The Woman in Black Extract 2

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Onomatopoeia

During the night the wind rose. As I had lain reading I had become aware of the stronger
(Comparative) gusts that blew every so often against the casements. But when I awoke abruptly in
the early hours it had increased greatly in force. The house felt like a ship at sea, battered by the gale
that came roaring across the open marsh. Windows were rattling everywhere and there was the
sound of moaning down all the chimneys of the house and whistling through every nook and cranny.

At first I was alarmed. Then, as I lay still, gathering my wits, I reflected on how long Eel Marsh House
had stood here, steady as a lighthouse, quite alone and exposed, bearing the brunt of winter after
winter of gales and driving rain and sleet and spray. It was unlikely to blow away tonight. And then,
those memories of childhood began to be stirred again and I dwelt nostalgically upon all those nights
when I had lain in the warm and snug safety of my bed in the nursery at the top of our family house
in Sussex, hearing the wind rage round like a lion, howling at the doors and beating upon the
windows but powerless to reach me. I lay back and slipped into that pleasant, trancelike state
somewhere between sleeping and waking, recalling the past and all its emotions and impressions
vividly, until I felt I was a small boy again.

Then from somewhere, out of that howling darkness, a cry came to my ears, catapulting me back
into the present and banishing all tranquillity. I listened hard. Nothing. The tumult of the wind, like a
banshee, and the banging and rattling of the window in its old, ill-fitting frame. Then yes, again, a
cry, that familiar cry of desperation and anguish, a cry for help from a child somewhere out on the
marsh.

There was no child. I knew that. How could there be? Yet how could I lie here and ignore even the
crying of some long-dead ghost?

“Rest in peace,” I thought, but this poor one did not, could not.

After a few moments I got up. I would go down into the kitchen and make myself a drink, stir up the
fire a little and sit beside it trying, trying to shut out that calling voice for which I could do nothing,
and no one had been able to do anything for … how many years?

As I went out onto the landing, Spider the dog following me at once, two things happened together. I
had the impression of someone who had just that very second before gone past me on their way
from the top of the stairs to one of the other rooms, and, as a tremendous blast of wind hit the
house so that it all but seemed to rock at the impact, the lights went out. I had not bothered to pick
up my torch from the bedside table and now I stood in the pitch blackness, unsure for a moment of
my bearings.

And the person who had gone by, and who was now in this house with me? I had seen no one, felt
nothing. There had been no movement, no brush of a sleeve against mine, no disturbance of the air,
I had not even heard a footstep. I had simply the absolutely certain sense of someone just having
passed close to me and gone away down the corridor. Down the short narrow corridor that led to
the nursery whose door had been so firmly locked and then, inexplicably, opened.

For a moment I actually began to conjecture that there was indeed someone—another human being
—living here in this house, a person who hid themselves away in that mysterious nursery and came
out at night to fetch food and drink and to take the air. Perhaps it was the woman in black? Had Mrs.
Drablow harboured some reclusive old sister or retainer, had she left behind her a mad friend that
no one had known about? My brain spans all manner of wild, incoherent fantasies as I tried
desperately to provide a rational explanation for the presence I had been so aware of. But then they
ceased. There was no living occupant of Eel Marsh House other than myself and Samuel Daily’s dog.
Whatever was about, whoever I had seen, and heard rocking, and who had passed me by just now,
whoever had opened the locked door was not “real.” No. But what was “real”? At that moment I
began to doubt my own reality.

Glossary

 Lain-Relaxed
 Casements- Windows
 Tumult- Commotion
 Anguish-Suffering
 Harboured-Hid
 Reclusive-Isolated

Questions

1) Hill opens the extract with ‘During the night the wind rose.’
Find two more pieces of evidence in the first paragraph which detail this increased force of
the wind.
2) The house is first described as feeling ‘like a ship at sea’. What technique is this and what
does it suggest about the experience of being in Eel House during the storm?
3) In the next paragraph, Hill describes the house to have stood for many years ‘as steady as a
lighthouse’. How does this simile demonstrate the changing feelings about the house?
4) Hill writes ‘Then yes, again, a cry, that familiar cry of desperation and anguish, a cry for help
from a child somewhere out on the marsh.’ What is the effect of repeating the word ‘cry’ in
this sentence?
5) The dog is called ‘Spider’. Why do you think Hill chooses this name for the dog?
6) Hill writes ‘I had seen no one, felt nothing. There had been no movement, no brush of a
sleeve against mine, no disturbance of the air’. What is the effect of repeating the word ‘no’
throughout this passage?
7) What mood or atmosphere is created within the extract? Use PETER
Point: The extract creates a scary atmosphere.
Evidence: This is clear through the phrase, “…………………………..”
Explain: Through the use of the repetition the reader feels …………..
Zoom. The word “….@ again reinforces the scary atmosphere as it makes us feel…………………

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