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• Every written poem has an author/ composer/ or the one who wrote it.
That person who composed the poem is different from what we technically
referred to as the persona(e) of the poem. The persona is the speaking
voice in the poem. In analyzing the poem and for the sake of objectivity, we
normally refer to the persona as the one who does or says most of the
things in the poem. We always want to take away the author from the
poem and concentrate on the context, language, imagery, structure and
sound pattern in the poem. By so doing, we remain objective and faithful
to what the text of the poem says and not concentrate on the biography of
the author in order to elucidate meaning on the poem. In traditional oral
poetry, it is possible to come across compositions that have collective or
communal ownership. In the written case, it is always individual ownership
that is involved.
DETAILS ON FEATURES OF POETRY
• Most poems have titles. These titles serve as a window to the content
or meaning of the poem. Sometimes, the way a poem is titled throws
a lot of meaning into the content of the poem. In other words, there
could be a direct link between the meaning of a poem and its title.
However, sometimes, some writers intentionally use titles that are
ironical, paradoxical, exaggerated, etc in order to mislead
unsuspecting readers and to create a special meaning. Sometimes,
such tricky titles lead to the addition of creative flair to the meaning
of a poem. For example, The Beautyful Ones Are Not Yet Born by Ayi
Kwei Armah and The Joys of Motherhood by Buchi Emecheta are
some of the crafty titles that can easily mislead unsuspecting readers
DETAILS ON FEATURES OF POETRY
• A poem’s subject matter is what the poem is all about. If the poem is
written on war, we say the subject matter is on war or it is about war.
If it is a poem on death, we say the subject matter is death. However,
there is a close relationship between subject matter and theme. If the
poem talks about war and the subject matter is war, then the theme
refers to the specific general moral lesson about war that the poem
talked about. From the subject matter we derive the theme and
whereas the subject matter can be stated in a word, the theme is
usually a clause or a sentence. Thus, there is a specific reason why we
write on war, love, death, unfaithfulness, etc. That specific reason is
what usually constitutes the theme of the poem
DETAILS ON FEATURES OF POETRY
• Structure in poetry is an important and interesting feature. It is
interesting because it is not every poem that is written in two or three
or four stanzas. A single line can constitute a whole poem. At the
same time, there are some types of poems that have fixed structures.
Such poems include the sonnet, the villanelle, the haiku, etc. In
looking at the structure of the poem, we are interested in the division
of the poem into stanzas, how many lines per stanza, we are
interested in the mid-rhymes and end rhymes, we are interested in
any rhyming scheme that we can establish, we are interested in types
of lines used(run-on lines/end stopped lines), the use caesura etc and
how they all contribute to the overall meaning of the poem.
DETAILS ON FEATURES OF POETRY
• Language is the paint and brush of the poet and therefore, words used in
the poem cannot be glossed over. Language in poetry is normally divided
into two sections for detailed analysis(diction/imagery). The choice of
words used in the poem is normally referred to as diction and the literary
devices or figures of speech used constitute the imagery. In analyzing these
two aspects of the poem, we usually concentrate on how appropriate the
diction or imagery is to the subject matter and theme, how they contribute
to the meaning of the poem and the beauty of the language used, how
technical, ordinary, archaic they are and why. It is not enough to identify an
image and move on. Its meaning and contribution to the overall meaning
of the poem and the beauty of language used must be explained as well.
DETAILS ON FEATURES OF POETRY
• Setting is also an important component in poetry. It simply refers to
the place where the poem is set or written. We can therefore talk
about historical and geographical settings. These two elements talk
about time and place and these elements are important in poetry
analysis. They help understand the context of the literary piece. Tone
also is the attitude of the persona towards the subject matter based
on the choice of words. The tone could be ironical, harsh, critical,
satiric, passionate, detached, etc
WHAT IS VERSE?
• Verse is the language of poetry. Verse is any arrangement of words to
produce a regular effect through metre, rhythm, and or rhyme.
Consequently, all poetry is written or composed in verse, but not all
poems have the attributes of metre, rhythm and rhyme as well.
• Blank verse has all the features of poetry except, in most cases,
rhyme. In most of the Shakespearean plays, almost all the noble
characters speak in blank verse whereas villains and common
characters speak in prose. Blank verse is usually in iambic pentameter,
the nearest pattern to human speech.
