on which the director must meet the actor if
he wants to have an actor-director relationship based on trust and
collaboration. After the best takes, the ones in which the actor is the
most unguarded, the actor may feel destabilized and raw. This is a
moment of truth for the director, a time when an insensitive response
can kill your chances for trust and collaboration — or, on the other
hand, when, if you see and acknowledge the actor’s psychic naked-
ness, you can forge an unshakable connection. There is no one thing
I can tell you that is the right thing to say at these times. These are
the times when the director, too, takes a risk.
HONESTY
“You put your energy, your thought, your imagination, your
spirit into something. It’s all rooted in who you are. Your skin
is what you manipulate to create the illusion of being someone
else. And that costs you every time.” — Ralph Fiennes
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The actor must start with himself, he must hear with his own ears,
see with his own eyes, touch with his own skin, feel with his own feel-
ings. Then from his studyof the script, impulses.and understandings
start to bubble up from inside him. ._He makes the character_his own.
During a superior performance the actor often feels that he inhabits
the character’s skin, i.e., that he has “become” the character. The audi-
ence may feel that too. What this really means is that he is inhabiting
his owz skin, is “in the moment” but has brought choices and under-
standings to the role that create a sense of belief in the script.
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Some lines are more difficult than others to find honestly. There’
is a monologue I use in my classes from “The Last Picture Show” in
which Lois describes her now-deceased lover, Sam, as the only man
who really saw who she was. Then she says, “I've looked, too. You
wouldn’t believe how I've looked.” Students never have any trouble
delivering that line believably. It contains a sentiment that most
women can find honestly with ease.
On the other hand, actors can easily trip over the line, “I love
you.” I was once directing a young actor in a play in which he had to
say “[ love you” to another character. This particular actor always
worked with scrupulous honesty (he was incapable of lying in the reg-
ular world as well, which caused him to seem somewhat socially
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Or not! You see, there’s a risk that the preparation won’t work
and the actor will be out there alone, drawing a blank, just saying
words, with no inner life, with nothing happening. This is where
the fearlessness comes in! Good actors, even after the harrowing
experience of a mid-performance loss of concentration, continue
to work properly, reworking their preparation and then jumping
into the abyss of moment-by-moment work. They continue to
trust the process.
When actors lose trust in the process, they begin to push, force,
reach for, or indicate what the character is thinking and feeling.
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They look like actors, and the audience becomes distanced from
them and from the stories they are enacting.
The director here has done three things: 1) he has let the actor
know that he sees him, the real him, his core being and his shining
talent; 2) he has let the actor know he knows the difference between
work which connects with that core and work which does not connect
with that core; 3) he has let the actor know that his commitment is
to that core and to his own core. This type of actor-director com-
munication (as long, of course, as it is heartfelt and tue and not just
Hollywood “love you, sweetie” bullshit) can get an actor “connected
up” to his deepest resources and free him to trust the moment and
not to “act with a capital A.” It gives him a deep confidence.
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“The best actors are children and dogs because they’re not acting
at all,” — Helen Mirren ;a
Theactor
who is “in the moment” i:-thinking realthoughts.and
feeling real feelings right in frontof us. This is an extremely radical idea.
Because after all, the actor is playing a character, right? So doesn’t
that mean that she should be thinking the character's thoughts and
feeling the character’s feelings?
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This does not negate the actor's responsibility to the script. But
I want to open the possibility of connecting to the script not as an
obligation but as an opportunity to be enriched and enlivened by the
facts, images, and events of the script. Then the circumstances and
images of the script can interweave with and be informed by the free
subconscious inventions of the actor. The specifics of the script are
allowed rather than enforced. This exactly means that actors may be
following your direction, and the requirements of the script, and yet
their line readings may still be coming out differently from the way
you heard them in your head.
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IDIOSYNCRASY
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Now I do not feel that actors or anyone else on a set or in any line
of work should be indulged if their behavior is abusive. On a set it is
up to the director to set the tone, to draw the line as to what behavior
will be permitted for the sake of creative freedom and what will be
discouraged or diverted so that everyone can be relaxed and undis-
tracted in the performance of their jobs.‘ In interviews most of the
directors that I respect say that it is important to them to maintain a
set free of tension.
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can be a good thing. When people are very tired, they often loosen
emotional armor and are and in the moment.
ableto be more.relaxed
This idea is not the same as allowing the actor to wait around or
torment himself until he is “in character,” that is, until he feels the
feeling he has decided is “right” for the character. And I am not sug-
gesting that scripts should be improvised on camera or that blocking
and camera moves should not be set and the actors allowed to roam.
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FREEDOM
“On the set, [Woody Allen] leaves actors alone, he’s always about
loosening it up, and I tried to do the same. I don’t like too much
direction myself, it stops me from thinking or feeling... If somebody
talks to me too much I clam up.” — Diane Keaton
In order to work well actors need a tremendous amount of
freedom. In order to trust their impulses they need support. “Phey
need to be relaxed, free of tension, free of obligation.
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Now of course, actors need to stay within the camera frame and
make very exact moves so the camera can follow and photograph
them. ‘The freedom I am talking about is an interior freedom, which
is all the more important precisely because the actor has such strict
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When I was taking classes from Gerald Hiken, and the work was
bad, he would say, “Do it wrong! Whatever you do, for God’s sake,
stop doing it ‘right’! It’s better to do it wrong than to do it right!”
He would then ask the student, “Okay, what's the right way to play
your role?” And she would say (for instance), “Lady Macbeth is very
angry and contemptuous of her husband because he’s getting cold
feet about the murder they’ve planned.” “All right,” Gerry would
say, “let's run the scene again. This time, do it loving and playful.”
And damned if it wouldn’t come out better! Not just a little bit
better, but a thousand percent better. It would have the revelation,
the magic,of a moment-by-moment performance just, because..the
actor, released from obligation to do it right, had nothing to lose.
Disobligation is that powerful; it can make even a sweet Lady
Macbeth believable.
Gerry would constantly egg us on, “Go ahead! Think your most
private, embarrassing thoughts right in front of them!” He meant the
audience. There is a kind of arrogance to the uncensored creativity
of an artist. For an actor, who must say the lines as written, and move
as directed, this arrogance and freedom must apply :vteriorly to his
unspoken thoughts and_feelings. He must give himself what
Stanislavsky called Jsolitude in public} — an unconcern for what
anybody thinks of him. The magnificent paradox is that if an actor
is free and uncensored, uninterested in whether or not the audience
“gets it,” we, the audience, will believe anything he tells us, anything
he does! Freedom gives his voice and person authenticity.
Not only that, but sometimes more freedom is the right choice for
a character. If it appears that a character is self-centered, instead of
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trying to play that judgment, the actor asks himself, What is the
behavior of a self-centered person? Sometimes, since they are uncon-
cerned with the feelings and needs of others, their inner life is very
free and uncensored. nN
[ have seen it over and over again as an acting teacher — that the
solution to most blockages for actors is, more freedom. In order to
inhabit his own body while making choices, i oFdéF to come up with
ideas, in order to access his truest truths, deepest feelings, and most
inventive imagination, an actor needs freedom.
CONCENTRATION
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work is properly done, the audience won't be able to tell which the
actor is concentrating on, only that he is concentrating on something.
Many people have the idea that you can’t concentrate_unless you
are relaxed, but it’s really the other way around: having a simple task
to
concentrate on is relaxing. A good 'actor thinks 6fher craft not as
something she has to do, but as something she gets to do. Finding a
compelling, singular point of concentration or attention unlocks the
actor’s imagination and opens for her the created reality. It’s like
stepping through the looking glass. Craft — or technique — is the
way the actor marshals her concentration, and finds the thing to
concentrate on. Craft, of course, does not replace good instincts.
Craft does, however, replace superstition and mysticism.
When actors do not have a reliable craft they may put their con-
centration on the wrong thing. hey may concentrate on producing
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thing that is just not going to happen. If the actor tries to “re-perform”
she will only be straining, controlling — aiming. As a young acting
student, I once heard a radio baseball announcer observe to his
partner, “They’re going to have to take that pitcher out. He’s starting
to aim the ball.” The strangeness of this remark caused it to stick in
my mind. I didn’t know much about baseball, and I kept asking
myself, “What’s wrong with aiming? How can he throw the ball over
the plate if he doesn’t aim?” I sensed somehow that the answer was
important so I pondered it until I realized that it was like acting —
the pitcher works on his mechanics (for the actor, this means script
analysis and rehearsal of playable choices) ahead of time and he cre-
ates a connection to the strike zone (the actor’s “sense of belief in the
created reality”). And then he lets go. Trying to do it “right,” trying
to control the result, to re-perform a good pitch or a good take, auto-
matically makes the performance self-conscious, takes the performer
out of the moment, and causes the pitcher or actor to “lose his stuff.”
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feel the cold. Sometimes actors start to think that the goal of their
preparation 1s to get to that altered state. But you can’t aim for the
zone. Concentration cannot be commanded, only invited.
Now what I said here about not aiming for an altered state may
seem contradictory to what I said earlier about actors needing to go
below the social mask in order to work well. What can I say?
Piercing the social mask frees the actor and is a good thing; aiming
for an altered state creates strain and is a bad thing. Does it sound
like it would be easy to mistake one for the other? Well, it is. This
is (one reason) why the really good actors, who know the difference,
get paid so much.
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When two actors are in the zone together — when they are
“cooking” — they often feel a kind of rhythm to it. In the next
rehearsal or performance or take they may try to play that rhythm.
But a rhythm is not a playable tool for an actor so the relationship will
lose the life it had when they first “discovered” the rhythm. Let me
take just one minute to explain why a rhythm is not playable. It’s
because the actor loses track of what the character is talking about
and why — i.e., his subtext and his situation. This is why many
people find performances of Shakespeare incomprehensible, because
the actors are playing the poetry instead of letting the lines mean some-
thing and playing the situation. When actors play the poetry or play
the rhythm, the audience can’t even make sense of the words.
These tactics are designed to keep the actors from falling into line
readings — preconceived ways of delivering the lines. The extreme
opposite of working in the moment is to decide ahead of time how
the line is going to be spoken, to orchestrate a performance by
deciding on and then delivering a set of line readings. This makes a
performance stagy, pat. It puts a little frame around each line, sort of
like a person who always seems to be speaking in quotation marks.
Getting stuck in a preconceived line reading is the worst thing that can
happen to an actor.
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Taking the lines off the page includes taking them off their punc-
tuation. In real life we do not pause necessarily at periods and
commas.. We pause when we need to take a breath, or to think of
what to say next. These things don’t necessarily — and in fact don’t
usually — occur at periods and commas. It is necessary to have punc-
tuation in a script because punctuation makes it easier to read. But in
order to bring lines off the page and into life the actor must wrest
from them their punctuation.
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means is that he put the meaning of the character's images and situation
ahead of the author’s punctuation. If you need further proof that aban-
doning punctuation sounds more natural, eavesdrop on ordinary people
in conversation. a
Overacting can easily follow from getting stuck playing set line read-
ings or punctuation. Because once the line reading is set, if the actor
attempts to give the line more spark he only succeeds in adding emphasis.
Sort of like the stereotypical American who, when attempting to commu-
nicate with someone who doesn’t understand English, merely repeats
himself in a louder voice.
The worst thing about line readings is that they are so often accompa-
nied by a superficial understanding of the line. Unless an actor commits to
the swbworld of the character, he will have nothing he can do with the line
except try to convince us that it is true, and so he falls into protesting or
urging the line on us. Some lines fall especially easily into this trap. In older
movies of the thirties and forties, an example might be, “I believe that truth
and justice will prevail.” It’s easy to see that in a modern movie such a line
would sound foolish or phony unless it was spoken with heavy subtext. But
current movies have their own clichés; my own least favorite is, “You just
don’t get it, do you?” And writers seem never to tire of the line, “You'll
never get away with this!” Any of these lines delivered in order to make us
believe that the information in it is true — in other words, delivered without
subtext — will sound forced and untrue.
Sometimes actors get confused and think they are being honest when
they are really urging the line on us, trying to convince us that it is true.
But in real life, when people are trying to convince you of the truth of
their words, we recognize that they are “protesting too much” — and
probably lying.
Not all actors who choose or fall into line readings pick the most
obvious, pedestrian choice. An actor of greater imagination might make
a more off-beat choice, and an actor with a wide range might be able to
be convincing no matter what the reading. But an actor who works
moment by moment” won't lock himself into a line reading at all.
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Probably the most powerful and also the most readily available
tool an actor has for staying in the moment is the other actor in the
scene. Listening to the other person(s) in the scene gives an actor a
simple task and a focus for his attention. Listening is the best tech-
nique an actor has for anchoring himself in the moment. It also
keeps his choices from becoming mechanical or forced. Listening
relaxes actors. It absolutely prevents overacting. It's what makes a
performance look "natural." Listening allows the actors to affect
each other and thus to create moments — tiny electric connections
that make the emotional events of a scene.
If you are directing drama, and you want the audience to engage
with the characters and their predicaments and adventures, it is
essential that the actors listen. Without listening a dramatic scene is
just "my turn to talk, your turn to talk”; it becomes a scene about two
actors’ performances instead of a scene about a relationship and an
event in that relationship.
If you have a funny script to direct and you don’t want it ruined,
it is essential that the actors listen. When the actors listen to each
other and play the situations, the audience can hear the lines, identify
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with the characters and suspend their disbelief in even the most out-
rageous situations. When actors in a comedy are not listening, when
they start to play the punchlines or the schtick instead of playing the
situations, the comedy becomes forced and a terrible strain to watch.
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The words that characters speak to each other are not the scene.
The scene is the underlying event to which the words are clues. We
only have an event — that is, a scene — if something happens to the
characters. When the actors are /istening to each other, something
can happen because they can affect each other. Now it stands to
reason that it is the director's job to make sure that there is a scene
and not just words being spoken. Hence a good director will make
sure that the actors are listening to each other.
"I think that if you have a talent for acting, it is the talent for
listening." — Morgan Freeman
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"All you have to do is look at Anthony Hopkins' eyes and you get
so much, your job is cut in half, there's so much in his eyes. He was
lovely, generous, moving." — Joan Allen
"(Candace Bergen] has the most beautiful eyes. And not being a
trained actor, I'll go right into her eyes when I'm lost. I look at them,
and I say the words. It's a wonderful thing." — Garry Marshall
_ Sometimes actors are working so hard on their inner life that they
forget about the other actor. Sometimes they don't like what the
other actor is doing and think that if they listen to him it will bring
their performance down. Some successful, highly regarded actors
think they have to screen out the other actor in order to maintain the
luster of their individual performance.
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But when the other actors are also listening, are also giving, and
are in addition connected up to their simple, honest understanding
of the circumstances of the script — then really superior work can
take place. And without that, without a// the actors giving to each
other, an actor who listens and who meets the demands of the role
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may stand out and still look good, but really superior work cannot
take place.
When John Travolta says that a director "won't see it on the set.
You'll see it in the editing room," it's a bit intimidating, isn't it?
Makes you feel left out. Dennis Hopper, while directing Robert
Duvall in "Colors," was terrified because it didn't look like Duvall
was doing anything! It looked boring! Fortunately he was more
terrified of looking foolish by telling a superior actor like Duvall to
do "more," so he didn't say anything — because in the rushes, it was
all there.
Now that you know about listening, you have the secret! You can
see it on the set, if you know what to look for. The main reason why
directors don't see "it" on the set is that they don't understand about
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In most movies where the acting is bad, the thing that is wrong is
the actors were not listening to each other. In student films and first
features this is the most glaring defect. Problems of pace and timing,
lapses in energy, false notes, lack of "build" to a scene, actors who are
flat, stiff, cold, cardboard-y, "walking through it,” "phoning it in,"
actors who seem to be "in different movies" — all these are examples
of problems that usually are listening problems. Likewise when
actors are overacting. When directors tell "do less" what
they probably should be telling them is to listen more.
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Directors often want to know how to work with actors who have
been trained in different ways. The answer is simple: get them to
talk and listen to each other, get.them to put their concentration on
each other, keep each one from acting "all by himself” and screening
the other one out. '
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Here's another way to tell whether the actors are listening: When
actors listen, their performances on each take are going to be slightly dif=
ferent. This idea is frightening to directors. It takes tremendous
courage and skill to trust this process. Each take the actor does of a
scene has to be slightly different if the actor is listening. And there's
more: If the actors are listening, the readings of the lines are likely
to come out differently from the way you.heard.them in your head.
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"It took me years to understand fully why [my teacher] was right,
and...never to plan how I would say a line, only to. thinkof the situ-
ation, and listen to_the other actors...What is hard, and really bas to
be worked at, is being able to go with whatever comes up from other
actors or the director at each moment of a performance and not to try
to force a repetition of something that went well the day before....The
real work of acting is letting go." — Vanessa Redgrave
Some actors are “naturals,” that is, they are good listeners
without having to think about it. Most actors are aware of listening
as a technique and make a habit of reminding themselves to listen. It
can help a lot if the director, before rehearsal and before each shot,
mentions it in some nonthreatening way, by saying something like,
"No need to push, let's take it easy, just connect with each other.”
