O'Donovan MAThesis
O'Donovan MAThesis
O'Donovan MAThesis
Master of Arts
in
English
2019
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Abstract
From Harriet Beecher Stowe’s Uncle Tim’s Cabin to Charles Dickens’ Hard
nineteenth centuries. This thesis, however, traces the extension of this tradition,
widely condemned for its manipulative, moralistic and mawkish character, into
charged twentieth- and twenty-first century literary novels that feature a child
Names—the thesis argues that the device of the child narrator has helped
substantiate this claim is reader response theory. Thus, reviews of the novels,
both reader and scholarly, feature strongly as evidence that these novels
the child narrator in fiction, the two main bodies of work in which this thesis
intervenes are the literature on sentimental political fiction and the literature on
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the depiction of children in fiction. In addition, this thesis draws on two areas of
study that inform the research. The first is the field of childhood studies,
focussing specifically on the child narrator, rather than just the child. This field
which inform the way that each novel constructs their child narrator. The
second is affect theory, which helped ground speculations about the way tonal
nuances in both the primary and secondary texts can affect our response to the
This thesis, then, not only fills a critical gap, but also suggests that the
very fact that critics have ignored the device testifies to its efficient subterfuge
and, in this sense as the child narrator has the capacity to foment genuine
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Acknowledgements
I could not have done this without the tireless, sacrificial support and
Abundant thanks are also due to my family who were a patient and valuable
sounding board for my ideas, and who also never lost faith.
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Contents
Abstract ii
Acknowledgments iv
Contents v
Introduction 1
Chapter 1. A Sentimental Perspective 14
Chapter 2. To Kill a Mockingbird: Imparter of Knowledge 31
Chapter 3. The Kite Runner: Connector of People 51
Chapter 4. Mr Pip: Chronicler of History 69
Chapter 5. We Need New Names: Exposer of Social Wrongs 88
Coda 109
Works Cited 113
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Introduction
He coughs some more and I listen to the awful sound tearing the air. His
body folds and rocks with each cough but I don’t even feel for him
because I’m thinking, I hate you for this, I hate you for going to South
Africa and coming back sick and all bones, I hate you for making me stop
and breathing like somebody chased him all the way from Budapest and
up and down Fambeki, and I don’t even hear him because I am hating him
New Names lays bare the realities and hardships of life for disadvantaged
deathbed scene exposes the terrible consequences of the disease that has
AIDS, and in the wake of his death Darling will become the ultimate sentimental
emblem—the AIDS orphan, an “object of pity and charity appeals” (Adebe 460).
And yet, despite the sentimentality at the heart of this tableau, We Need New
fiction and that, according to many critics, resulted in the genre’s apparent
demise (Dillon 496; Jefferson 519 - 520; Tanner 128). In fact, reviewers have
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unanimously noted Bulawayo’s refusal “to play the pity card” (Hewlett; Sanai)
The question must be asked, then: how has this contemporary political
novel, and others like it, slipped the net and avoided the taint of sentimentality?
I would suggest that, although this book, peppered with deathbed scenes and
exposing social wrongs in the domestic sphere (Burdett 190; Fisher 90; Howard
74-76; Wexler 9), the fact that the novel is voiced by a child narrator disguises
its sentimental rhetoric. Using the sort of straightforward candour that only a
child can get away with, she maintains our sympathy while effectively
dissimulating the sentimentality and obscuring the emotion evoked by the social
situations the novel exposes. As a preteen child, she is uniquely skilled for the
task: old enough to know something of what is going on, but too young to
understand the consequences. She is too self-centred to feel and express the
true pathos and, by virtue of her limited viewpoint, we are spared an overly
despite the fact that we understand the sadness of the subject matter, not a
tear is shed.
contemporary “politically aware” fiction that depend on the child narrator, this
thesis advances a simple, twofold argument about this small but significant
that these novels—all of them celebrated for their political force in documenting
with the tradition of “sentimental fiction” discussed by critics like Nina Baym,
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Ann Douglas and Jane Tompkins. Second, it contends that these novels’
reliance on the child narrator has helped them avoid the taint of “sentimentality”
that has conventionally attached to sentimental political fiction. The tradition of,
what I will call “sentimental political fiction”—fiction that presents social and
motivate action—is a long one and has been known by many labels. In the
(Roberts chap.2). The terms “domestic fiction” and latterly “woman’s fiction”
define the particular strand of the genre written by women (Baym ix). Yet, since
the Victorian era, the “sentimentality” at the heart of this tradition attracts “an
“authenticity: the spontaneity, the sincerity” (Howard 65) of honest emotion and
(Dillon 496; Solomon 304; Tanner 128). This thesis’ aim, then, is to show that
despite sentiment’s fall from grace, as readers and writers, we have not
abandoned our designs on political and social reform through the manipulation
of readerly feeling and that many of the sentimental functions of eighteenth and
sentimental political fiction through the device of the child narrator. The handful
of novels I will examine all participate in the sentimental political fiction tradition.
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knowledge, connect people, chronicle history and expose social wrongs. What
sets them apart, however, is that reading alongside the child, readers and
critics are licensed to drop their guard and embrace these novels’ agendas
We Need New Names is far from being an isolated example of fiction that
employs a child to bear our socio-political burden. Indeed, setting aside for the
moment the question of whether this work can be included within the
novel often hailed for its political impact (Patel; Randall; Shapiro). Famously
narrated by the peppery and irreverent Scout Finch, it gives insight into life in
the American south during the Great Depression of the 1930’s, and, because it
was published in 1960, instructs on the issue of racism at a time when the Civil
Rights Movement was very much in the public eye. Yet, over the last two
decades, a range of other novels have sprung up that also use the child
narrator as a device for mediating their complex political subject matter. The
child that readers assert has a socially transformative effect (Aubry 25, 28, 30).
Set in Afghanistan before and during Taliban rule and voiced by a young
Afghan boy named Amir, readers testify to its ability to personalise the lives of
Afghan people at a time when they were only viewed as the enemy
the blockade of Bougainville when Papua New Guinea screened off the island
from the rest of the world for ten years, isolating the inhabitants. Young Matilda,
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a native to the island, chronicles the atrocities experienced by her people and
the novel raises awareness for the disenfranchised and the marginalised in our
African country which, for all intents and purposes, may as well be named as
harsh reality of the poverty and political upheaval of Southern Africa and the
contemporary political fiction suggests that children have been put to work as
listed in The Huffington Post’s “Listen to the Kids:12 Memorable Novels with
Child Narrators” all deal with either social or political subject matter.
for the omnipresence of the child narrator within this body of critically
acclaimed, politically-charged literary fiction. This effort has yielded two key
lines of argument. On the one hand, the thesis proposes that the novels under
political fiction—a mode that, while not always travelling under this particular
situations other than their own: To Kill a Mockingbird aims to impart knowledge;
The Kite Runner aims to connect disparate cultures; Mr Pip aims to chronicle
history and We Need New Names exposes social wrongs, allying them closely
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with the purposes of sentimental political fiction. On the other, this thesis
proposes that the voices of their child narrators serve, at some level, to obscure
and the social messages that the novel imparts are all delivered by the child
narrator Scout who, by virtue of her tender years and humorous delivery,
Runner, Amir’s portrayal as a fallen child (Miles 207; Wyatt), whose actions we
uneducated, childish point of view. And Darling, the narrator of We Need New
“wounded child”.
intervene in two key bodies of literature. The first and most significant of these
is literature on the long tradition of sentimental political fiction popularly read for
as socially influential in the age they were written like Stowe’s Uncle Tom’s
Cabin (1852) (Tompkins xi) and Susan Warner’s Wide, Wide World (1850)
(Nelson 11), for example, have become devalued over the nineteenth and
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dismissal under the sign of the “sentimental” (Dillon 496; Jefferson 519 - 520;
Tanner 128). Nina Baym was one of the first contemporary literary critics to
identify and give credence to sentimental political fiction since its debasement.
Her study, however, which focusses purely on women’s fiction, situates the
mode as existing between 1820 to 1870 and, though many subsequent novels
would fit well into her criteria, does not recognise fiction that continues the
domestic sentimental tradition. Ann Douglas and Jane Tompkins, who famously
sit on different sides of the fence when it comes to sentimental political fiction,
also limit the mode to the antebellum period. Though they see the effects of
these novels from different perspectives, both Douglas and Tompkins accede
to a view that, far from just being harmless melodramatic pap, sentimental
political fiction had readerly influence. As I will show, like their Victorian
boundaries outlined by scholars like Baym, Douglas and Tompkins, they belong
must be portrayed as powerless. Writing in detail about little Eva’s death scene
from Stowe’s Uncle Tom’s Cabin Tompkins, for example, notes how, because
Eva is such a good child, her redemptive effect on others is made stronger in
death (129). Tompkins’ work bolsters the assumption, which this thesis will
strongly contest, that a child’s social effectiveness lies in its purity and
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innocence. Besides the depiction of children as ‘good’, literature on children in
fiction also centres on the idea that children are helpless and vulnerable. Joe
Sutliff Sanders, for example, in her discussion on orphan girls in turn of the
century narratives, points out how their lack of real power to control their worlds
elicits sympathy and because of this, they wield power, despite, and actually
“reform’s most effective agents” (66). In the present day, however, scenes like
reconsider their views on slavery, leaves readers squirming under the weight of
this thesis subverts this view. More specifically, it claims that by entrusting the
child with the task of directing the narration, the novelists of my archive invest
children with agency and power that is not apparently reliant on the intervention
of adults. It further claims that, in doing so, these novels avoid accusations of
“sentimentality,” and are thus more effectively, if more covertly, able to carry out
In advancing this argument about the work of the child narrator within
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of the various models of childhood on which each novel constructs their child
childhood studies. Recent work by Alison James and Alan Prout acknowledges
historically variable nature (122). James and Jenks, meanwhile, examine how
our romantic vision of children as innocent has become the benchmark, and
that any deviance from this image results in an anxiety about the state of
society, which may explain why we hold so tightly to the vision of the pure child.
individual human beings and our concept of childhood. He seeks to clear up the
misconception that children are only children if they fit into our very constricting
ideals of childhood (2) and his argument allows for an alternative construction
as, children, for Cunningham, are not only innocent and vulnerable (though he
conception of childhood fits well with the more realistic view of children that
contemporary fiction. As I will show, it is the naughty child, the fallen child and
sometimes the downright vulgar child who is able to breach our defences
against sentimentality.
known as affect theory. Although I do not directly refer to many affect theorists,
my attention to affect and emotion at the level of tone and reader response is
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inspired by the body of work on affect and emotion that has emerged over the
past two decades. At the heart of affect theory is an effort to understand how
we are touched, moved and mobilised under changing political and social
regimes, with an attentiveness, as Melissa Gregg puts it, to both the body’s
“potential” to be changed and its “capacity to affect” change in other bodies (2).
Ngai supplies a critical vocabulary for describing how affect is baked into the
text itself in the form of “attitudes” or “orientations” (43). This approach will help
me read certain readerly or authorly moods and affects off the surface of both
my primary texts (the novels) and my secondary texts. More specifically, it will
help me ground speculations about the way in which, for example, when a child
narrator speaks with a humorous tone we are distracted into overlooking the
the representation of the child as narrator, which reveals how the novels have
Examination of the language and syntax voiced by the child narrators as they
present their unique viewpoints, for example, reveal hidden messages about
the social and political milieu that the novels expose. The same applies to the
authors’ use of imagery and motifs to describe the child narrator that discreetly
reveal political messages. The analysis of the novels also attends closely to
while closely examining the texts is the authors’ tendency to thematise the idea
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that children are more effective political messengers than their adult
counterparts.
In the spirit of affect theory, which focuses on the role of affect in the
reception and evaluation of literary and other texts, I have also examined and
engagement with the texts. This method helped discern the affective results of
the novels on the audiences that they aspire to reach and, though anecdotal,
disguise sentimentality.
My thesis will unfold across five chapters, with Chapter One providing
the history of sentimentality and its fall from grace. It tracks the changing
hand, critics have exhorted all rational readers to exercise reason and to
political action. It will also show how, in the nineteenth and twentieth centuries,
excessive emotion has been culturally devalued and dismissed under the sign
of the “sentimental” and how, for contemporary audiences under the influence
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purposes. Ultimately, it will highlight the need for the device of the child narrator
What follows are four further chapters, one for each of the novels in my
associated with this sentimental function. Chapter Two reveals how Scout
education rather than as educators, we learn with her rather than feeling as
though we are being lectured. In Chapter Three, on The Kite Runner, I frame
the child narrator Amir through the lens of the “fallen child” . It is as a result of
this framing, I argue, that Amir helps the novel achieve its sentimental aim—to
help to connect westerners with Afghani people, usually seen as the enemy—
examines Mr Pip where Matilda challenges the model that identifies childhood
function as she fights back against those who tried to cover up the atrocities
that she and her fellow villagers experienced. In the process, I contend, she not
only helps chronicle history, but helps the novel evade the accusations of the
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sensationalism, subjectivity and didacticism often levelled at the historical novel
(Dekoven 138; Krull 695-697). Lastly, Chapter Five on We Need New Names
The chapter shows how the helpless victims of society can be de-objectified
when given a voice to narrate their own story and at the same time expose the
social wrongs that cause their circumstances, without seeming to descend into
When Joseph Conrad wrote that his “task … by the power of the written
word, [is]to make you hear, to make you feel—it is, before all, to make you see”
consciousness. If, through literature, we can “hear” the story of ‘the other’, then
might we not sympathise? If we can “see” life from another’s perspective, then
might we not understand their plight? And if we can be induced to “feel”, then
might we not be affected? History shows us, however, that fiction aspiring to
these heights often suffers the same fate as Icarus and is burnt by the very
readers care about the world’s socio-political problems—they are not held
under the same suspicion of manipulative agency. Instead, this thesis reveals
how each novel utilises an alternative view of childhood to allay our suspicion of
sentimental manipulation and drop our guard, allowing the cultural work of
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Chapter 1: A Sentimental Perspective.