WHAT IS VERSE
• Free verse is a kind of arrangement of words that does not give much
attention to metre or rhyme, or even rhythm. Its distinctive feature as
poetry derives from the sequence or iteration of ideas than anything else;
it is therefore very much like prose arranged in shorter lengths to give the
visual shape or structure as that of the verse. Metre, rhythm, and rhyme
are therefore incidental to free verse. The poetry of T. S. Eliot and most
other 20th century poets is largely free verse.
• Rhyme: This is the sameness of the sounds of words (particularly their
ends) that are not related in meaning. Thus the endings of the words have
similar sounds though the words are not synonyms. Rhyme was one of the
distinguishing features of poetry up to the beginning of the 20th century;
but it is now, along with other things, no more a requirement of poetry.
WHAT IS VERSE?
• Rhyme could be true or false. A true rhyme is a rhyme involving two words
with the same (or different) vowel arrangement in spelling but have the
same vowel sound in pronunciation; e.g, sound and found, bough and bow.
A false rhyme is one in which two words with the same vowel arrangement
in spelling have different pronunciation; e.g bow (weapon) and bow (to
bend).
• Rhythm: rhythm is the movement of words through a regular succession
of strong and weak accents that gives indication of “pulse” or “beat” in
poetry or prose. Rhythm is more important to poetry than it is to prose.
Rhythm engages the ear through a regular flow of feet and thereby enables
the mind to take in definite stretches of thought and feelings expressed in
the lines. A break in rhythm nearly always implies a break in thought and
feeling and calls for a new adjustment or reaction from the reader or
listener.
WHAT IS VERSE?
• Metre: This is the word used in describing the fixed foot-pattern in a
whole poem. It simply means measure. It is the metre which gives the
rhythmic shape of the whole poem. Some poems have rigid or regular
metre in which the rhythmic shape of the first stanza is repeated
throughout the whole poem; others have irregular metres in which
the rhythmic shape varies from stanza to stanza. There is therefore a
close link between music and poetry and the example of the ballad
and the lyric attest to this.
THE SONNET
• It is a poem that has a fixed form: fourteen lines. The composer of sonnets
is often referred to as a sonneteer. The sonnet is the most popular example
of the lyric. The etymology of the word sonnet can be traced to the Italian
word ‘sonnetto,’ which means a sound or a song. Obviously, considering its
musical nature, it is the meaning of ‘a song’ that fits the word. The sonnet
started as a literary composition in Italy and was made popular by
Francesco Petrarch and hence the name Petrarchan sonnet. The Petrarchan
sonnet is normally divided into an octave and a sestet. The rhyming
scheme for the octave is normally constant while the rhyming scheme for
that of the sestet remains flexible and changeable. For the octave, we
normally have abba, abba as its rhyming scheme. The sestet can take the
form of cd, cd, cd, or cde, cde or a different combination altogether. There
is usually a volta in between the octave and the sestet in which there is
always a change in the line of argument presented in the poem
THE SONNET
• It was much later that the sonnet moved to England and English
writers experimented with the sonnet for some time. Shakespeare
wrote a lot of sonnets and he also helped in establishing the form of
what later became known as the Shakespearean, English or
Elizabethan sonnet. Instead of composing it in an octave and a sestet,
the English sonnet was rather composed in quatrains and a couplet.
The quatrains present the argument and the couplet sums up or
resolves the problem stated in the poem. The rhyming scheme for the
typical Shakespearean sonnet is normally abab, cdcd, efef, gg. The
typical Shakespearean sonnet is usually composed in the iambic
pentameter.
THE SONNET
• Much later, another version of the sonnet was developed in England
by another group of authors. This third version was known as the
Spenserian sonnet which was also composed in quatrains and a
couplet but with a different rhyming scheme. The rhyming scheme for
the Spenserian sonnet is usually abab, bcbc, cdcd, ff.
“DEATH IN THE DAWN” BY WOLE SOYINKA
• Akinwande Oluwole Babatunde Soyinka was born in Abeokuta, South-
west Nigeria on July 13, 1934. He is a Yoruba by tribe and has written
works in poetry, drama, prose and essays as well. In all, his novels are
about three(The Interpreters, Season of Anomy and his most recent
novel which was published in September 2021 and titled Chronicles
from the Land of the Happiest People on Earth. He won the Nobel
Prize in literature in 1986 and has gone on to win Europe Theatre
Prize and other awards. His poetry has been widely anthologized and
most of his plays staged all over the world. His prose works are also
studied in universities all over the world.
