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Cambridge International General Certificate of Secondary Education

ENGLISH AS A SECOND LANGUAGE 0510/21

Paper 2 Reading and Writing (Extended) October/November 2018
MARK SCHEME
Maximum Mark: 90

Published

This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of the
examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not indicate the
details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners’ meeting before marking began, which would have
considered the acceptability of alternative answers.

Mark schemes should be read in conjunction with the question paper and the Principal Examiner Report for
Teachers.

Cambridge International will not enter into discussions about these mark schemes.

Cambridge International is publishing the mark schemes for the October/November 2018 series for most
Cambridge IGCSE™, Cambridge International A and AS Level components and some Cambridge O Level
components.

This document consists of 13 printed pages.

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Generic Marking Principles

These general marking principles must be applied by all examiners when marking candidate answers.
They should be applied alongside the specific content of the mark scheme or generic level descriptors
for a question. Each question paper and mark scheme will also comply with these marking principles.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 1:

Marks must be awarded in line with:

• the specific content of the mark scheme or the generic level descriptors for the question
• the specific skills defined in the mark scheme or in the generic level descriptors for the question
• the standard of response required by a candidate as exemplified by the standardisation scripts.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 2:

Marks awarded are always whole marks (not half marks, or other fractions).

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 3:

Marks must be awarded positively:

• marks are awarded for correct/valid answers, as defined in the mark scheme. However, credit
is given for valid answers which go beyond the scope of the syllabus and mark scheme,
referring to your Team Leader as appropriate
• marks are awarded when candidates clearly demonstrate what they know and can do
• marks are not deducted for errors
• marks are not deducted for omissions
• answers should only be judged on the quality of spelling, punctuation and grammar when these
features are specifically assessed by the question as indicated by the mark scheme. The
meaning, however, should be unambiguous.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 4:

Rules must be applied consistently e.g. in situations where candidates have not followed
instructions or in the application of generic level descriptors.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 5:

Marks should be awarded using the full range of marks defined in the mark scheme for the question
(however; the use of the full mark range may be limited according to the quality of the candidate
responses seen).

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 6:

Marks awarded are based solely on the requirements as defined in the mark scheme. Marks should
not be awarded with grade thresholds or grade descriptors in mind.

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IGCSE English as a Second Language Extended tier Reading/Writing (Paper 2)

This component forms part of the Extended tier assessment of IGCSE English as a Second Language
and tests the following Assessment Objectives:

AO1: Reading
R1 identify and retrieve facts and details
R2 understand and select relevant information
R3 recognise and understand ideas, opinions and attitudes and the connections between related
ideas
R4 understand what is implied but not actually written, e.g. gist, relationships, writer’s
purpose/intention, writer’s feelings, situation or place

AO2: Writing
W1 communicate clearly, accurately and appropriately
W2 convey information and express opinions effectively
W3 employ and control a variety of grammatical structures
W4 demonstrate knowledge and understanding of a range of appropriate vocabulary
W5 observe conventions of paragraphing, punctuation and spelling
W6 employ appropriate register/style

Overview of exercises on Paper 2

Reading Marks for Writing Marks for Total
objectives reading objectives writing available
tested objectives tested objectives marks

Exercise 1 Reading (1) R1, R2 9 – 9

Exercise 2 Reading (2) R1, R2, 15 – 15

R4

Exercise 3 Information R1, R2, 6 W1, W5 2 8

transfer R4,

Exercise 4 Note- R1, R2, 9 – 9

making R3

Exercise 5 Summary R1, R2, 6 W1, W2, 5 11

R3 W3, W4,
W5

Exercise 6 Writing (1) – W1, W2, 19 19

W3, W4,
W5, W6

Exercise 7 Writing (2) – W1, W2, 19 19

W3, W4,
W5, W6

90

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Question Answer Marks

1(a) Hawaii 1

1(b) (became) light(er) 1

1(c) World Surfing Championship(s) 1

1(d) Nosara (in Costa Rica) 1

1(e) (excellent) balance 1

1(f) listen to shark news 2

avoid places where sharks have been (seen)

ONE MARK FOR EACH CORRECT DETAIL

1(g) jellyfish 1

1(h) check weather 1

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Question Answer Marks

2(a) journalism 1

2(b) Standing Still 1

2(c) giving talks (at literary events) 1

2(d) fashion designer / cannot name person 1

2(e) Fish (Poetry Prize) 1

2(f) write book they like to read 2

make characters believable
rewrite

ONE MARK FOR EACH CORRECT DETAIL (MAX 2 MARKS)

2(g) worried about quality (of writing) 2

run out of inspiration

ONE MARK FOR EACH CORRECT DETAIL

2(h) copywriting / adverts / publicity 1

2(i) non-fiction 1

2(j) 1 rejection 4
2 no regular income
3 editors change scripts / editors rewrite
4 rewrite
5 (strict) deadlines

ONE MARK FOR EACH CORRECT DETAIL (MAX 4 MARKS)

