Summarising & Informal Email Tips

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Summarising

The challenges of summarising


• Reshaping the text in their own words while preserving its original meaning
• Discriminating between what is relevant to the summary question and what is irrelevant
• Connecting the summary grammatically
• Keeping to a word limit

After reading the summaries submitted by some of the students, I’d like to remind you to follow
these steps in writing a summary.
1. Read the question carefully and according to the instruction, underline the points you will
include in the summary.
2. Try to find words and phrases in similar meaning for each underlined point wherever
possible.
3. Put the points in the order as instructed in the question.
4. Start your summary with a topic sentence, explaining what the paragraph is about. (You
don’t need to write two or three sentences as the introduction.)
5. Go straight to the points, using your own words wherever possible. (These points may or
may not be in the same order as in the original text.)
6. Write your summary from the third person point of view even if the original text is written
from the first person point of view.
7. Use appropriate linking words to make your summary coherent and well-organized.
8. Don’t add any extra information nor your own idea/opinion apart from these points.
9. Keep to the word limit. (You can use up to 120 words.)

Writing an informal email


• communicate information/ideas/opinions clearly, accurately and effectively
• organise ideas into coherent paragraphs using a range of appropriate linking devices
• use a range of grammatical structures accurately and effectively/ descriptive words as well
• show control of punctuation and spelling
• use appropriate register and style/format for the given purpose and audience

Using too many adjectives before a noun is confusing. (Three


is usually enough.)
• Break up a long description by adding a clause instead in order
to create a more mature style.

After reading the emails submitted by some of the students, I’d like to remind you to follow these steps in writing an
informal email.

 Read the question carefully, and underline the following points:


o what the situation is
o who you are writing to (for appropriate style and tone)
o what the main points are (check whether you have included all these main points when you edit the
mail)
 Look at the pictures (if given) and check whether they can support any ideas for your writing, and add some
more ideas of your own.
 Use the same format you learnt in writing an informal letter.
o greeting (Dear -------- (first name))

 Dear Nic,
 To Nic,
 Hi Nic,
 Hey Nic!
o introduction to the main part of the email (not a long introduction)
o the main points given in the question (in different paragraphs)
o ending (a short sentence like a concluding sentence)
o finishing off

 Thanks again for your help.


 I hope to hear from you soon.
 See you soon.
 Write soon.
 Keep in touch!
o closing with a signature
 Love,
 Lots of love,
 Best wishes,
 Yours,
 All the best,
 Keep to the word limit (150-200)
 Don’t be too informal as if you are speaking to a friend. (Don’t use
 shortened words/ text message phonetics)

Additional additionally; also; moreover; furthermore; again; further; then; besides; too; similarly;
comments or correspondingly; indeed; regarding.
ideas
Alternatives whereas; conversely; in comparison; by contrast; another view is…;
alternatively; although; otherwise; instead.

therefore; accordingly; as a result of; the result is/results are; the consequence is; resulting from;
consequently; it can be seen; evidence illustrates that; because of this; thus; hence; for this reason;
Analysing results owing to x; this suggests that; it follows that; otherwise; in that case; that implies;
Author (year) suggests that;

Cause / Reason as a result of; because (mid-sentence only)

Compare compared with; in the same way; likewise

Contrast by contrast; although; compared with; conversely; despite; however, nevertheless; yet

Effect / Result As a result; therefore; thus

Emphasising
however; nonetheless; furthermore; in the final analysis; despite x; notwithstanding x; in
earlier statements
spite of x; while x may be true, nonetheless
although; though; after all; at the same time; even if x is true; count

Introducing for example; for instance; namely; such as; as follows; as exemplified by; such as; including;
examples especially; particularly; in particular; notably; mainly;

Re-phrasing in other terms; rather; or; better; in view of this; in contrast

first (ly); second (ly); third (ly); another; additionally; finally moreover; also; subsequently;
Sequencing
eventually; next; then

Summary or in conclusion; therefore; to conclude; on the whole; hence; thus to summarise; altogether; overall; …
Conclusion following the research of…after analysis

Conjunction Function
for connects a reason to a result

and connects equal and similar ideas

nor connects two negative ideas

but connects equal but different ideas

or connects two equal choices

yet connects equal and contrasting ideas

so connects a result to a reason

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