You may sparkle and dazzle, but you are fit only to throw people out of
their orbits. Now and then, there's a gleam of something like reason in
your writings, but for the most part they are unmitigated trash – false in
political fiction, which engages our emotions and moves us, also makes us feel
persons enhance their perceived worth; syllogistic arguments and cold hard
album or a carefully preserved lock of hair from a child’s first haircut, for
example. Ascribe the label sentimental to fiction, however, and the value
fiction’s unsettled history. It will map its brief highs, in the guise of eighteenth-
means of affording moral instruction, and its more pervasive lows, like the
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exploited sentimentality to elicit emotional response. It will also discuss how, in
the twentieth century, the rise of modernism heightened the intensity of anti-
establishing the pejorative bias which, to this day, taints our associations with
disenfranchised form of the child narrator so that the political work of fiction can
reason. This bias can be traced back to the classical philosophies of Plato and
Aristotle. Plato saw emotional poetry as outside the bounds of rational thought,
effects saying, “we delight in giving way to sympathy,” and while we might think
“that the pleasure is a gain,” Plato saw this unreasonable abandon as feckless
(Book X). Aristotle’s stance was more ambivalent, however, as, while wary of
emotions. For Aristotle, emotions like “pity or fear” (461) experienced through
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thought and cognition and “learning or inferring” (458). As philosopher Peter
Levine puts it, according to Aristotle, “Moral reasoning cannot occur unless we
feel” (59). Believing that we reason with the data given to us by our immediate
However, balance was the key: emotion unschooled by reason translates into
sentiment, which, for Aristotle, could inhibit sensible decision making. In his
eyes, it was mainly women who are prone to be led by their emotions at the
The dialogue over reason and sentiment was taken up in the eighteenth
and belief in the reality and desirability of moral virtue, for the rationalists,
reason alone dictates our moral responses, whereas, for sentimentalists, moral
distinctions are identified by emotion. Rationalists declared that all morality was
example, preached that “since [our] nature is not purely rational” our irrational
side, or emotions, “will mislead [us]” (British Moralists vol. II, 372). John Locke,
principles require reasoning and discourse” and that, just as some geometric
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truths are not obvious, so universal moral truths need to be learned and
understood as “they are not innate” (B. M. vol. II, 326 - 327). Thus, for the
rationalists, morality is not instinctive and must be driven by reason and not by
obscures reason.
directive for morality, believing in feeling and not reason as the basis for moral
famously sanctioned passion over reason when he wrote, “Reason is, and
ought only to be the slave of the passions and can never pretend to any other
office than to serve and obey them” (415). They also shared a belief that
humanity is basically social and connected by “fellow feeling” (Smith 13) and
that, unlike the rationalists, we all have an innate sense of what is beneficial for
would be our own if we were in his case” (9). Thus, for Smith, contrary to the
moral rationalists, literature that could make the reader feel for another’s plight
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von Schiller. Schiller believed in the political power of aesthetics to cultivate
good moral citizens and, like the moral sentimentalists, he also advocated for a
merits of art” (Aesthetic Education letter 2). He stated that “The path to the
head must be opened by the heart. The training of sensibility is therefore the
more pressing need of our age” (AE Letter 9). Based on his conviction that
‘‘beauty alone can confer upon [man] a social character” and that “taste alone
brings harmony into society, because it fosters harmony in the individual’’ (AE
can bring about social change. Schiller elevated the efficacy of sentimental
poetry in this cause above all others in his treatise On Naïve and Sentimental
Poetry, praising the poetry of Ariosto (part 1). Thus, Schiller exalted sentimental
political.
belief that literature which targets the emotions can work towards moral and
Oliver Goldsmith’s The Vicar of Wakefield (1766), for example, were based on
the premise that man is inherently good and our feelings are a powerful guide
effects of feeling and novelists like Harriet Beecher Stowe, Catharine Maria
34; Lenard 3; Nelson 66). In her concluding chapter of Uncle Tom’s Cabin
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(1852), Stowe wrote that she wanted her readers to learn to “feel right” and
then extend their circle of “sympathetic influence” (XLV 463) to change the
sentimental literature.
Historically, it appears that sentimental political fiction did in fact have the
Uncle Tom’s Cabin, for example, was the first American novel to sell over a
million copies (Tompkins 124) and many believe that it went a long way
When it was first published, freed slave Frederick Douglass, a black abolitionist
We are well sure that the touching portraiture she has given of "poor
behalf of the oppressed African race, and will raise up a host of enemies
Cabin”).
Abraham Lincoln is also said to have credited the novel with starting the
American civil war which ended in the abolition of the slave trade (Noble 297).
the proliferation of novels that were written at the time testify to its popularity.
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However, even in epochs where some thinkers and philosophers were
aesthetic philosopher and empiricist Lord Henry Home Kames, for example,
debunked what he judged “unnatural” sentiments claiming they are “pure rant
them to be “blown about by every momentary gust of feeling” (26). Even Adam
affection seems to bear to the cause or object which excites it” (18). In other
words, if we judge the cause of sentiment to be out of proportion with our own
thing’. Hawthorne famously complained that “America is now wholly given over
while the public taste is occupied with their trash” (73-76) and Twain linked
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popularity and perceived social advantages, eighteenth and nineteenth-century
sentimental political fiction did much to sully the reputation of the sentimental,
In the late nineteenth and twentieth centuries the modernist movement took
Henry James and Oscar Wilde vociferously protested its evils. Wilde
the luxury of emotion without paying for it” (De Profundis 501), while James
declared that “nothing is more trivial than that intellectual temper, which for ever
dissolved in the melting mood, goes dripping and trickling over the face of
humanity, and washing its honest lineaments out of all recognition” (221-222).
James’ tirade was directed, not against “honest” emotion, “which is in strict
accordance with human life” (221), but rather against the licentious and
novelists like Rebecca Harding-Davis, whose book, Waiting for the Verdict
(1868), prompted his tirade. James also links sentimentalism with the
“become an agent between the supply and demand of the commodity” (222).
sentimentalism, saying:
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betray his aversion to experience, his fear of life, his arid heart; and it is
always, therefore, the signal of secret and violent inhumanity, the mark of
cruelty.” (14)
For Baldwin, Stowe’s novel was not a political force for good, but rather a
of the defiling effect sentiment has on raw passion he stated, “the instinct is
as far as to say that their “attack on sentimentality was one of the few threads
more oblique, less realistic way, saying “I could not find any words that seemed
Pound also voiced the modernist dislike of “emotional slither” (Literary Essays
12) but concluded that “Only emotion endures” (LE14), which indicates that it is
not emotion itself from which he and fellow modernists shrink, but rather it is
states that to express “emotion in the form of art” one must find “a set of
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objects” by which “the emotion is immediately evoked” (The Sacred Wood 7),
thereby advocating for a less direct, less personal and subjective mode of
expressing emotion in literature. Virginia Woolf, for example, stated that a novel
emotion that is appropriate to it”. Therefore, modernists saw the kind of direct
diversity, they upheld a united front when it came to the common enemy of
bourgeois sentimentality.
still being fought. Ann Douglas and Jane Tompkins are often quoted as being at
opposite ends of the debate. Using Stowe’s account of little Eva’s death scene
imposed by modernists between “high” and “low” literature. Victorian fiction can,
in her view, be easily classified into good or bad literature. To her mind, Stowe
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subjects, while authors like Hawthorne and Thoreau “turned their sights
norms” (5) and therefore their work was seen as good. Thus, for Douglas,
Jane Tompkins, on the other hand, contradicts the popular and modernist
valiant attempt at ratifying the mode by focussing on the “cultural work” that
appraisal” (xvii). Thus, she does not ask us to decide whether or not they are
“good” literature, but rather to value their effect, which she believes is
intentional saying, “These novelists ha[d] designs upon their audiences, in the
which they were written and received. For example, according to Tompkins,
scenes as defective fail to understand the prevailing belief of Stowe’s time that
Christ-like sacrifice has “the power to work in and change the world” (130).
There has, however, also been a recent move towards questioning the
judgments made by modernist aesthetics about good and bad literature with
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some academics proposing critical acceptance of fiction usually outlawed for
sentimentality. Many contemporary feminist critics have paved the way to a less
schizophrenic enjoyment of novels which pull on our heart strings and advocate
for a revision of the literary canon to include sentimental political fiction. Eve
critique, which she terms “paranoid” reading. “Paranoid” reading and, what Paul
anticipating them in advance so there are “no bad surprises” (Touching Feeling
text might offer. Rita Felski also calls for a revival of literary appreciation of
low art” (20), stating, “There is no reason why our readings cannot blend
analysis and attachment, criticism and love” (22). For Felski, a text’s capacity to
move us lies in the application of four intrinsic uses of literature which she
connection with the characters and situations described, affirms, rather than
bad” (284). For Taylor, sentiment can be corrected by reason when it deviates,
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but the insight it yields cannot be substituted for by reason. This way of thinking
relation to political life, known as virtue ethics. Following this school of thought,
of the different” (Cultivating Humanity 89), confirming her belief that literature
plays a vital role in promoting good citizenship. Robert Solomon, who writes so
emotively about the value of sentimental literature is also a proponent (44). Like
compass to determine right and wrong. This contests the modernist view of
has the potential to forge connections through “fellow feeling” (Smith 13) and
on the grounds that its profligate use is ineffectual. Despite the fact that
motivator of social and political change, there are many present-day dissenters
elicited through emotional response as fallacious as, in her view, it negates the
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ethno-geographical obstacles, the privatising and personalising of suffering in
sentimental political fiction precludes political discussion about the true cause
of the suffering and actually prevents action. She calls this “the politico-
pain, its cases become all jumbled together and the ethical imperative
In other words, rewriting politics as feelings undermines the issues at stake and
results in a moral stasis. Echoing both Wilde’s and Baldwin’s views, Berlant
looking beyond the embodied pain and suffering and identifying the social
does have the power to influence, but only when it is not sentimental.
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interviewed, called women’s writing “feminine tosh”, declaring that no female
author was his equal because of women's "sentimentality, the narrow view of
the world" (Fallon). Accusations of ‘girlie sentiment’ are still used as an insult,
implying weakness and a contravening of the Anglo stiff upper lip and the
Luce mysteries, Alan Bradley, goes to great lengths to distance his young
female protagonist from sentimentality in order to verify her stability. She voices
her scorn by saying that sentiment gets “in the way of simple logic” equating it
with “False feelings” (9). Science fiction writer Sheri S. Tepper also associates
a lack of sentiment with strength and pragmatism in her novel The Gate to
hope, no self-petting lies, merely that which is!” (9). In other words, sentiment is
fake and if women want to be seen as strong they must eschew it.
aesthetician R.G. Collingwood wrote in his critique of Eliot’s “The Waste Land”,
“No one gives; no one will risk himself by sympathizing …The only emotion left
us is fear: fear of emotion itself, fear of death by drowning in it, fear in a handful
of dust (335). The enduring modernist bias persists, and sentimental political
not yet shed its affiliation with kitsch, which twenty-first century author Milan
Kitsch causes two tears to flow in quick succession. The first tear says:
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The second tear says: How nice to be moved, together with all mankind,
indulgence, its propensity in fiction to gratify the reader rather than the cause it
sentimental political fiction as “low art” and judge it as inferior literature. Its
which “has remained amazingly resilient over the decades” (vii). The modernist
states, “so many readers are afraid of free expansive emotion, even when the
situation warrants it… It leads them…to suspect and avoid situations that may
awaken strong and simple feeling” (269). So, it seems that the anti-
very much more frequently nowadays” (128), suggesting that our aversion to
sentimentality might one day overcome derision and negate the need for
devices of deception like the child narrator. However, for the moment, anti-
sentimentality is still alive and well and we remain indebted to their ameliorative
melodrama, but, whatever its label, it appears that when fiction fails to maintain
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emotional and cultural distance or does not require intellectual gymnastics, then
fiction and writers still turn to novels to deliver their message. Like Harriet
socially and politically, present day sentimental political fiction still has “designs”
(Tompkins xi) on the reader and there are countless readers who testify to the
demand, there must be supply, and thus, the child must continue to labour to
chronicle history and expose social wrongs without being dismissed as kitsch.
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Chapter 2. To Kill a Mockingbird: Imparter of Knowledge.
Folks don’t like to have somebody around knowin’ more than they do. It
aggravates ’em. You’re not gonna change any of them by talkin’ right,
There are countless testimonies affirming the educative effects of novels, like
influence opinion on political and social injustice (Flood; Randall; Weber 233).