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Question Answer Marks

3 Section A: Personal details

Full name: Naoko Toki / Toki Naoko 9

Current age: 20 (if ‘years’ is included, this must be in the plural) 9

Delete Male 9

Contact details: [email protected] 9

Phone: 0081450231178 9

Section B: Experience

Circle 3–5 9

Current employer: Hiroto 9

Hair techniques you are trained in: 9

freehand
undercutting

Section C: Course details

Name of preferred course: Film Hairdressing 9

Preferred dates: 15 January to 20 February (accept any correct expression 9

of the date e.g. 15/1, 1/15, 20 Feb 2019)

Do you require a visa: DELETE ‘NO’ 9

Type of accommodation required: student / academy (residence) 9

Total for Sections A–C 6

Section D

Sample sentences:
I want to be able to create hairstyles from different periods of history.
I would like to learn to do hairstyles for many different characters.

Total for Section D 2

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Question Answer Marks

3 Characteristics of a correct sentence:

It must be written from the point of view of Naoko, so, if used, only FIRST
PERSON PRONOUNS (I, my etc.) are acceptable.
It must contain a main clause.
It can include extra correct irrelevant information
It cannot include any additional incorrect information even if a relevant
reason is given.
If these conditions are not fulfilled, no marks can be awarded.

Marking Criteria

2 marks: no fewer than 12 and no more than 20 words; proper sentence

construction; correct spelling, punctuation and grammar; relevant to context.

1 mark: no fewer than 12 and no more than 20 words; proper sentence

construction; 1–3 errors of punctuation / spelling / grammar that do not
obscure meaning; relevant to context.

0 marks: more than 3 errors of punctuation / spelling / grammar; and/or

irrelevant to context, and/or not a proper sentence; and/or fewer than 12
words or more than 20 words.

Absence of a full stop at the end should be considered as 1

punctuation error.
Absence of an uppercase letter at the beginning should be considered
as 1 punctuation error.
Omission of a word in the sentence should be considered as 1
grammar error.

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Question Answer Marks

4 Reasons why original footpath was unsafe Max 4

1 age / weather / sun, wind, rain
2 steep wall (of valley) / steep valley
3 100 metres above river / high
4 holes (in concrete)
5 chunks fell (into river)
6 steel broke (into pieces) / steel rusty

Recommendations to tourists Max 3

7 not to go (on footpath) if scared of heights
8 take (plenty of) water
9 don’t forget camera
10 (take time to) enjoy scenery
11 arrive early (in the morning) / avoid queues

How the new footpath has helped local people Max 2

12 (improved) facilities
13 (more) jobs
14 no climbing equipment / no ropes / no special sandals
15 walk to each other’s homes / visit neighbours / see each other

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In questions where there are two discrete aspects of Content, candidates who only score on one
aspect of Content will only achieve a maximum of three marks for Language.

Question Answer Marks

5 Content: up to 6 marks Max 6

Why cars are so important to people

1 freedom
2 take children to school / take children from school / transport children
3 express personality
4 jobs (in car industry)
5 vital to business / transport goods / transport merchandise

Negative effects of cars on the environment

6 (air) pollution / fumes
7 (roads) spoiling rural areas
8 flooding / rainwater can’t drain away
9 green spaces built on / car parks

Language: up to 5 marks Max 5

0 marks: no understanding of the task / no relevant content / meaning

completely obscure due to serious language inaccuracies

1 mark: copying without discrimination from text / multiple language

inaccuracies

2 marks: heavy reliance on language from the text with no attempt to

organise and sequence points cohesively / limited language
expression making meaning at times unclear

3 marks: some reliance on language from the text, but with an attempt to
organise and sequence points cohesively / language
satisfactory, but with some inaccuracies

4 marks: good attempt to use own words and to organise and sequence
points cohesively / generally good control of language

5 marks: good, concise summary style / very good attempt to use own
words and to organise and sequence points cohesively

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Question Answer Marks

6 Email 19

Question Answer Marks

7 Extended writing 19

The following general instructions, and table of marking criteria, apply to both exercises.

1 Award the answer a mark for content (C) [out of 10] and a mark for language (L) [out of 9] in
accordance with the General Criteria table that follows.

2 Content covers relevance (i.e. whether the piece fulfils the task and the awareness of
purpose/audience/register) and the development of ideas (i.e. the detail/explanation provided
and how enjoyable it is to read).

3 Language covers style (i.e. complexity of vocabulary and sentence structure) and accuracy (of
grammar, spelling, punctuation and use of paragraphs).

4 When deciding on a mark for content or language, first of all decide which mark band is most
appropriate. There will not necessarily be an exact fit. Then decide between 2 marks within that
mark band. Use the lower mark if it only just makes it into the band and the upper mark if it fulfils
all the requirements of the band but doesn’t quite make it into the band above.

5 When deciding on a mark for content, look at both relevance and development of ideas. First
ask yourself whether the writing fulfils the task, in terms of points to be covered and the length. If
it does, it will be in at least the 4–5 mark band.

6 When deciding on a mark for language, look at both the style and the accuracy of the language.
A useful starting point would be first to determine whether errors intrude. If they do not, it will be
in at least the 4–5 mark band.