Then while you are watching the actors work, you need to mon-
itor whether they are listening. When actors are not listening, you
as the director need to talk to them about it. You may not want to
use the term itself because, as | mentioned above, some actors under-
stand the term "listening" incorrectly. If told that they have not been
listening, they might fall into exaggerated or fake listening. There
are two kinds of fake listening. One is a studied casual attitude; it's
not really listening, it's an attitude of listening. The other is an over-
wrought pop-eyed intense thing; what's,wrong with this is its strain.
There is an ease to real listening; the actors who understand its
magic are truly liberated by the simple act of putting more concen-
tration on the person they are talking to than on themselves.
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Here are some examples of how to ask the actors to listen more:
"Give the lines to each other.” “Keep it simple." "Stay with each other.”
"It's okay to relax. Let yourselves connect.” "Communicate." "Just talk
and listen.” "Let yourself hear what she's saying.” "I like it when you
play off each other.” "You can pay attention to each other.” "Watch
her eyes." "Play off her energy.” "It's okay to engage, be affected by
her. You can relax. Don't say the lines until you feel like saying
them." This is language of permission rather than enforcement.
If you are more deeply into rehearsal or shooting and the actors
are losing their connection, you might try: “I think this is the kind of
script that only works if we have ensemble playing.” "It's okay to put
your concentration on each other.” "You two have every thing you
need. You can give it to each other now.” “The listening 1 is really all
[care about. I know you can get the rest of it.” "Don't worry about
what you’ re feeling; concern yourself with what your partner is
feeling.” "You don't need to screen her out. You can let what she's
doing feed you." "I believe you but you're keeping it all inside, it's
very internal. Let it out, give it to the other actor. ” “[ think you're
getting worried about your performance. It's all there. You can trust
it.” “Keep your attention on her, check out her response."
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It can be hard for an actor who listens and gives to work opposite
an actor who is not listening. It's depressing, because the listening
actor knows her chances for a really great performance are going
down the drain. Sometimes she tries to "save" her performance by
pulling back, thinking that relating to the other actor's wooden per-
formance will bring hers down. A director needs to deal with these
situations delicately. Actually she will save her performance by con-
tinuing to give and to listen. And of course the scene itself (the
director's responsibility) will get even worse if she stops listening too.
In a deteriorating situation like this, you might take the more expe-
rienced or better actor aside and tell her frankly your concerns, enlist
her help so she doesn't feel left out to dry by the other actor's
"nobody home"-ness. You need to assure her that if she continues to
work full out and to stay engaged that you will make sure that the
scene works.
If you are desperate you might even try an outright trick, such as:
"You're doing great, but I'm worried about your partner. I need you
to help me here. Try to help her stay loose.” Anything to encourage
the actor to relax and stop acting up a storm and instead put his con-
centration on his partner should be done.
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When actors are struggling, I always look for the way to con-
centrate on what is going right instead of what is going wrong, to
see the glass half full instead of half empty, to offer guidance and
encouragement instead of criticism and commands. I get laughed
at for the circumlocutions of my "relentlessly positive” adjustments,
but they work.
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ACTORS’ CHOICES
"Most actors' problems, professional or amateur, deal with
tension and there are a lot of devices and ways of eliminating
it. In a very professional actor the tension is because they
haven't made a choice that has taken enough of their mental
interest. In other words, they haven't made a vital enough
choice; it's not up to a level that will engage their imagination
and get them into pretending unself-consciously."
—Jack Nicholson
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The choices an actor makes activate his inner life. The trick of
an actor's preparation is to find choices that 1) connec
tathe deepest
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and freshest meaning of the script, and 2) turn him on, capture his
Imagination, so that 3) he can connect to them with emotional hon-
esty and get to the places he needs to go. The actor looks for choices
that are objective, playable, and that engage his own subconscious so
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QUESTIONS
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Often the most helpful response you can make to an actor's ques-
tion is to turn it back, to say, "What do you think?" Often actors
know the answer already, but are insecure. Or, sometimes they know
the answer but don't know they know it. Let's say the actor asks,
"Why doesn't my character tell his wife about the letter?" Perhaps
the director says, "What do you think?” and the actor replies, “I don't
know, I haven't a clue,” or even, "It doesn't make sense to me.” The
thing to do next is to look at some possible reasons why a person
might behave that way. Why would a man not tell his wife about a
letter? Maybe he forgot. Maybe the letter contains a guilty secret he
doesn't want his wite to know about. Maybe his wife is ill and he
doesn't want to burden her. Maybe he had something else on his
mind that was so pressing that the letter seemed unimportant by
comparison. It's very helpful to look at as many possibilities as your
imagination offers up.
Now what if the actor asks you a question about the letter, and
you reply, "What do you think?” then the actor responds, "I think it's
a guilty secret” — and you think that answer is wrong! Maybe in
doing your script analysis you have considered the possibility of a
guilty secret but decided that adding a guilty secret to the subtext
would make the movie too melodramatic, and that the lighter choice
of “he forgot" will actually add more to the mystery and suspense.
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Well, at this point, you the director have some options. Your
least attractive course would be to contradict him. Saying things like,
"No, I think that's wrong, here is the right answer,” or even, "Here
is what I want" may work if you have a very close relationship with
the actor, but usually they make the actor feel dampened and/or
argumentative. It can be more helpful to say, "Yes, that's possible.
What else might it be?" Or, "Yes, that's possible. Or maybe he
forgot! That happens to me all the time; I forget the real reason why
[ do things, and get into all sorts of trouble." Depending on your
relationship with the actor and your own personal charisma, some-
times just saying, “Well, that's possible” in a thoughtful way might
induce the actor to wonder if there isn't a more provocative choice
and to keep exploring and rethinking.
OPPOSITES
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When a character says one thing and means another, that makes
him complex. Best of all, the duality makes him more real. People
are not especially logical. They often mean quite the opposite of
what they say. We see it in real life: a person who says, "I'm very
open to your proposal,” with arms and legs crossed, looking at you
from the side of his eyes. His body language is saying that he is the
opposite of open.
An actor who gets stuck in the logical, “on the nose” choice will
never look like a real person. The off-kilter, illogical choice is usu-
ally the truest one. People don't know who they are or what they
want, and they don't do the right thing to get it. One actor who uses
opposites constantly and very effectively is Gene Hackman. He often
says a line exactly the reverse of the way it might look on the page:
for instance, "I'm going to kill you," said with a smile (i.e., with the
action verb "to charm").
JUDGMENT
"It's easy to sit back and judge someone, but I am not in a posi-
tion to judge Nixon. As an actor, I can't judge because meral judg-
ment gets in the way of the characterization. If you start doing that,
you end up playing the character like a zombie or a vaudeville vil-
lain." — Anthony Hopkins
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But there are tiny judgments that creep into an actor's thinking
almost unnoticed: a condescension to the character, an evaluation
that the character is just a little less self-aware, or more naive, or
more weird than the actor herself. Now these evaluations may even
be true, but they are not playable. They cause the actor to stand
outside the character and describe and explain her to the audience,
to comment on her — to editorialize and to play at her — rather
than to live her life moment by moment and allow the audience to
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Lili Taylor in the movie “Rudy” had the small role of the high
school sweetheart who wanted Rudy to settle down instead of fol-
lowing his dream. With the words she was given to say she could
easily have fallen into a stereotype of a clingy, manipulative suburban
matron-to-be, and become "the person who doesn't want Rudy to
follow his dreams" instead of a real person with dreams of her own.
Taylor found the character's grit and humor instead of makinga
judgment and managed to make a not very deeply. written character
human and watchable.
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Really good actors do not ever judge their characters. The imag-
ined world is too fascinating to them, and the opportunity to leap
into it too precious. Glenn Close says that she “falls in love" with
every character she plays. This doesn't mean that she must condone
the character's behavior or abandon her own values or personal
ethics. But it does mean she creates the character's behavior using
her own impulses.
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the audience believe that the events depicted in a movie are actually
happening to the actors on the screen.
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SPINE / OBFECTIVE / INTENTION / VERB
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want, the red thread, the thing that drives him, what he is fighting
for, what is important to him.
Each character has ove overall spine throughout the whole movie.
In each scene, although the action verb may change frequently, each
character has one objective. In life our needs don't turn on and off
haphazardly. We don't necessarily stop needing something even when
we do get it. And we certainly don't stop needing something just
because we realize we can't have it.
SPINE
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There are several ways an actor uses spine as a tool. One is while
reading a script and deciding whether to take the role. A good actor
when reading a script looks (among other things) for a playable spine
— a hanger or hook from which all the character's actions depend.
When he finds a believable spine he knows that a real character has
been written, not a patched-up plot manipulation.
Once it is found, the actor uses that spine to design the role. This
is the way an actor can play a major, complex role when it is shot out
of sequence. Every decision, every choice made about the character
relates to the spine, including the objectives of each individual scene.
But the relationship may be indirect. For instance in “Last Tango in
Paris,” even though the Brando character in each scene with Maria
Schneider has the objective to push her away, or to hurt or humiliate
her, it seems to me that his spine (super—objective) is to find love.
The pushing away is a series of tests to see if he can trust her. Her
scene-by-scene objectives, on the other hand, are nearly all to get
affection from him, to get closer. And yet I think her super-objective
is not love, but to grow up, to become an adult. She must draw him
closer in order to overthrow him, the father figure. The moment
when he gives up testing and surrenders to her (at the tango parlor)
is the same moment that she gathers strength to reject him (these are
their moments of transformation).
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Must the actor and director agree on the spine of the character?
Yes and no. The choice of a spine must be supported by the script,
but it is a secret choice. Sydney Pollack compares the spine of the
movie to the armature of a sculpture; it keeps the thing together, but
no one sees it. If what an actor is doing works, what does it matter if
the spine she has chosen is different from your idea? But if you are
not happy with a performance, bringing up the subject (via a ques-
tion, such as "What are you thinking of as the spine of this char-
acter?") can be a useful way to begin a discussion about shaping or
changing a performance.
On the other hand, some directors prefer to make all the deci-
sions about spine. Independent British filmmaker Ken Loach, in an
L.A. Times interview, said he doesn't give actors a full script ahead of
time, and instead feeds them a couple of pages at a time, because he
wants them to give a simple, unrehearsed response to each circum-
stance of the script as it arises. I should think that the success of this
approach must depend on the director casting people who have the
same life-spine as the characters.
OBJECTIVE
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jective. Actors who feel deeply but fail to connect their feelings to
intention can become general or self-indulgent. The simple inten-
tion — an inclination toward having some effect on the other person
— leads to engagement. Although simple listening has already
engaged the actors, endowing the characters with a need to interact
raises the stakes of the relationship. It also makes it possible for the
actors to listen and play off each other even if the characters are not
listening to each other. Objectives make possible conflict and a sense
of event in the relationship, because the actors are doing something to
each other rather than doing something to the lines.
ACTION VERBS
If I want you to leave the room I might ivite you to leave the
room. If that doesn't work, I might demand that you leave the room.
If that doesn't work I might beg. If that doesn't work I might whine,
tease, punish, etc. The intention, or verb, might change often, even in
the middle of the line, or it might be the same for the whole scene.
The verb changes because of the exchange between the two charac-
ters. Complex characters may change their verb often or make wide
swings from, say, soothing to punishing in one speech.
You will notice that the verbs on the Short List of Action Verbs
all carry an intent to have an emotional effect on the other person;
thus they are sometimes called "emotional intentions.” Verbs stimu-
late emotion. Honestly committing to any one of the verbs on the
Short List will put the actor aft risk (in a theatrical sense).
UNCONSCIOUS OBJECTIVES
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Actors can fall into the unconscious objective "to say my lines
effectively." Or “to make the director/producer think I'm a good
actor," or "to remember my lines.” Any of these objectives take the
actor's attention off the work and hurt the performance. Sometimes
an actor intellectualizes his objective and winds up showing us that he
has such an objective instead of allowing it organically to impel | his
words “and movements. In. other words, -he_has_the_ unconscious
objective
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What if his objective is "to be forgiven,” and the other actor has
a line late in the scene, "I forgive you"? If he makes his objective "to
make her say she forgives him,” he hasn't got enough to do, hasn't
got an important enough tusk, because she’s going to say the line no
matter what he does. This is called a "soft" objective. To keep his
objective alive he needs to keep his concentration on something phys-
ical, such as her eyes and body language. That's where one really
experiences forgiveness — not in mere words.
So once she says the line, does his objective change? No. We
look for an objective the actor can hang the whole scene on, that can
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be true from the beginning of the scene to the end. That is the truth
of this tool, and the way to make it useful.
CHOOSING OBJECTIVES
The objective is not the result. It is not a blueprint for the scene.
Perhaps you were surprised earlier when I suggested that the spine
for Chaplin's little tramp might be "to stay out of trouble," since the
little tramp was always i trouble. The lines or plot contain clues to
the objective, but the objective relates to what is not being said, the
subworld. In the case of the little tramp, humor results from the
incongruity of intention and result.
The interesting thing is that if the character was a real person and
you asked him what he wanted from the young woman, he might
truthfully answer "to talk to her.” His need to be alone and
unclothed with her might be deeper than his conscious intent.
Which intent or need should the actor use in the scene? Whichever
one works. In rehearsal, he can try them both.
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"She wants this but she also wants that.” Human beings can't do
more than one thing at one time. If an actor tries to want two things
at once, the two will cancel each other out and make the performance
flat. There is always something that a person wants the most, will
sacrifice the most for. It is the skill of the actor or director to unlock
this mystery and find the singular playable key. “He wants X but he
knows he can't get it." A cop-out. Knowing we can't get something
doesn't stop us from wanting it. People want what they want, how-
ever irrational. Don't forget that very often they do the wrong thing
to get it. Sometimes, for instance, a person wants respect but con-
stantly seems to be apologizing for his actions. Avoid the construc-
tion, “He is trying to get her to..." Instead say, "He wants her to."
The word "try" may add a strain.
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Later, when I saw the movie and the line was said in context I could
see that Day-Lewis, an excellent actor, had not made Hawkeye's
intent "to get her to believe that he would find her," which would
have been the hackneyed "movie" choice, stuck on the surface of the
words. Although I have no inside information as to how Day-Lewis
works, it looked to me as though his choice was something more vis-
ceral, perhaps "to calm" or "to soothe" or “give her courage" for the
ordeal ahead.
But whether or not the actor uses this tool, the performance, in
order to be believable, must have a through-line and a sense of inten-
tion. The actor doesn't necessarily have to be aware of it or be able
to label it (he may be working some other way), but it must be there.
When the director monitors actors’ performances, this is one of the
things he should be monitoring. If you can discern whether an actor
operates out of a need, can play the verb rather than playing at it, you
will have an invaluable tool for casting. If you become adept at dis-
cerning actors’ unconscious objectives, you may become known as an
"actor's director." The caveat, as usual, is that reading about objec-
tives, intentions, and spines is only a start. In order to understand
and effectively use them, you need to practice and see them in action.
IMAGES
There are images in the text and images behind the text. By
images in the text I mean every person, place, or thing that the char-
acters mention in their dialogue. By images behind the text I mean
the things the characters don't talk about — the people, places, and
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things that inhabit their subworld. This includes not only visual
images but impressions of all the senses — what we see, hear, smell,
taste, and touch.
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An actor when studying a script examines all the images in the
text and makes sure he understands them. He puts them in the con-
text of the facts of the script, of course, but he also makes them real
to himself; that is, he relates them to his personal experience and
observation and allows his imagination to weave through them and be
captured by them. He does this in order to be sure he 1s talking about
something, not just talking about words. This is an important cor-
nerstone of a believable performance.
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married, but she can still play the role. She can substitute for the ex-
husband someone from her own life.
She could even substitute for the ex-husband a person she met in
a store yesterday; that would give the relationship less emotional
investment, and thus a different attitude. This would create an
adjustment that she's gotten over the relationship, or that it was never
very substantial to begin with, or that she is in denial about her true
feelings. The substitution is an emotional parallel to the character's
relationship. The parallel need not be exact if it is done honestly and
simply and with full commitment. The audience will believe the rela-
tionship because they will believe that there is sore relationship, and
they will suspend disbelief and fill in the blanks.
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of ironing her husband's shirts. (She was not ironing on stage; she
was actually in a police station, but she was talking about ironing.)
Although my mother ironed my father's shirts and taught me how, I
had never, as an adult, ironed men’s shirts. In early rehearsals I tried
my best to focus on images of ironing shirts during those long mono-
logues, but they did not carry the emotional weight for me person-
ally that the writing clearly meant them to carry. I was dry. So I
made a wholesale substitution and as I spoke the images of the mono-
logue, which had to do with the steaming ironing board, the texture
and colors of the cotton shirts, I focused instead on a sensory experi-
ence of wrapping a present for someone I loved. (It was my choice
about the character that to her the ironing was an act of love.) I made
my images very specific: a specific gift, a certain person the gift was
for, the wrapping paper, the tape, etc. I quit worrying about getting
the right image, and instead gave myself completely to the substitu-
tion I had found. And eventually, the ironing image did kick in! The
steam from the iron and the crispness of the cotton began to take
hold of my imagination. During many performances, I could feel
the steam on my face and in my nostrils. I did not try to make the
audience believe that I felt the steam, it was just there. The substi-
tution gives the actor a springboard into the imaginative realm —
the "magic as if."