Indeed, many scholars agree that one of the functions of fiction is to teach and
that, consequently, one of the reasons we read is to learn (Felski 77; Gaut 141;
Nussbaum, Poetic Justice 6). Harper Lee herself affirmed the edifying function
qualities that tend to invoke the appellation “sentimental” (Newcomer 215; Repp
readers for their openly didactic agendas ( Repp 272; Woodworth 38). Jane
West, for example, is accused of writing “‘thinly disguised conduct books with
obvious lessons” (Ty 87), and it is said of Maria Edgeworth that she failed to
make her plots interesting enough to disguise her novels’ didactic intent (Lee,
Sun 34). In addition to taking exception to overt sermonising, critics have also
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changing their moral stance—strategies whose omnipresence within didactic
fiction has served to link didacticism and sentimentality more generally (Havens
14, 26; Lee, Sun 35; Repp 272; Ty 10; Van Sant 5). Yet while To Kill a
knowledge and influencing readers’ moral stance, Lee’s novel has escaped
How, then, has Lee managed to avoid the fate of novelists like West and
“want to learn” (130, my italics)? If this thesis argues that the child narrator has
twentieth-century fiction, this chapter will bear this argument out in relation to
pedagogical or educational role. It will argue that the naïveté we ascribe to the
child in Western culture means that, by making Scout the narrator of the novel,
Lee disguises the educational logic of To Kill a Mockingbird in ways that have
made it palatable to both popular and academic audiences and that have
helped it elude the label “sentimental”. This chapter will advance this argument
as follows. First it will briefly prove the novel’s association with didactic fiction
before discussing the critical reception, both for and against, of traditional fiction
that aims to impart knowledge. It will then show the success of the child
childish Scout, to Lee’s less well received novel Go Set a Watchman, narrated
by an adult Scout. Next it will discuss how Lee’s portrayal of the child narrator
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sentimental function of the novel, and provide a series of close textual analyses
illustrating how exactly this works. It will further contend that alongside this
analogy, Lee also reflexively thematises the idea that youthful innocence,
unclouded by experience, has more direct access to the truth and therefore the
ability to learn.
Lee’s widely read novel, To Kill a Mockingbird, tells the story of a young
girl, Scout Finch, growing up in the fictional Alabama town of Maycomb in the
The novel is a narrative of the South and as such instructs on difficult topics like
racism, classism and sexism. The experiences of life force the young
protagonist Scout and her brother Jem into a state of knowing and Lee uses
their experiences to impart moral lessons to the reader. The children gain harsh
knowledge about their world when Tom Robinson, a black man accused of
raping a white girl, is unfairly found guilty despite his defence by their lawyerly
Scout about empathy saying, “You never really understand a person until you
consider things from his point of view… until you climb into his skin and walk
around in it” (35) and he lectures Jem about the Radley’s right to privacy, telling
him that ‘What Mr Radley did was his own business” (55). As we follow Scout
and Jem’s move from innocence to experience, the didacticism of the novel is
undeniable for, as they learn lessons in life, so too do we. In a New York Times
article, Sona Patel quotes reviews from contemporary readers who use words
like, “taught”, “formed”, “lesson” and “wisdom” to describe their response to the
novel and, as E.W. wrote in The Economist “The novel remains a testament to
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the ways fiction can expose a society’s sins, alter consciousness, and advance
the gradual work of social change”. Thus, To Kill a Mockingbird allies closely
with didactic sentimental political fiction of the late eighteenth and early
nineteenth centuries.
the years, there have been some periods of history when moralistic teaching
through fiction has been openly embraced. The enlightenment era actively
9) and the late seventeenth and early eighteenth centuries was a period when
many critics actually denigrated novels that did not promote a moral message.
which is not in some degree a lesson either of morals or conduct, is, we think, a
production which the world might be quite as well without “(qtd in Munday 212).
This idea has persisted into the present day for many contemporary critics like
philosopher Martha Nussbaum who contends that the novel must necessarily
be an art form that is both “morally serious yet popularly engaging” (Poetic
Justice 6). Cognitive theorist Berys Gaut agrees that literature is made more
estimable when it teaches us something (141) and literary theorist Rita Felski
confirms that there exists “a widespread intuition that works of art reveal
something about the way things are” (77). Thus, many scholars acknowledge
that we come to learn about the world and its people while enjoying literature.
universally amongst academics and it has struggled to shake off its links with
end of the Victorian era, was at pains to distance his work from the didactic
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fiction of the day and in his preface to The Picture of Dorian Gray he wrote, “No
heresy of The Didactic” (11), in his essay “The Poetic Principle”, where, like
Wilde, he proposed that a true artist should eschew ethical instruction and write
didacticism that she criticised not only fiction, but also openly exhortative
academic discourse claiming that all writing “must be so fused by the magic of
writing that not a fact juts out, not a dogma tears the surface of the texture”
(212). For many critics, the distaste for instructive literature has endured (Lee,
Sun 34; Ty 87), despite the efforts of those like Nussbaum who argue
prejudiced, giving the reader reason to distrust the lessons it seeks to convey”
(285). In other words, overt didacticism impedes rather than promotes the
Yet, despite the fact that To Kill a Mockingbird involves the sentimental
function of imparting knowledge and deals with powerful political issues, it was
risk involved in writing about contentious issues like racial prejudice saying that
“a faint catechistic flavor may have been inevitable. But it is faint indeed;
novelist Lee’s prose has an edge that cuts through cant”. So effective is Lee’s
Chicago Review went so far as to deny that Lee had an agenda at all, saying
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questions. It offers no solutions. It proposes no programs. It is simply an
wholeheartedly to the story of the Finch family and their Maycomb neighbours.
In fact, the first half of the book is almost exclusively given over to their
provenance and the minutiae of their lives. Lee said in a radio interview given
just after To Kill a Mockingbird’s release that she “would like to be the
universal in it. There’s something decent to be said for it and there’s something
to lament when it goes, in its passing.” (Qtd in PBS article). Despite her
sentimentality. In fact, in The Daily Telegraph Peter Green stated that To Kill a
the novel released in 2015 under the title Go Set a Watchman, was not as well
alienating from the very start” and The Guardian’s Robert McCrum damns with
faint praise saying it “has a certain promise, but not much more” seeing Lee’s
prose as “raw, partisan and often clunky”. Adam Gopnik in The New Yorker
Wood of The Telegraph refers to it as “barely a novel at all” complaining that “It
write in a political pamphlet”. Thus, Lee is taken to task for overt didacticism as
she barrages the reader with rhetoric. Like To Kill a Mockingbird, the novel sits
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clearly within the tradition of eighteenth and nineteenth-century “sentimental
impart knowledge becomes the focus and results in the book being neither
Jean-Louise Finch, lectures us like a parent to a child; we block our ears to the
beliefs, asking: “Why doesn’t their flesh creep? How can they devoutly believe
everything they hear in church and then say the things they do and listen to the
things they hear without throwing up?” (GSAW 118). The debate she has with
her father Atticus about whether African Americans are capable of equal
people are taken out of the equation as she refers to “helping the negroes”
(167) as a faceless collective. When she reminds Atticus that “they’re entitled to
the same opportunities anyone else has” (169), it becomes an ‘us and them’
argument and perpetuates the divisive society she attempts to oppose. The
liberal New York ‘straight talk’ is too blatantly hortatory, practicing no restraint,
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African American housekeeper, so wisely teaches, “It’s not necessary to tell all
The question must be asked, then, how did Lee avoid the same
her revised version of the novel? Legend has it that when Lee first submitted
the early draft, later published as Go Set a watchman, her editor, Tay Hohoff,
“persuaded [her] to write [the] novel from the point of view of the young Scout”
(Gardiner). The original manuscript was told from the perspective of a grown-up
appalled by the racist attitudes of her home town. Because of the contentious
nature of the content, combined with the fact that it was written and set at the
height of The Civil Rights Movement by an author who was not only white and
female, but from the southern state of Alabama, Hohoff believed that the novel
would be too adversarial, its lessons too hard to digest. In her wisdom, Hohoff
reader with discomforting issues like racial inequality, rape and the evils of a
Mockingbird.
didactic? The answer is tied to the fact that the Western tradition has tended to
imagine the child as innocent and guileless, one who is yet to be educated, not
one who educates. As Susan Honeyman points out, “In the West adults have
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generally insisted that childhood is innocent…, irrational and unschooled” (3)
and we accept that, as is the case in To Kill a Mockingbird, a child does not
saying, “everybody's gotta learn, nobody's born knowin’” (231). Thus, our
during the course of the story acceptable and authentic and, although we are
learning at the same time, we are not aware that we are also being schooled
and do not feel patronised. Scout, who is about to turn six at the start of the
novel, and by the end is almost nine, states that, because of what they have
gone through, she feels “very old” as she muses that “there wasn’t much else
for [her and Jem] to learn, except possibly algebra” (283-284). The voyage of
acceptable for Scout not to know, and because we are engaged by her story, it
becomes acceptable for us to learn from her epiphany. Thus, for generations of
Americans and millions of readers around the world, the message which To Kill
Scout’s gentle and humorous narrative flows into and over and under the
harsh socio-political messages that underpin the novel and dissimulates the
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cut straight to the point uncovering truth and Lee, as adult co-narrator, cleverly
includes those that advance her message. Scout interrogates Calpurnia asking
why she changes her way of speaking when she is among her fellow coloured
folks “when [she] know[s] it’s not right” (129) and her ingenuous interrogation of
the men in the mob wanting to lynch Tom Robinson cuts through their blind
anger and exposes their humanity. Scout’s growing perception and her learning
that results from her naïve questioning is placed at the aesthetic centre of the
more important than the actual happening itself” (37), it takes precedence over
plot. Reviewer Robert McCrum says that “Lee executes a narrative sleight of
hand of genius”, referring to the fact that Lee harnesses Scout’s naiveté to
amusing attempts to make sense of her world, so Lee’s direction becomes less
noticeably overt and, complicit with the adult narrator who encourages us to
laugh at her exploits, we are less aware that we are learning with Scout.
The child narrator also serves to temper the didacticism of the moral
his own brother Jack about how to treat children, telling him that “When a child
asks you something answer him…But don’t make a production of it…they can
spot an evasion quicker than adults” (93). This moral authority is due, not only
Southern family, but also by virtue of the observation from those who know him
that, “Atticus Finch is the same in his house as he is on the public streets” (Lee
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52), and therefore has integrity. His moral rectitude allies him with “good”
of sentimentality achieved by the use of the child narrator, Lee gets away with
allowing him to share his wisdom. As Claudia Johnson points out, he is seen by
some as a saint and the lessons he imparts are among the most quoted
touchstone, and even though she says she only finds him “satisfactory” (12),
her actions indicate she admires and loves him. The scenes where she finds
comfort in his lap “show” us their warm relationship and seeing Atticus from the
perspective of Scout’s love for him, we accept his lectures just as she does and
“we [hear] every word [he] said” (To Kill a Mockingbird 285). Thus, Atticus
The genius of Lee’s use of the child narrator is that Scout, unlike her
father, is far from saintly and her “innocence” falls well short of the beatific pure
distances her from other sentimental political heroines like Little Eva in Uncle
Tom’s Cabin (1852) and helps cloak the sentimentality of To Kill a Mockingbird.
She cusses and tests Uncle Jack’s patience when she “asked him to ‘pass the
damn ham please’” (84). She solves conflict at school and home with her fists,
and Aunt Alexandra notes that she “was born good but had grown
heroine, instead, she comes far closer to James R Kincaid’s description of “the
naughty child” (246). Lee’s rendition of “the naughty child” is also distilled from
the many voices of Maycomb society and, exhibiting influence from those other
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than the saintly Atticus, Scout bears the mark of the fallen people To Kill a
Mockingbird seeks to instruct. As an intelligent and curious little girl, she picks
up and cogitates on, not only Atticus’ wisdom, but the words of the townsfolk
around her, which make her partisan with their sin. It is Scout, for example, who
utters one of the most shockingly racist comments in the novel. When her friend
Dill is crying over the treatment the defendant, Tom Robinson, receives in
court, Scout says, “Well, Dill, after all he’s just a Negro” (203). With these words
Lee cunningly achieves two things. First, she shows how innocence can be
corrupted as Scout, just a young girl, repeats the rhetoric of the average dyed
in the wool white supremacist. Second, Lee again shows us that Scout is not a
saint, but a product of her Southern upbringing and, because of this, instead of
alienating those readers who have struggled with their own racist thoughts and
imparting knowledge is more subtly achieved. Scout, like the readers Lee
hoped to teach, starts out prejudiced and grows towards tolerance. The growth
which Scout experiences in the novel is that by the end she “think[s] there's just
one kind of folks. Folks" (231), and the aim of the novel is that the reader will
from the townsfolk. Scout’s narration gives insight into the town’s judgemental
views as she wrestles with her conscience, from her humble position as one of
these “folks”. The “knowledge” Scout has acquired from the town and has
assimilated into her discourse tells her that she should feel guilty about talking
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to a fallen man like Dolphus Raymond. Raymond suffers a self-imposed exile
from the rest of the town because of his dissident relationship with a coloured
woman. Despite her socially enforced “feeling that [she] shouldn’t be [there]
listening to this sinful man who had mixed children” (205), her actions counter
these thoughts and she is drawn to the man. Her childlike instinct, of which
Raymond himself speaks, leads her to find him “fascinating” and she overrides
the town’s voice. Scout’s indoctrination into the racial protocol of the South is
not yet so firmly entrenched that she cannot look beyond Raymond’s “sin” to
the man. Scout also “shows” her rejection of the racist dogma she has learnt
and sometimes spouts when she takes such delight in visiting Calpurnia’s
church. Her actions show that she sees nothing wrong with interacting across
the colour bar when she asks Atticus if she may visit Calpurnia’s home. It is
Aunt Alexandra, not Scout, who “tells” us the established Southern creed as
she explodes with “You may not” (139) as whites do not visit with Negroes.
