Research Draft 5
Research Draft 5
Research Draft 5
Michelle Bulach
Professor Hunter
English 1201
23 March 2021
Many people of all ages, particularly adolescents, suffer from mental illness at
some point in their lives. I have been diagnosed with depression and anxiety. This has
affected my relationships, school work, and future, along with many other parts of my
life. Society affects everyone differently, but due to the extreme tasks that people face in
their everyday lives, teenagers are often depressed, nervous, or facing some other
mental challenge. Many of these mental illnesses go unnoticed to others that aren’t
affected by this. People are constantly affected by a wide range of mental disorders,
some of which are more common than others. The way society approaches and
responds to topics like social media, COVID-19, adolescent sexual activity, and the
atmosphere in our schools is among the main issues that affect teens' mental health
problems. While there are many causes for mental illness, these influences listed above
Affecting both physical and mental health, mental disorders are a common
occurrence in teenagers. The most common mental illnesses seen in teenagers are
Depression is typically a treatable condition. Teens that have been diagnosed with this
illness consider the symptoms to severely impact their social or academic life (Amy
There are two types of anxiety: social and general. Teens can also find coping
skills for their anxiety by going to therapy or taking medication to help them overcome
their fears (Amy Morin). Attention deficit hyperactivity disorder is usually diagnosed as
early as the age of four, although it can manifest itself at any point in a person's life.
People with this mental condition have trouble keeping still and concentrating, causing
them to often struggle in school. Medication therapy is sometimes used to treat ADHD
(Amy Morin). Anorexia, bulimia, and binge eating disorders represent just a few
examples of eating disorders. People with this diagnosis are negatively affected both
physically and mentally. Eating disorders generally require both clinical evaluation and
communication (Matthew Jones). Several popular social media platforms have come
Six-Degrees, Friendster, and MySpace are three basic examples of sites that have gone
through this routine. Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and Snapchat have gradually
There is a lot of social media use by today's teenagers and adults. This can
exacerbate negative mental health symptoms such as depression and low self-esteem.
Eating disorders are primarily caused by poor self-esteem. People, especially women,
make judgments regarding themselves based on what they've seen on social media.
Negative aspects of social media, such as indirect bullying and abuse, are common. It is
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recommended to limit yourself or your child to one hour of social media a day, or none
at all (Ghaemi).
Self-esteem issues brought about by social media can lead to more serious
mental health problems. Many people form a negative view of themselves based on
being in an abusive relationship of any kind. When people are victimized, they often
blame themselves and feel that they are worthy of their treatment (Anne Gold).
Self-esteem problems have the potential to lead to substance abuse. This is extremely
likely if the use of different substances were found in their childhood environment.
Sexual behavior can have yet another negative effect on a teen's mental health.
Adults frequently believe that teenagers engage in sexual activity, even though this is
not always the case. According to this belief, peer pressure is a common factor in these
people's actions. When people are subjected to sexual harassment or agree to it and
then regret the sexual act, it can be emotionally challenging. Teens and adults
After being sexually assaulted, victims may find it extremely difficult to embrace a
healthy relationship and may have flashbacks from their assault. They may feel guilty
and blame themselves for what happened to them (Adult Survivors of Child Sexual
Abuse). According to statistics, females that are sexually active are three times more
likely to be depressed than sexually inactive females, and males are two times more
likely. This type of behavior is emotionally and psychologically draining and causes
Our society today makes teens feel as if they need to participate in sexual
activity. However, the fact that it is considered to be a common thing, makes other teens
adolescent medicine, stated that emotional turmoil and distress are effects of sexual
activity. This means that if you have performed a sexual activity, it often leads you to be
More times than not teens regret their initial sexual activity. People of all ages
have the possibility of being sexually assaulted which is very harmful to one's mental
health. At the moment that someone is being sexually assaulted, their nervous system
kicks in and reacts with either a fight, flight, or freeze response. This causes an
After this occurrence, people can suffer from illnesses such as depression,
every six women in the United States have reported being sexually assaulted (Victims
Teens' mental health was on an ultimate low this past year due to COVID-19.
COVID-19 is a disease that has spread all around the world. This disease caused the
United States, and multiple other countries, to go into quarantine towards the beginning
Schools were shut down and forced to do online schoolwork, businesses were closed
unless considered essential, and many people were scared of what this disease might
bring. Businesses that had to stay closed and people that had been unable to work from
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home were having no type of income, therefore President Trump created a pandemic
Since it was a newly discovered illness that was spreading faster than we could
find information on it, we were unaware of what could happen. Borders were shut down
and the United States took the lead in the number of active COVID-19 cases (Erin
Schumaker). Recently, people began getting the COVID vaccine. It is slowly becoming
available to the public. Hopefully, this will help to let things open back up and people
can begin to live their normal lives again to reduce mental illnesses.
Ekau Hagan wrote, “Fear of getting sick, the loneliness that accompanies
well-being” (Ekau Hagan). This quote is a good summary of what has been going
through people's minds this past year. This disease has caused an incline in the number
of teens with depression, anxiety, and other mental health illnesses (Ekau Hagan).
While being in quarantine, many people turned to social media to either stay
informed about the disease or to distract themselves from being stuck at home, which
as previously discussed is not a good option. Teens had to do all their school work
online which made it overwhelming and stressful and parents had to work from home
while helping their kids keep up with their schooling. Insomnia, which is a mental health
condition when it's hard to fall or stay asleep, was also a rising illness during this time.
