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    Last summer, the author took their English students on a trip from Winchester to London. They visited several popular tourist sites like Buckingham Palace and the Changing of the Guard ceremony. They also toured the British Museum. The author concludes that London is a fascinating city with good public transportation, and they would enjoy returning there again with their students.

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    An Email About A Trip

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    Last summer, the author took their English students on a trip from Winchester to London. They visited several popular tourist sites like Buckingham Palace and the Changing of the Guard ceremony. They also toured the British Museum. The author concludes that London is a fascinating city with good public transportation, and they would enjoy returning there again with their students.

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    Last summer, the author took their English students on a trip from Winchester to London. They visited several popular tourist sites like Buckingham Palace and the Changing of the Guard ceremony. They also toured the British Museum. The author concludes that London is a fascinating city with good public transportation, and they would enjoy returning there again with their students.

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    An Email About A Trip

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    EstefaniaRomeroRodriguez
    Last summer, the author took their English students on a trip from Winchester to London. They visited several popular tourist sites like Buckingham Palace and the Changing of the Guard ceremony. They also toured the British Museum. The author concludes that London is a fascinating city with good public transportation, and they would enjoy returning there again with their students.

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    Process-based

    Writing

    Brainstorming
    Generate ideas.

    Expanding
    Extend the ideas by
    making notes.

    Planning
    Organise the ideas
    into a diagram.

    Drafting
    Turn the ideas into
    sentences and link
    them.
    Proofreading

    Check the content,


    grammar, and
    vocabulary.
    Redrafting
    Rewrite the text.
    AN E-MAIL
    ABOUT A TRIP

    Brainstorming
    Generate ideas.

    1. When and where: last summer / London

    2. Who I went with: students

    3. How we got there: by bus

    4. Interesting places and activities: Buckingham


    Palace, Changing Guard, British Museum.

    5. Opinion: fascinating city.

    Expanding
    Extend the ideas by making notes.

    1. When and where: last summer from Winchester


    to London.

    2. Who I went with: my English students

    3. How we got there: we caught a bus from W to L.

    4. Interesting places and activities: visited


    Buckingham Palace, saw Changing Guard, visited
    the British Museum.

    5. Opinion: fascinating city + good public


    transport connections.
    AN E-MAIL
    ABOUT A TRIP

    Planning
    Organise the ideas into a diagram.

    OPENING (introduces the topic)

    1. When and where: last summer from Winchester


    to London.

    2. Who I went with: my English students

    3. How we got there: we caught a bus from W to L.

    BODY (gives details about the topic)

    4. Interesting places and activities: visited


    Buckingham Palace, saw Changing Guard, visited
    the British Museum.

    CLOSING (summarises the topic or


    gives a conclusion or opinion)
    5. Opinion: fascinating city + good public
    transport connections.
    AN E-MAIL
    ABOUT A TRIP

    Drafting
    Turn the ideas into sentences
    and link them.

    OPENING
    Hi John,
    Last summer, my English students and I caught a
    bus from Winchester to the beautiful city of
    London. We spent a great time there.

    BODY
    When we arrived in London, we visited the
    Buckingham Palace. We saw the place where
    Elizabeth II used to live when she was alive. We
    also had the chance to see Changing the Guard.
    After that, we went to the most important and
    visited museum in London which is the British
    Museum. There, we could learnt a lot of history
    from different places such as America, Ancient
    Egypt, Ancient Greece Rome, Asia and so forth.

    CLOSING
    London is a fascinating city you should visit at
    least once in a lifetime. Because there are good
    public transport connections, we got around
    really easily. I’d definitely go again with my
    students.

    Estefanía.
    AN E-MAIL
    ABOUT A TRIP
    Proofreading +
    Redrafting
    Check the content, grammar,
    and vocabulary.
    +
    Rewrite the text

    OPENING
    Hi John,
    Last summer, my English students and I caugt /
    caught a bus from Winchester to the beautiful
    city of London. We spent a great time there.

    BODY
    When we arrived in London, we visited the
    Buckingham Palace. We saw the place where
    Elizabeth II used to live when she was alive. We
    also had the chance to see Changing the Guard.
    After that, we went to the most important and
    visited museum in London which is the British
    Museum. There, we could learnt a lot of history
    from different places such as America, Ancient
    Egypt, Ancient Greece Rome, Asia and so forth.

    CLOSING
    London is a fascinating city you should visit at
    least once in a lifetime. Because there are good
    public transport connections, we got around
    really easily. I’d definitely go again with my
    students.

    Estefanía.
    AN E-MAIL
    ABOUT A TRIP

    EXAMPLE:

    OPENING

    Hi (Recipient’s Name),
    Last year, (who you went with) caught a (transport)
    from (place) to the beautiful city of (place). We
    spent a great time there.

    BODY
    When we arrived in (place), we visited the
    (something important from that place). We saw
    (extra info about the mentioned place). We also
    had the chance to see (another place). After that,
    we went to the most important and visited
    (another place). There, (extra info about the last
    place).

    CLOSING
    (Place) is a fascinating city you should visit at
    least once in a lifetime. Because there are good
    public transport connections, we got around
    really easily. I’d definitely go again with (people).

    (My Name)

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