The actor also makes sure that there is an image in place for the
facts or events he is speaking about. In the 1995 version of “Cry, the
Beloved Country,” one of the characters has a line "Tam a cynical and
selfish man. But God put his hand on me.” In order to make this
strange and powerful line his own, the actor must be sure that he is
not speaking in generalities, but is speaking specifically of something
in the character's past that might cause him to say such a thing. The
work of the actor is not to decide whether to say this line piously or
defiantly or sarcastically, but rather to determine what specific events
of this character's life make him call himself cynical and selfish.
Perhaps it is something he did that he knew was wrong but escaped
punishment for. What is it?
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own life and the lives of people he has known. I happen to know
someone who went to jail for manslaughter. Meeting this person
made a tremendous impression on me. Perhaps I would borrow his
experience and substitute it as my own when,it came time for me to
say this line. I would not need to do that of course. [ could recall the
time when I was nineteen and lied to my parents that I couldn't meet
them for dinner because I was sick. In fact I wanted to see my
boyfriend, of whom they disapproved. That evening we were in a
serious motorcycle accident. In the Bellevue emergency room there
was a kind nurse. Recalling her face and eyes might well start me on
the road to creating a reality behind that line.
Even if there's only one character in the scene, the actor is always
talking to someone. Under what circumstances do people talk when
nobody else is around? Take the “Twilight Zone” episode in which
Burgess Meredith, wearing thick glasses and the only survivor of
nuclear war, finds himself in the ruins of the public library. The
whole script has only one character, and this character speaks out
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with images, it's just true. That's why they are such a useful
directing tool. Franco Zeffirelli gave Glenn Close this image for her
portrayal of Gertrude in “Hamlet”: "The walls of the castle are filled
with her perfume." iy
I find that many novice film directors have filled their imagina-
tions exclusively with images from movies and television. This is a
mistake. It's true that there is fun to be had in movies that reference
other movies, if it is done in an original way, but to build a real
career, and to grow as an artist, one must have access to images from
other sources.
Who knows where Vanessa Redgrave got the images for the
shimmering scene in which she describes her memories of Howard's
End to Emma Thompson? Wherever the image comes from, she lets
the words come out of her commitment to that image, without
deciding how she will say them. The more private, specific, and real
her image is to her, the more we (the audience) are able to journey in
our own imaginations to our own Howard's End.
OBSTACLE
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First of all, | want you to note that they are choices. There is
nothing in the script to prove or disprove either one. Second, I want
you to notice that exploring these choices is different from asking the
actor for these results. If you, as director, ask for the result — for
example, to bring a deeper undercurrent to the relationship, or to
make his character more superficial — you are hoping that he
searches his imagination and experience for ways (such as, though not
limited to, the ones suggested above) to create a believable sense of
problem around your request. But if you are interested, you could
engage in discussion and experimentation with the various ways of
looking at the character's problem.
You should understand that if you engage in the problem with the
actor, the performance might or might not end up with the result you
have in your mind. To work successfully this way, you will have to be
process-oriented rather than result-oriented.
Sometimes actors make bargains with each other ("If you are
really mean to me in that scene, then I will be able to cry"). Such bar-
gaining drains the scene of life, because the actors are servicing each
other. The concept of "servicing" or “cooperating” is slippery. I have
been carrying on about the importance of listening, of generous
acting, and now I am saying that cooperating is bad.
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On the other hand, sometimes the writing is solid, and the actor
has not made the connection necessary to see the life in the line. If
you have the time and the skill (the more skill you have, the less time
it takes), you can give his performance a huge boost by insisting that
he find a way to meet the line, enter its subworld, and find a way to
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justify it. And if you are really skilled, you will be able to give sug-
gestions on how to do that.
This is an important story. Anyone who has seen the movie will,
I think, agree that it would have been a mistake to change any lines.
And yet, Brando's point was a valid one. It seems to me that Brando
was objecting to the pitch of melodrama that he felt would result
from the situation of a man pouring out his heart with the obstacle of
a gun pointed at him.
What is the scene about? It's about two brothers. Kazan's direc-
tion goes to the heart of the scene, because when Terry gently pushes
the gun away, we see the inarticulate depth and strange tenderness of
the relationship; we see that whatever failures Charlie has made as a
brother, Terry knows Charlie will not use a gun on him. Pushing
away the gun becomes the transforming event of the scene. After it,
‘Terry opens his heart to his brother, and Charlie is moved to love and
shame — indeed, he then sacrifices his own life. “his was a major
directorial insight, but it was also a correct way of working with a
good actor who is having a problem with a well-written script.
(Interestingly, Brando, in his autobiography, claims to have impro-
vised that whole scene! But to me the two versions of the story are
not really in conflict. The question raised by Brando was central to
solving that scene, and certainly it is fair to say that the actor created,
i.e., improvised, the scene's emotional life.)
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I think you can see, from the “Waterfront” example, what a mis-
take it would have been for the actor and writer to meet without the
director. It is the director's job to mediate any concerns the actor has
about the writing, or the writer has about the acting. I feel strongly
that actor and writer should never meet without the director present
— even when the writer and director are the same person! If you are
both the writer and the director, when you need to talk to an actor
about script changes, you should do so with your director's hat on,
not your writer's hat.
Now if you have a rehearsal period, the director can allow the
actors time to work out such resistances at their own pace.
Organically working out the resistances of the actors is one of the
purposes of rehearsal. Without rehearsal, actors may need help from
the director or else sooner or later the line they are resisting will
probably have to be cut or changed, perhaps to something inferior.
Such resistances are not bad, but they are obstacles. When they are
solved they release energy.
FACTS
A character's through-line can come from the facts of the scene.
In that case the actor doesn't have to know the objective. The facts
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Then I speak to the female actor alone. | tell her that she woke
up ina hospital two days ago and the people there have been telling
her she was in a coma for two weeks. I tell her she may or may not
remember what caused her coma, that's for her to choose. I tell her
that she can speak, but that for the past two days she has not spoken.
I ask her to find that place within herself from which she might have
no desire or need to communicate. I tell her that many of the hos-
pital staff come into her room, but there is one intern who comes
more often and who calls her "Danielle."
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SENSE OF BELIEF
If an actor has a line to the effect that "this is the first letter I've
ever received,” as does the title character in “II Postino,” the actor,
who has undoubtedly received letters in his own life, must create the
given circumstance that justifies the facts behind that line; i.e., create
a sense of beliefin the situation. What would it be like to be a person
who has never received a letter? How would I feel, who would I be,
if / lived in a tiny village all my life, had no education, and had never
received a letter? These are questions an actor might ask himself in
order to create a sense of belief in the given circumstances of the
character. “Given circumstances” is another way of saying the char-
acter's situation, or his predicament. Writers and producers tend to
call it backstory. I like to call it the facts.
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they had a great sense of belief, a great will to believe in their char-
acters, and a will to make us believe with them.
ADJUSTMENTS. }
Some people use the term "adjustment" to refer to any choice or
shading of a performance. For instance, a director may say, "Let's try
a different adjustment. Let's say that you want to pick a fight with
him." ‘That's really an objective, right? But sometimes people call it
an adjustment. There's nothing wrong with that. When I gave the
“Driving Miss Daisy” example of adding an obstacle for the son, that
could be called adding an adjustment.
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There is a fact central to this scene: Val was in the store earlier
in the day when Lady arrived with her husband from the hospital.
The only words the husband spoke were words of criticism toward
Lady. One way to approach playing the character of Val would be
to look at that fact; he first saw her while she was involved in the task
of getting her sick, demanding husband upstairs to bed and keeping
her business running.
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SUBTEXT
Subtext is the thing that is not being said. If the line is, "Please
shut the door," there can be several different subtexts to it: "Please
shut the door (you stupid ass). "Please shut the door (so we can
begin our business meeting).” "Please shut the door (so we can
finally be alone together, darling)." "Please shut the door (and keep
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that maniac out)." The line itself would be the same each time, but
it would come out in different ways depending on the subtext. Ina
sense the different subtexts give it different line readings.
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PHYSICAL LIFE
The objects of a person's life are very defining of who she is. An
actor creates a sense of belief in her character's life by creating a
relationship to the objects of that life. Giving life to the objects and
activities of the character's world is as important as finding her
inner needs and impulses. Objects have tremendous power to create
energy. When directors define the physical staging of scenes, they
become significantly involved in the actors’ physical life. It is very
helpful to involve the actors organically in the creating of blocking
and stage business.
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and objects of their lives that change. An object can also be a kind of
emotional lightning rod, to keep a relationship from coming across
too dead-on. Once in a class two students were enacting the con-
frontation scene from “I Never Sang for My Father.” The student
playing the father was acting up a storm, confronting the son in a way
that was very dramatic and probably satisfying but not believable. I
gave him a newspaper and told him I wanted him to read the paper
during the scene, and not merely use it as a prop. I instructed him to
be able to tell me after the scene was over what the article was about.
The scene then played beautifully. Objects are wonderful as a way to
bring actors into the moment, out of their heads. If they concentrate
on the task of, say, making a sandwich, that concentration can impart
to the emotional life a sense of task as well. This allows the emo-
tional event to take place without actorish posturing.
him his’ intention (to tease her); it reveals the differences in their
education and manners; it is a sexual metaphor. And it gives Fva
Marie Saint a playable objective for the rest of the scene — she wants
her glove back!
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“Little Big Man” when he realized that the guy "probably hasn't had
a decent bowel movement in twenty years."
Actors can sometimes fall in love with their “business” and start
to play it for its own sake. It becomes shtick. Or they may start
playing their character choices for their own sake — ‘playing char-
acter" or mugging. The director needs to monitor these things and
ask the actor to give up business or character choices if they get in the
way of telling the story.
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‘This means that in the initial take the actor was “rushing,” not
connecting to the subworld of the lines, possibly because he has not
investigated that subworld adequately. “Rushing” paradoxically can
make a scene feel slow, because if the subworld of the scene is not
coming alive, the scene becomes boring and generic and the person
watching can't help but wish it finished and done with as soon as
possible. In fact it needs to be slowed down in order to find the
details of inner life that will make it worth watching.
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STRUCTURE:
‘TRANSITIONS, EVENTS, AND
“THROUGH-LINES
Actors get into a lot of trouble with transitions, the emotional
changes and events of a role. Transitions are the places where actors
feel the most self-conscious, worry the most about whether they are
going to be able to “hit it." Directors often exacerbate the anxiety
by using the result direction of asking actors to hit a certain emo-
tional “note.” It is in the transitions that bad acting is most likely to
show up.
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A moment means the actors stop each other, and affect each
other. Sometimes a genuine moment catches the actor so off-guard
that she momentarily forgets her lines. An actor should never stop
the scene when that happens. Such inner accidents create a lot of
energy. She should allow this inner accident to be an emotional
event, and she should continue the scene and do something with the
energy that has been released. The forgotten line is likely to come
back within a few seconds. The director, of course, must be open to
this idea, must be able to tell the difference between a "dead spot"
and an energy-releasing inner accident and must allow a climate in
which creative accidents are welcomed. Sometimes actors forget that
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This is the ideal: solving the scene by finding one simple choice
(through-line) for each character that all his behavior can be hung on,
like a hook, and then allowing the actors to play off each other. But
often, once that central problem of the scene has been solved, there
are still transitions here and there that are not working, that need to
be sharpened, deepened, or cleaned up. This is the most dangerous
place for a director to use result direction. When a director wants to
ask an actor for a transition but doesn't want to use result direction,
he can use his “Quick Fix” tools, thus: |
Images
The best way I can think to describe how images and associations
work in creating transitions is to relay Stanislavsky's anecdote, from
An Actor Prepares, about a woman who has just been told her hus-
band was killed in an accident at the factory. She stands in place for
minutes, not moving. The question going through her mind while
she's being told this is, H hat will I do with the dinner I've prepared if he
will not be there to eat it? The mind works in such incredible ways,
especially when information is coming in that one can't deal with or
accept. ‘The image “husband” connected with the image "dinner"
and her mind would go no further. The most useful images in this
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regard are off-kilter, out of context, even bizarre, because that's the
way people's minds work. ;
Verbs
Physical activity
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When actors find the deeper truths of a script, it is always best for
them to maintain a privacy. When the actor confers with his director
about such ideas, the transaction needs to be delicate. And actors
should not talk about these ideas with the other actors. It becomes
casual, a kind of gossip; it dissipates the energy of the idea and dam-
ages the actor's concentration. Meryl Streep disclosed in an inter-
view with Gene Siskel that for every role she gives herself a secret,
something which her character would not want others to know, and
which she herself conceals from her co-stars; in “Kramer vs. Kramer”
her secret was that she never had loved her husband.
When actors keep secrets from each other, when their transi-
tions are crisp and clean, their images private and idiosyncratic,
their intentions (verbs) opposite to the obvious surface meaning of
a line — a performance may have “edge.” And the actors’ perfor-
mances can contribute to the style of a film.
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The really great actors love their craft. They experience acting
as a kind of laboratory of the soul, a means to exploration and growth,
a path. Acting can be a great act of love, a sharing of the most impor-
tant things one knows and feels about life.
There are excellent actors who have never taken acting lessons
and instead have developed a private technique of their own. There
are other actors who think of their teacher almost as a priest or guru.
I think that the best actors recognize and seek out true teachers, and
steal and learn from everyone and everything they encounter.
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reason an actor uses his own life and experience is not that his partic-
ular life and hard times are any more significant or worthy of note
than anyone else's. The goal of using personal experience as an
acting resource is not self-indulgence but honesty.
Memory is the resource actors are using when they make personal
substitutions or when they work with the technique of affective
memory. Affective memory (also called emotional memory) is based on
the technique of sense memory.
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OBSERVATION
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come in contact with to play characters that are different from him-
self. Using observation as an actor's resource is sometimes called
working "from the outside in." An actor may be playing someone of
a certain social class or occupation; he needs to find the physicality
of, for instance, a person who has lived all his life as a farmer — ges-
tures and behaviors that differ from a person who, say, has always
worked behind a desk. Playing a character who ages in the film, like
Cecily Tyson in “The Autobiography of Miss Jane Pitman,” or
Dustin Hoffman in “Little Big Man,” an actor uses his observations
of elderly people to create that physicality: there is often a stiffness in
the joints, a tendency to walk and stand with the feet farther apart.
An actor keeps an inventory of the different kinds of drunkenness he
has seen — quiet drunks, sloppy drunks, happy drunks, angry drunks
— and can create a particular physicalization for the kind of drunk he
feels a particular character is.
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other words, any kind of acting training that favors working from the
inside out.
Surely the best actors do both, work from the inside out and also
from the outside in. Marlon Brando is known as an actor who works
from the inside out, but who actually also works from the outside in;
it was he who insisted on stuffing his cheeks to play the Godfather.
Anthony Hopkins, although he is associated with British acting and
~
thus working from the outside in, acknowledges in_his interviews
working from the inside out as well; Shelley Winters claims to have
spotted him sitting quietly in the back of Actors Studio classrooms
during the seventies.
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IMAGINATION
All of us, actors and nonactors alike, are sitting on a vast iceberg
of submerged resources —. memories, observations, feelings, ©
impulses, images, associations, meanderings — that are not useful to
our daily lives and have been filed away,
to all practical intents and
purposes no longer available to us. These are the resources of our
story imaginations. Stella Adler included among the riches of the
subconscious the resources of the "collective unconscious.”
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and believably say the lines of a character who is actually very much
like them. I am a great believer in improy for engaging an actor's
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imagination and sense of belief.
IMMEDIATE EXPERIENCE
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When actors have confidence that they can trust their feelings
and the other actor, they receive all stimuli as energy. If the actor is
irritated with the direction or doesn't like the other actor or is
shooting on a hot sound stage a scene set in the Antarctic, the actor
can still be alive to the "here and now," using everything as energy,
instead of shutting it off, screening it out, pretending it's not there.
If the actor has a headache, he lets the character have a headache. If
the actor is nervous, he imagines what the character might conceiv-
ably be nervous about.
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SENSORY LIFE
Adding sensory detail deepens and keeps fresh any actor's choice.
The brilliance of affective memory as a technique is the under-
standing that it is the sensory life (e.g., the pattern of the wallpaper,
the sound of the voices in the next room) that recalls the emotional
event far more vividly than pondering the emotion ("I felt fright-
ened," etc.) or even the event ("My mother was screaming,” or what-
ever).
Objectives and intentions stay fresh and vivid via the here-and-
now physical reality of the other actor's physical face and body: for
example, "Do I see forgiveness in her eyes, hear it in her voice (not
just in her words)?"
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Sense memory has very practical uses for actors. When a char-
acter in a scene burns himself on a hot stove, the actor playing the
role does not touch a stove that is hot; he touches a cold stove as if it
were hot. Sophisticated special effects require actors to perform in
front of the blue screen as if they were on a precipice or airplane
wing. And since Shakespeare's time, the actor playing Macbeth has
had to be able to see a dagger where there was none.
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Does this mean the actor actually feels the pain of a burn? Not
atall. That's the wonder of all this acting stuff; the concentration cre-
ates an imagined reality; the audience is inyited to fill in the blanks
with their own experience or imagination.
FEELINGS
"I think that to sing the blues you have to feel it.” — Billie
Holiday
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for the role (even though some of them won't mind it if you do). You
can invite them to invest more in the images of the scene, in other
words, to make the work more personal. Or you can offer them freedom,
give them permission to “let go even more.” You need in the next
breath to promise that you'll be watching to make sure the perfor-
mance is not overacted.
Emotion must never be indulged, or even attempted, for its own sake.
