Poetic Devices11
Poetic Devices11
Poetic Devices11
My Mother at Sixty-Six
1. Enjambment: One of the most important poetic devices used in this poem is
enjambment. Das does not use any full stop marks throughout the text, even at the end.
There is an ellipsis (…) at the end of the last line. The poet enjambs the lines to create a
chain of thoughts. Each line proceeds to the following one to complete the idea,
continuing until the end. The whole idea becomes clear after going through a few lines.
For example, the context becomes clear after reading the first four lines:
Driving from my parent’s
home to Cochin last Friday
morning, I saw my mother,
beside me,
Then readers have to go through the succeeding lines (5-10) in order to know what the
speaker felt after glancing back at her mother from the car seat.
doze, open mouthed, her face
ashen like that
of a corpse and realised with pain
that she was as old as she
looked but soon
put that thought away, and
2. Alliteration: It occurs in the phrase “my mother” in the very title. The “m” sound gets
repeated at the beginning of these words. As the consonant sound is repeated, it is also an
example of consonance. It can also be found in the phrase, “Sixty-Six” (Here, the “i”
sound also gets repeated; an example of assonance as well).
3. Consonance: “I saw my mother,/ beside me,”, “she was as old as she, “Young/ Trees
sprinting”, “but all I said was, see you soon, Amma,/ all I did was smile and smile and/
smile……”
4. Assonance: “home to Cochin” (Remember: the “o” at the end of “to” isn‟t pronounced as
the “o” in “home), “doze, open”, “ashen like that”, “looked but soon”, “Trees sprinting,
the merry children spilling” , “pale/ as a late”
5. Simile: It occurs in the lines, “her face/ ashen like that/ of a corpse.” The poet explicitly
compares the color of her mother‟s face to that of a corpse, In “that she was as old as she/
looked,” the speaker compares the physical features of her mother to the external signs of
aging”, In “I looked again at her, wan, pale/ as a late winter‟s moon,” the speaker
compares her mother‟s light-colored face to a “late winter‟s moon.”
6. Personification: It occurs in “Young/ Trees sprinting.” The poet capitalizes the first
letters of these words, “Young” and “Trees.” She does so by personifying the trees with
the idea of being young and sprinting. The phrase also contains a personal metaphor,
“Young.” This adjective is also used to compare the trees with young kids.
7. Metaphor: There is an interesting metaphor in the line, “the merry children spilling/ out
of their homes.” The energy and spontaneity of children are compared to a glass full of
liquid. The glass or the container is their home, and the kids are the essence that fills their
home with laughter and joy. By looking at the kids, it seems they are spilling out their
energy while coming out of their homes to play, The phrase “late winter‟s moon”
contains a metaphor too. Through this phrase, the poet portrays the pale-white color of
the moon during winter‟s end. It is comparable to the face of an aged person.
8. Tautology: It occurs in “away, I looked again at her, wan, pale.” “Wan” and “pale” both
have the same meanings. When a writer repeats words having a similar meaning, it is
called tautology in rhetoric.
Keeping Quite
A Thing of Beauty
1. Metaphor:bower quiet (calmness of the bower is compared to the calming effect of a
beautiful thing), wreathing a flowery band (the beautiful things of our life bind us to the
earth), Immortal drinks ( beautiful objects of nature are forever like a never ending potion
of a drink)
2. Alliteration: Use of consonant sound at the start of two words which are close in series
„Sleep-Sweet‟, „b‟ in Band Bind, „n‟ in „Noble nature,‟ „s‟ in „some shape’, „s‟ in
„Sprouting Shady‟, „Simple sheep’ , „c‟ in „cooling covert‟, „h‟ in have heard
3. Anaphora: Use of same word in two consecutive lines (Of noble natures/ Of all the
unhealthy)
4. Imagery: creating a sensory effect of beautiful things lined up in a string ( A flower band
to bind us), Trees giving shade (sprouting shady boon), growing process of daffodils
(daffodils with the green world they live in), Clean river streams (Clear rills), Bushes full
of musk roses (sprinkling of fair musk rose blooms), books describing valor of fighters
(grandeur-..mighty dead), god providing us with best things (pouring from the heaven’s
brink)
5. Inversion: normal order of words is reversed ( Are we wreathing a flowery band)
6. Antithesis: opposite words placed together (old and young)