Thus, Scout hears the bigoted discourse of the town, but her childish instinct,
coupled with the teaching she receives from Atticus on tolerance, overrides this
doctrine and she demonstrates her lack of judgemental attitude through her
actions. She stands as a sort of synecdoche for the readers Lee hoped to
the child narrator models the lessons she imparts through her actions. Another
treating them as human beings, rather than judging them for their appearance
and the rhetoric they spout. Because Scout is a child, her lack of guile is seen
as authentic and we can learn from her childish perspective in the scene
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outside the Maycomb jail where Tom Robinson is in danger of being lynched by
a mob from old Sarum. Despite their evil intent, from Scout’s viewpoint, the
mob are just men. “In the midst of this strange assembly”, Scout looks beyond
the men’s “sullen” faces and the “hats pulled firmly down over their ears”—their
attempts at disguise—and “sought once more for a familiar face” (156). Calling
out, “Hey, Mr Cunningham” when she finds one, she personalises the mob.
relationship, naming his son Walter with whom Scout goes to school, and
enquiring if the legal problems Atticus had helped him with were resolved. Her
Cunningham “squat[s] down” to look her in the eye giving the instruction to the
rest of the mob to “clear out” (158). Mr Cunningham steps down from his
tainted adult vantage point to take in the view from Scout’s level. When he does
looking at him. Unable to hide behind the anonymity of the group, he is forced
to back down. Because we see the scene through the child narrator’s eyes, the
does not treat them as such, they lose their power. It is not Atticus’ voice of
experience and attempts at reason that disperses the mob, neither is it Jem’s
brave defiance of his father to stand in unity with him, nor is it the newspaper
editor’s rifle aimed at the mob from the vantage of his office. As Atticus later
tells us “it took an eight-year-old child to bring ‘em to their senses … That
because they’re still human” (161). The lesson of relationship over judgement is
at the heart of To Kill a Mockingbird and responds to those critics who saw the
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novel as “not go[ing] far enough” (Gist 249) and “reimagin[ing] Southern
history…as something far more benign than its reality” (Ako-Adjei 185). The
Thus, not only does Lee employ a child narrator to ameliorate the
Mockingbird she also thematises the idea that a child’s unbiased perspective
can teach adults about prejudice without lecturing them. When Jem hears of
Tom Robinson’s guilty verdict, his youthful idealism is shattered by the result
meted out by the court. When attempting to comfort him, Atticus says “If you
had been on the jury, son, and eleven other boys like you, Tom would be a free
man…So far nothing has interfered with your reasoning process” (224). Jem,
whose trust was invested in justice, could see plainly and rationally that Tom,
as an innocent man, should go free and he rails against the unfairness. He has
not yet learned the hard lesson that justice has nothing to do with fairness and
everything to do with the interests of the people who hold power and administer
the law. He has yet to learn how the subjective bias of racism can muddy the
waters and obscure reason. The reader can take Atticus’ comment one of two
ways, we can either see it as indicative of a hopeful future, one where young
boys with a clear vision will grow into young men who remain reasonable and
grow older, they too become tainted by experience and innocence is lost. Either
way, Lee’s message is clear, young eyes see reason untainted by rhetoric.
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Lee investigates this theme further through Dolphus Raymond who, like
Atticus, explicitly identifies the advantage of seeing things through the eyes of a
To avoid interference from the town-folk for his relationship with a coloured
woman, he hides behind the lie that he is a drunk and cannot help himself.
When he confesses his subterfuge to the children, Scout asks, in her usual
unabashed manner, why he “entrusted [them] with his deepest secret”. His
not yet clouded by the world which teaches us to accept and not to “Cry about
the hell white people give coloured folks, without even stopping to think that
they’re people too” (205). Scout’s friend Dill had been moved to tears after
He rails against the injustice saying, “it just makes [him] sick” (203). Raymond’s
observation—that an “innocent” child can see, as plain as day, that black men
are not equal under the law and that this is unfair—might seem akin to
not that To Kill a Mockingbird’s portrayal of childhood as less than innocent pre-
more pragmatic than sentimental. As he says, “Let him get a little older and he
won’t get sick and cry. Maybe things’ll strike him as being – not quite right say,
but he won’t cry” (205). Experience will dry their tears as they get older and
they will no longer weep when injustice is done. Thus, unlike “sentimental
moralist novels”, To Kill a Mockingbird does not preach that the imparting and
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acquiring of knowledge is unequivocally hopeful. Instead it teaches that once
The decade in which Lee wrote both To Kill a Mockingbird and Go Set a
Watchman, was fraught with political and social anxiety. Television made sure
that all Americans knew of the unrest and “The Civil Rights Movement” was an
Watchman, is set in the 1950’s and the burden Lee felt for the social problems
of the age weighs heavily on the reader as they are confronted head on by her
further stroke of genius, Lee’s visionary editor encouraged her to set her
revised novel in an ostensibly less political and more “unschooled” era than the
1950’s and return to her past—to the 1930’s when knowledge of the problems
inherent in the bigoted laws of the land could be denied. To Kill a Mockingbird
is set in a time when the Jim Crow “separate but equal” policy was not yet
the unjust regime under which they lived. It is in this setting of the figurative
childhood of the American South that the story unfolds, uncomplicated by the
people could bury their heads in the sand and say, “I did not know”, works
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alongside the child narrator to conceal the sentimentality of the novel’s didactic
intent. The novel was not seen at the time as overtly political and the
subterfuge bore dividends as reviews from the Southern press praised To Kill a
Mockingbird as a story of every day Southern life. The Mobile Register spoke of
how it was successful in “chronicling little bits of ordinary life, and saying
of many ordinary people”. Wayne Flynt, a close friend of Lee, told PBS in an
childhood and about the corruption of most of the institutions that were
important like the church, the courts, the school.” Lee ran the risk of alienating
her Southern readers if she openly maligned and challenged these institutions.
Instead, at the time of its release, her fellow Southerners read To Kill a
The success of Lee’s choice to follow Hohoff’s advice and utilise the child
narrator has been affirmed by reviewers, both when it was first released and
more recently in the wake of the release of Go Set a Watchman. Many early
reviewers single out the choice of child narrator as a reason for the novel’s
success. Sullivan, who lauded the book as “a first novel of … rare excellence”,
calls the narrator Scout “a pistol of a little girl” and describes the point of view
implication, the weight and burden of the story”. George McMichael of the San
Francisco Chronicle affirmed Lee’s choice of narrative point of view as the best
thing about the novel, saying “Best of all, Harper Lee has wisely and effectively
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employed the piercing accuracy of a child’s unalloyed vision of the adult world,
she manages to disguise the informative content of the novel through Scout’s
unschooled voice, while not trivialising the gravity of the subject matter. The
spawning new accolades for To Kill a Mockingbird which also focus on the
time’s Michiko Kakutani, was “crucial” to the success of the novel. Scout’s
“pistol” like narration finds its mark, and like her father Atticus, whom the
children discover was called “one shot Finch” (103) by those who remember his
youthful shooting prowess, her words are accurate and straight to the point.
Nearly sixty years on since it was first published, testimonials vouching for
this chapter’s assertion of the novel’s didactic purpose. Barack Obama quoted
Atticus Finch, when speaking out against racism and bigotry in his Farewell
Address to the Nation, saying “‘You never really understand a person until you
consider things from his point of view … until you climb into his skin and walk
Randall, its relevance lies in the fact that “it explains to readers who don't
understand it why black people are afraid of the criminal justice system,
because we have not gotten, historically, justice in that system.” She agrees
elemental book…because it dares speak the truth that the problem in the South
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is not the problem with black people, it's the problem with white people, and it's
survived the critics—the voices of experience who have said that the message
was not strong enough—precisely because she chose to soften the blow and
created a novel that engages readers, while still imparting moral knowledge.
Contained within the pages of the story is Lee’s own testimony to the power of
the child narrator with her youthful perspective and the power of “showing”
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Chapter 3. The Kite Runner: Connector of People
I see the unique ability fiction has to connect people, and I see how
Believing that fiction facilitates an identification with the world of ‘the other’ that
is both desirable and transformative, many theorists have celebrated its ability
to build a bridge, connecting disparate cultures and social divides (Felski 40-43;
Khaled Hosseini’s 2002 bestseller The Kite Runner—the first ever novel
(Aubry; Guthmann; Miles). At the time of its post 9/11 release, for Americans
and those sympathetic to their cause, Afghans were the enemy, and the media
the novel indicates that, somehow, Hosseini’s study of everyday life in Kabul
involving the reader in the world of “the other” and humanising the people who
live there. As Tim Aubry’s study of the novel’s reader reviews shows, many
claim that the novel helped reframe Afghans from a faceless foe to real people
(26). Much like “social problem novels” of the nineteenth-century that worked to
political and social divides, The Kite Runner reminds us that we all share
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“sentimental”. “Social problem” novels like Charles Dickens’ Hard Times (1854),
compared to the wealthier factory owners, and Harriet Beecher Stowe’s anti-
slavery novel Uncle Tom’s Cabin (1854) moved away from depicting slaves “as
acceptance that the texts aimed to teach. This mode has come under attack by
critics like Richard Simpson who questioned, not only the morality of Dickens’
characters with which readers could forge an emotional connection, saying that
sentiment tinsel, and moral (if any) unsound” (qtd in Collins 319). For novelist
Tom’s Cabin did nothing to advance true connection as her depictions of the
good slaves, George and Eliza, were “as white as she could make them” and
when it came to Tom, he was made acceptable only because of his “humility,
way, no matter what their own upbringing and background” (Guthmann) and
sentimentality.
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Why is it, then, that, despite engaging readerly emotion in the service of
connecting people cross-culturally, The Kite Runner has found its way into
academic course reading lists at many universities and managed to rise above
explores how the child narrator enables the novel to elude the accusation of
promote connection with characters to conquer cultural and social divides. The
previous chapter showed how the child narrator can overcome the critics’
aversion to didacticism in art and this chapter, in turn, will demonstrate how our
The argument will proceed as follows. First, this chapter will briefly explore
connection with fictional characters. It will then show—by means of reviews and
nineteenth-century fictions in this vein. Despite this affinity, I will reveal that
popular and critical reception of the novel indicates that the novel has managed
to avoid relegation to “sentimental” status. This chapter will also show how
Hosseini’s casting of his child narrator as a “fallen child” helps obviate any
the Afghan people whom, as Westerners, we have been primed to hate. It will
argue that part of the novel’s capacity to invite connection, while resisting
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flawed, ambivalent figure—the morally defunct Amir—rather than the pitiable
innocent victim, Hassan. This chapter will also argue that because the novel’s
sentimental leanings are obscured by the sinful child narrator, the way is paved
for transformation of the Western reader as they connect with Amir, and
believe that any emotional connection is purely sentimental, and that true art
should not pursue such a response. The paradigm for this ideal was summed
up by T.S. Eliot when he wrote that good readers “should have no emotions”
(Tradition, para.14) and that “bad criticism… is that which is nothing but an
expression of emotion (Para. 18). Clive Bell, an art critic who influenced great
modernist writers like Virginia Woolf, cautioned that “the emotion that [art]
suggests is false” (21) and therefore readers should not trust any connections
modernist authors like Woolf eschewing what she called the “subjective”, calling
that “solitariness” is a “central fact of human existence” (467) confirms that, not
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observes, modernism “is still a powerful force in aesthetic practice and cultural
ideals today” (285), the belief in “the division between human significance and a
connect people emotionally are questions about the relationship between the
thinkers Emmanuel Levinas and Louis Althusser, for example, have asked
whether it is, indeed, possible for readers to connect with and be transformed
by fictive works. For Levinas, “writing does not lead to the truth of being…it
leads to the errancy of being” (“T. P. V.” 141) as there is always a chasm
occur. Althusser also sees any exterior identification of the self as mis-
subject” (263) and come to connect with them, we can only really achieve an
transformation of the “someone” into a “subject” and as such they are removed
from us and we cannot meaningfully connect. We can never really know their
reality, no matter how closely we study them and, in the case of fiction, no
matter how much we read of their lives (263). Thus, much of the bias against
connection with art is encouraged by academics who see connection with “the
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Like Levinas and Althusser, many contemporary thinkers also specifically
doesn’t lead to change in the behaviour of the reading subject and can indeed
shore up the subject’s identity precisely in and through the other’s difference.
For Berlant, feeling the pain does not result in change because we are too
individual differences. She sees the result of connection with art as not
completely passive but rather an excuse to keep “the other” at bay and
maintain the national hegemony. Fences, rather than bridges (“The Subject”,
53-54). Damrosch, on the other hand, is concerned that readers lack the ability
may only view it through the lens of our Western sensibilities and therefore our
response will be purely sentimental and not transformative (10, 57). Both
The tale is essentially one of two brothers: one morally upstanding and the
other not, one legitimate and acknowledged, the other not. Interestingly, while
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the title of the novel designates the illegitimate Hassan as the true hero, as he
is the kite runner, Hosseini chooses to tell the tale from the perspective of Amir,
a privileged young boy growing up in the Wazir Akbar Khan district of Kabul
who betrays his friend, brother and servant—Hassan. The background of the
intervene, and Amir and his father are forced to evacuate to Pakistan,
eventually making it to the United States. However, these events, so exotic and
narrative as he shares with the reader the intimate details of his life with his
father, whom Amir affectionately calls ‘Baba’, and his closest friend, Hassan.
