Action Research Revised - Abancio

FORM 10
S.2021
SUMMARY OF COMPLIANCE (Transition from Proposal to Final defense)
Title of Manuscript Investigating Effective Ways in Teaching Basic Folk Dance in the New
Normal
General Comments and Recommendations

(28)
Panelist 1: Action Taken/ Response (please indicate

JOMEO SUMALAPAO, PhD the page number/s where changes are
made in the manuscript, if applicable)
The title was changed to “How to TIK
Your TALK: An Intervention Towards
Teaching Basic Folk Dance Steps in the
Title “Basic Folk Dance” New Normal”. The statistician together
with the adviser of the researcher
changed the title so that it will jive to the
paper.
Please check formatting with Lasalle especially the IRF
(Institutional Research Format) For tables and Figures, the format was
changed and followed the IRF
Other preliminaries?
Three literatures related to the study
were added in the Background of the
Add Literatures in the very first paragraph ( at least three
study. Its all about the passing of
would suffice) information of teaching folk dance
through generations.
The Background of the study was
reduced to 1.5 limit. It was paraphrase
This is too long for a background – limit it to 1.5 page ONLY. and compressed so that it will not
exceed in the 1.5 limit.
The S.Y was added.
This study determined the effectiveness
Establish your S.Y, also observe past test. of the MAPEH teachers in Teaching
Basic folk dance steps in the new
normal for S.Y 2021-2022
The SOP 1 was changed as what it was
suggested
“What is the extent of knowledge in

Does your SOP answer your result and Discussion? I guess, it
teaching basic steps in folk dance of the
did not. MAPEH Teachers during new normal
when grouped according to sex,
educational attainment, grade level
taught and learning modalities.
The SOP and the entire study were
reviewed by the adviser and statistician.
How did you conduct your study? All suggestions and comment were
followed.
Theoretical comes first then conceptual It was changed
Please review your SCHEMATIC DIAGRAM.
Use three boxes or four only. Please revisit this together Th comment was followed and it was
with your adviser. changed. Intervention was also put in
the schematic diagram
I am interested as to what intervention was introduced. Your
study did not include that.
The theoretical theory was changed to a
Please think of another theoretical framework for this – theory related to the study. It was also
yours is not applicable. review by the adviser together with the
statistician
It was change to paragraph and the
Change to paragraph form. Also, indicate the statistical tools
comment regarding the statistical tools
used (ask your statistician) was followed
Is this all necessary? You may include this in one of your
appendices but for the definition of terms – we will only
include variables
It was removed and the Basic Folk
Dance was defined conceptually and
Folk Dance Basics (define it conceptually) operationally.
As use in this study, this included the fundamental positions
of arms and the various steps…. MAPEH Teachers in one of
the…. (define operationally)
Make use of those various literatures cited in your RRL and
highlight that here – how each authors contradicted or The suggested comment was followed.
conformed.
AGAIN, go over your ENTIRE MANUS, make sure it is
It was changed to past tense and it was
ALL in past tense (except on Significance and
reviewed and go over the researcher
Recommendation). together with the adviser and the
statistician.
This study aimed to determine the effective….
It was rephrased and remove the
Please rephrase – make sure on the last portion you indicate
unnecessary phrases which was not
how the research design is observed in your study. related to the study.
What do you mean by this? It was paraphrased.
Observe APA Format It was changed following the suggestion.
A survey questionnaire?? The Data Gathering was rephrased and it

was improved. The suggestion was
This study lack discussion on Data Gathering – Please followed regarding the step-by-step
improve and consult your adviser. process on how data was gathered.
The video link was used by the teacher

Observe step by step process on how data was gathered?
in the Learning Activity Sheet as part of
the reference of the students about the
Did you use video link? How did they demonstrate as seen how basic steps of folk dance was
in your appendices? Please improve on this portion properly executed.
The comment regarding the lack of
Lacking discussion for your ethical consideration – please
discussion of ethical consideration was
improve. followed.
Consult your adviser and a statistician to help you in your
tables. These tables are usually attached in the appendices.
Should you wish to have tables on this portion, it has to

observe APA format (3-liner)
All of the suggestions regarding the
result were followed. It was reviewed by
Table 8 the statistician.
Paired t-test Results on the Difference of the ……

3-liner table
Please seek advice from your statistician. This paper need a

lot of attention and focus
The references were arranged
Are these all your references? Alphabetical Order? alphabetically and added some
references.
Check APA format. This is not the proper way of citing The suggestion regarding the references
them. were followed
How did you come up with this questionnaire? This is quite It was reviewed by the statistician and
impossible since you intend to make this as an AR. revised.
Why are the options?
(2) Online? It was changed because it’s a typo error
Is this (1) online?
Perhaps this is more of the perspectives of MAPEH teachers The comment was followed and
as to which is the most effective or not changed.
Will this be performed by students? Or by teachers as you The basic steps in folk dance was part of
stated in your SOP? the Modified Learning Activity Sheet
made by the researcher as part of the
intervention regarding the integration of
kadalag-an Festival. The listed basic
steps in folk dance were can be seen in
some parts of the kadalag-an festival and
it was also seen in some Visayan
Philippine Folk Dances. It was
performed by the teachers and it was
recorded as the Video Tutorial. The
video was put into youtube and USB for
those students who cannot access the
youtube. The video tutorial was one of
the intervention made by the researcher.
The basic steps in folk dance in the
appendices F was also the references of
the students on how to properly perform
the basic steps in folk dance.
Panelist 2:
ALMA ANNALIE M. JAGO, MA-PE
The tiktok screenshot must put in to the appendices The suggestion was followed.
The result of SOP1 was reviewed

Where is the result of the SOP 1?
and put into the manuscript.
Panelist 3:
AILEEN ESTANDA, MA-PE
The entire manuscript was changed
Review the entire manuscript and make some necessary
to past tense except the conclusion
changes regarding grammar
and recommendations.
YONELO M. ABANCIO JR
Researcher

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FORM 10

SUMMARY OF COMPLIANCE (Transition from Proposal to Final defense)

General Comments and Recommendations

Panelist 1: Action Taken/ Response (please indicate

“What is the extent of knowledge in

Please review your SCHEMATIC DIAGRAM.

What do you mean by this? It was paraphrased.

Observe APA Format It was changed following the suggestion.

A survey questionnaire?? The Data Gathering was rephrased and it

The video link was used by the teacher

Should you wish to have tables on this portion, it has to

Paired t-test Results on the Difference of the ……

Please seek advice from your statistician. This paper need a

The result of SOP1 was reviewed

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