Al-Shurooq Secondary Girls School/ English Department/ 2022-2023

Eng 301
booklet

English Department S.T: Mrs. Dalal Abdulla School principal: Mrs. Hanan Al-Sadoon
 Content

Units Writing content

Unit 1 Formal and informal email

Unit 2 Writing a questionnaire

Unit 3 For and against essay

Unit 4 Writing a short report

Writing a report of a table –

Unit 5
bar chart ….
Writing an online review (film,
Unit 6
book, program……..)
 Unit 1: Formal and informal email

Writing sample (Jidhafs Secondary Girls booklet):

 Formal Email ‫نموذج ايميل رسمي – دعوة لشخص رسمي‬

Dear Mr. James,

I hope my email finds you well. I am writing to invite you to come to my school to give a
lecture about Public Speaking to my school mates. I have attended your lecture last
Tuesday and I was really impressed. I feel that my school mates would really benefit from
this lecture. Would you be available on this Thursday, November 8th at 8 am? You would
be giving the lecture in our school’s sports hall.
I hope you would accept this invitation. Please let me know if the date is suitable or not. I
have also attached the location of our school in the email.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Julie Andrews

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Reply: ‫نموذج لرفض دعوة االيميل‬
Dear Ms. Andrews,
Thank you for your kind email and for attending my lecture about Public Speaking last week. I
am pleased that you liked it. I would love to give you the lecture, but I am sorry to tell you that I
will not be able to give the same lecture at your school. My schedule is fully booked for this
month. Please accept my apology. We can arrange another day after I finish my whole schedule,
or I may recommend one of my excellent colleagues to give the same lecture.
Anyway, I am sorry again. Message me whenever you need to.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Mark James

Reply: ‫نموذج مصغر للموافقة على الدعوة‬

Dear Ms. Andrews,
Thank you for your kind email and for attending my lecture about Public Speaking last week. I
am pleased that you liked it. It would be my pleasure to come to your school to give the same
lecture to your schoolmates. The date and time are both fine with me.
I look forward to seeing you all soon.
I would like to keep in touch.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Mark James
 Informal Email‫نموذج ايميل غير رسمي – دعوة لصديق‬

Hello Sara,
How are you? I missed you a lot! I’m doing really great! Thanks for sending me your lovely
pictures of your holiday. Dubai looks really great. How’s your new school? I hope it’s
really good. I’m coming back to Bahrain next week! We have to meet up. I will invite you
to my birthday party next week and you have to come! I am preparing for the party, and I
hope it will be really good. My party will be held on Friday 13th of May and it will take
place in our favourite place, Shake Shack restaurant at 5 pm.
Please, try to make it to the party, I miss you a lot! See you next week!
Love,
Noor
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‫نموذج ايميل غير رسمي – الموافقة على الدعوة‬
Hi Noor,
I’m fine. How are you and your family? I missed you a lot. My new school is amazing, and
it has many wonderful things. You should visit it. You would love it. I’m so happy to see
you next week. Anyway, thank you for inviting me to your birthday party. I’m so excited
for it and I have a very special gift for you. I’ll help you arranging the party with you. I’m
so glad to see you next week. Please, don’t forget to say hi to your family. Don’t forget to
send me your latest news. I’m waiting for your reply.
See you next week.
Good luck,
Sara
‫نموذج ايميل غير رسمي –رفض الدعوة‬
Hi Noor,
I’m fine. How are you and your family? I missed you a lot. My new school is amazing, and
it has many wonderful things. You should visit it. You would love it. I’m so happy to see
you next week. Anyway, thank you for inviting me to your birthday party. However, I’m
so sorry I can’t make it because my sister will get married at the same day. I’m so sorry.
Let us meet on another day and I will bring you a wonderful gift. Please, don’t forget to
say hi to your family and send me your latest news. I’m waiting for your reply.
See you next week.
Good luck,
Sara
 Unit 3: For and against essay