~ When actors enjoy their tears and hold on to emotion for the sake of
its effect, showing us how much emotion they have, the acting
becomes bad. Whenever an actor feels something, he must harness
that energy to a sense of task or predicament. In real life, as I men-
tioned in the first chapter, people don't try to have feelings, and fre-
quently they try wot to have them._ Performances are usually much
more successful when actors play against whatever feeling they have. ~~
~~Te can be funnier when an actor tries vot to laugh at a funeral (like
Mary Tyler Moore in the famous “Chuckles the Clown" episode of
her long-running TV show); more poignant when an actor holds \
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and Meisnér's
immediate experience.
am)
Method actors can hang onto feelings, and the work may become
subjective, too inward, not expressed in intention or physicalized in
activity — or at worst, self-indulgent. In my classes I always ask students
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There are excellent American acting teachers who are not as well
known as the Group Theatre titans. Peggy Feury and Roy London
never became household names but were beloved teachers who
taught many excellent actors. Some acting teachers are dogmatic
about their teaching methods. Some are tyrants and bullies. Getting
below the social mask can be difficult; most of us have charactero-
logical and social armoring that prevents us from deep feeling.
Acting teachers sometimes take it on themselves to attempt to pierce
this armor by bullying and manipulating students. Actors unfortu-
nately are often wounded souls who expect and respond to such bul-
lying. 1 have found as a teacher that the opposite tack — more
freedom and permission to fail — works better.
_ Acting class should be, among other things, a place where the
Imagination is stimulated and creative freedom is encouraged and
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STRETCHING
The actor must make his choices his own, must connect with the
choice in such a way that allows his own subconscious to kick in. The
actor can play characters that are different from himself by making
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character choices that are different from his in real life, e.g., choose
to beg in a situation where he himself would not beg. It's a playable
choice. He needs to "beg" honestly, of course, the way he himself
begs when he does beg. This can allow the pure, delicious freedom
of getting to do something one doesn’t get to do in real life, that is,
to achieve the actor's liberty to kick in, as it seems to for Ingrid
Bergman in her robust portrayal of the belittling mother (opposite
Liv Ullman as the daughter) in Ingmar Bergman's “Autumn Sonata.”
Allowing herself to complain, demand, and exert her will as no one
ever gets to do in real life gives the performance great zest.
One doesn't need to sleep with one’s leading man or lady. One
can play a murderer without having murdered someone. Lynn
Redgrave has said that her best work is in roles that are not at all like
her. Glenn Close has said the same. Under what circumstances
would I be capable of murder? Everybody draws his own line. An
actor catches hold of a corner of a scene's reality, unlocks some tiny
part of it, and imagination captures the rest. Holly Hunter calls it
"living on a terrain that I know something of, but is not where I live."
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On the other hand, since film acting is done in bits and pieces, an
actor who knows how to craft a full characterization (Meryl Streep,
for one) can be an exciting collaborator with a confident director.
Directors as diverse in their rehearsal and shooting methods as
Martin Scorcese, Sidney Lumet, Robert Altman, Jane Campion, and
Quentin Tarrantino all rely heavily on the actors’ contributions.
PROFESSIONALISM
Besides learning the craft of acting, film and television actors also
learn camera technique. This includes hitting marks, finding their
light, and not blinking. Over time, their familiarity with these tech-
nical tricks can make their acting slick and less exciting to watch.
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Actors can also burn out, get sloppy, or general. They may even take
roles they are not particularly interested in just for something to do.
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It's hard to direct people who can fire you. I think a young
director has to cope with the situation head-on, meet with the star,
and have a frank discussion. You've got to let actors know that you
love and respect them and you want to make the best use of their
talent — that's why you're there. If you've gone ahead on a project
with an actor that's been foisted on you and that you don't even like,
I don't have any advice. But if you've gone with somebody that you
know might be difficult but that you think will bring excitement to
the project — dive in! Go after it. Go after the relationship. Good
actors know that if they do their job and if you do your job they'll
look better. Sometimes you have to prove to them that you know
how to do your job.
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SCRIPT ANALYSIS
“... [hen there are other directors I watch and wonder why
they get out of bed in the morning, because of the stunning
lack of homework they do.” — Anthony Hopkins
It is natural, when you read (or write) a script, to hear the lines
and see the characters in your mind’s eye, but if you are the director
of the movie, this is only a place to start! This is not a completed
script analysis. It’s all still in vour head. You need ways to bring your
vision out of your head and into life.
The words on the page, the dialogue, and (to some extent) the
stage directions are clues to a vast subworld of behavior and feeling
which it is the duty and privilege of the director and actors to supply.
This is the ninety percent of the iceberg that is below water. In order
to understand the script you need to be able to operate in the sub-
world of these characters, to believe in it, create in it, and trust it.
The tendency people have, once they have heard the line, to
adhere rigidly to that line reading or interpretation, is very detri-
mental. Instead directors need to know the characters and the script
structure inside out. The purpose of script analysis is to find out
who these people (characters) are and what happens to them, to
become the teller of their story. Then you won't have to remind
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I have a set of tools which will help you go deeper into the lives
of the character. They work for every genre, and are helpful both for
must do the same work with a bad script. Bad scripts are often over-
explained and obvious, so you need to create something behind the
words, to flesh them out and give them a texture of life. Although no
actor can really be better than her material (and you must be careful
not to burden the script with profundity it cannot carry or it could
become pretentious), borderline or mediocre material can be made
more lively and entertaining by using the same script analysis tools
you use to dig out the riches and layers of a good script. (Helen Hunt
seems to have done this in “Twister.”) One of the most important
adjustments I want you to make is, once you have decided to direct a
script, to treat it as if it is a good script. You must stop judging and
begin to engage.
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‘That these two processes are very different is exactly my point. This
means for one thing that if your thinking about script structure
includes ideas such as which character is “hero,” “mentor,” “enemy,”
etc., for the purposes of this script analysis I need to ask you to let
go of such categories and think of each character as a human being
in a situation.
The Skim is what I call the first time you read a script. I call ita
“Skim” because I don’t believe that the very first time you pass your
eyes over the words of a script can be a meaningful reading. Even if
you read slowly, you do not, on the first Skim, take in much of the
script’s possibilities. You may see thar it has possibilities, but that is
not the same as seeig the possibilities, because you are sifting what
you read through the filter of what you expect to read.
The Skim will leave you with impressions and feelings, of course,
and these can be very valuable. Because these first impressions are
bound to have more to do with what you already know and feel than
with what the script has to offer, they tell you something about the
personal investment you may be able to make in the movie, why it
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THE WRITER-DIRECTOR
If you have written the script yourself you may not need the
Skim; you may already know what you think the script is about. But
I invite you to approach the First Read the same way as a director
who hasn’t written the script — that is, with an open, fresh
beginner’s mind.
So when I talk about figuring out what the words mean I don’t say,
“Find out what the author meant.” I mean no disrespect to the author
when I say that the director must find the meaning of the script, not
the meaning the author “intended.” My iftention is not to “decon-
struct” the author’s intention. Good writing often takes place at the
most creative, i.e., subconscious level. In working with writers, I have
seen over and over that the author is not always a reliable interpreter
of what he has written. His unconscious impulses are often richer
than his conscious intention. Adapting the clues of the script into
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Before you actually start reading you should edit the stage direc-
tions— and cross out most of them. At the very least, all stage direc-
tions should be adapted rather than swallowed whole as emotional
marks that the actors are supposed to hit. Movie people don’t have
any trouble understanding that the production designer must adapt
rather than execute rigidly the screenwriter’s description of sets and
locations. It’s the same for actors.
It is exactly the job of the director and actors to create the sub-
world. Heeding such shortcuts to the characters’ emotional life will
make the director’s and actors’ job more, not less, difficult. You
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“She struggles with her coat”; “He looks at his watch.” These
should be crossed out too. Such a stage direction as “She struggles
with her coat” is still a shorthand suggestion of the inner life of the
character, another version of the first category above. It’s better
writing than describing the character as “frustrated,” but it’s really the
same thing. :
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In the case of (a), since they are already in the dialogue, you don’t
need them in the stage directions and you can cross them out. I find
it much more exciting and creative to do the detective work of
deducing the backstory facts than being fed them.
In the case of (b), since they are not in the dialogue, they may
contain useful or even necessary clues. In that case you might enter
them on a list of “facts” (see Column I of Chart 2 on page 192). On
the other hand such statements by the author may be smaginative
choices which you can use, if you find them helpful, and if not, you can
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reject and invent your own. In that case they belong in Column 1
of Chart 3 (page 207). For now I suggest that you circle them with
a question mark.
After you do this, you'll be left with very sparse, circled or high-
lighted stage directions, and some question marks. The circled
images, facts, and objects will have been entered on the proper charts.
Highlighted material will contain clues to the physical and emotional
life of the characters.
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Below 1s the opening scene from the play “When You Comin’
Back, Red Ryder?” by Mark Medoff. Before you read on, you might
want to look at the scene and do your own circling and crossing out.
ANGEL
Good mornin’, Stephen.
(Stephen does not look at her, but glances at the clock
and makes a strained sucking sound through his teeth —
a habit he has throughout — and flips the newspaper
back up to his face. Unperturbed, Angel proceeds behind
the counter.)
I'm sorry I’m late. My mom and me, our
daily fight was a little off schedule today.
(Stephen loudly shuffles the paper, sucks his teeth.)
I said I’m sorry, Stephen. God. I’m only
six minutes late.
STEPHEN
Only six minutes, huh? I got six minutes
to just hang around this joint when my
shift’s up, right? This is really the kinda
dump I’m gonna hang around in my spare
time, ain’t it?
ANGEL
Stephen, that’s a paper cup you got
your coffee in.
(Stephen is entrenched behind his newspaper. )
STEPHEN
Clark can afford it, believe me.
ANGEL
That’s not the point, Stephen.
STEPHEN
Oh no? You’re gonna tell me the point
though, right? Hold it, lemme get a pencil.
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ANGEL
The point is that if you’re drinkin’ your
coffee here, you’re supposed to use a glass
cup, and if it’s to go, you’re supposed to get
charged fifteen instead of ten and ya get
one of those five cent paper cups to take it
with you. That’s the point, Stephen.
STEPHEN
Yeah, well I’m takin’ it with me, so where’s
the problem?
(Stephen has taken the last cigarette from a pack, slipped
the coupon into his shirt pocket and crumpled the pack.
He basketball shoots it across the service area.)
ANGEL
Stephen.
(She retrieves the pack and begins her morning routine:
filling salt and pepper shakers, the sugar dispensers, set-
ting out place mats, and cleaning up the mess Stephen
evidently leaves for her each morning. Stephen reaches
over and underneath the counter and pulls up a half
empty carton of Raleighs and slides out a fresh pack. He
returns the carton and slaps the new pack down on the
counter. )
What’re ya gonna get with your cigarette
coupons, Stephen?
(Stephen reads his paper, smokes, sips his coffee.)
Stephen?
(Stephen lowers the newspaper.)
STEPHEN
How many times I gotta tell ya to don’t call
me Stephen.
ANGEL
I don’t like callin’ ya Red. It’s stupid —
callin somebody with brown hair Red.
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STEPHEN
It’s my name, ain’t it? I don’t like
Stephen. I like Red. When I was a kid I
had red hair.
ANGEL
But ya don’t now. Now ya got brown hair.
STEPHEN
Ccexasperated)
But then I did, and then’s when counts.
ANGEL
Who says then’s when counts?
STEPHEN
The person that’s doin’ the countin’!
Namely yours truly! I don’t call you
Caroline or Madge, do I?
ANGEL
Because those aren’t my name. My name’s
Angel, so —
STEPHEN
Yeah, well ya don’t look like no angel to
me.
ANGEL
I can’t help that, Stephen. At least I was
named my name at birth. Nobody asked
me if I minded bein’ named Angel, but at
least —
STEPHEN
You could change it, couldn’t ya?
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ANGEL
What for? To what?
STEPHEN 4
(Thinking a moment,
setting her up)
To Mabel.
ANGEL
How come Mabel?
STEPHEN
Yeah...Mabel.
ANGEL
How come? You like Mabel?
STEPHEN
I hate Mabel. ;
(Stephen stares at her, sucks his teeth.)
ANGEL
Look, Stephen, if you’re in such a big
hurry to get outta here, how come you’re
just sittin’ around cleaning your teeth?
STEPHEN
Hey, look, I'l] be gone in a minute. I mean
if it’s too much to ask if I have a cigarette
and a cup a coffee in peace, for chrissake,
just say so. A person’s supposed to unwind
for two minutes a day, in case you ain’t
read the latest medical report. If it’s too
much to ask to just lemme sit here in
peace for two minutes, then say so. I
wouldn’t wanna take up a stool somebody
was waitin’ for or anything.
Cooking around him.)
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ANGEL
Cpause)
Did you notice what’s playin’ at the films?
STEPHEN
Buncha crap, whudduya think?
ANGEL
(pause)
I saw ya circle somethin’ in the gift book
the other mornin’.
STEPHEN
What gift book?
ANGEL
The Raleigh coupon gift book.
STEPHEN
Hey — com ’ere.
(Angel advances close to him. He snatches the pencil from
behind her ear and draws a circle on the newspaper.)
There. Now I just drew a circle on the
newspaper. That mean I’m gonna get me
that car?
ANGEL
Come on, Stephen, tell me. What’re ya
gonna get?
STEPHEN
Christ, whudduyou care what I’m gonna get?
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ANGEL
God, Stephen, I’m not the FBI or somebody.
What are you so upset about? Just tell me
what you’re gonna get. ny
STEPHEN
CGmumbling irascibly.)
Back pack.
ANGEL
What?
STEPHEN
Whuddya, got home fries in your ears?
ANGEL
Just that I didn’t hear what you said is all.
STEPHEN
Back. Pack.
ANGEL
Who’s gettin’ a back pack?
STEPHEN
The guy down the enda the counter.
Chingado the Chicano. He’s hitchin’ to
Guatama.la.
ANGEL
You’re gettin’ a back pack? How come?
STEPHEN
Whuddo people usually get a back pack
for?
ANGEL
Ya gonna go campin’.
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STEPHEN
No I ain’t gonna go campin’. I’m gonna go
gettin’ the hell outta this lousy little town
is where I’m gonna go campin’.
ANGEL
When? I mean...when?
STEPHEN
When? Just as soon as J get somethin’
taken care of.
ANGEL
When will that be?
STEPHEN
When will that be? When I get it taken
care of — when d’ya think? Lemme have
a donut.
ANGEL
(getting him a donut)
Where ya gonna go?
STEPHEN
Where am I gonna go? I’m gonna go
hitchin’ that way Cpointing left) or I’m
gonna go hitchin’ that way (pointing right)
and when I get to some place that don’t
still smella Turdville here I’m gonna get
me a decent job and I’m gonna make me
some bread.
(He picks up the donut
and bites into it.)
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ANGEL
Rye or whole wheat, Stephen?
STEPHEN >
This is some donut. I think they glued the
crumbs together with Elmer’s.
ANGEL
Rye or whole wheat, Stephen?
STEPHEN
Cwith his mouth full)
Believe me, that ain’t funny.
ANGEL
Don’t talk with your mouth full.
STEPHEN
Christ, my coffee’s cold. How d’ya like
that?
(He looks at her. She pours him a fresh cup of coffee in
a mug. She sets it down by him. He looks at it a minute,
then pours the coffee from the mug into his paper cup.)
I told ya, I’m leavin’ in less’n two minutes.
ANGEL
That’s right, I forgot.
STEPHEN
Yeah, yeah.
ANGEL
You better let your hair grow and get some
different clothes if you’re gonna hitch
somewhere, Stephen. You’re outta style.
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STEPHEN
Love and peace my Aunt Fanny’s butt!
And who says I want them to pick me, for
chrissake? You think I’m dyin’ for a case
a the clap, or what? I got a coupla hun-
dred truck drivers come through here in
the middle of the night that said they’d all
gimme a ride anytime anywhere they was
goin’. You think I’m gonna lower myself to
ride with those other morons — you’re
outta your mind.
ANGEL
Two hundred truck drivers? Uh-uh, I’m
sorry, I have to call you on that one,
Stephen. If it wasn’t for Lyle’s station and
his motel, Lyle’d be our only customer.
STEPHEN
You know, right? Cause you’re here all
night while I’m home sacked out on my
rear, so you know how many truck drivers
still stop in here, now ain’t that right?
ANGEL
In the three weeks since the bypass
opened, Stephen, you know exactly how
many customers you had in the nights?
You wanna know exactly how many,
Stephen?
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STEPHEN
No Christ, I don’t wanna know how many.
I wanna have two minutes of peace to read
my damn newspaper — if that’s not askin’
too much! Is that askin’ too much? If it
is, just say the word and I’l] get the hell
outta here and go to the goddamn cemetery
or somewhere.
Soon the writer mentions some objects (salt and pepper shakers,
sugar dispensers, place mats, cleaning supplies) which are potential
personal objects for Angel. We might have inferred them anyway,
since they are not unusual to a diner. They are not referred to in the
dialogue, so they are not mandatory. I’m crossing them out but high-
lighting, with a question mark, some stage business involving Angel’s
work-related activities and Stephen discarding his empty cigarette
pack for a fresh one. I am tempted to cross these instructions out,
because I like to find my own blocking and business in rehearsal, but,
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Right after the “I hate Mabel” line, I'll highlight “sucks his teeth”
with a question mark, since it provokes Angel’s next line, “...how
come you're just sittin’ around here cleaning your teeth?” Although
he doesn't really have to be sucking his teeth; if he were using a
toothpick that would also justify the line. I would want to make sure
in rehearsal that the actor playing Stephen can suck his teeth credibly
before committing to the teeth-sucking business. (Ifa star is playing
the role, there probably won’t have been an audition in which to find
this out.) At this point, I’ll go back to the beginning and highlight
“sucks his teeth” there too.
