KCWS Thesis Statement
KCWS Thesis Statement
KCWS Thesis Statement
Statements
An effective thesis statement presents the main idea of a paper. It is not simply a title or
statement of the general topic but a sentence that clearly indicates the scope of the paper and
the perspective of the writer. For most academic papers, a thesis should be contained in one
sentence. The thesis performs several key functions:
• Helps the writer form and organize ideas
• Requires the writer to distill their ideas down to one main point
• Acts as a test to help the writer determine whether information should be included
• Guides the reader through the paper so he or she can keep the main point in mind
Placement
Readers expect a thesis statement to appear at the end of the introductory paragraph. If you
have a good reason to place it elsewhere, such as presenting background information first,
then it is possible to put it later in the paper, but make sure the reader can still recognize it as
the thesis statement
Perspective
The perspective of the thesis statement depends on the type of paper you are writing.
Informative/Expository Essay
If your paper is informative, you need only present the narrowed topic that the reader will
learn about. Your thesis will not express any type of opinion, but rather introduce the
information that will be covered. If you need to explain how a court case reaches the United
States Supreme Court, a possible thesis might be...
Example
Cases heard by the United States Supreme Court come from a variety of lower courts
and must meet certain requirements.
Persuasive/Argumentative Essay
For most academic assignments, the thesis statement will make an arguable claim that will be
supported in order to persuade the reader of your perspective on an issue. For the same topic
as above, an arguable thesis might be...
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Example
The current system of governmental checks and balances should be revised because the
Supreme Court wields too much power.
Analysis
In this type of essay, the thesis will indicate the position you are taking, although it may not
technically seem like an argument. For example, in a literary analysis, you may need to defend
your interpretation of a character or symbol. For a piece of art, you may need to demonstrate
how the elements come together to create a certain effect or message. The thesis will still need
to be supported by details, but those details will come from the text/work.
Because half of all American elementary school children consume nine times the
recommended daily allowance of sugar, schools should be required to replace
the beverages in soda machines with healthy alternatives.
The first statement doesn’t indicate the paper will focus on food choices at all, nor that
it addresses sugar consumption rather than other unhealthy elements like fat or
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preservatives. The second one gives more guidance to the reader about what the paper
will actually include.
• Indicate or imply the suppor�ng points. You don’t have to specifically state your main
areas of support in the thesis (unless asked to do so by the instructor), but it should be
implied or hinted at. The reader should have a sense of where the paper is headed.
• Review the language for clarity. Can the statement easily be understood by your intended
reader? Is it clear what position you are taking? Are your word choices too vague?
• Review the language for conciseness. Is the sentence too long or too wordy? Get to the
point.
• Get input. Ask a family member or classmate to read the thesis and tell you what he or she
thinks the paper will be about. If they are wrong, perhaps something is not clear enough or
specific enough.
• Check for grammatical errors such as comma placement or incorrect parallelism.