Neither boy knows the nature of their true relationship and, as both are
motherless, they grow up in the male dominated world of their father, a rich and
powerful merchant and Hassan’s adoptive father, the household servant, Ali.
close, is defined by this hierarchy. Amir’s desire to win his father’s approval
drives him to acts of jealousy and betrayal towards Hassan, while Hassan
admires the novel which helps readers learn about Afghanistan because “the
intimate and humanising perspective that puts it at risk of being written off as
prejudice and forge connections between Western readers and the Afghan
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people, readers and reviewers confirm the novel’s affiliation with traditional
“social problem” novels with a similar purpose. Reviewers responded to both its
exoticism and its perceived universalism, claiming connection with the Afghan
people through both our similarities and differences as humans. Loyal Miles of
The Indiana Review, for example, wrote “It is this examination of self in the
context of culture and history that makes Hosseini's The Kite Runner a
Amazon bear this out. According to Amazon user “Stephanie Henry”, the book
"proves that human emotions such as love, loss, betrayal, and hope are
reviewer named “Elspeth” said she “was afraid it would be about people I could
not in any way relate to…but if you are a human…you will find the themes in
this book are universal” (29-30). Hosseini himself is humbled by the reaction,
saying “[He is] honoured when readers tell [him] that this book has helped
make Afghanistan a real place for them” (Foreword). Public reaction to the
novel shows that it has helped many Westerners see the Afghan people as
establishing connection across cultural divides. Despite this, however, there are
many critics who are prepared to elevate The Kite Runner to a position beyond
the status of just a popular sentimental work of fiction and take it more
level” and New York Times reviewer Edward Wyatt notes that “the book has
also been adopted for courses at Penn State, the University of Northern
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The most effective ruse Hosseini employs to achieve distance between
counterparts is his fallen version of the child narrator. Instead of modelling the
Christian idea of the sinful child. This device is best explained by tracing the
history of our Western construct of childhood which has been torn between a
childhood innocence and the puritan doctrine on original sin. Rousseau’s views
“Coming from the hand of the Author of all things, everything is good; in the
hands of man, everything degenerates” (11). In other words, God makes all
children good; man meddles with them and they become evil. His views were
other hand, while Western readers may like to hold onto a romantic view of
child as fallen being. The Bible states in Proverbs 22:15 that “Folly is bound up
in the heart of a child, but the rod of discipline will drive it far away” (NIV). Many
interpreted this to mean that, far from being naturally pure and innocent, a child
is born into this world carrying the burden of original sin and needs to be taught
how to be good (330). Although Islamic teachings do not preach original sin,
they do believe it is natural for us to sin (Fernea 6;11), thus, both Christians and
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Muslims reading the novel would not find Hosseini’s sinful depiction of the child
Certainly, Hosseini could have chosen to unfold the events through the
eyes of an angelic child and nestled in more closely with novels like Hard Times
and Uncle Tom’s Cabin. Hassan is trustworthy, as Amir tells us, he is someone
who “mean[s] every word they say” (51). Hassan is humble, constantly taking
who, armed with his slingshot, frequently saves the boys from the same
tormentors who raped him. In fact, he is a more heroic character in every way
and Amir knows that his father thinks this too as he overhears Baba
remonstrating that it is always “Hassan [who] steps in and fends off” the bullies
who plague Amir. The irony of the rape scene is that it is Hassan’s bravery that
leads to him being physically violated when he stands up to the bullies and,
determined to loyally defend the honour of Amir’s kiting victory, refuses to hand
over the kite. Thus, if the worthy Hassan were our narrator and hero, we would
that averts action (100-101). Little Eva’s father in Uncle Tom’s Cabin, for
example, who stood by and watched her death was reduced to “but a hollowed
shell over a heart that was a dark and silent sepulchre” (313). He is so caught
up in his personal grief for her loss, that, despite his promises to Eva to
consciousness” (254). If the narrator of The Kite Runner was an innocent child,
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novel, like nineteenth-century “social problem novels”, would receive criticism
image of the child for his child narrator. Indeed, Unlike Scout, Harper Lee’s
charming little rogue, Amir is not a ‘naughty, but nice’ child and the model of the
“fallen child” that animates Hosseini’s depiction of Amir in The Kite Runner is
cowardly, deceitful and elitist. Because of his betrayal of Hassan, the moral
hero of the novel, we struggle to like him. J. F. Spiegel, from The Vienna
brimming with angelic virtue and Amir’s unrighteousness does not rest on just
behaviour towards the ever-patient Hassan that culminates in the lie he tells his
father to frame his devoted servant for the theft of his birthday present.
According to Baba, “when you tell a lie, you steal someone’s right to the truth,
when you cheat you steal the right to fairness” (17). Although Baba is not
portrayed as a religious man, his doctrine sits well with Islamic teachings
(Fernea 118). Thus, Amir steals “fairness” from his friend and the right to the
truth” from his father. Amir’s lie has terrible consequences as Hassan and his
father, knowing Baba’s aversion to theft, are forced to leave the household and
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“social problem novels”. While outwardly professing affection for Hassan, Amir
“favorite part of reading to Hassan was when we came across a big word that
[Hassan] didn’t know” (27). Amir grins as he mocks Hassan by pretending that
“imbecile’ means “smart, intelligent” (27) and Hosseini juxtaposes this devilish
smirk with Hassan’s open “smiling face” (27). Further entrenching our dislike,
Amir tells us that as an Hazara, Hassan’s illiteracy “had been decided the
minute he had been born” (26), pardoning his blatant elitism on traditional and
“after all, what use did a servant have for the written word” does not endear him
to the reader, and his initial inability to face his wrongs leads him to further
around the corner rather than intervene. Not only does this scene expose
Amir’s weak nature, but also seems to confirm his innate racism as his excuse
for his actions is “[Hassan] was just a Hazara” (73). It must be noted, however,
ambivalence to Amir’s morality when he follows with the question “wasn’t he?”
(73). It is clear that Amir questions his own moral code and as readers we
Before we can fully entertain the idea of moral growth, however, The Kite
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extreme level in Amir’s solipsistic narration of the rape scene. What would
the emotionally immature viewpoint of Amir. A close look at the rape scene
reveals a setting, littered with detritus, highlighting Amir’s choice that he has to
make as he fixates on two items lying among the garbage. One is the kite,
symbolising “the key to Baba’s heart” (67), and the other, representing
and discarded by the rapist Assef. Amir chooses the kite as he “turned away”
from that moment on the text holds numerous references to Amir’s not looking
at Hassan, afraid of what he would “see if [he] did look in his eyes” (73). Amir’s
same time providing insight into Amir’s interior conflict motivated by his need for
acknowledgment from his strong and much-admired father. Amir’s yearning for
his father’s praise is his driving force, his Achille’s heel and, just as Amir turned
struggle. Even after the rape has been perpetrated, Amir’s focus is the kite,
which he even took the time to “scan…for any rips” (73). Amir’s identity as the
dreamer and the poet, detestable to Baba who longs for him to prefer soccer
“grand entrance, a hero, prized trophy in [his] bloodied hands” which would
As readers we can only concur with Baba’s observation overheard by Amir that
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“there is something missing in that boy” (21). Winning the kite race and
returning with the proof is Amir’s chance to receive praise and acceptance and
he selfishly will do anything to get it. His actions confirm his dissimilarity from
held up as an example (Hard Times) and further disassociates the novel from
The Kite Runner achieves the ultimate exposition of the child narrator’s
“Maybe Hassan was the price [he] had to pay, the lamb [he] had to slay, to win
Baba” (73). When he returns home with the kite, he has the blood of Hassan,
the sacrificial lamb, on his hands. When Amir catches a glimpse of Hassan’s
face as he is raped, Amir sees “the look of the lamb” (71) and, immediately
after Amir notes the martyrdom on Hassan’s face, Hosseini switches, in italics,
own son to Allah. For Christian and for Muslim, the lamb is a symbol of sacrifice
and of purity. For Christians, Jesus is the innocent lamb that was slain to take
away our sins, and for Muslim, the innocent sacrifice of a lamb is a reminder of
the Qur’anic story of Ibrahim, who “almost sacrificed his own son for God” (71).
Hassan is thus cast in the role of the romantically innocent child, in contrast
with Amir’s fallen nature. Hosseini carefully builds up a picture of a sinful and
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entitled child who makes selfish decisions and as readers, because we do not
like him, we do not feel manipulated into sentimental feelings for him.
It is apparent that The Kite Runner’s fallen version of the child narrator
but how, then, is this function realised when the hero is so objectionable? The
answer lies in the fact that, unlike little Eva’s distraught father, our
understanding of his plight is not motivated by pity, but by the fact that we can
all identify more easily with the imperfect than the ideal. According to Christian
creed, “all have sinned and fall short of the glory of God” (Romans 3:23 NIV)
and so we feel an affinity with Amir, because of and not only despite his
iniquity. Although unnerved by Amir’s sin, Aubry’s reviewer study shows that
readers “take from the book a reactivated belief that their own flaws and
forgiveness” (31). We identify with his weakness on a human level, despite his
abominable actions, because we are all aware that we are not perfect. Thus,
the child narrator in The Kite Runner has a double role to play: he obscures the
sentimentality of the novel’s connective function and at the same time actually
Our acceptance of Amir is also linked to the fact that as a child narrator he
is a young sinner and can therefore grow out of his sinful ways and the belief in
the novel. Linked to both the Judaeo-Christian and the Muslim view of childish
sinfulness is the idea that moral growth can occur. Christians believe that
overcome the sinful nature they are born with and Muslims trust that those who
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genuinely seek atonement—kafara—can receive forgiveness—ghufran (Fernea
10). For Muslims, as for Christians, the ideal is a moving away from evil
(16). She believes that those children in literature who are not perfect are
powerful vehicles for social change and we do not hold their imperfection
against them as they are only children. Much of the subtlety behind the reader’s
readiness to connect with the child narrator is that we can understand what it is
like to carry guilt for misdemeanours perpetrated when we were too young and
moral growth.
Another way in which The Kite Runner’s choice of child narrator helps to
serve the novel’s sentimental function more directly is that, no matter what their
cultural background, we still think we can understand and connect with children,
Tim Morris, many believe that “Childhood is a form of Otherness” (9), this
children, even children within our own circle, are different; already primed to
different to the human adult, we believe that as we have all had experience of
Mechling explains, “The white, male folklorist recognizes that he will never
really know what it means to be a black woman, but we all think we know what
it means to be a child” (91). Thus, when it comes to connecting with The Kite
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Runner’s child narrator, the first hurdle of difference is already overcome;
connection occurs at the basic level of identifying with the child we once were,
is the section not narrated by a child, which serves as the best evidence of the
Runner’s purpose. Sarah A. Smith of The Guardian pointed out how “What
starts out as a fiercely moral but subtly told story becomes an unconvincing
melodrama, more concerned with packing in the action than with fictional
integrity”. The change occurs, she believes “in the final third of the book”—the
third narrated by the adult Amir. According to Aubry, many reviewers of the
novel reacted similarly, seeing the “array of tactics” Hosseini employs in this
to free Hassan’s son finally freeing himself from his guilt, the adult Amir insists
"I was afraid that I'd let the waters carry me away from what I had to do. From
Hassan. From the past that had come calling. And from this one last chance at
redemption" (213-214). Rahmin Khan, Baba’s old friend also explicitly instructs
Amir and the reader when he writes, "And that, I believe, is what true
redemption is, Amir jan, when guilt leads to good" (214). Smith also describes
story full circle”. The coincidences start with the revelation that the Taliban child
abuser from whom Amir rescues Hassan’s son, Sohrab, is the very same Assef
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Sohrab felling the evil Assef with his slingshot, fulfilling his father’s threat made
years ago. Thus, compared to the “child's fresh perspective” (Hussein), The
Kite Runner’s adult narrator falls short. Still, these failings only reinforce the
work done by the child narrator in much of the book to disguise the
The fallen child narrator disguises the novel’s traditionally sentimental aim
because he is not faultless, he unties bonds that might hold The Kite Runner to
account for its sentimental political agenda and allows the novel to be
perceived as literary fiction rather than as just a popular novel. We do not feel
unlikable, thus suspicion of sentiment is allayed, and the novel can be left to
and situations enacted between the pages of Hosseini’s novel and it is these
personal stories that allow us to connect with the people of Afghanistan despite
what we see on the news. The doubts raised about whether empathy through
Christian heritage, we are primed to believe that the lost can be saved. By
presenting us with the sinful Amir, our sentiment does not get in the way and
the novel reminds us that people are people and that we are all fallen and need
feelings towards the enemy as our heart breaks not for him, but for the Afghan
situation.
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Chapter 4. Mr Pip: Chronicler of History
I do not know what you are supposed to do with memories likes these. It
feels wrong to want to forget. Perhaps this is why we write these things
The idea that fiction is important and functional is woven into the very texture of
Lloyd Jones’ Mr Pip. Heralded as a study in “the power and formative influence
within a story that chronicles history. Set in war-torn Bougainville in the early
1990’s during the blockade when Papua New Guinea screened off the island
from the rest of the world, Mr Pip was published in 2006, after the blanket was
lifted and the horrors experienced by the isolated island inhabitants came to
light. Twining into the warp and weft of both the fictional story of the island’s
entertains the idea of the functionality of stories. For Mr Watts, the last white
man on the island tasked with overseeing the school in the wake of the
engage his young students; for Matilda, his most attentive pupil, the story is
useful as a means of escape from the horrors of the war fought by the interim
PNG government soldiers and the local rebel forces; and, while attempting to
loosen the hold that Pip’s story has on her daughter, Matilda’s very pious
mother, Dolores, confirms her belief that stories are useful in general, saying
that “Stories have a job to do. They can’t just lie around like lazybone dogs.