About halfway through, “He snatches the pencil from behind her
ear.” I would probably highlight that with a question mark. This bit
of stage business may have been written by the author but is just as
likely to have been taken from the first production of the play.
Whether it was thought up by the author or the first director of the
piece, you are free to steal it, but you are also free to come up with a
different bit of business of your own. As the director, I’m not sure I’d
use it, but I might want to at least try it (among other ideas) in
rehearsal. All other neighboring stage directions (“exasperated,”
“mumbling irascibly,” etc.) are results, so | cross them out.
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I’m going to highlight the business of her pouring the coffee into
a mug, and him pouring it back into his paper cup. Some activity is
needed to justify his line, “I told ya, I’m leavin’ in less’n two min-
utes.” Also I like it. I definitely want to try this idea in rehearsal.
But I am not married to it. If it should happen not to work, Pll find
something else.
It’s okay for writers to put such directions in for the convenience
of the producers. In fact, producers usually judge the writing by the
stage directions as much as by the dialogue. So remember that the
best-written, most evocative stage directions use verbs, facts, images, _
_events, and physical tasks instead of adjectives and explanations
whenever possible (for example, “She takes off her glasses and rubs
her eyes,” instead of “tiredly”). But once a script has a green light and
has been turned over to the director and designers and actors, the
writer must send his characters out into the world the way a parent
sends out the children when they turn eighteen. You must trust that
they have learned good values; you have to believe that you have
done all you can.
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If you are relaxed and open, there are two benefits you may get
from reading out loud. You may get new ideas — or questions.
Questions are better yet. In any case, you might want to jot them
down briefly, because if you are doing this properly — that is, if you
are in the moment — you might not remember them later.
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The second benefit of reading aloud is that this can begin the
process of owning the characters. Just as each actor must “own” his
own character, the director must own each of the characters, sepa-
rately. At this point you have not yet begun figuring out what the
words mean. You are allowing them to find breath and voice in your
own body. You are beginning to take them off the page.
PARAPHRASING
Then you can start putting their lines into your own words. Does
this sound a bit radical? I don’t know. This idea is based on a very
effective exercise I use in my classes. I ask the student to say the lines
of a monologue she has learned. Then I ask her to tell me what is
going on in the speech, what she understands about the character
from it, starting with the words “This is a character who...” | tell her
that her paraphrase can be any length: it can be much longer than the
speech or much shorter; it can go far afield; in effect, she can say
anything that pops into her head. After this I tell her to do the same
thing again — again putting the speech in her own words, allowing
her impulses to take her wherever they go — only changing the pro-
noun from “she” to “I” when she speaks of the character.
The purpose here is not rewriting the script, but “owning” the
characters and accessing your intuition about them. Ideas often sur-
face that you didn’t even know you had.
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I make a big fuss with my students about the words “It’s just...”
I call them the two greatest enemies of an artist. Instead of “It’s just
a love scene,” say “It’s a love scene.” Instead of “He's just apolo-
gizing to his mother,” say “He’s apologizing to his mother.” Do
you see what a big difference that is? A good director inspires the
actors. “She’s just waiting for the doctor’s report.” “It’s just a con-
frontation between two friends.” “He’s just being sarcastic to the
judge.” You can’t expect to inspire anyone when you minimize such
important events. Our artistic goal is to illuminate human events,
not minimize them.
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One of the best things that can happen on a First Read is that there
will be lines that you don’t understand, and that don’t fit. An unfortu-
nate tendency in Hollywood today is to rewrite such lines, to make
everything fit, without an attempt to find out what they might mean.
Anytime you find a line that you don’t like or doesn’t make sense,
I suggest that you make a quick list of three things it might possibly
mean. Don’t try to find the right answer but, rather, without evalu-
ating your ideas, scribble them down.
Let's take Angel’s line, “Whos gettin’ a back pack?” Why does she
say this (other than to set up the joke of Stephen’ next line)? She just
asked him what he was getting from the coupon book. Why doesn’t
she seem to understand that “back pack” is the answer to her question?
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Stephen that for a moment she can’t connect the two. For instance,
maybe she has a sister who is a Girl Scout leader and was talking
about back packs for her troup yesterday; hearing the term jolts her
mind back to that conversation and it takes a moment to allow “back
pack” to be part of this conversation. 2) Maybe as soon as she hears
the words “back pack” she associates it with Stephen’s departure,
which perhaps he has spoken of on other occasions. Maybe the
image of him leaving is too painful to process quickly. 3) Maybe she
engaged in some physical — or mental — activity that requires a lot
of concentration. Maybe she is scrubbing the coffee machine. Or
perhaps she is totaling the receipts from yesterday or making up the
orders tor the vendors who will make deliveries today.
If you open yourself to the idea that any line might have more
than one meaning, you won't lose your equilibrium when an actor
doesn’t relate to something in the script that you have found com-
pelling or beautiful or funny, and you won't panic when the actor
interprets it differently. Then, too, you can use the “Technique of
Three Possible” with actors who are resisting a line, to get them
turned on. When they say, “This doesn’t make sense to me,” you can
ask, “Well, what could it possibly mean?”
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For the “Forrest Gump” scene in which Forrest calls the front desk
to complain about the noisy Watergate burglars, the director in script
analysis (and the actor in performance) must put their concentration
not on how funny the scene is going to be but on some reality behind
it — for instance, that Forrest is a light sleeper.
At some point you might try reading aloud the lines of one char-
acter at a time. For this technique, you don’t even read silently the
words of the other characters or any stage directions, and you don’t
try to make sense of the scenes. You read all his or her lines one after
the other, slowly, in full voice. Something may come to you. Perhaps
you may want to read the script with another person. Don’t try to act
the roles or the scenes. Instead, look at each other as much as pos-
sible, switching around roles from scene to scene. Or (this is my
favorite) read the whole script aloud to another person. Don’t read
the character names or any stage directions, even circled or high-
lighted ones.
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I call the facts and images of the script immutable because they
are not subject to interpretation; they are in the script. They are a
wonderful place to start for these reasons:
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Facts are very powerful for actors — the magic “as if.” The actor
creates a set of simple circumstances, allows himself to believe them,
and then functions as if he were in those circumstances. For the pur-
poses of this exercise we will treat the scene from “When You Comin’
Back, Red Ryder?” as if it were a complete script. Ifwe were making
this movie, planning a rehearsal of this scene, we would of course
examine the full script for facts. Working on one scene as if it is a full
script is an exercise to teach you script analysis techniques which in
the real world would be applied to a whole script.
Some facts will be clear; others we will deduce. We’re not going
to insist that the writer spell everything out; instead we’ll look for
evidence and follow clues. But we’re not going to pretend to have
any facts that we don’t actually have. We’re not going to make
assumptions, judgments, or jump to conclusions; we’re going to stick
to facts. This is detective work. In a way we'll use some of the rules
of court. For instance, hearsay is not admissible; just because a char-
acter says something is true, we won’t automatically call it a fact. We
will look for circumstantial evidence to back it up.
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The stronger evidence that she does work there is her final line,
“In the three weeks since the by-pass opened, Stephen, you know
exactly how many customers you had in the nights? You wanna know
exactly how many, Stephen?” The way I understand this line is by
looking for the event behind it. First of all 1 recall what I know about
small diners (I used to work in one). At the end of each shift, the
order tickets were collected and put in numerical order and stacked
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neatly so that the next morning the manager could go through them
and compare them to the cash register totals. Angel’s shift (ifwe end
up proving that Angel does work there) follows Stephen’s. So if she
does work there, she is in a position, each morning, to count
Stephen’s tickets; maybe it’s even her job to do so. Unpacking the
fact behind this line (also called “justifying” the line), and finding that
it jells with earlier evidence pointing to the likelihood that she does
work there, confirms that deduction.
Maybe she’s not actually late. When I was waitressing, the other
waitresses used to habitually arrive a half hour early for their shift; if
they arrived exactly on time, they considered themselves late, as did the
waitresses they were relieving! If I were directing this scene J might
want to suggest this little adjustment to the actress, to give her another
layer. (See Column 6 of Chart 3, “Imaginative Choices,” page 207.)
The line “My mom and me, our daily fight was a little off
schedule today” is strong evidence, although not actual proof, that
they live together (they could live separately but speak on the phone
every morning). Her calling it a “daily fight” does not actually mean
they fight every day, but it might fee/ like it’s every day. Her mother,
if asked, might claim that she and her daughter never fight!
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Is this a fact? “Stephen doesn’t want Angel to call him Stephen.” No. All
we can say as a fact is that there has been at least one conversation
between the two of them on the subject of his name. Even though he
says, “How many times I gotta tell ya...,” it still may have been only once;
for some people, twice is too many times to discuss certain subjects.
QUESTIONS
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questions are answered. Make a big list of them. Ifa character says,
“Why are you shouting?” instead of assuming that the second char-
acter is shouting, ask questions: Is the other guy shouting? Or does
the first guy have a low threshold? Could it be that what actually
bothers him is the content of what the second guy said?
What is the thing he has to take care of? It may be that as soon
as the thing he is referring to gets “taken care of” there will be
another thing to take care of, but even so, it is something specific.
With whom does he liver Does he live with his parents? Could there
be abuse or alcoholism in the family? Is it possible that he has to fix
his mother’s life before he can leave?
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technique you will find it cleaner, and more liberating than psychol-
ogizing, explaining, or gossiping about the characters.
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to ask yourself, what was she going to say? The longer and more
thoroughly you work on a script, the more such questions will crop
up, which is good. The things that bother you can bring the most
creativity, like the grain of sand that becomes a pearl by irritating
the oyster. Sometimes when I do this kind of work with writer-
directors, and start opening them to the subworld of the story they
wrote themselves, instead of congratulating themselves on their
good writing, they want to rewrite the script, putting in the subtext!
Don’t do it! Don’t fix! Don’t bury! Instead, question, daydream,
spin stories. You will enrich the script with layers of association and
understanding. And don’t forget, the best way to direct actors is by
asking questions.
RESEARCH
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First Pll identify images from the “Red Ryder” scene, listing the
images separately for each character. Angel talks about the
“schedule” of her “daily fight” with her mother, and about Stephen’s
“cigarette coupons”; she uses the word “stupid”; she mentions
Stephen’s nickname “Red” and her own name, “Angel.” She talks
about Stephen “cleaning your teeth,” the “films,” the Raleigh coupon
“gift book,” “the FBI,” and “camping.” She talks about tattoos: ones
that are “out of style,” as well as “tattoos that say Love and Peace.”
She mentions “Lyle,” “customers,” and the “bypass.”
The free association technique goes something like the riff I did
with the image “rain” in the section on Images from the Actors’
Choice chapter. We float around on the image, jotting down what-
ever pops into our heads in response to it, ranging as freely and
widely as possible, without censoring ourselves, not worrying about
whether anything we come up with is actually useful. Maybe a tny
amount of what we come up with, say ten percent, will be useful. In
order to do a meaningful script analysis, you need to spend tyme on it.
Okay. Let’s start with the “schedule” of Angel’s “daily fight” with
her “mom.” “Daily fight schedule” makes me think of daily flight
schedule, airplanes, airports, two-seater planes, big jets, air traffic
control. “Fight schedule” also makes me think of heavyweight title
bouts, Muhammed Ali, George Forman, Mike Tyson (rape, prison,
Barbara Walters), and fight gyms; I have never been in a fight gym
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but I imagine them as dark, with low ceilings, cement walls, noises of
punching bags, grunts, sounds of flesh being struck by boxing gloves.
Then I think about fights without hitting, verbal fights, family fights.
Now we're getting closer. Why did I have tq go through “air traffic
control” and “fight gyms,” which were clearly off the mark of any-
thing useful for this scene, before I got to “family fights,” which is
apparently what Angel is talking about?
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What about the images of the title? When we look at the title,
we are looking for thematic images, rather than the characters’ per-
sonal images, as we have been doing. “Red Ryder” sounds western
but has no specific associations for me. However, my husband told
me (my external research) that he remembered Red Ryder as a very
famous comic book cowboy hero of his youth. Could “heroism” turn
out to be a theme of the script? Without the full script we won’t be
able to make this determination. We can make a note that external
research to learn more about the comic book hero Red Ryder 1s going
to be needed.
The image and association exercise can even have practical appli-
cations. “Tattoos that say Love and Peace” gives us a pretty good
idea that the script is set in the early seventies. “Donut” conjures up
for me associations around the stale diner donuts I have encountered
in my life: the Plexiglas donut display case, which rocks slightly
when you open it, the glaze from a glazed donut smeared against the
inside of the Plexiglas, the sugar stuck to my fingers when I pick one
up; sugar donuts, jelly donuts, chocolate donuts, crullers; the dif-
ferent sensations of breaking open a stale, dry sugar donut as com-
pared to a fresh jelly donut; dunking, my Uncle Andy, who used to
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While you are thinking about images, you might take note of the
people, places, and things the characters talk about that are not pre-
sent: Angel's mother, Clark, Lyle, and truck drivers; the freeway
~~bypass, the back pack Stephen has ordered from the Raleigh coupon
book, the coupon book itself. The actors will need to have substitu-
tions, either personal or imaginative, for all these off-camera people
and things. If you make a note of them now, when you get to casting
you can remember to notice whether the actors, when they speak
these words, are talking about something real, or merely saying lines.
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1. History (BACKSTORY)
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Actors and writers often write biographies of their characters.
These are facts that are not in the script. Since they are not in the
script, they are only facts if they work, if they stimulate the imagi-
nations of the actors and catapult them into their sense of belief in
the moment.
If they have known each other, are they the same age? Were they
in the same grade? Were they good students? Was either of them
ever kept back a grade? What kind of friends did each hang out with?
Was it the popular crowd? Were their families acquainted? What
were their impressions of each other? Is it possible that they ever had
anything like a date? If so, what happened?
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Now what if they met at their jobs in the diner. Who was there
first? Maybe Angel has lived all her life in this town, and Stephen
appeared on the scene a year ago. Maybe she befriended him. What
if a few months after he arrived, he played some hurtful practical joke
on her? Making such an adjustment is different from making the
judgment that he is a mean person, and it is more specific. Again, do
internal, external and script research on any of these ideas. What
practical jokes have you played on people? What jokes have been
played on you? Ask other people for their experiences with practical
jokes. Keep rereading the script to see if there is evidence to support
this idea.
What we are after here are stories that may help catapult the actor
into his sense of beliefin the character’s situation. An important pur-
pose of a director's script analysis is to prepare yourself to tell these
stories vividly and feelingly.
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life gives it a “texture of life,” a sense that the scene is “in the middle
of” something.
How long has Stephen been sitting on that stool? What article has
he been reading in the newspaper? How many customers were there
that night? Who specifically were they? Was it chilly in the empty
diner? I have worked graveyard shifts, so I have a place to start imag-
ining the previous eight hours of Stephen’s life. If you never have
worked a graveyard shift, have you ever been awake all night in a
lonely place? Can you imagine it? Do you know anyone who has
worked graveyard shifts that you might talk to (research)? As much
as possible, create in your imagination the sensory details: the colors
of the walls, the broken linoleum tiles, the changing taste of the
coffee as the night wears on, crossword puzzles he might try to get
interested in, fantasies, naps.
For Angel, how did she arrive at work? Did she drive? Walk?
Take the bus? Get dropped off? What is the weather like? Is it
warmer or cooler when she walks into the diner (is there air-condi-
tioning?)? Did she wash her hair this morning?
3. OBJECTIVE/INTENTION/NEED
During your script analysis, you should come up with as many candi-
dates for each character’s objective as you can think of. If you're not
sure what a character’s objective is, don’t anguish over it but make
notes anyway. If you don’t have good ideas, jot down three bad ideas
to at least get you started. If you are sure what the objective is, jot
down three other possibilities anyway. If you are so sure you know
what the objective is that you can’t think of any others, then at least
jot down the opposite of your idea.
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While you are learning how to analyze scripts and work with
objectives, you should follow this rule: one objective per scene
per character (unless it’s a scene with three or more people in it;
then each character may have a different objective for each of the
other characters).
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Let’s look at some possible objectives for the “Red Ryder” scene.
I'm going to come up with three for each character, and I'll try to
make them different from each other. First let’s take Stephen.
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trouble at home? Could he hang out at the diner past his shift
so he doesn’t have to go home to face the problems there?
I’m also basing the idea on events in the scene: she does take
care of him (cleans up his mess, brings him coffee and
donut). Maybe her behavior is a response to his unarticu-
lated need. He even uses the phrase “taken care of.” Maybe
the presence of that phrase in his emotional storage banks
reveals his own need.
3) “Stephen wants Angel to treat him with respect,
treat him like a man.” Maybe we should take this all the way
and say he wants to be a hero. I’m taking this from the image
in the title of the piece, “Red Ryder,” a cowboy hero. He
doesn’t seem to do things that might make people treat him
with respect or think of him as a hero, but don’t forget,
people often do the wrong thing to get what they want.