Soyinka as a dramatist
• Soyinka is best known as a dramatist and has published many plays since he
started writing. The Swamp Dwellers and The Lion and the Jewel (a light
comedy), which were performed in Ibadan in 1958 and 1959 and were
published in 1963. Later satirical comedies are The Trial of Brother Jero
(performed in 1960, publ. 1963) with its sequel, Jero’s Metamorphosis
(performed 1974, publ. 1973), A Dance of the Forests (performed 1960,
publ.1963), Kongi’s Harvest (performed 1965, publ. 1967) and Madmen and
Specialists (performed 1970, publ. 1971). Among Soyinka’s serious philosophic
plays are (apart from “The Swamp Dwellers“) The Strong Breed (performed
1966, publ. 1963), The Road ( 1965) and Death and the King’s Horseman
(performed 1976, publ. 1975). In The Bacchae of Euripides (1973), he has
rewritten the Bacchae for the African stage and in Opera Wonyosi (performed
1977, publ. 1981), he bases himself on John Gay’s Beggar’s Opera and Brecht’s
The Threepenny Opera. Soyinka’s other dramatic works are A Play of Giants
(1984) and Requiem for a Futurologist (1985), King Baabu (2002) and The
Beatification of Area Boy(1995).
STYLE AND PREFERRED THEMES
• Soyinka’s themes are eclectic and diverse: they include racial
discrimination, man’s inhumanity to man, political corruption, social
injustice, death, etc. He uses elaborate imagery in the form of satire,
antithesis, dramatic monologue, biblical allusions, etc to enlighten,
entertain and celebrate different topical issues. He is generally
regarded as a difficult poet and hence there is no enthusiasm in
exploring the full range of his poetic art. K. E. Senanu and T. Vincent
write that “ Soyinka’s writings are sophisticated” while D. I. Nwoga
says that Soyinka’s poetry is characterised by “obscure allusions,”
“turgidity” and an “abstract and esoteric language”.
THEMES IN DEATH IN THE DAWN BY WOLE
SOYINKA
• The first theme in Death in the Dawn is the inevitability of death. No
matter what we do as humans, we cannot avoid death. The
inevitability of death as a theme is refereed to in his other poems
such as Post Mortem, Death in the Dawn, Prisoner and Season
• The next theme in the poem is the uncertainties about life. To bring
this theme into fruition, the author uses devices such as antithesis in
the title, irony and contrast in other sections of the poem to establish
this theme.
• Finally, the last theme one can talk about in the poem is myth and
ritual or the theme of superstition. Africans as we are, the belief in
spiritual things that cannot be scientifically proven is with us.
ANALYSIS
• Death in the Dawn by Soyinka
• Traveller, you must set out
At dawn. And wipe your feet upon
The dog-nose wetness of earth.
• This is the first stanza of this dramatic monologue in which the persona
addresses the reader as a Traveller and life in general as a journey that we all go
through in life. In this journey, death is unavoidable and nothing is certain. The
title contains an antithesis in the combination of death and dawn. Dawn
symbolizes new beginning, hope, and has a positive connotation. But death
occurs in a dawn thus nullifying all the positive connotations of dawn as a
symbol of hope and new beginning. This makes life uncertain and it also makes
death inevitable. The persona recommends travelling at dawn when the earth is
still wet like “the dog-nose wetness”. This is a powerful metaphor that is African
in its origin and aptly compares the dampness of the earth at dawn to the nose
of a dog. The nose of the dog is usually wet just like the earth is usually damp at
dawn.
ANALYSIS
Let sunrise quench your lamps, and watch
Faint brush pricklings in the sky light
Cottoned feet to break the early earthworm
On the hoe. Now shadows stretch with sap
Not twighlight’s death and sad prostration
This soft kindling, soft receding breeds
Racing joys and apprehensions for
A naked day, burdened hulks retract,
Stoop to the mist in faceless throng
To wake the silent markets - swift, mute
Processions on grey byways…
ANALYSIS
The second stanza is a an eleven line stanza in which the persona advises the
reader to set off for the journey early enough. It is the sunrise that will
replace the lamp of the traveler in the middle of the journey. The traveller
must set off at the time when farmers and traders set off early in the
morning to the farm and market respectively. “Faint brush pricklings in the
sky light” refers to the early morning sun rays and the shadows that are
created by the early morning sun rays are full of vitality and stand up straight
in contrast to the twilight’s shadows that lie prostrate on the ground. Again,
while the morning shadows will grow darker and stronger and point to life,
the twilight shadows point to disappearance in the night. Thus contrast is
created here between life and death, telling us how intertwined the two are.