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They have to teach you something” (74). Indeed, if reviews of the novel are
into political partisanship, has been labelled sentimental (Baker 443-446; Woolf
58), while Jones’ novel has not had to withstand such accusations (Laing; Byrt).
Even though Mr Pip is recognised for its edifying intent, which Jones achieves
by chronicling horrific events that shock the reader into taking the side of the
marginalised of this world, it has managed to slip under the radar of the
sentiment police. As in To Kill a Mockingbird and The Kite Runner, the reason
for this oversight lies, I contend, in the unlikely decision that Jones made to tell
the story through the eyes of a thirteen-year-old indigenous girl called Matilda
and this chapter will explore the implications of that decision. Unlike the
majority of critique written about Mr Pip, this chapter will not focus on Jones’
Taylor 95; Walker 230). Rather, in keeping with the main argument of this
thesis—that the child narrator has served to fend off allegations of saccharine
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didacticism, sensationalism and subjectivity traditionally levelled against
historical novels. The particular skillset that the child brings to this task is that
the situation in words; and we do not expect a child to rationalise, take sides or
instruct on what is right or wrong, thus we do not feel that objectivity has been
compromised and we do not feel that our sentiments are being manipulated to
The argument will unfold as follows. After a brief look at the critical
(Sedgwick, Epistemology, 145), this chapter will give a short account of the
genre, which literary critics and historians alike have questioned. Then, through
close attention to the text itself, it will explore the efficacy of Matilda, Jones’
aspersive accusations of sentiment. This chapter will also show how Mr Pip
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in need of protection, presenting us with an alternative view suggesting the
The reception of the novel shows that, despite the fact that Mr Pip
history to didactic end, it has not been reviewed as sentimental. In fact, far from
being discounted by critics, the novel has been recognised for its literary merit
and was shortlisted for the Booker prize. Jones also received the 2007
Commonwealth Writers’ Prize Best Book Award and the 2007 Montana Medal
for fiction. Reviewer Anthony Byrt of The New Statesman confirmed the novel’s
affirms Jones’ lack of romanticism in the novel’s account, but feels that “Jones
civil war”(400), adding that, “those seeking to understand Bougainville and the
In fact, in an interview, Jones stated, “Mister Pip isn’t an attempt to explain the
House) and he does not deny writing the novel, not just to chronicle the history
status of the orphan and the migrant” (Rintoul), thus his aim is more
sentimental than rigorously factual. And yet, Mr Pip, despite its political
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intention to motivate feeling for the disenfranchised people of Bougainville, has
Tom’s Cabin (1852), is often touted as politically motivated (Wexler 15), it was
not the only body of work that actively sought to change hearts and minds
through sentiment. Walter Scott, who has been credited with creating “the
classical form of the historical novel” (Baker 443), also utilised classic
influence cultural subjectivity among his fellow Scots. His success in this regard
was not only a Scottish patriot, but also a Briton, loyal to the cause and Scott’s
letters testify to his overwhelming happiness over Britain’s defeat of the French
at Waterloo, saying how he could not contain “the thousand sentiments which
arose in the mind from witnessing such a splendid scene” (96). Scott felt no
need to muzzle his own social and political loyalties in his novels saying, “I
have myself long ceased to write in a work, the political sentiments of which do
sentimental” (446). Convinced of his own and Britain’s moral correctness, Scott
wrote novels that adhered closely to the teachings of Adam Smith’s Moral
influence political sentiments through his writings. Thus, the traditional historical
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novel took a hortatory partisan moral stance, while utilising sensational
The form of historical fiction epitomised by Scott with its leanings towards
reasons for this turn were threefold. First, for many, after the horrors of the First
World War, jingoistic fervour dissolved under pressure of questions about right
and wrong, and, as belief in partisan principles declined, so too did the
retell life realistically for political effect was also anathema. Certain Modernist
scholars, like art critic Clive Bell, believed that art and politics should not mix as
“he who contemplates a work of art inhabit[s] a world with an intense and
of life” (27). In other words, the reader should not be confronted by reality as art
should be appreciated for its own sake, not for any other agenda. Second, even
before the First World War, under the influence of the Futurist movement and
modernists like Ezra Pound with his call to “make it new”, nostalgic dwelling on
for a new, more scientific way of writing, there was a growing aversion to novels
that told sensational stories of the past, appealing to sentiment and glorifying
like Virginia Woolf, became interested in the partial and situated nature of
external events. While admiring him as an author, Woolf felt that his characters
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“suffer from a serious disability; it is only when they speak that they are alive;
they never think; as for prying into their minds himself, or drawing inferences
from their behaviour, Scott never attempted it” (“The Antiquary” 58). A less
Fiction away from the devastating facts of modern History… and at the
same time to render those facts with greater power than direct
representing the killing of civilians in the Spanish civil war, tells of a moment in
new”. Times had changed from the days when writer Joseph Strutt prefaced the
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Critics are now very much aware that ‘the facts’ of history are contestable and
questionable (Wesseling 70). Because literature has the power to influence our
feelings and engage our sentiments, many academics have also asked
questions about the ethics of fictionalising the darker moments of world history
and whether it is principled to tell stories about atrocities. Literary critic Cathy
communicate the full picture of an event and will always fall short, commenting
unremitting problem of how not to betray the past” (27). She sees an indirect
direct archival footage he collected could not fully relay the enormity of the
atrocity. Jones himself said in an interview with Geraldine Bedell that “the past
“Traumatic memories lack verbal narrative and context, rather they are
encoded in the form of vivid sensations and images” (19). Thus, any attempt at
away from any hint of the sentimental, there remains a thirst for entertaining
fiction that chronicles stories of historical significance and fulfils a demand for
both education and sensational effect. As literary critic Susan Kossew points
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out, “In times of global ‘crisis’…the natural question that arises is what literature
literature, Strutt observed that people like to read novels that “represent to them
forefathers, under the form most likely to attract their notice” (4) and things
have not changed that much today. There are some scholars, like Paul Ricoeur
deserves to be pleaded” saying that "the role of fiction in this memory of the
importance" (187). Literature, in Ricoeur’s eyes, has a duty to relay our social
history, but instead helps to realize it" (186). For Ricoeur, narrating history, no
matter how harsh the subject matter, does not diminish the importance or the
Whether or not Jones was consciously aware of these arguments for and
more wary than Ricoeur of fiction’s ability to narrate history without moral
childhood dictates that children are unschooled, irrational and innocent of the
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Honeyman states, "Literacy has produced rationalist adults. We are trained to
“adult rationalist's tendency to categorize, explain, and pin truths" (3), the use of
the child narrator brings freedom from didacticism. Innocent of matters of state
and the politics of power, the child narrator does not have to instruct on right
and wrong or take a moral stance. Children are also seen as frank, observing
and relaying what they see without guile or interpretation. The child narrator’s
expression that denies sensationalism, even when narrating horrors that, for
As the child narrator speaks with the frankness which we associate with
Matilda narrates the horrors as a child would, directly and with no prevarication,
painting an almost amusing picture of the rebels as they fell, “arms and legs
kicking in the air” (10). When her mother is brutally raped and then murdered by
the redskins, her telling of the event mimics the brutality of the atrocity in its
bluntness. “They took my mum to the edge of the jungle…and there they
chopped her up and threw her to the pigs” (179), she says with an unnatural
calm. Jones drives home the lack of sensation when Matilda says that when
“recalling these events [she does] not feel anything” (179). It is her apparent
lack of emotion which disguises the sentiment and allows the reader to choose
their reaction, as, when the horrors are relayed in Matilda’s straightforward
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lexicon, the reader is not overtly instructed in how they should feel. We also
excuse the lack of feeling because she is a child and we accept that children
are blunt. Thus, the lack of drama and sensationalism lets the reader take in
the scene without feeling manipulated and Jones’ use of childish narration
skilfully masks the sentimentalism of such sad and shocking scenes with its
straightforward simplicity.
the children retrieve “fragments” of the novel when the book is destroyed
mirrors the new way in which the adult villagers now tell time: by counting back
to significant events of the recent past like “the day the redskins stood over
[them] while [they] torched their homes” or “back to their baby’s death from
malaria” (128). As Matilda tells us, “some would be forever stuck on that day”
which is exactly what experts tell us is the effect of trauma. The adult’s
memories “in the form of vivid sensations and images” (19) making them
note that Matilda separates herself from those who suffered such tragic loss by
referring to them as “Others less fortunate” (128). She does not get “stuck”,
and, remaining separate from these losses by virtue of her age and subsequent
lack of responsibility, she is able to recall the memories and tell the story
without sensationalism. Unlike the adults, whose memories start and end with a
traumatic event, the child narrator begins her story in the time of “waiting”,
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before the atrocities become a reality and thus she chronicles a more complete
This does not mean that Mr Pip’s child narrator educates us with an
make sense of things that happen around her fall short of accuracy. Unlike
Scott, however, her subjectivity is not due to a belief that his “political
sentiments” (156) were correct, but rather because of her limited perspective. In
this way, the child narrator undermines the assured subjectivity of traditional
historical fiction that aimed to influence the reader, while at the same time
unsophisticated, island girl, Matilda embodies our vision of the nescient child
and Jones portrays her as intelligent, but uneducated in the ways of the world.
When Mr Watts tells the children that they will be meeting Mr Dickens the next
day, she and all the other pupils think they are going to meet an actual white
man, one who might, as her mother suggests, fix the generator. Matilda’s
natural acumen immediately sets her wondering “Who was Mr Dickens? And
why, in a village population of less than sixty, had we not met him before?” (16),
but of course her naive mistake due to a lack of formal education becomes a
source of gentle amusement for the reader. Her lack of schooling also causes
her to conflate Pip, the narrator of Great Expectations, with Mr Watts. When he
starts reading the, to us, well-known lines “My father’s family name being Pirrip,
and my Christian name Philip” (18), she believes he is talking about himself.
Matilda openly admits her lack of knowledge saying, “There was a lot of stuff I
didn’t understand”, but, here again, Jones shows us her natural intellect as she
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ponders “what marshes were; and what were wittles and leg irons” (21). She
attempts to work things out by comparing these strange words from a strange
time and a strange place to those she knows from her own life in order to make
some sense of them, just as she compares her life to Pip’s, finding comfort in
the comparison. Thus, Jones presents us with the story of the atrocity in the
voice of an uneducated young girl who, though she tries to interpret her world,
cannot possibly understand the politics involved and therefore cannot possibly
influence the reader with her subjective account. Unlike Scott, whose moral
certainty led him to enforce his interpretation of history, the child narrator
imparts her own homespun and tentative representation and thus pre-empts
unfolding before her eyes, Matilda’s chronicling of the crisis from her
the novel to evade the taint of sentimentality. We are not instructed on how to
interpret the events, instead, Reid sees her “deadpan reporting of civil war
so we are left to decide who is at fault and answer the questions to which Reid
refers as we see fit. When Mr Watts first tells the children that they will only
truly know Mr Dickens when they have finished reading the book, Matilda says,
“This was difficult information to bring home” (19). This difficulty is displayed
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instructed by her narration is averted because of her own lack of
understanding. When Matilda hears that the PNG helicopters that they see
flying overhead throw “captured rebels out the open door”, she observes that,
as a child, she only ever hears part of the story as “whenever us kids strayed
into range our mums and dads would stop talking”. Thus, though the children
knew “there was some fresh atrocity, the details [they] did not yet know about”
aware that the full picture remains undisclosed and Jones subtly distances Mr
Pip from traditional sentimental historical fiction that didactically instructed the
More than simply showcasing the efficacy of the child narrator, Mr Pip
reflects on that force by contrasting the difference between a child narrator and
his audience with his tales. However, there are moments in the novel when he
nose and pushing his wife Grace around on a cart. This was a spectacle from
which the locals “looked away” (2) for, as Matilda says, in her usual blunt
manner, “They would rather stare at a colony of ants moving over a rotting
pawpaw” (2). Later we find out that his whimsy and sensationalist leanings are
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island. He is, therefore, not averse to showmanship and when he says things
(134), we can imagine the aging thespian being carried away by his own
These words also affirm his belief in the power of stories to sentimentally
influence the listener and it also soon becomes clear that, like Scott, Mr Watts’
educated adult authority, it is difficult to work out what is fact and what is fiction.
Mr Watts’ Sheherazadeian story with which, night after night, he regales the
villagers and the rebels is not only full of this whimsy but is also filtered and
realises that “This wasn’t Mr Watts’ story [they] were hearing at all…It was a
made up story to which we’d all contributed” (163), a story woven together out
Around the rambo’s campfire, the world Mr watts revealed to us was not
entirely new space which they called the spare room. (153)
It was entertaining for the audience, even the drunken rebels, who “stood as if
they might not stay (but they always did)” (148), but, Mr Watt’s ambiguous story
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is told from his subjective point of view and therefore presents the islanders
adult, Matilda realises that even the version of Great Expectations that Mr
Watts read to them was an abridged version which he felt would “make it easier
on [their] young ears” despite the fact that he earlier insisted “you couldn’t muck
around with Dickens” (196). For Mr Watts, his didactic intentions for the children
hypocritically reads them a simplified version so that he can be sure they will
understand the novel. Unlike Matilda, he also explains what he says, further
displaying his didactic tendencies. When he lets slip during his tale that “white
is a feeling”, Matilda, despite her own lack of elucidation says, “Words written or
spoken aloud have to be explained” and Mr Watts obliges saying “We feel white
around black people” (156). Thus, Mr Pip highlights the didacticism of an adult’s
events.