How about Angel? I think it’s possible that she wants him to like
her, or to make it more specific, wants him to ask her to go to the
movies tonight. Another possibility might be that she wants him to
respect her intelligence and wit. She could want him to leave. She
could want him to stay. She could want him to do his job better, leave
the place cleaner after his shift, follow rules, etc. Maybe she needs to
be needed.
One thing you really want to watch out for is any inclination
you might have to say that either Stephen or Angel is “just reacting”
to the other one, or that either of them doesn’t care what the other
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one thinks. In other words, leaving them with nothing at stake in
the scene.
5. ACTION VERBS
The action verb is what the character is doing to get what she
wants. Sometimes the whole scene will work with one action verb.
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This could mean that she is getting what she wants and has no need
to change what she is doing to get it; or it could suggest a rigidity
to the character’s personality. Often the verb changes when the
“beat” changes. iy “
If you have in your mind a certain look or sound for a certain line,
you might want to translate it into a verb. For example, if in your
mind you see the character shouting with a raised fist, perhaps the
action verb you want on that line is “to threaten,” or it might be “to
incite”; it might even be “to beg.”
Some directors and teachers say that for preparation you should
find an action verb for each line. For a beginner there is danger that
this approach will keep you stuck in mechanically translating the pre-
conceived ways you hear the line in your head into a verb. Finding
the verb for each line is not a substitute for understanding the scene’s
central emotional event and the characters’ through-lines.
Even though it’s on my “Short List,” I suggest that you stay away
from “to convince.” “To convince” is tepid; -it is often a way of not
doing something else. For example, when I ask my students to play
the intention “to accuse,” they sometimes take that to mean they
must convince the other person to admit that he is wrong. This is
what we might do in daily life — it’s the more socially acceptable
behavior — but probably not as dramatic. (Although it would be
preferable to have the actor convince X to admit he is wrong simply
and honestly than to have him “accuse” in an overwrought actorish
“movie” manner that becomes an attempt to convince us of the truth
of the words.)
Actually any of the verbs on the Short List are possible for either
Stephen or Angel. It might be hard to imagine Stephen flirting,
coaxing, soothing, or encouraging, but you could be surprised. If an
actor played his lines with an intention “to soothe,” it would be called
“playing the opposite” or “playing against the lines.” You shouldn't
rule it out without seeing an expert actor try it.
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6. ADJUSTMENTS
Adjustments are among the most powerful tools a director can
have. They are an invitation to “let’s pretend.” Directors who are
able to come up with perceptive and enticing adjustments are rare,
and adored by actors.
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7. SUBTEXT
8. PHYSICAL LIFE
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Now. You don’t need to talk to actors about all these elements of the
characterization. You don’t sit them down with the charts and map it
all out. The reason for so many columns is to give you flexibility.
Very possibly you will end up with a favorite way of analyzing char-
acters and giving direction. You might prefer to use images or adjust-
ments or intentions more than the others. Actors too have favorite
ways of looking at things. It’s good to have more than one approach.
If one doesn’t work, you have a backup.
The choice of a tool can illuminate the style of the script. Some
scripts are driven by the characters’ objectives, some are driven by
guiding subtextural images, some will just not work without a whole-
sale leap of faith into an imagined reality. Choosing to talk to the
actors in terms of images instead of verbs, for example, can support
the style of the movie.
The choices are completely mutable and playful unlike the facts
and images of the script. It doesn’t matter what the actor’s choice is
as long as it works. It doesn’t matter if you and the actor agree on the
choice, if it works. When an actor comes up with an idea for a choice,
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EVENTs: CHART 4
So really the “beats” are the bits, the little sections of a scene.
Stanislavsky called them “units.” The simplest, best way to identity
them is by swhject — when the subject changes, that is a new beat.
‘The great thing about this method of determining beats is that it is
an objective way of figuring them out. Deciding beats by identi-
fying changes in mood is not a good way for two reasons: First of
all, “mood” is very subjective; it will be easy to get into arguments
with the producer or writer or actor about where such changes take
place. Second, deciding changes in mood brings you perilously
close to emotional mapmaking. We don’t want to make an emo-
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scene. We want to find out what the scene is about, and its central
emotional event.
Column 2 is the subject of that beat (some people call it the title
of the beat); Column 3 is the name of the character who brings that
subject up. I always need to go through a scene several times before
I discern its structure. On the first pass, I look only for the informa-
tion in Columns | through 3.
Before reading on, you might want to take a look at the “Red
Ryder” scene and break down its beats on your own.
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Beat 10: from “You better let...” to the end of the scene.
Subject: hitchhiking. Brought up by Angel.
Seer ‘This first step is easy; the more simplemindedly you do it,
the better. Now, we go through again, refining our ideas by looking
at Columns 4 and 5.
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This is one way of defining the first major beat. So far neither
one of them has taken a loss. No matter what they are handed, they
come right back at the other one. We could call this (up through
Small Beat 5) the First Major Beat or section, with the subject or title
“a match of wits” or “sparring.” Then I would have to call the
Second Major Beat (Small Beats 6, 7, and 8) “Stephen’s plans.” This
shift could be seen as Angel taking her “loss” and moving to new sub-
jects (films, the coupon book). The event of this Second Major Beat
is that Angel makes the discovery that Stephen is taking concrete
steps toward a departure from his life in that town.
In the Third Major Beat (Small Beat 10) the event is that she
blocks his escape, and Stephen loses it, threatening to go “to the
cemetery” if his proposals are not respected. “That's how I thought of
it on my second pass. But on my third pass I found that coupon book
nagging at me. It actually is first mentioned in what I’ve called the
First Major Beat. Maybe the coupon book marks the beginning of
the Second Major Beat. In this construction, the First Major Beat is
Small Beats 1 and 2; the Second Major Beat is Small Beats 3 through
8 (subject, “Stephen’s plans”), but with a time-out for sparring, insti-
gated by Stephen (in this configuration, the “names” beat is the only
beat he introduces), perhaps to deflect the subject of his plans.
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Now what about Small Beat 9? I’m starting to feel that the cen-
tral event of the scene is “a threat of desertion” — ie., Angel’s dis-
covery of Stephen’s imminent departure. So perhaps the Third
Major Beat consists of Small Beats 9 and 10 —Angel’s reaction to the
news. First she makes a joke (“rye or whole wheat”), then she blocks
his departure. This seems to reveal an ABA structure. The sparring
of the first major beat (beginning) could be the foundation of their
relationship. The second major beat (middle) contains the event of
the scene: a threat of desertion. Then the third major beat (end)
returns to the sparring, but with raised stakes.
scene can become. pretentious. . In her interview for the “Inside the
Actors Studio” series, Glenn Close said that the thing she needs from
a director when she is stuck is to be put on the track of what she called
_“the simplest, simplest truth.” I think she meant that actors can get
too much in their heads when they are juggling adjustments and
sometimes need to be reminded of the simple, domestic event.
The beats, the tiny events leading up to and resulting from the
central event of the scene, must be followable by the audience in |
order to tell the story. chang
The beat es may be punctuated with ~
movement of some kind (it can be very subtle movement, évén the
flicker of an eyelid), or by a change in action verb.
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The food beat (Small Beat 9) occurs rightafter the central emo-
tional event (the discovery of Stephen’s plans, or his threat of deser-
tion). It makes sense that there would be activity around here.
Activity around the donut and the coffee refill can help both
characters deflect and channel their feelings about the breaking
of this news.
We now have an idea for the event of the scene. This leads us to
a decision as to what the scene is about. My idea that the event of the
scene is a threat of rejection leads me to say (provisionally) that the
scene is about a failed love affair. I don’t mean by this that I think
Angel and Stephen have ever slept together, but, rather, that in
directing the scene I think I will want to illuminate the ways that
these two could be a good match for each other, as well as the forces
in and around them that make a match impossible. This is my vision
of the scene.
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What I have done here is wot direct the scene. ‘The scene is not
directed until the actors are present. What I have done is prepare to
direct the scene by investigating its structure.
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the sake of a woman, and losing her anyway, is central to this complex
movie, even though the title was changed to exclude that specific
image. The director of “The Fugitive Kind,” Sidney Lumet, has said
that for him the movie was about “the struggle to preserve what is
sensitive and vulnerable both in ourselves and the world,” a construct
that I think encompasses all these images.
It can be phrased as a spine or a verb. You might say that the spine
of “I Never Sang for My Father” is “to forgive.” Or the central or
climactic event of a movie may tell us what it is about. The climactic
event of “Casablanca” is a sacrifice: Rick gives up his claim (the claim
of true love, no less) on Ilsa, for the good of the cause. When we look
at the rest of the movie, we see the theme of “sacrifice” throughout.
When you are figuring out what the film is about, you must not
neglect the domestic event. In other words, even though I said ear-
lier that “The Godfather” is about family, or loss, rather than about
the Mafia, it is, of course, about a Mafia family. The filmmaker must
make the daily details of such a family specific and real, or else the
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SPINE
The spine, at least of the main character, and probably all the
characters, will relate somehow to the central theme or themes of the
script, but not necessarily in a linear fashion. Even though “Tootsie”
is about a man who, by dressing up as a woman, becomes more of a
man, that doesn’t mean that “to become more of a man” is Michael
Dorsey's spine. His spine, both as Michael and as Dorothy, is, I think,
“to rock the boat.” This spine does nor change, even though the char-
acter undergoes a transformation, from a man whose boat-rocking
makes him an oafish know-it-all, to a man who is ready to focus his
boat-rocking impulses on the challenges of a committed relationship.
The once or twice ina lifetime that a person’s spine might change
are only at the very big life events, such as war or disaster, marriage,
the death of a loved one, or giving birth. After one has a child, for
example, one’s priorities must change to include caring and providing
for the child. This could cause a complete change in the person's
spine, but not necessarily. If his spine was always “family,” then the
birth of a child reinforces but does not substantively change that
spine. It’s also possible that if his spine was always “success,” raising
children fits into that spine rather than changes it.
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for the whole script. You could almost call it the solution to the char-
acter, because once found, you can hang the entire script on it.
This spine will be more useful to the actor and the director than
describing Paul by saying that he is closed off at the beginning of the
movie but opens up by the end of the movie (his arc or transforma-
tion). Let’s look factually at his behavior. At the beginning of the
movie 1) he writes every day; 2) he goes to the smoke shop every day
(he could buy his cigarettes weekly but instead buys a daily ration); 3)
in the first scene, he even tells the smoke shop habitués a story. What
I notice from these facts is that even at the beginning of the movie he
does work, and he does maintain a (minimal) daily human contact. In
the pain of his loss, this is the maximum connection to the world that
he can tolerate; it isn’t much, but it is something. He might have
gone on for years at this minimal level. :
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His transforming event comes when the young man saves him
from being run over by the truck. It’s easy to get caught thinking
that Paul’s walking absently into the traffic indicates a death wish.
But what I think is important about this incident is not that Paul
walked in front of the truck, but his behavior toward the young man
who saves him. He thanks him — the most expressive behavior we
have so far seen from him (I’m not critiquing the actor’s perfor-
mance here, but examining the structure of the script). A whole
series of events ensue from this incident: Paul reaches out to the
world, pulls back, reaches out a bit farther, two steps forward, one
step back, but steadily opening up.
A spine can be simple, and often is simple. But watch out for
ideas that are merely glib or obvious. In one of my classes we did an
analysis of the spine for the Hugh Grant character in “Four
Weddings and a Funeral.” We accepted “to get married” and “to stay
uncommitted” as candidates, but kept reviewing the facts and events
of the script to see ifwe could come up with something better, since
those ideas seemed so obvious. (Of course we rejected the construct
“he wants to stay uncommitted until [X] — and then he wants to get
married” because that is not a spine at all.)
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Someone in this class was British and assured the rest of us that,
by reason of the character’s behavior and accent, we could accept as a
fact that he was upper class. It was then interesting to note that the
one woman he could not get out of his heart was an American.
Maybe his spine was “to reject his very British background.” After
some noodling around we noticed the fact that “he has a younger
brother with a disability” (the brother is deaf) — a circumstance that
we know from life would significantly affect a person, and might even
determine his spine. We added to our list of possible spines, “to take
care of his brother.”
For me, the structure of the movie then fell into place. I could
picture a childhood suffused with the duty to put the needs of his
younger brother ahead of his own. The older brother could easily fall
into a kind of unconscious promise or bond with his childhood family
that might prevent him from making an adult commitment. And
voila! It is the brother’s action that precipitates the transforming
event. The younger brother stops the wedding and gets the main
character off the hook from the bad marriage (to which he would
never have been committed in his heart), freeing him to commit to
the right marriage, to Andie MacDowell. To me it makes perfect
emotional sense that the main character must get some extraordinary
permission from his brother before he can put anyone else
first in his life.
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SUMMARY
You don't sit down with the actors and show them your filled-
out charts. In fact, when you finish these charts you should prob-
ably burn them. The purpose of doing this work is not to fill out
charts but to understand the script. The main reason for
preparing is to go through your mediocre ideas so you can be
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ready for the great ideas that can happen when the actors arrive
and you begin the collaboration. The reason for preparing is not
to “pre-direct” the movie, but to gain confidence that you know
the characters and script inside out so yaqu can operate in the
moment in rehearsal and on the set. The notes, plans, and charts
are a jumping-off place from which to start being creative.
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Let me ask you first: what do you look for in casting sessions?
Most directors look for the performance that they have been running
in the moviola-of-their-mind. This is a big mistake.
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eyes glaze over, everyone starts to look the same, and they can’t
remember why they ever wanted to film this script in the first place.
Waiting to be knocked out by your dream lover is passive.
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How can you be active in the auditioning process? If you don’t
look for a performance, what should you look for?
That is, talent (the cards fate has dealt him, through birth
and experience) plus skill (what he has done to develop his
talent), including:
a) intuitive equipment: emotional range and flexi-
bility, sensitivity, intelligence, an ability to listen, to work
moment by moment, to be honest, to give himself inner
freedom and privacy in public, to make the imaginative leap
to a created reality.
b) acting skills: an ability to play a simple intention,
to play against (opposite to) the obvious reading of a line, to
create images, to be specific and insightful in his choices, to
make transitions cleanly, fully, and believably.
c) physical abilities: that is, range, flexibility, expres-
sivity, and skills in voice and movement.
d) artistic sensibility: taste, instincts, sense of humor,
sense of proportion.
e) heart: fearlessness, trust, commitment, emotional
and physical stamina, a need to perform.
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have had the same experiences as the character, but it will have some-
thing to do with his life experience as well as with his intelligence, sen-
sitivity, range, commitment, and skill.
If you can afford it, it’s very helpful to have a good casting director.
They know a lot of actors, and may come up with names you haven't
thought of, or even fresh casting ideas for some roles. Be sure you
are on the same wave length. Before you agree to work together,
have a frank, open discussion about your tastes and prejudices, and
your ideas about the characters. Arrange to view some of the casting
director's past work. Be sure the casting director has already read the
script and is excited about the project.
The bottom line is that you need to cast actors who can take
direction from you. By this I don’t mean actors who never question
your ideas or never counter them with ideas of their own — in fact I
mean just the opposite. I mean that you can communicate with each
other, that you have a mutual respect, and ideally that you mutually
spark and challenge and support each other's creativity; that being in
each other’s company helps you both to have ideas, that you turn each
other on, and that you both like to perform for each other.
There are actors who put the work ahead of their egos, who are
truly open — open to their resources, their feelings, understandings
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have actors read with each other in the first round of readings,
although usually in the first round you meet them one at a time. You
want to pick scenes that go somewhere, that have some transitions in
them. The casting director will have ideas. Usually scenes involving
astunts, nudity, or emotional breakdowns are not used for a first
reading, but it’s up to you. If you are casting a role with no good
audition scenes, you might choose a scene from another script, per-
haps a play, with a character that reminds you of the one you are
casting. By the way, the Screen Actors Guild requires that sides be
made available to actors a certain length of time ahead of their audi-
tion appointments. Check with your local Guild office. Even if you
are shooting a nonunion project, it’s good to get in practice abiding
by Guild rules.
If you have the actors audition (read) one at a time, I suggest you
have them read with someone who is not involved in the casting
process. If you have a casting director, usually she or an assistant will
offer to read with the actors, but it is helpful to bring in an outside
person, preferably an actor. This is because one of the most impor-
tant things you want to look for when you’re casting is actors who
listen, so you need to be able to see whether the actor plays off what
he is getting from his scene partner. This means the person reading
with him has to give him something to play off, which is very hard to
do if, at the same time, she is trying to make assessments of the actor’s
ability and what he has to offer the role. Some very good casting
directors have taught themselves to be able to do some giving and
taking with the actor at the same time as they are assessing the actor,
but it’s preferable to bring in an actor to read opposite the audi-
tioners. You can have the same actor for all roles; you don’t have to
have the right genders and ages, but someone who is giving the audi-
tioners something to work off. It’s a good idea to establish ahead of
time with this actor that he is not auditioning, but is helping you out.
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reads his lines exactly the same, no matter what he’s getting from the
other person, then you will have seen that the auditioning actor has
locked into a line reading, that he has low flexibility and doesn’t
listen. You want to cast people with flexibility, whose performance
changes when the actor opposite them changes. You can save your-
self a lot of hassle if you find that out in casting.