Racing joys and apprehensions for the naked day is also used here to
highlight the uncertainties about life: the naked day is the source of both
joys and apprehensions. The “grey” image which represents death in Post
Mortem and other poems has been referred to in this poem again.
ANALYSIS
On this
Counterpane, it was -
Sudden winter at the death
Of dawn’s lone trumpeter, cascades
Of white feather-flakes, but it proved
A futile rite. Propitiation sped
Grimly on, before.
In this third stanza of the poem, reference is made to the killing of a white cock by a car. The
feathers of the cock after it has been hit by the car are described as “sudden winter” and the
cock itself personified as “dawn’s lone trumpeter”. The falling feathers are further described as
“ cascades of white-feather –flakes”. The killing of the cock is supposed to be a propitiatory
rites to the god of road, ogun and which is supposed to save the life of the driver. However, we
are told that the rite is a futile one and will not achieve the desired effect. This is what raises
the theme of myth and ritual or the theme of superstition. We believe in gods, in ancestors and
in the role of the fowl as a propitiatory animal to the gods and ancestors. The use of alliteration
as contained in the fifth and sixth lines of this stanza is interesting. It captures the lightness of
the feathers and the ease which they are flying and landing on the ground as if it is a cascade of
water.
ANALYSIS
The right foot for joy, the left, dread
And the mother prayed, Child
May you never walk
When the road waits, famished.
In this fourth stanza, the theme of superstition or rites and myth is
continued. The belief is that the road has a god in the form of ogun,
and when it is famished(personified), it can easily cause accidents. It is
also believed that by stepping out with the right foot, one can avoid
bad luck whereas stepping out with the left foot first brings bad luck.
Every mother’s prayer is that the son or daughter should never travel
when the road is famished.
ANALYSIS
Traveller you must set forth
At dawn.
I promise marvels of the holy hour
Presages as the white cock’s flapped
Perverse impalement - as who would dare
The wrathful wings of man’s Progression…
In this fifth stanza, the persona continues to address the reader as Traveller and
this traveller must set out at dawn. The white cock is knocked by the car and the
persona warns of the marvels (wonders) of travelling at dawn as the white cock is
knocked dead by the car. The angry wings(wheels) of man’s progression actually
refers to the car. The speed at which it is moving is compared to a car flying and
metaphorically, this progression also refers to scientific and technological progress
in life. Life is not only short but progress in man’s life is also moving at a very fast
pace. Ellipsis is used in the last line of this stanza create meaning that is unsaid in
the poem in this stanza
ANALYSIS
But such another Wraith! Brother,
Silenced in the startled hug of
Your invention — is this mocked grimace
This closed contortion – I?
In this last stanza, the persona refers to another death. We just witnessed the
death of the cock, and now there is another death. This death is rather ironic: “ a
Brother is silenced in the startled hug of his own invention.” The car created
through man’s invention to provide comfort and progress is the source of this
death. This contrast between the good and bad side of the car helps in highlighting
the theme of uncertainty in the poem. The car is personified by hugging this
Brother. It is again personified by being startled: the car itself is surprised about the
sudden death of the driver. The sudden but painful expression of death on the face
of the driver is captured here. The last line of the stanza ends with a rhetorical
question by the persona. The question accentuates the universal nature of death:
no human can escape it. It is the turn of the driver today, but it could be the turn of
the persona tomorrow.
STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
The poem is divided into six stanzas of varying length. It is written in
free verse. The language is appropriate to the subject matter of death
and it depicts the futility of man’s effort aimed at avoiding death. All
the rites and myths or the superstitions about death are unable to help
man enjoy life forever. Apart from using the appropriate diction,
Soyinka also deployed varied imagery in this poem: the title contains an
antithesis, there are also instances of personification, metaphor,
symbolism, irony, contrast, alliteration,etc that have all been used to
delineate the theme of death and the uncertainties that go with life on
this earth.
She Walks in Beauty
By Lord Byron (George Gordon, 1788-1824)
She walks in beauty, like the night
Although it is so dark