Model sample:
(Introduction )
In the last few years ………………….……..….. has been one of the issues people have
become interested in. Yet, it has been one of the topics they differ about. Some
people think it is positive and has many advantages. Others are against it and
believe that it has a lot of disadvantages. This essay will discuss the advantages
and disadvantages of it.
(Advantages)
On the one hand, many people find ……………………………. has many good things.
It is strongly felt by many of them that ……………………can have its bright side. One
of the arguments for ………………………….is that……………………………………….……...
In addition, ……….…………………………………………………………
……………………………………………………………………………….
Furthermore, …………………………………………………………………
………………………………………………………………………………..
(Disadvantages)
On the other hand, there are arguments against…………………..
Many people feel that it can has many disadvantages. First of all, ………
…………………………………………………………..……………………
What’s more, …………………………………..…………………………
Finally, ………………..…………….……………………………..…………
………………………………………………………………………………
(Conclusion)
As we have seen above, nothing is perfect. Everything can be dark or bright;
positive or negative. It depends on the way we deal with it. Therefore, I believe
people should look for the good things in this topic. In my opinion, I think it is
……………………., because it is ……………………………………………
……………………………………………………………………………………..
Sample topics *Fill in the blanks using the tables below to complete the for and against essay.
"studying abroad"

Advantages Disadvantages

• It is a good way to improve your language • You might be affected by the culture and
and education. traditions of the country you are staying in.
• You can meet new people and learn • A person can feel lonely as he is away from
about the country's culture. home and family
• You can get a certificate that might be • It costs families a lot of money.
very useful I getting a good job.
"school uniform"

Advantages Disadvantages

• It gives clear identity of the • You have to wear the same dress everyday(
school(everyone knows which school you one feels bored and unmotivated) .
are in) • No chance to develop your character .
• Students look smart and nice( they have • Schools choose unattractive colours and
the same design and colour ) styles that do not suit teenagers.
• Every family can afford school uniform, • Teenagers like to feel free
so people are confident and feel equal .
Model writing:
In the last few years studying abroad has been one of the most controversial issues.
Some people may go for it, whereas many people might not. This essay explains this
issue with some examples for both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, there are many good points for studying abroad. To start with, the
universities abroad offer a high quality of learning experiences which later opens up so
many opportunities in the . Furthermore, it gives the students the chance to develop their
character. For example, they become more independent and are more able to face
different challenges and learn to deal with them. Also, it provides the students with a
good opportunity to integrate with different cultures, learn about other religions, and meet
new people.
On the other hand, there are other people who disagree with the idea of studying
abroad. Firstly, studying abroad may add a financial burden to the family. It is highly
expensive to study in an internationally recognized university. Secondly, young students
might feel homesick. This leads them to face difficulties when trying to adapt to the new
environment. Thirdly, students could easily be over deceived by the cultural liberation
abroad and lose their faith and belonging to their own religion and traditions.
In conclusion, I believe that studying abroad is very beneficial and it is a great
opportunity for the students to develop their abilities and life skills. Also, it provides the
students with a real chance to practice their English language. Actually, people will
always have different opinions over such issue with several justifications to support their
personal beliefs.
 Unit 4: Writing a short report

Model sample:
Introduction
This report was requested by-----------, ----------. It investigates/studies ---------- and considers
whether the ------------ is effective and safe. The report was to be submitted by --------.
Facts and finding
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Conclusion
Scientific experts and users of the ------------------------- are divided about its benefits.
However, ------------------ is considered to be safe .
OR
Some -------------------------have harmful effect on the body, but there are many ------------------
--------- that are useful.