Before the actor starts to read, tell him you'd first like to hear him
read the scene the way he prepared it, and then you'll give him a
couple of different ways to play around with it. It’s helpful to
announce this ahead of time, because otherwise if he does it his way
and then you tell him to do it another way he’ assume that what he
did was wrong and what you are asking now is right. Setting up the
idea that there’s a right way to play the role is, in my opinion, getting
off on the wrong foot. Don’t forget that for the people you end up
casting, the casting session is your first rehearsal. You can say, “I'd
like to work with you a little bit, have you read the scene a few times,
some different ways, play around with it. I don’t care if you depart
from the script. I don’t care if you get the words exactly right.”
One thing you see the first time is the actor’s choices, both the
creativeness of the choices and whether they are specific and real, as
well as what they respond to about the text. And that’s what you
should be looking for, not a performance. Noting the creativeness
and specificity of the choices will give you information about the
actor’s ability. Noting what he seems to respond to in the text will
start to give you information about whether he’s right for the part.
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I feel it is important for you to cast actors who have ideas and are
willing to take risks; that is why I feel strongly that you should hear
what the actors have brought in before giving any direction. And
then, even if you hate what he did the first time, you should have him
read it again, with some direction, because you said you would. You
should make a note of how he was playing the role in the first
reading, to be sure that what you ask for next is in fact different. Use
objectives or adjustments rather than giving result direction. Instead
of “This is how I see the character...” or even “I want you to...,” try
saying, “What if...” or “Let’s try it this way...”
ee
If you ask the actors to do it a few different ways and they read it
the same way every time, that’s important information. You are
finding out if they can follow direction. You are also finding out if
they can play an objective or adjustment, and you will also get some
idea of their range. You may want to give them some time to work
on it; you might want to say, “I don’t need you to do it off the top of
your head, you can go out and think about it and come back. We'll
take you as soon as you are ready.” You want to see if they can make
this new idea their own and make it real for themselves, but it’s not
necessary that they be able to do this in ten seconds or less.
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There are unusual things you can do in casting: You can read with
the actors yourself. This goes against what I said earlier about having
the actors read with someone not involved in the decision-making.
But if you read with actors — as long as you don't do any performing
— you may be able to find actors you have a special affinity with. You
would need to have a high tolerance for eye contact and connection.
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which I do not hear their voice; in other words, I cast against type,
but I make a hunch as to what might izrerest them. A student will
often tell me later that the piece I chose for her was very meaningful.
That's what I think works in figuring out whether the actor is right
for the role — whether there will be something about the character
or his experience that captures the imaginative resources of the actor.
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of this level of prestige in order to get the financing. The stars must
be presented with a firm offer before they will even read the script.
This offer is made “subject to a meeting,” so both sides can get out of
it if the first meeting between actor and director goes badly. Unless
this offer meets the actor’s “price” which has been set by his agent,
the agent will not forward the offer or the script to the actor, or, usu-
ally, even inform the actor of the offer.
Sometimes once one star is attached to the project vou can ask him
to read with other actors in line for other roles. This is a good idea if
it can be worked out because, after all, you are casting relationships.
But maybe the best way to get a star in your movie will be to dis-
cover her yourself. What about Martin Scorcese and Harvey Keitel?
They met when Scorcese was shooting his first film as a student at
NYU. He advertised in a newspaper for an actor; Harvey Keitel, who
had never acted before, answered the ad on a whim. They have made
each other famous. You won't be able to be good at casting unless you
are interested in actors. Go to plays, go to independent films, look for
newcomers, find out who you like and what you like about them.
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REHEARSAL
“When I met Marty [Scorsese], I was keenly aware of my
meeting a part of myself. With Marty, I was getting to know myself
better. The work between us was never a case of ‘you walk over there
and then turn around.’ It was about finding what we were
searching for in my own being.” — Harvey Keitel
“I'd go through the fire for you, man; any time, any place, any
project.” — Don Cheadle, speaking to director Car] Franklin, as
Cheadle accepted his Los Angeles Film Critics best supporting
actor award for “Devil in a Blue Dress.”
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If you have a way of rehearsing and shooting that works for you,
you should keep using it. Some people may find the rehearsal ideas
of this chapter radical, even controversial. Like the script analysis
techniques, they are designed to defeat whatever inclination you may
have to do it “right,” so you can work lucidly, in the moment.
Some actors and directors fear rehearsal or say they don’t believe
in it. “They say that rehearsal kills the freshness and spontaneity of
performances. This is a misunderstanding of the function of
rehearsal, which is not to set out a connect-the-dots schema for the
actors to follow by rote, but to open up the possibilities of the script,
find its emotional and physical structure, and give the actors permis-
sion to play. What I think many directors (and actors) mean when
they say they don’t have time to rehearse or they don’t believe in
rehearsal is that they don’t know how to rehearse. And if you don’t
know how to rehearse, then you shouldn’t. Cast well, make sure the
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actors are listening to each other, and then back off. The harsh
reality is that rehearsal can be a disappointing and frustrating experi-
ence. [f all that is done is to set line readings and try for results,
whatever was good about the audition or first reading will be lost and
the work will only get worse.
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REHEARSAL PLAN
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Give them the ground rules for this reading. Tell them it is not a
performance, that they can do anything they want, move around, or not,
as they wish. You could say, “I want you to have some fun, meet each
other and hear the script read. I’m not looking for a performance.”
Decide ahead of time what stage directions you want read (as few
as possible) and find someone to read them. You might want to say
something like this: “[So and so] will read some of the stage direc-
tions but it doesn’t mean that we are married to them. As we go
deeper into rehearsals, we'll be aiming to create relationships rather
than execute stage directions.”
The director has the opportunity, which she should begin to avail
herself of at this first reading, to create a sacred atmosphere, the sense
that this is not just a job. | recommend that the first reading (some-
times called a “table reading”) take place in an open circle without any
tables, since the table can function as a barrier. In order to have
meaningful rehearsals of individual scenes, you must convey to the
cast your own dedication to the rehearsal process and instill in them
a seriousness of purpose.
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SCENE REHEARSAL
The goals of rehearsal are first, to make sure the actors listen and
work honestly, use themselves, and find some authentic connection
to the material; second, investigate the text: that is, explore ques-
tions, problems and possible meanings of individual lines, and solve
the structure of the scene (events, through-lines, and beats); third,
block the scene and find the physical life; fourth, establish the actor-
director relationship, set up your system of communication, hear and
try the actors’ ideas, and smoke out their resistances.
OPENING REMARKS
If you wish you can speak briefly about the theme of the script.
Even better, make simple, relaxed references to your own connection
to the material. For example, “My mom works in a state psychiatric
institute like the one in this script,” or, “The relationship between
these characters reminds me of my grandfather and grandmother,”
or, “Something like this happened to me once.” Steven Spielberg
speaks very openly in interviews about his personal connection,
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because of his parents’ divorce, to his movie “E.T.” Iam sure he must
have spoken as openly to the actors when he was directing.
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Sometimes if the actors listen and respond to each other and are
aware of the physical environment, that is enough to make the scene
come alive, and it’s better not to mess with it any further. The
director's final responsibility is to the events of the script, and some-
times the best way to realize the events is if the actors get out of the
way of the lines, that is, if they listen, and stay very simple. That way
the audience can at least hear the lines. If you only have a few min-
utes to rehearse, make sure the actors are relating (listening) to each
other. This includes making eye contact unless there is a good
reason not to. Then add some simple physical life, and voila! The
scene is directed.
THROUGH-LINES
Find out the actors’ ideas about what is going on the scene for
their character. If an actor has an idea, that’s good, even if it’s dif-
ferent from your idea. It gives her honesty and energy, a connection.
Don’t make her wrong but, rather, build on what she gives you. For
example, if she says, “I think this happens all the time in this rela-
tionship,” you can say, “Yes, I was wondering about that. What have
their previous arguments been like? Or could this be the first time
this particular issue has come up?” Rehearsal is a place to try out
ideas, so try out the actors’ ideas, too. ‘Try it both ways: run through
it one time as if there have been many other discussions on the same
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topic; and a second time as if this is the first time it has come up. Or
improvise the last conversation of this topic (I'll speak more about
improv a little later). You may be surprised and delighted by the new
information brought to light by an improv. You have to let go of fears
about your status or ego. Your purpose in having prepared thor-
oughly (via script analysis) for rehearsal was not to get rigid about
your ideas, but to feel relaxed and open, to give you the natural
authority of knowledge and preparedness. Then the actors’ ideas will
not feel like a threat but will feed and strengthen your authority.
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rehearsal, the rule of thumb is to find the through-line first and then
add layers and beats.
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Use only one of these tools at a time. The reason for coming up,
during script analysis, with ideas for all these different directing tools
is so you will have several to choose from, and so you will have
another idea if the first one doesn’t work. Whatever you do, don’t
give the actor a laundry list all at once, of backstory and objective and
adjustment and action verb and images and physical life, etc. Work on
one thing at a time.
LAYERS
If the actors are listening and you don’t like the way it comes out,
you night add a layer. Some people use the term “colors” or “levels”
for what [am calling choices or adjustments or layers, as in, “Let's see
if we can add another color here.” Or you might try a different
through-line choice, say, “get her to take care of you” instead of “get
her to feel sorry for you.” But you don’t need to give a specific sug-
gestion as to the choice to try next; it’s okay to say, “I’m wondering if
we need a stronger choice here.”
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WORKING IN BEATS
You recall that in the chapter on script analysis I said the major
beats could function as rehearsal units. It is hardly ever a good idea
to rehearse a whole scene al] the way through over and over. After
you have run it through once or twice or so, to establish listening and
connect with through-lines, break it down into beats; that is, work in
sections. Each scene has either two or three (sometimes four) major
beats; an extremely short scene may have only one.
Don’t describe the content and transitions of all the beats and
then run the whole scene. Work on one beat, perhaps after some
brief discussion or direction; then work on the next beat. When you
work on the second beat, don’t rerun the scene from the top; isolate
that one beat and put your attention to it.
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observed in life, and comments about what you see going on in the
actors’ faces and bodies during rehearsal. You are directing.
REHEARSAL GUIDELINES = 7
If you feel they are not endowing their images and given circum-
stances, you can try telling better stories, using questions, images, and
your own personal associations with the material. For instance, you
might say, “Have you ever been stranded in a hurricane? I was once.”
Or you can say something like “I understand you're not making a full
investment now in rehearsal. I know you will keep working on that.”
You might ask while discussing choices, “Is that something you can
connect with?” Or, “Is that something you can make real for your-
self?” You can always ask questions about how they like to work.
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But don't let them work at low volume. Often when actors are
not speaking loud enough it means they are worried about doing it
“right” and are afraid to take a chance on committing to a choice. Or
they haven't found a choice they can commit to, and more work
needs to be done to find it. Sometimes they are holding on to an
emotion and not giving it to the other actor. If you have not yet
acquired the skill to feel confident talking about the problem, it’s all
right simply to say. “We need more volume.”
Notice whether you are repeating the same direction over and
over. That means it isn’t working or the actor doesn’t understand it
or is resisting it. When an actor says, “Tell me again what we’re
doing here” or, “I’m trying to take this all in,” those are clues that
your direction is confusing or too elaborate.
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| These are all suggestions to get you off the track of result direction. You
will want to find your own ways of putting things. The better you get with
this the more you will feel you are communicating rather than using jargon.
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Don’t let the actors direct each other. As soon as you notice an
actor coming forth with opinions about how someone else’s character
could be played, take steps tactfully but firmly to discourage it. You
can use the language of permission, something like “You don’t need
to worry about that. I can take care of it.” Let the actors know that
you welcome all their ideas but that their ideas should be imparted
privately to you, not to the other actors, the producer, the writer, or
anyone else. Keep the actors from making bargains with each other.
Don’t confuse “getting comfortable,” which is a proper purpose of
rehearsal, with an actor retreating to his “comfort zone,” which is
never a good thing. The purpose of maintaining an atmosphere in
which actors can be deeply relaxed, open and free, is to encourage
them to be receptive to obstacles. Don’t let them take out the obsta-
cles. You may wish to talk to the actors separately about their work
and their choices. I talk to actors separately in the early part of
rehearsal; if rehearsal is going well, soon the actors are sponta-
neously working with privacy in public and don’t even hear what [am
saying to the other actor.
Sometimes when one actor is very strong and you work with the
other actor for a while, to bring him up to his level, he gets better and
then the other actor gets weak! You need to keep at it, going back
and forth. Sometimes you can get a scene to work by working with
only one of the actors. It may be best to work with the one who is ,
strongest, who may then be able to carry the weaker actor. If you
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If the actors resist such exercises, you might say, “It’s too dead-
on, I want to do something wrong to shake this up, to get the rela-
tionship more fresh.” Or, “You guys seem stiff. I have an idea about
something that might loosen up the situation. Are you willing to try
it?” If they say no, you can say, “Well, we have a problem; you tell
me how we're going to solve it. The acting has gotten a bit stiff here
and I want to get back to the ping-pong, the give and take. How do
you work? Tell me what I can do for you.”
IMPROV
Some actors don’t like improv. They may be afraid it’s not really
improv, that the director is expecting a certain result and not telling
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them what it is. There must be freedom and trust for improv to
work. Improv is not a frivolous undertaking; it is a sacred tool, a door
to the subconscious. Whatever unconscious material is brought to
light in improv must be respected. There is no such thing as an
improv that is “wrong.”
1) Paraphrasing
You can invite the actors to put the lines of the scene in
their own words. This can take them off the effort to prove
to us that the lines are true, and allow them to make the
images, impulses, and activities of the character their own.
For instance, let’s say the two actors rehearsing the “Red
Ryder” scene had voiced in discussion their belief that the two
characters didn’t like each other or get along at all; then let’s
say they had done a read-through of the scene with objectives
“to pick a fight,” which had gone fairly well. Next, you, as
director, could suggest an improv on the facts of the scene,
which are simple: Angel and Stephen work at the same diner;
Angel lives (or speaks daily) with her mother; her shift fol-
lows his; the diner has very few customers; there has been a
previous conversation between the two of them on the subject
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Let's say that [the other actor] agreed with you to learn lines
before rehearsal, then didn’t learn them. Punish him for it.”
Then go into the lines of the scene.
6) Silent improvs
You can ask the actors to play the scene as if the “third
character” about whom they are speaking or thinking is actu-
ally in the room. I have seen this technique bring a scene to
life in extraordinary ways.
8) Improvise!
Design your own improvs. Try to keep your setups for improv
physical and factual rather than abstract and psychological.
Improvs are often longer than the scene. The actors are spon-
taneously speaking the subtext of the scene. Sometimes they
become so excited about their inventions that they then want to add
some of the lines that they have improvised to the script. If you
don’t want to do that, you can say, “Yes, definitely, let's add it, but
let’s add it as subtext!”
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One of the great things about usable master shots is that they can
allow the actors to overlap dialogue. It has become a given that actors
must always make a tiny pause before they speak, so there will be
unlimited options in the editing room. This tiny pause is something
that almost never happens in real life conversations; it is a great bar-
rier to listening. Although actors can overcome this barrier by
playing intentions, when actors are allowed to overlap the dialogue
and freely play with each other, the chances for fresh, free, alive per-
formances are hugely increased.
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When actors are working well and organically, they are likely to
move spontaneously in ways that physicalize the emotional events of
the scene. You can build on such impulses. You can say, “Let’s keep
that hand movement you made on line X.” Then you should make a
“note ofit. You need also, if you can, to make a note of the intention
or adjustment that seemed to create the movement. The movement
ideas that capture your attention will be things that happened acci-
dentally. The actor probably won’t remember, because she was
working in the moment.
Your script analysis will have given you ideas for activities for the
actors. Rehearsal is the place where you find out whether these ideas
work, adjust them if they don’t, and give actors the chance to make
these ideas their own. An insightful gesture can create all the inner
life that is needed for a scene. For example, you may be certain that
in a particular scene you want one actor to touch the other actor’s
face. Itis all right to give that direction and let the actor find the way
to get there believably. It can help if you say something like “I want
you to touch his face here. I don’t expect you to get there emotion-
ally right now. You can take whatever time you need.” By the way,
pay attention to actors touching each other — make sure it counts.
Knowing when to ask the actor to move and when to ask him not
to move can make the scene work, but it can also help the actor find
his energy and his center. Sometimes actors dissipate their energy
with aimless movement; sometimes they get stuck emotionally
because they are stuck physically.
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real life. Otherwise it will pull her performance down rather than add
to it.
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an aerial view floor plan of the pattern of movement you have come
up with. Then do it again. Come up with at least three possible
ways to have the actors move in the scene. Don’t make your shot list
or do any storyboarding until after you have done this work. Some
directors don’t storyboard until after they rehearse with the actors (if
at all), so that the blocking can be arrived at collaboratively with the
actors. I recommend to you the book Film Directing Shot by Shot
by Steven Katz, which contains information on the physical staging
and composing of dialogue scenes.
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with movement,
Often each beat change is punctuated or a
or a new pace. Physicalizing the beat changes
verb, on
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helps the audience follow the story. Experienced directors develop a
sense of when to “play through” a beat change, or when to create a
kind of syncopation by “going against” the rhythms that are written
into the script. It is part of a director’s talent and artistry to know
when to allow a “moment” or beat change, and when it is more effec-
tive to “play through.” You can work on beats out of sequence.