Not only does Mr Pip utilise a child narrator to disguise the sentimentally
to the historical novel, it also validates the agency of the child narrator by
thematising the idea that children are not helpless sentimental objects. Mr Pip
acknowledges children’s capacity to act. Historian James Marten points out that
our past model, which still prevails, sees children as "without Political power"
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understanding of children results in literary and media exploitation of the
(52).
However, the idea that children are helpless and lacking agency has been
wounded child equates with “sensationalism” (133) and Mr Pip eschews this
right. In keeping with the old idea of the polite Victorian child who ‘should be
seen and not heard’, to try and keep Matilda safe when the redskins are taking
not say anything” (178). At the time, Matilda listens and “pretend[s] that [her]
voice was [her] secret” (178). However, as the child narrator, she finds her
voice and tells the story for all to hear. Because Mr Pip gives Matilda an
victims and allows Mr Pip to actively oppose the authorities’ desire to leave her
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soldiers to fight the rebel cause. Anthropologist David M. Rosen’s book on child
soldiering raises the subject of a child’s capacity for action suggesting that
children are not just victims. In his view, children pulled into conflict are
combination of necessity, honor, and moral duty” (55). When writing about
Jewish children who fought for their lives under Nazi oppression he says, “if
they were almost certain to die, they wanted to die under circumstances of their
own choosing” (55). The boys who melt into the jungle to join the rebels seem
“jungle juice” (138) they imbibe to mitigate their fear. Their weapons,
remain victims, are contrasted with their childlike attention to Mr Watts’ story as
“the boys sat there, with their mouth and ears open to catch every word” (141 -
142). Though Mr Pip thematises the idea of childish agency, Jones does not
endorse child soldiering. Stories are shown to be more powerful than their guns
when they lose themselves in Mr Watts’ tale and “Their weapons rest on the
ground in front of their bare feet like useless relics” (142). By employing a child
narrator to tell the story of the Bougainville villagers in a novel that has been
read by thousands, Mr Pip shows that the power of stories trumps the might of
violence.
writes, “either one counts the cadavers, or one tells the story of the victims”
(188). The problem is often that we do not want to listen or, as trauma expert
Judith Herman says, we do not believe the storyteller (8). Psychiatrist Leo
Etlinger, whose special interest is Nazi concentration camp survivors, says that
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“War and victims are something a community wants to forget; a veil of oblivion
is drawn over everything painful and unpleasant” (159). Despite our aversion to
the “tremendum horrendum” (Ricoeur 187), Jones found a way to tell a story
that no-one thought they wanted to hear. He also found a way to tell the story
influence how we feel about either the perpetrators or the victims. By engaging
a pragmatic young girl to tell the tale without hype, sensation or judgement, we
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Chapter 5. We Need New Names: Exposer of Social
Wrongs
But you are not the one suffering. You think watching on BBC means you
know what is going on? No, you don’t, my friend, it’s the wound that
knows the texture of the pain. (Bulawayo, We Need New Names 285)
England Tale (1822) to Susan Warner’s Wide, Wide World (1850) was the use
of the figure of the “wounded child” as emblem of social wrongs. These novels
children they immortalised and the causes they exposed (Lenard 46; Nelson
10; Sutliff Sanders 42). Charles Dickens also participated in the tradition,
sentimentally depicting the “wounded child” in the form of the orphan in Oliver
Twist (1837) and the physically deformed little crippled boy in A Christmas
Carol (184). Yet, while hugely popular in their day, the sentimentality of these
pity-invoking tales and their exploitation of the weakest and most vulnerable
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functions of imparting knowledge; connecting divided people; or chronicling
Nelson has pointed out, helped boost sales of popular periodicals in the latter
Wilde, referring to the serialised novel The Old Curiosity Shop, in a letter to his
friend Ada Leverson, mocked Dickens’ sentimental writing saying that “One
must have a heart of stone to read the death of little Nell without laughing”
(Oxford Dict. of Quot.147). Wilde’s words clearly show that the feelings evoked
by pitiable exposure of children’s suffering are not always the feelings they
affected by poverty and political injustice if the world has grown deaf to
sentimental recitals of children’s woe? What “art” can novelists employ to gain
and keep our attention when writing sentimental political fiction to expose social
straight-talking voice of the child, the authors of To Kill a Mockingbird, The Kite
political fiction.
This chapter will tease out a similar argument around NoViolet Bulawayo’s
2013 novel, We Need New Names, a post-colonial diasporic story of two parts
about a young girl called Darling who leaves behind her friends, family and
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cultural heritage for a supposedly better life in the United States. As I will show,
Tompkins 93) while avoiding the taint of sentimentality. At play here, I will
argue, is the fact that, in its endeavour to expose social wrongs, more than
sentimental tradition in which they come to figure social ills. Bulawayo also
childhood to the romantic tradition, distancing the wounded children in the novel
from their historical counterparts who openly pursue our pity. As I will show,
unlike Wordsworth’s pure and innocent image of the child who, despite life’s
afflictions “still is Nature's Priest” (72), the child narrator and her friends are
removing them as far away from Dickens’ “Dear gentle, patient, noble Nell”
effectively achieves a double coup: she not only obscures the strong
sentimental political functions of this novel by taking charge of the narration, but
because she is a child, and as such we find it difficult to ignore her, she gets
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facilitating the exposure of social wrongs. We Need New Names, then,
advocates for the plight of suffering people without the accompanying feeling of
message about political and social wrongs that has not been written off as
example of fiction that, by changing the role of the ‘wounded child” from pitiable
The argument will unfold as follows. I will start with a description of the
expose social wrongs. Following this, I will briefly discuss how sentimental
attitude to children, which I will then show how this attitude served to motivate
Following this will come a brief description of the findings of scholars like
Lauren Berlant, Susan Sontag and Philip Fisher, who criticise the sentimental
objectification of children for social intervention, not only on ethical grounds, but
also because they do not see the device as effective in driving meaningful
change. Next, I will show how elements of the novel centre it firmly in the
tradition of sentimental political fiction that uses the emblem of the “wounded
child” to expose social wrongs, before taking a look at the critical reception of
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the novel to bear out my claim that We Need New Names is not seen as
The image of the “wounded child” as a cue to sentiment has a long history
in fiction aiming for social transformation. Orphan girl novels like Susan
Warner’s Wide, Wide World (1850) and factory novels like Charlotte Elizabeth
Jean Jacques Rousseau’s romantic view that children are “without knowledge,
strength, or wisdom” and therefore need our protection because they are
“entirely at [our] mercy” (100), these novels’ descriptions of the “wounded child”
exposes this purpose saying, “I hope it may please God, before long, to rouse
the feelings of our fellow countrymen on behalf of the poor children in these
mills. If that was done, we should soon see a change for the better"(326). The
exploitation of children to drive reform was not limited to fictional texts and the
on the suffering of children to inspire social reform in both literary and mass-
media contexts increased in the 1890’s. Yet, while the appropriation of children
for social purposes was accepted on the grounds that it resulted in good being
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done for the children who needed help, these stories also ensured sales of
periodicals (Nelson 66-67). This, then, was the beginning of a literary tradition
wrongs.
around the image of the “wounded child” did serve to drive the move towards a
comprehensive set of human rights for children. As Fisher points out, “the
greatest achievement of sentimentality was the part that it played in creating full
human reality for children” (99). In the West, we believe implicitly in the rights of
the child to protection, education, food and shelter—a belief codified in The
United Nations Declaration of the Rights of the Child instituted in 1924. These
assistance that derives, in part, from the labour of sentimental political fiction.
The DRC puts forward a singular, universal vision of children’s needs that has
Yet, the move to protect children, as embodied in fiction that depicts the
the evidence shows that “some of the measures for child welfare—advocated
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often on humanitarian grounds—have the effect of…increasing [children’s]
Alan Prout observe, “The ‘world’s children’ united ‘our’ children and ‘their’
children only to reveal the vast differences between them” (1). Considering the
cases, as Boyden indicates, has had the alarming effect of making things
worse. For many theorists, then, the cultural and economic divide needs to be
taken into consideration (James and Prout 1; Jenks 123) and, for this to
exploitation on the basis that it strips them of their identity. Lauren Berlant
highlights the liberties taken with the privacy of the powerless pointing out that,
while for the average Westerner our “identity is private property” (50), the right
to privacy does not extend to the marginalised, and thus “the exploited child”
atrocities used to shock people into cognisance of social wrongs are also
relevant here, and easily transferable to literature. She too stresses the loss of
individual identity in our use of the “wounded child” figure, noting that in the
village” were used by both Serb and Croat propogandists. As she cynically
observes, “alter the caption and the children’s deaths can be used and reused”
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(10). Fisher similarly notes that sentimental political novels objectify “children,
slaves, and the old as central characters” (94) to stand in for the social topic
they address. In this reading, the character of the “wounded child”, is no more
than an emblem for the societal wrong the novel exposes, stripped of their
interiority. Thus, if we take these theorists’ ideas into account, we can conclude
that sentimental political fiction’s obsession with the emblem of the “wounded
child” denies the humanity and identity of the individual and that, in doing so, it
may fall short of the political goals that the exploiters of their images and stories
hope to realise.
We Need New Names fits snugly into the genre of pathetic tales of paediatric
political regime—children ousted from their homes and living in a squatter camp
with no running water, very little food to eat, and no recourse to medical care—
they are perfect candidates to take on the task of representing the social and
“displaced and at-risk” and as Nelson says, any writer “who [can] show the
poverty through prostituting her beauty; Stina does not even know his age as
he has no birth-certificate and Bastard and Godknows, angry with their lot, are
criminals in the making. Indeed, rather than denying the children’s role as
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incorporates the idea within the narrative. When the aid organisation which
Darling calls “these NGO people” (52) comes to dispense charity to the people
of Paradise they take photographs of the ragged and dirty children. The reader
knows they are destined to become part of the ubiquitous images of the
“wounded child” screened into our living rooms to expose the poverty and
another social wrong. For the “wounded child”, despite the physical comfort in
which she now lives with her aunt, Fostalina, it is a place defined by what it is
you will not see any men seated under a blooming jacaranda playing
draughts. Bastard and Stina and Godknows and Chipo and Sbho—will not
be calling [her] off to Budapest. You will not even hear a vendor singing
her wares, and you will not see anyone playing country-game or chasing
Instead of friends calling her out to play, all Darling can see from her window is
the cold snow, which she likens to “clean teeth” (148) because of its white
sterility, in stark contrast to “the flowers? The grass? The stones? The Leaves?
The Litter?” (148), the rich messiness of home. As in Zimbabwe, Darling is not
the only “wounded child” in America and second-generation Africans, like TK,
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the son of Aunt Fostalina’s partner, do not even speak or understand their own
mother tongue. We Need New Names suggests that when assimilated into their
new homes, displaced wounded children run the risk of losing their indigenous
perspective and thus will no longer have the language to report their story.
Though in the first half of the book the “wounded child” is used as an emblem to
life with fondness as she fantasises about what she would be doing “if [she]
were at home” (153). The reason she stays in America is purely so she will not
be hungry again. Her preference for her old life is illustrated by the utterance “I
will stand being in America, dealing with the snow, there is food to eat here”
(153).
Yet despite its political subject matter and its focus on the effects of social
problems on children, We Need New Names has not been received as a novel
that no reviewers have pointed an accusatory finger at the novel for sentimental
texture of characters' lives without adult judgment or pity” and Leyla Sanai
says, “Bulawayo refuses to play the pity card”. Author Uzodinma Iweala even
Zimbabwe is notable not for its descriptions of Paradise and Budapest but for
those of Darling’s interior landscape”. Added to this, the list of awards garnered
by Bulawayo for the novel is impressive: its first chapter, originally published as
a short story, won the Caine Prize for African Literature in 2011 and the novel
was shortlisted for the Man Booker Prize, the Guardian First Book Award and
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the Barnes & Noble Discover Award. In 2013 it won the inaugural Etisalat Prize
for Literature and the Los Angeles Times Book Prize Award for first Fiction and
in 2014, the Hemingway Foundation Award for Debut Fiction, clearly marking it
as a literary success.
How does the author achieve this feat? As I have indicated above, this
chapter contends that while deploying the figure of the “wounded child” as
“wounded child” not just as narrative object, but as narrator. The effect of this is
allows the novel to afford her a unique personality that obscures her affinity with
the objectified wounded children of yore. Indeed, we are not even told the name
of the country in which she lives, and details are limited to snapshot
narrator. The exposition of the extreme poverty that defines the children’s
observations about the world outside that contrast sharply with her life in the
squatter camp ironically named “Paradise”. When she is out with the gang and
they pass the new fancy stadium, she describes it as having “glimmering
benches [they will] never sit on” (2); the wealthy neighbouring suburb they raid
for guavas to fill their empty bellies is nick-named Budapest because, according
to Darling, “it is like being in a different country altogether. A nice country where
people who are not like us live” (4); and the corporeal marks of her harsh
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existence are exposed in her description of a wealthy adult woman’s “clean,
pretty feet, like a baby’s” (6) that are so different from her own, despite the fact
novels that pricked the tears of Victorian readers is Darling’s crude and
unique identity and sets her further apart from the innocent and vulnerable
version of the “wounded child”. Her thoughts are often crass and uncomfortably
innocent and helpless. As reviewer Susy Wyss claims, “Despite her name,
Darling is neither a sweet nor an endearing child. She is rough, tough and at
expresses her desire to” slap him, butt him on his big forehead…slam [her] fist
into his mouth and make him spit teeth” (15). Wyss identifies something that,
for a sentimental novel hoping to engage the sympathy of the reader, should be
a disaster, saying, “while we want to care for Darling because she is a child, we
are repelled by some of the things she says”. Brought up in, what she describes
as “a terrible place of hunger and things falling apart” (49), Darling speaks in a
vernacular that is often coarse and scatological. For example, a central motif in
the novel is Darling’s reference to her home and country as “kaka”, which in
and rude, the naivety of her comments reminds us of her youth and we do not
take offence, rather, our attention is directed to the circumstances in which she
lives.