Recommendations
It is recommended that patients:
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Previous exam question sample:
Writing sample (Jidhafs Secondary Girls booklet):

Avocado Oil (short report)

Introduction
This report was requested by Teacher Ruqayah Sharif, head of the science magazine. This report
aims to examine if this oil is effective and safe. The report was to be submitted by 14 October
2021.
Facts & Findings
• This oil can be applied on the hair, skin, fingernails and skin.
• Can be mixed with shampoos, lotions and body wash bottles.
• Avocado oil is nutrient since it’s made of 100% avocado oil.
• Can be used for healthier hair and skin.
• Avocado oil is heavy in texture and helps keep the skin supple.
Conclusion
Avocado oil is one of the best personal care products. Experts proved that avocado oil is effective
and safe.
Recommendation It is recommended for users to:
• Keep away this product from direct sunlight.
• Add a few drops for the hair to grow faster and a few drops to the body for a healthier looking
face, skin and stronger fingernails.
• This oil is not for drinking and keep it away from the eyes.
• Store it in a cool and dry place. Lemon Mint Specialist in Natural Products.
 Unit 5: Writing a report of a table – bar chart

Writing sample:
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Sales of Music in Austrailia
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2011 2012 2013 2014 2015

Music CD Digital downloads Large chains small music shops

A. Gives the main information.

This chart shows the results of a study carried out for a music industry association into
spending in music CDs in Australia. The study compares spending from 2011 to 2015 across
different outlets for music CDs: digital downloads, small independent music shops and large
chains.
B. Gives the source of the information and what it shows.
In general, the survey shows that after reaching a peak in 2013, spending on CDs specially in
large chains has been falling. Spending on music CDs specially the top ten list in large chains
in 2013, was nearly double the amount in 2014, which represents a sharp drop in revenue for
the big stores.
C. Gives more details and any surprising or opposite information.
Between 2012 and 2014 there was a slight increase in the sale of music CDs through small
independent music shops. However, from 2014 to 2015 there was a constant rise in the sale
of digital downloads, which is expected to continue due to the increasing number of people
using smart devices. That would make the digital downloads sector grow rapidly and become
the largest sector in this market. Interestingly, prices of music CDs from different outlets and
sellers remained stable without noticeable changes despite the cheaper digital downloads.
Some large chains had heavy discounts during special occasions and holidays that would
match up the digital downloads.
D. Conclusion:
In summary, spending on music in Australia has not shown any significant decline since
2011, but there has been a significant shift from customers buying music CDs to buying
digital downloads. This could be seen as the greatest fall in spending on music CDs since the
beginning of recorded music industry.
Writing sample (Jidhafs Secondary Girls booklet):
 Unit 6: Writing an online review (film, book, program….)

Layout of the writing:

1- Introduction:
Name of the (film, book, play…)
Cast (names and roles)
Genre (drama, comedy, action ..)
2- Summary:
Write the summary of the (film, book, play…)
Mention the good and bad things about the work
3- Conclusion and recommendations:
Write your opinion about the (film, book, play…) and recommendation to read/watch it.

Writing sample:
Harry Potter
-Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone is a fantasy film written by British author J. K.
Rowling. It was directed by David Heyman. I watched the film with my sister yesterday. It is one of
the best films I have ever seen.
-It is an English film that was produced in 2001. The actors who play main roles in the film
are Daniel Radcliffe as Harry Potter, Rupert Grint as Ron Weasley, Emma Watson as Hermione and
Robbie Coltrane as Hagrid. Harry Potter thinks he is a perfectly normal boy. Unfortunately, he lives,
in a house in England, with his bad Uncle Vernon, his nosy Aunt and his bullying cousin, Dudley,
who all make Harry’s life miserable. Harry was living in an old cupboard under the stairs of their
house. Unusual things happen to Harry, such as an incident with a snake at the zoo, which resulted
in him being locked in the cupboard for a month! Then his Uncle Vernon got angry, so he took the
family somewhere where he thinks no-one will find him, but he was mistaken. A huge man goes to
tell Harry some very amazing news: Harry is a wizard! Soon, Harry has lots of adventures in his new
wizarding school with his best friends, Ron and Hermione.
-I love this film so much, because when you watch it, you feel like you are living the story.
However, I find some scenes a little scary. Except that, you feel like you want to watch more and
can’t wait to find out what will happen next. The music is wonderful, it makes you feel the
moments.
-This amazing film is exciting, fun, and wonderful to watch! I think that everyone should watch this
film because it is full of interesting events.
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