7 The use of paragraphs should not be the primary basis of deciding which mark band the work is
in. Look first at the language used and decide on a mark, and if there are no paragraphs, deduct
one mark.

8 If the essay is considerably shorter than the stated word length, i.e. below 105 words, it should
be put in mark band 2–3 for content or lower for not fulfilling the task. The language mark is likely
to be affected and is unlikely to be more than one band higher than the content mark.

9 If the essay is totally irrelevant and has nothing to do with the question asked, it should be given
0 marks for Content and Language, even if it is enjoyable to read and fluent.

10 If the essay is partly relevant and therefore in mark band 2–3, the full range of marks for
language is available.

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GENERAL CRITERIA FOR MARKING EXERCISES 6 AND 7 (Extended Tier)

Mark CONTENT: relevance and Mark LANGUAGE: style and accuracy

band development of ideas band (AO: W1, W3, W4, W5)
(AO: W1, W2, W6)

8–9–10 Highly effective: 8–9 Precise:

Relevance: Style:
Fulfils the task, with consistently Ease of style. Confident and wide-
appropriate register and excellent sense ranging use of language, idiom and
of purpose and audience. tenses.
Award 10 marks. Award 9 marks.

Fulfils the task, with consistently A range of language, idiom and tenses.
appropriate register and very good Award 8 marks.
sense of purpose and audience.
Award 8/9 marks. Accuracy:
Well-constructed and linked paragraphs
Development of ideas: with very few errors of any kind.
Original, well-developed ideas. Quality is
sustained. Outstanding.
Award 10 marks.

Shows some independence of thought.

Ideas are well developed, at appropriate
length and convincing. The interest of
the reader is sustained. Award 9 marks.

Ideas are well developed and at

appropriate length. Enjoyable to read.
Award 8 marks.

6–7 Effective: 6 Competent:

Relevance: Style:
Fulfils the task, with appropriate register Sentences show variety of structure and
and a good sense of purpose and length. Attempt at sophisticated
audience. vocabulary and idiom. Award 7 marks.
Award 7 marks.
Sentences show some style and
Fulfils the task, with appropriate register ambitious language. However, there may
and some sense of purpose and be some awkwardness making reading
audience. less enjoyable. Award 6 marks.
Award 6 marks.
Accuracy:
Development of ideas: Mostly accurate apart from minor errors
Ideas are developed at appropriate which may include infrequent spelling
length. Engages reader’s interest. errors. Good use of paragraphing and
linking words. Award 7 marks.

Generally accurate with frustrating

errors. Appropriate use of paragraphing.
Award 6 marks.

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Mark CONTENT: relevance and Mark LANGUAGE: style and accuracy

band development of ideas band (AO: W1, W3, W4, W5)
(AO: W1, W2, W6)

4–5 Largely relevant: 4–5 Satisfactory:

Relevance: Style:
Fulfils the task. A satisfactory attempt Mainly simple structures and vocabulary
has been made to address the topic, but but sometimes attempting a wider range
there may be digressions. of language. Award 5 marks.
Award 5 marks.
Mainly simple structures and vocabulary.
Does not quite fulfil the task although Award 4 marks.
there are some positive qualities. There
may be digressions. Accuracy:
Award 4 marks. Meaning is clear and of a safe standard.
Grammatical errors occur when
Development of ideas: attempting more ambitious language.
Material is satisfactorily developed at Paragraphs are used, showing some
appropriate length. coherence. Award 5 marks.

Meaning is generally clear. Simple

structures are usually sound. Errors do
not interfere with communication.
Paragraphs are used but without
coherence or unity. Award 4 marks.

2–3 Partly relevant: 2–3 Errors intrude:

Relevance: Style:
Partly relevant and some engagement Simple structures and vocabulary.
with the task. Inappropriate register,
showing insufficient awareness of Accuracy:
purpose and / or audience. Meaning is sometimes in doubt.
Award 3 marks. Frequent errors do not seriously impair
communication.
Partly relevant and limited engagement Award 3 marks.
with the task. Inappropriate register,
showing insufficient awareness of Meaning is often in doubt. Frequent,
purpose and / or audience. distracting errors which slow down
Award 2 marks. reading.
Award 2 marks.
Development of ideas:
Supplies some detail but the effect is
incomplete and repetitive.

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Mark CONTENT: relevance and Mark LANGUAGE: style and accuracy

band development of ideas band (AO: W1, W3, W4, W5)
(AO: W1, W2, W6)

0–1 Little relevance: 0–1 Hard to understand:

Very limited engagement with task, but Multiple types of error in grammar /
this is mostly hidden by density of error. spelling / word usage / punctuation
Award 1 mark. throughout, which mostly make it difficult
to understand. Occasionally, sense can
No engagement with the task or any be deciphered. Award 1 mark.
engagement with task is completely
hidden by density of error. Density of error completely obscures
Award 0 marks. meaning. Whole sections impossible to
recognise as pieces of English writing.
If essay is completely irrelevant, no mark Award 0 marks.
can be given for language.

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