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We Need New Names’ further develops the child narrator’s
narration of her and the gang’s anti-social behaviour. Rebelliously flouting the
image of the innocent sentimental heroine, Darling and her fellow “wounded
streets surrounding their impoverished squatter camp, taking the filth and the
squalor of the place with them. Roaming the streets after stealing fruit off the
just walk nicely like Budapest is now our country too, like we built it even,
eating guavas and spitting the peels all over to make the place dirty. We
stop at the corner of AU street for Chipo to vomit…her vomit looks like
site for a new shopping mall funded by Chinese businessmen, which they will
never have enough money to shop in. Darling makes the objectional and
xenophobic observation that the “fat Chinese man” who oversees the venture,
which the children call Shanghai, sounds like “he ching-chongs” (45) and when
the children’s request for gifts is denied Godknows threatens to “come at night
The aberrant behaviour and vulgar language that characterise Darling and
the other wounded children in the novel do more than de-sentimentalise the
child narrator’s identity, they also serve as a vehicle for exposing the novel’s
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message of social wrongs. When Darling refers to her country as “kaka” for
example We Need New Names draws attention to external social and political
wrongs that have shaped her and her fellow “wounded children”, without
challenges social norms, mocking authority and showing the reader that even a
child can see how bad things are for the disenfranchised people of Zimbabwe.
When they leave the Chinese construction site, Darling tells us that their voices
are raised in dissent against this capitalistic intrusion into a country more in
need of “A school? Flats? A clinic?” (46), “[they] are booing and yelling” (47).
The sad thing is that the “noisy machines” (47) drown out their protest. It is only
through Darling’s narration of the incident that we hear their dissenting voices
“telling [the Chinese] to leave [their] country and go and build wherever they
come from, that [they] don’t need their kaka mall, that [the Chinese] are not
even [their] friends” (47). In a country where the currency is so devalued that
her grandmother’s suitcase of money which she keeps under her bed is worth
less than nothing, what use is a shopping mall? Thus, Bulawayo invests Darling
with a political voice; she is not just an emblem of social problems, but a
narrator exposing how the state’s policies have resulted in a neglected and
powerless populace.
achieve the purpose of exposing social wrongs under the ostensibly apolitical
scholars Allison James and Adrian James, point out that play is traditionally
seen as a way for children to learn (91). Ironically, in Bulawayo’s novel, it is the
reader who learns about the world’s unfairness under the guise of Darling’s
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cognoscenti narration of their childish games that mimic the adult world. When
certain countries, like everybody wants to be the U.S.A. and Britain and
Canada and Australia…these are the country- countries” (49). As she says,
“Nobody wants to be the rags of countries like Congo, like Somalia, like Iraq…
not even this one we live in–who wants to be a terrible place of hunger and
things falling apart?” (49). Darling’s narration of the games she plays with her
friends exposes the contrast between herself and other children in more
affluent, stable countries and the reason for the social wrongs she and her
desirable, and more deserving of the label country because they function
properly, economically and politically, for their citizens. On the other hand, her
country, and others in a state of turmoil, do not and are therefore not real
countries.
Far from diluting the message, the horrific results of social wrongs
juxtaposed with childish games lend impact to the exposure. Darling’s friend
Chipo, for example, is pregnant and in the sentimental tradition of fictional fallen
women, like Susanna Rowson’s Charlotte Temple (1794), she is not married.
So traumatic is the situation for this preteen child, as, unlike her historical
counterparts, the father of her unborn child is also her own grandfather, she
loses the ability to speak. Darling tells a story about a girl called Nosizi, who “is
dead now, from giving birth. It kills like that” (78), which explains their fear that
Chipo might die in childbirth. This fear drives the girls of the gang to try and
help Chipo by “getting rid of [her] stomach” (78). The sensational nature of the
scenario is masked by the fact that Darling, from her childish perspective,
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narrates her experience of the attempted abortion as a game. The intervention
becomes embroiled in playful fantasies of television shows like ER, which Sbho
saw once when visiting Harare, and the fantasy fortunately comes to an abrupt
end when an adult appears on the scene and curtails any real action. Through
the eyes of the child narrator, what is really a very poignant and pathetic scene,
though the subjects of incest, child abuse, and the lack of medical care
resulting from poverty are never directly broached, these social wrongs are
exposed.
these games as playful imitations of the adult world, allows for exposure of
who was killed for opposing the existing political regime. The full force of the
fantasy emerges as she reports how Godknows enacts “the lorry that brought
the armed men who came for Bornfree” (140) as they all become “animals
possessed snake, screaming and screaming (142). The agency of the chid
narrator to voice the story is contrasted with the impotency of the adults as the
graves become “the people of Paradise who are standing there doing nothing”
(142). The adults’ eyes are full of “rage” (143), but they “don’t make any
sounds” (143). As Darling says, rage “does not count. It is a big terrible dog
with no teeth” (143). On the other hand, when a BBC reporter interrupts their
game asking, “What kind of game is that?” (143), Bastard replies, “Can’t you
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see this is for real” (143), which flags the effectiveness of Darling’s narration.
through her games and her childish vernacular is best illustrated through
contrast with the verbal impotence of the adult slumdwellers. As a child, she
can address the social wrongs that afflict her nation—the direct cause of her
We Need New Names makes frequent reference to the adult’s silence as they
hold back out of fear. No passage in the novel shows this forced silence more
clearly than when Darling describes voting day. The children “are quiet” as they
will the adults to speak up and be effective. As Darling puts it, “we want them to
open their mouths and speak…but they are just silent…like something crept
upon them while they were sleeping and cut out their tongues” (68). According
elections and democracy and new country” (68), but now they have no voice.
The chilling reality of a despotic regime is that if the adults do talk, they risk
their lives. Bornfree, named for the euphoric joy felt when the country achieved
its independence from white colonial rule, becomes politically active, speaking
does not go unheard and as Darling observes, “that made the adults stop
talking about change” (135). Instead “the adults just returned quietly to their
shacks to see if they could still bend low” (135). Despite his name, Bornfree’s
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friend and fellow campaigner, Messenger, cannot speak either and Darling
likens his mouth to “a terrible wound” (135), reiterating the image of the cut-out
here, however, is that it is the child that exposes the wrongs, rather than being
homeland in a negative light (Ndlovu 133; Sibanda 75) the novel exposes that
the social problems experienced by those who escape to a “better life” are also
political regime Darling should feel free to be more openly vocal, but instead, by
muting Darling’s voice after her move to the United States, Bulawayo shows the
social isolation felt by a refugee forced to leave her country. Despite the
home in Africa is strong and vibrant, but now, speaking for all her fellow
migrants Darling says, “Because we were not using our languages we said
things we did not mean; what we really meant remained folded inside” (140).
This new-found reticence is due to the fact that they feel out of place and
different. The novel exposes this feeling of displacement as she says,” I felt
everything” (165). Such is her isolation that she stops writing to her friends back
home, embarrassed by the fact that her life in America is not “the one [she] had
dreamed of back in Paradise” (188) and when she speaks on the phone to her
mother there are long pauses because she is “not sure what’s the right thing to
say” (204). Darling’s voice in the second half of the novel is censored by her
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sense of alienation and We Need New Names exposes how refugees
exchange one sort of marginalisation for another. The failure of politicians and
When in America, the child narrator also exposes the social problems
Zimbabwe, children in America do not play games in the street with friends,
instead they shut themselves up in their rooms playing with a computer. When
his virtual computer world. Darling, of course, questions him asking, “What kind
of game do you play by yourself?” (153). Thus, the child narrator exposes an
image of social alienation in which real people have been replaced by avatars.
Bulawayo’s social commentary continues when Darling makes friends with two
girls from school who share a common bond of displacement. The three girls’
‘game’ becomes rushing home every day from school to stream pornography.
Their childishness is shown when they turn down the sound to parody the
social wrongs the “wounded child” represents. Instead of real human sexual
relations, what Darling and her new friends’ witness is fake as is any virtual
she did a one roomed shack with her parents and later with her mother and her
lover. The social wrong that motivates Bulawayo’s reporting then is not a
prudish concern for childhood sexual purity, but rather an exposure of the
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ersatz experience of a society obsessed with an impossible version of life
and in her adopted home in the United States, without magnetising accusations
her novel which ironically has its genesis in some photographs of a child taken
during one of Zimbabwe’s worst times. As she puts it in an interview with the
Guardian:
the rubble that was his bulldozed home after the Zimbabwean government
image after haunting image, I became obsessed with where the people
would go, what their stories were, and how these stories would develop –
and more importantly what would happen to the kid in the first picture I
saw. The writing project essentially became about finding out. The country
was the backdrop, and of course it was at a time when it was unravelling
due to failure of leadership. Still, I was also inspired by what children can
stand for, by their innocence, their resilience, humanity and humour, and
what they tell us about our world. I think this is where We Need New
photographs that most of us would only glance at, and thus, set out to give the
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emblems in the images an identity. She also obscured their sentimental force
as objects of pity by giving them feisty personalities that make them interesting
and funny individuals, but not necessarily loveable. In so doing she reminds us
that it is not only the nice children that deserve saving and also that the effort of
In her critique of the plight of the refugee on foreign soil she also suggests that
the solution to the social wrongs caused by political upheaval should lie in
effective help to heal those wrongs at source. We Need New Names, while
using the emblem of the “wounded child” to expose the devastating social
wrongs that poverty can bring also shows us that wounded children are still
children playing childish games and having fun and therefore should not be
with unhappiness, nor, for that matter, that plenty equals happiness, as
would not dare, Bulawayo succeeds in exposing the social wrongs of our world
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Coda
The focus of this thesis is to uncover how the child narrator serves to enable
fiction to carry out traditionally sentimental political tasks without the taint of
fiction that aims to impart knowledge; connect people; chronicle history and
tactics, thereby masking the sentimentality of the political message they deliver.
traditional romantic image as innocent, pure and vulnerable, suggests that the
success of these novels to advance their cause lies in the fact when children
are individualised and given the power to speak, rather than be spoken about,
they become highly effective agents of reform without the taint of sentimentality.
In the process, it has raised questions about the moral and ethical
responsibilities of the reader when faced with the apparent guilelessness of the
child narrator. When assessing the culpability of minors for criminal offences,
New Zealand law adopts the rule of doli incapax, which enables flexibility when
it comes to criminal liability for children. The “Crimes Act” states that:
omitted by him or her when under the age of 10 years…No person shall
be convicted of any offence … when over the age of 10 years but under
the age of 14 years, unless he or she knew either that the act or omission
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There is, therefore, recourse for a plea of diminished responsibility when
sentencing a child, and the same mandate seems to apply to the child narrator
cynical view, because our narrator is a child and therefore entitled to see things
from a more black and white perspective. Just as in law, a judge has recourse
to doli incapax, so too are we entitled to judge more leniently when a novel is
narrated by a child. Thus, the child narrator helps novels mediate social and
Yet, while this thesis has emphasised the positive repercussions of the
use of the child narrator to surreptitiously influence our social and political
perceptions, it must also be acknowledged that their influence might not always
then a child can broach issues, which, for an adult, remain in the realm of the
unspeakable. Yet, if we view these effects through the lens of narrative ethics it
also seems that these affordances may not always be productive as the politics
responsibilities as readers and writers, the work of Wayne C. Booth and Ross
Chambers explores the consequences of the narrative act itself, and the costs
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incurred in exchanging person for character and representing others while
acknowledging the “power” of fiction to elicit emotion. Their work would provide
that the way the child narrator is portrayed appears to have developed over
time. It became clear that the reliance of the child narrator on the adult
characters in the novel is inversely proportionate with the age of the novel. In
other words, the more contemporary the novel, the more the child narrator
stands on their own two feet, the older the novel, the more the child narrator
engages with and receives support from adults. For example, in the oldest
is a complex mix of child and adult. The adult narrator’s voice props up the child
narrator’s naïve patter and helps to interpret her observations for the reader. In
The Kite Runner, published in 2003, over forty years later, the child narrator is
the form of flashbacks, and he hands over the entire job to the adult version of
occurs in the second part of Mr Pip, published in 2006, but in the first part of the
novel the child narrator is fully in charge of the narration. It is in We Need New
Names, the newest novel under discussion, published in 2013, that the child
narrator carries the burden of narration on her own without any apparent adult
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intervention. Further study of the changes in the use of the child narrator in
study of childhood per se as a field “in which the traditional confidence and
certainty about childhood and children’s social status are being radically
protectionist experience” (122). So, is the noticeable trend—to allow the child
move away from the more romantic view of children as innocent and
Lastly this research has raised the questions: what devices, other than the
capacity could the child narrator, and indeed any other devices, be used other
than in fiction to carry out their clandestine task? This line of questioning could
need to find other avenues and methods to reach out to people and elicit
lessons we learn from sentimental political fiction need not be limited to the
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