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* key feature:
- trend
- order
- stability (not a stability)
- most dramatic change
- similarity
- difference
Given in the bar chart are figures related to investments in four different sectors among five
various companies.
As is seen from the chart, construction was the category where organizations A, D and E
spent the largest investments, whereas machines were invested the least in corporations A
and B. Another key feature is that while B funded training its employees the most, this aim
was least focused in company C.
Regarding investments in building, uniformities were recorded in how much money spent
on this purpose among companies C, D and E, at 1 billion euros. The two remaining
companies A and B were higher by a margin (gap) of 0.4-0.5 billion euros. Meanwhile, most
firms (companies) examined spent a range/ worth of 0.8 - 1 billion euros on facilities, with
the sole exception (+Ving) being company C, which financed/ channelled 1.3 billion euros.
Concerning the funding for staff training and experimenting, an identical pattern emerged
across the companies examined, with investments in the former trumping those in the latter
by a gap of 0.1 - 0.3 billion euros. Exclusive from this pattern was corporation C where the
reverse was seen, with 0.8 billion euros and 1.3 billion euros being invested in these two
fields.
Demonstrated in the bar chart is the allocation of leisure time for different types of interests
among those aged 15-19 and 75+ in the US.
Overall, while younger generations in the US spent the minority of their time in a day
(cognitively beneficial activities) reading and easing & reflecting, their elderly counterparts
were least dedicated to physical activities. Also, watching TV occupied the bulk of the two
examined age groups’ time; and the time for social purposes was quite equal between these
two groups.
While the oldest population in the US spent 4.5 hours daily watching TV, its youngest
counterpart spent only a half of that. Conversely, the latter dwarfed the former in their time
using computers (1.1 hours per day compared to 0.5 hours per day). Meanwhile, these
discrepancies were not recorded in the time spent by both on socializing (around 0.7-0.8
hours per day).
The lowest amounts of time were spent on reading and relaxing & thinking by the youngest
age group in the US, which were 0.1-0.2 hours per day. In comparison, the time spent by the
grey on these two interests was much higher by 5-6 times. On the contrary, while 0.6
hours per day were carved out by the young for physical pursuits (= physical activities),
the respective figure for the old was only 0.2 hours per day.
*devoted the majority of their day to unwinding on their computers.

The viewership rate of Feature films and sports TV programs was quite the same, being
18% - 23% across all the age groups examined.
- Cartoons vs News: 29-4 so với 6-23
- soaps opera and TV dramas: no noticeable distinctions here, range from 12-19 and
8-13 %
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* Phân loại: 2 loại MAP (loại 1 hình, loại 2 hình); 2 loại MAP (landscape & layout→ bản chất)
* Thì thời:
- QK => HT: hiện tại hoàn thành (ko rõ ràng thời gian)
- QK => QK: quá khứ & quá khứ hoàn thành
- QK/ HT => TL: tương lai đơn & kế hoạch (will/ be planned to do sth)
* Những thay đổi:

- Sự đập đi: demolish; remove - demolition; removal
- Sự xây thêm: build; erect; construct; emerge; introduce; appear - building;
erection; construction; emergence; introduction; appearance
- Sự bổ sung: install; add - installment; addition
- Sự trồng cây - khai thác (những nơi thuộc về tự nhiên bị chuyển sang cơ cấu xây
dựng): the exploitation of the green covers; the construction of sth at the expense
of (vacant lands).
- Sự tái quy hoạch: rearrange/ relayout/ replan/ restructure - rearrangement;
restructure *di dời: relocate - relocation
- Sự tái mục đích: be re-purposed; re-functioned to be
- Sự thay đổi kích cỡ: resize/ shrink - shrinkage/ enlarge - enlargement/ expand -
expansion/ lengthen/ extend - extension; widen/
- Sự thay thế: replace; supersede - replacement
- Sự nâng cấp: upgrade/ renovate - renovation/ urbanize - urbanization/
modernize - modernization
- Sự chuyển đổi: be turned into; be converted into; be transformed into
- Sự sát nhập: merge (v/n); incorporate - incorporation; integrate - integration
* Phương pháp:
- Thứ tự 1: Bắt đầu từ northwest, theo chiều ngược kim đồng hồ
*chiều trong - chiều ngoài; trái - phải
- Thứ tự 2: Bắt đầu từ thứ không thay đổi (điểm tâm)
I. Opening: (nếu đến the present => having occurred)

Depicted in the illustration are the developments occurring (QK - QK)/ having occurred
(QK-HT) in a city named Forton Valley over the course of 10 years, commencing in 2000.
● documented (v) diagram
II. Overview: 2 sentences
Sen 1: general statement & Sen 2: key features
Throughout the survey, the city of Forton Valley underwent a range of dramatic layout
transformations, with the most noticeable ones being the construction of new infrastructure
at the expense of nature, with the purpose of organizing , and the rearrangement of some
existing structures.
( → with +n +V-ing)
III. Body:
Located/ Situated at the northwest of the left-hand block was a shopping center in 2000,
which had been left intact by 2010. Down this shopping mall, the farmland had been
converted into a playground where students could play. Meanwhile, the nearby dairy farm
had been restructured to be the premises housing/accomodating a toy store and the K.G.
school, (with) the latter having been relocated from the right-hand block.
A university named Forton had been erected where it used to be the K.G. school. In the
vicinity of this university by 2010 was a public library which had superseded the city hall.
Adjacent to this area towards the south, another parking space had been added next to the
former one, with the park nearby at the southeast corner having been exploited to construct
a versity coffee shop.
→ the construction of leisure amenities at the expense of nature and the expansion of the residential
areas; as well as the erosion of infrastructure fo r the fishing industry.
BD từ khi dân cư, xuống dưới

cà phê - hotel giữ nguyên. bên cạch hotal có 1 cái car park dc xây to the north lên trên golf
phục vụ cho nhu cầu giải trí of citizens
→ HTHT
next to the hotel, a car park has been erected to accommodate the parking needs of hotel-
goers. to the north from thai area, the forest park and farmland
https://www.facebook.com/IELTStuconso0/videos/260777222668466
* sự mở rộng mặt bằng: the expansion of the premises at the expense of nature

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* key feature:

*devoted the majority of their day to unwinding on their computers.

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* Những thay đổi:

I. Opening: (nếu đến the present => having occurred)

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