Ielts 1
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a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight
after school Discuss both views and give your opinion
MB:
There is a heated debate about the issue that whether youngsters should get access to
higher academic education or involve in taking a job straight away. I would discuss both views
and give my opinion
TB
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons why some people think that pursuing
tertiary education is more beneficial for students ’s career path .First of all, attending university
allows youngsters to accumulate a steady knowledge foundation related to their field, which
enables them to complete their tasks and handle problems effectively. With these excellent
performances at work, they can gain affection and credibility from their employers, thus, climb
higher on the career ladder. Moreover, in a competitive environment, qualifications provided by
higher education can beautify their profile, acting as an advantage during their recruitment
process. This, in turn, provides young people better opportunities for well-paid jobs, helping
them to afford a better life
On the other hand, I think that working after the graduation of school also exerts certain
advantages to the career of young people. First and foremost, coming in contact with a
professional working environment after finishing school, youngsters are facilitated more time to
enhance their skills and cultivate hands-on experiences. Thanks to their skillfulness in working
that is soon sharpened, they can bring cost and time efficiency to the operation of their
companies, paving a way for their further promotions at work. Additionally, many occupations
nowadays do not require the completion of university but demand practical-based learning such
as tattoo artist or model. Therefore, it would be better for them to skip academic education and
start their career
KB
In conclusion, each point of view provides different opportunities or conditions for the
improvement of students’s career.I believe that they have the right to choose their own path
depending on their interest and demand