Especially if time is short, I often find it useful to work first on the
meatiest beat, the one containing the central event of the scene.
RESISTANCES
Actors can have resistances to choices which in fact tap into their
deepest soul. Once an actor I was working with, who was playing a
character named “Celia,” was having a terrible time with a scene,
refusing to engage with the other actor, whose character name was
“Johnny.” Finally she burst out: “But I hate Johnny! He’s lazy and
selfish and treats Celia very badly.”
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told her that her anger was wrong for the role, I don’t think I would
have gotten the performance I did finally get from her.
Even though what the actor is resisting may be a part of her own per-
sonality that she doesn’t want to face, there is no need for the director to
take it on himself to analyze her neurosis or character defects, discuss her
acting problems, accuse her of laziness, or inform her that she has a
problem with authority. The best way to approach resistances is by
smoking out the judgments the actor is unconsciously making.
There are some actors who are ornery, who question every direc-
tion, who, no matter what you suggest, find a reason why it won't
work or why they can’t do it. The funny thing about actors like this
is that, often, once they have complained and argued and threatened
over a direction, they go ahead and do it anyway! I have sometimes
been this kind of actor myself. All I can say in our defense is: Would
you rather have an actor who says no and then does it, or an actor
who says yes and then doesn’t do it? Since resistances are often
unconscious, they can be covert. That is, the actor may try to be
cooperative when he doesn’t feel it. He may say “yes” when every
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Actors can panic if they feel they are miscast. There can be a very
fine line between a risky role that provides a thrilling stretch for the
actor, and a role that he is just not right for and in which he is likely
to look inept and foolish. A director needs to take responsibility for
the casting even if it wasn’t your idea, but was insisted upon by the
producers or studio. Don’t project anxieties of your own about a
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overact.” Or, “If it’s too much I’ll let you know.” Then make sure
you do.
Rehearsal is useless unless you can listento what the actors are
doing, what they are giving you, what they are resisting. A good
director works differently with each actor. Sometimes it is best to
leave an actor completely alone to work at his own pace. The way to
develop the intuition needed to tell you when to push, and when to
leave actors alone to find their own way, is by connecting deeply with
the material and listening to the actors. If you ask a question of an
actor, listen to the answer, and listen between the lines. When an
actor asks you questions, it is more important to hear the questions
than to answer them. What is the subtext? What is on his mind?
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Whatever actors do, love them anyway, the way a mother loves
her children, even the difficult ones. Give them unconditional love.
When there is a problem, let them understand that you are ready to
reach into your own chest and hold out your heart.
EPISODIC TELEVISION
Don't forget the guest artists and day players. In order to bring
the guest actors into the ensemble, they need attention from the
director and an opportunity to rehearse with the regulars. You can
be inventive. An actor friend of mine who, as a guest artist on
“Roseanne,” was playing a poker-playing buddy of the John
Goodman character, reported to me that the director had the actors
in the poker scene spend a morning playing poker together.
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SUMMARY
Don’t read off your script analysis notes while you are directing
rehearsal. Your script analysis was preparation. In rehearsal you
should work in the moment. The best thing that can happen in
rehearsal is that your ideas may change. You may, with the actors, find
richness and complexity or simplicity that you didn’t see when you
were working all alone on the script. You may adopt wholesale some
good idea of an actor’s.
So take chances. Make choices. You can always change your mind.
If something doesn’t work, don’t think of the occasion as a failure.
Think of it as an opportunity to move forward. Be yourself. Keep your
sense of humor. Don’t forget in rehearsal that there is nothing wrong
with having fun. Don’t talk just because you think you’re supposed to.
If you don’t have something useful to say, don’t say anything.
Rehearsal should end with questions, with things for the actors to
work on while they are waiting to shoot the scene. If you end
rehearsal with a performance, the actors may spend the time until the
scene 1s shot (whether it is two weeks or fifteen minutes) trying to
hold on to that performance. We don’t want them to approach
shooting trying to hold on to their rehearsal. We want them to
approach shooting ready to work.
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SHOOTING
“Once they’re in that starting-gate position and ready to go, it’s
really a case of nurturing, and trusting, and letting them have a
good time. I don’t even necessarily mean, by a good time, laughing
on the set — although we have a lot of that at times. But what I
mean is being allowed to make mistakes, being allowed to try things.
The key is that you all agree that you’re making the same film.” —
Martin Scorsese
One thing you can do is find time with the actors that is not social
time, and not exactly work time either, but magic time, where you
recreate the magic circle that you had in rehearsal, and reestablish
your relationship with them as a primary factor in their work. I can’t
tell you how to do this; each director’s method is unique to his or her
personality. Some are playful, some are parental; some are almost
military in their concentration and authority, while some are so low-
key that they seem almost “not there.” Some take the “rope-a-dope”
route, that is, affecting to have no control over the proceedings
(when really they are on top of everything). Some are business-like;
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Here are some thoughts on how to develop and maintain the atten-
tion and connection needed to recognize and guide actors to the spark,
the sizzle, the sense of “something happening” — the /rfe of a scene.
During shooting the actors are (we hope) at their most raw.
Everything that comes in affects them. Let them feel your attention
by speaking to them before and after every take. If possible, give
them something new to work on.
What he means by his “variations” are all the ideas he has come
up with in script analysis. ‘Uhis is why a full script analysis in which
you come up with a number of different ideas and a number of dif-
ferent ways to express your ideas is so useful. You will have fresh ways
to sumulate the structure you and the actors worked out in rehearsal,
or ideas for ways to completely change the structure if it suddenly
ceases to work. You will have a store of playable tidbits to give the
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Whatever you do, when you communicate with the actors, don’t
communicate anxiety. Keep your attention forward. If there is a
problem, get excited about finding the solution.
If you love the take or rehearsal that just happened but need to
go again, don’t say, “Do it again just like that.” Instead say things
like: “We're starting to cook”; “It’s working well, let’s stay on this
track”; “You're coming up with new things, it’s getting richer.” Keep
the attention forward.
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Watch for actors lapsing into set line readings. Watch for tension
in actors’ faces. Watch for overacting. Make:sure the actors under-
stand that you will protect their moment-by-moment reality. If you
are relaxed and alert and if you put your total concentration on the
actors, you will be able to detect false notes because they will cause
your own attention to wander. Anytime an actor hits a false note, it
needs to be addressed by his director.
If all else fails, ask them to let go of their preparation and be sim-
pler, “just talk and listen.” : —
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Lo “It’s okay to pick up that knife a little earlier,” rather than “You
didn’t pick up the knife on the right line.” Make all your direction
and feedback to actors as positive as you can. Imagine yourself in the
actors’ shoes. Tell them what you like as well as what still needs work.
If an actor is struggling, offer him time, even if there isn’t any.
‘Tension and strain are the enemies of our work. All problems must
be embraced as creative obstacles. a
5) Be honest.
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you can say things like “You seemed a little off”; “We're not quite
there yet”; “It’s in and out”; “Let's try something new, I’m not sure
this is working anymore”; “It’s gotten surface-y, the inner life is
missing”; “The give-and-take is missing, I want you to play off each
~other.” Or, “Tell me what I can do to help. Are you stuck? Tell me
what's bothering you.” “I’m afraid my direction was not very clear, _
but I know you can do better and I want more.” Sometimes the
shock value of plainly telling an actor, “It’s not real enough” is exactly
what’s needed. By the way, “It’s not real enough” is a better direction
than “It’s not angry enough.” sz
If you must give result direction, you should say, “I know [’m
giving you a result direction,” or, “I know I’m giving you a result and
you'll need to translate it into something playable.” If you are
reduced to line readings, say something like “Don’t follow this as a
line reading — I’m doing this badly.” Having said all this, I need to
admit that result direction sometimes works, but usually only once.
Letting the actors in on the effect you want to produce may give you
the take you need. But if it turns out there was dust on the camera
lens, you will probably need to come up with a new, playable idea for
the next take.
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Any complaints (or even compliments) that the writer, the pro-
ducers, the editor, director of photography, script supervisor, crew, or
other actors have about an actor should be told privately to you.
Thank the person for their communication. Then determine what,
if anything, should be done about it.
Make sure that you are the one who says “Cut.” Explain to actors
that even if they make a mistake you want them to keep going until
you cut the scene. Don’t let the D.P. or the technicians cut the scene.
If your budget requires you to be conservative in your use of film
stock, to the point that you want the camera crew to let you know
before the end of the scene if in their opinion the take is no good,
then arrange a signal with them ahead of time so they can discreetly
let you know, and you can say, “Cut.”
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The worst thing about shooting for actors is all the waiting; it
can be a terrible energy drain. Physical watinaups that engage actors”
with éach other — such as tossing a ball, playing tag, pillow-fighting,
air-boxing, air-fencing — can enliven the actors and guide their con-
centration toward each other.
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who stay alive and dynamic on every take and seem not to change the
performance are actually moving, each time,a little deeper into the
meaning of the script and into their own resources. This creative
priority of forward movement (remember the word “emotion” has as
its root the word “motion”) should be honored.
Talk about your plans for blocking and shooting a nude scene
separately with each actor, then together with both actors. Walk
through the choreography of the movements with clothes on,
without emotional commitment. After that, a nude scene should be
approached like any other scene in which emotional nakedness is
required by the actors, in which the actors are required to create soli-
tude in public. Not all nude scenes are alike. The characters still
have backstory, problems, intention, a physical environment, etc.
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15) Concentrate.
I’ve said this already, but I’ll say it again. The actors need your full
concentration if you are going to be able to tell whether the emotional
event of the scene was achieved. This does not mean that I think shot
composition and framing are unimportant; but if you want the actors
to fill up the screen, you need to put out energy toward that goal.
16) Be inventive.
Even if you become very adept at working with actors, there will
still be times when you make mistakes and say the wrong thing to an
actor. Your talent will lie in how you are able to recover from these
mistakes and turn them into adventures and opportunities.
You don’t have to shoot a scene the way you rehearsed it. You
don’t have to follow your script analysis notes. Preparation and
rehearsal is not wasted, even if you don’t follow it. A writer wouldn't
think of publishing a first draft. Script analysis is a director's first
draft. Rehearsal is the second draft. Take One is the third draft. Etc.
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EPILOGUE
EPILOGUE
“But to dig deeply into the way things are through people is what
I like, and what the people who work with me like also. To find out
the delicate balance between living and dying. I mean, I think that’s
the only subject there is.” — John Cassavetes
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All learning, like all rehearsal, is two steps forward, one step back
(the only alternative scenario 1s one step forward, two steps back). I
know I am taking a big chance when I give you my secrets in a book,
where I can’t respond to your questions and can’t watch and monitor
your use of them. Any of these ideas can misfire. Once a student
reported to me that her first attempts to use the techniques from the
Acting for Directors workshop were distressing. She said, “The tools
you gave us were power tools; they were like a sharp-edged sword.
When we used them incorrectly we cut ourselves.” Find a way to prac-
tice the use of these tools in a safe situation. Make them your own.
Most actors in their scene study classes, even if they don’t ever
perform on stage, work on scenes from plays. A director who has not
read any plays seems virtually illiterate to a trained actor. Film has
been around for a hundred years; before that the people who were
producing plays would have been producing films if they’d had the
technology. Even if you’re not interested in theater, you should read
plays and study the history of theater, especially Shakespeare.
Shakespeare is extraordinarily cinematic. A serious filmmaker has a
lot to learn from the study of Shakespeare, regardless of whether you
have any interest in directing films based on Shakespearean plays.
Many directors direct one gender more effectively than the other.
The gender many, though by no means all, directors have more
trouble directing is the one that is not their own. Make a special
effort to get inside the experience of the other gender. A useful book
on this subject is Deborah Tannen’s You Just Don’t Understand.
All the actors’ tools are useful for you: listening, choosing an
objective, taking adjustments. In meetings you can use the actor’s
technique of putting all your concentration on the other person, in
order to feel less self-conscious. It’s also useful in meetings to be able
to tell the difference between what someone is saying, and what they
are actually doing (their subtext).
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Think of your film as a story that you are telling to one person.
Pick a specific person from your own life thiatyou are telling this story
tor, and keep an empathic sense of that person’s interest and connec-
tion to the story uppermost in every decision you make. By keeping
your story personal and specific you will paradoxically stand the best
chance of telling a story with universal appeal. But by keeping your
focus on the specific person you are telling the story to, rather than on
your own need to tell it, you can avoid self-indulgence.
Your creativity is not a bowl with a finite amount in it, which can
be emptied, but a natural spring from an unseen, unknowable source.
When you give of everything you have, you are priming the pump.
If you’re not sure what you're doing, don’t hold back, be expressive
anyway. A breakthrough is then possible. If you play it close to the
vest, then you might not get into trouble, but you won’t get anywhere
else either.
You cannot decide what your vision is, or even to have one, but
you can trust that you have a vision, and you can find it. The path to
finding it is your search for the truest truth in every detail of your
work, Challenge yourself. Aim high, because we are human and are
going to fall short. If your aim is to “get by,” then you won't. If your
aim is to give your all and hold out for the truest truth, then, with a
little luck, you might get by.
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APPENDIX A
DIRECTING THE “NATURAL” ACTOR:
CHILDREN AND NONPROFESSIONAL
ACTORS
Whether or not they have had acting training, you want to find
children whose imaginations are susceptible, who are bright and sen-
sitive and free with their emotions. Audition the mothers as carefully
as you audition the kids. Parents may drill the kids on their lines in
the wrong way, making them learn line readings. Children learn lines
very quickly, so often you don’t need to give them the lines in any case
until the last minute.
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To get the best from non-professional actors, make sure that what
you ask them to do is close to who they are and that it is simple. Tell
them to talk to the other person the way they would in real life. You
can use a few simple action verbs and adjustments: “Scold her the way
you would scold your own kids.” “Tease him the way you tease your
husband when he falls asleep in front of the TV.” “Really look at his
face and in your mind decide whether you would take a check from
this man.” Don’t forget, non-professionals don’t know about hitting
marks or not overlapping or finding their light.
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APPENDIX B
COMEDY
If the lines are funny, they come out funnier when the intention
is more important than the lines. If the actor’s subtext is _“look
100K how
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_funny-thisline is,” the fun is gone.
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activity for the camera, she has to be sure that the reason she is using
the toilet paper is to blow her nose, not to make the audience laugh.
LISTENING
When actors listen, they are getting out of the way of the lines.
Then, if the lines are funny, the audience can hear them and get the
joke. Comedy works best when there is ensemble playing. The
actors play off each other — a ping-pong effect. I think it is no acci-
dent that in the better written comedies, there is more listening.
First of all, superior actors are drawn to superior writing. And
second, the actors trust the writing and know that if they play off each
other and don’t push, they will get their laughs.
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SENSORY LIFE
SETTING UP GAGS
Every joke must be set up. A “straight line” sets up the situation;
the punch line or “payoff” delivers the twist. In vaudeville the roles
of “straight man” and “funny man” were very clearly defined. When
George Burns first teamed up with Gracie Allen, he thought of him-
selfas the funny man and gave her the straight lines; soonhe noticed
that she was getting more laughs than he, so they switched roles and,
with his simple questions (“What did you do today, Gracie?”) he
became the best known “straight man” in the business. Dan Ackroyd,
ina Daily Variety interview for the issue commemorating George
Burns's hundredth birthday, described himself as the “straight man”
to John Belushi and Bill Murray on the early days of “Saturday Night
Live.” The character played by Jessica Lange was the “straight man”
of the movie “Tootsie.” Playing “straight” does not make an actor
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TIMING
Comedy needs comic energy. This doesn’t mean every line must
be shouted, but often comedy depends on the actors “topping” each
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other. On the other hand, sometimes the punch line is delivered with
a sudden drop in energy — the actor “comes in under.”
OPPOSITES
Surprise and juxtaposition are the heart and soul of comedy.
Playing an intention that is opposite to the apparent meaning of a line
is a common comic technique.
Comic ADJUSTMENTS
ACTION VERBS
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It’s hard for actors to deeply trust a comedy director unless she
knows how to give actors feedback and advice on matters of comedy
technique: for example, whether it is likely that there will be a bigger
laugh if the actor holds a microsecond longer before giving the punch
line; when it might be better to come in “under” instead of topping;
when a rising inflection might just polish a gag. You also need a good
imagination to see opposites and think up comic adjustments.
EVERYTHING IS EVERYTHING
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APPENDIX C
entice
woo
fondle
spoil
undress
reach for
make love
reminisce
dream
speculate
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FILMOGRAPHY
Films listed by title, director, and year of release, in the order mentioned in
the book.
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BIBLIOGRAPHY
BIBLIOGRAPHY
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FURTHER ACKNOLWEDGMENTS
FURTHER ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
The Paul Mazursky and Ralph Nelson quotes from Chapter II,
the Jean Renoir and Jack Nicholson quotes from Chapter IV, and the
John Cassavetes quote in the Epilogue were all found in Directing
the Film: Film Directors on Their Art, by Eric Sherman for the
American Film Institute. The Adrian Lyne quote from Chapter II is
from Film Directors on Directing, by John Andrew Gallagher. The
Elia Kazan quote that begins Chapter II is from a pamphlet which
was given to me by Paul Gray.
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The play with the ironed shirts images from Chapter IV was
“Mrs. Cage,” which was written and directed by Nancy Barr, and
produced by Mado Most in 1990.
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