All of the stress had the most impact on the increase of insomnia. The symptoms of
those diagnosed with COVID-19 also caused sleep problems because of the discomfort
it caused. COVID-19 was definitely a difficult test on many people's mental health.
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School is an environment that all teenagers have to experience, even with the
negative effects it has on their mental health. Different aspects such as homework,
testing, and social integration have the greatest impact on mental health (Marko Fowl).
This can lead to things like anxiety, depression, fatigue, and even panic attacks. The
pressures of taking and getting the results of a test that could affect someone's grade or
future career make teens' anxiety rise. Homework causes high stress levels due to
students feeling the need to get homework done and turned in on time while doing good
When teachers assign homework, it often piles up and makes it hard for students
to have lives outside of school. Many students may need to work to provide for their
families or be active in sports, preventing them from getting the rest that they need.
Both homework and testing can often cause panic attacks. Multiple other things could
trigger these panic attacks. People react to situations in different ways causing this
Social integration in schools can lead to bullying. Bullying, when face to face, can
make students feel unsafe at school which should be considered a safe environment
(Makro Fowl). A lot of the time, if someone is bullied, they find themselves debating
whether to tell a teacher. Students often feel too intimidated to stand up to their bullies
or to go to an adult about their situation (Marko Fowl). Bullying can extend to mental
health issues including depression, anxiety, or low self-esteem. What many people don’t
realize is that those taking part in the bullying of another also face mental health issues.
These students often face some type of substance abuse and tend to show delinquent
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behavior (Brennan Davis). Bullying has a negative effect on both the victim and the
oppressor.
participate in activities with other students, they are more likely to experience social
anxiety. When people grow up and are not pushed to be involved with other children
their age it causes them to stress when they are forced to socialize with others. Social
anxiety is a hard topic to deal with because it is usually treated with talking therapy but
With the increase of mental illnesses among teens, the rate of attempted and
completed suicide has risen. Multiple statistics prove that the percentage of teens that
attempt suicide is higher than adults, and the females' percentage is higher than males
(Nassir Ghaemi). States suicide rates were constantly rising around the time of the
of those who committed suicide had been diagnosed with a mental health illness, and it
is 3.5 times more common for a man to commit suicide than a woman (Hermina Drah).
Suicide is a hard topic to discuss, but it is an idea that people have to confront.
Society needs to focus on mental health issues to help decrease the number of people
with these harmful thoughts of suicide. There are many different hotlines and people
that you can reach out to if someone needs help. People, such as mental health
therapists are trained to help in these specific situations. This is something that isn’t put
out there enough and if it was, it may help decrease the rate of suicide.
Many people might disagree that these are not the biggest factors that affect
teens' mental health. They may believe that substance abuse is a bigger issue that
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influences mental illness. Teens when suffering from a mental illness often turn to some
type of substance abuse hoping it will help, when in reality it makes it worse. They begin
to use the different substances as a form of medication (Mental Health and Substance
Use Disorders). Substance abuse has many different side effects. Therefore, this may
cause people to show negative behavioral changes, physical changes, and social
changes.
Behavioral changes may be difficult to notice compared to the other changes that
could occur. These changes may consist of trouble sleeping, mood swings, change in
easier to notice. These changes could consist of weight loss or gain, tremors, slurred
speech, or lack of personal hygiene. Social changes may include an irritable attitude,
adrift from friends and family, or even a loss of interest in their involvements.
Even though social media, COVID-19, school, and sexual activity are the main
causes of mental health issues among adolescents, people might argue that things
such as substance abuse or genetics are larger factors. Substance abuse has negative
effects on relationships. People may infiltrate into a new friend group for no known
reason. They tend to fall into the wrong crowd that may act as a bad influence. A lot of
the time, these people will have a constant need for money without an explanation,
usually to feed their addiction to substance abuse. This could also lead to negative
effects within their relationship especially with a significant other (Mental Health and
Substance Use Disorders). Stubstance abuse and mental health combine to make a
harmful relationship.
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Clinical psychologists often ask patients if the mental illness runs in their family.
This is a possible factor in one's mental health issues, but it is more likely to be
About twenty to forty percent of people that have been diagnosed with anxiety,
PTSD, or depression have been due to genetics (Emily Deans). Although this seems to
considered one of the main influences on someone's mental health even though some
people may disagree. Scientists continue to research in order to figure out a way to
decrease the chances of mental illness being passed through parents' genes. The main
goal of their research is to be able to predict or even prevent these mental illnesses.
Social media, the spread and uncertainty of COVID-19, stress from school, and
teens' sexual activity have all had a heavy impact on everyone's mental health. The
majority of teens experience a mental illness at some point in their adolescent and
young adult years. There are many kinds of mental illnesses and everyone has a
different reason for why they go through it. If someone is diagnosed with a short-term,
or what might be considered a minor illness, it should still be taken just as seriously as
Society has made the struggle harder for teens to avoid getting a mental health
issue. People with a mental diagnosis often feel alone during the time they go through
these issues, but that is not the case. There are so many people that can help
understand what others are going through and provide them with hope. When our
society starts to prioritize each other and their own mental health, teens will stop
hormones and events such as COVID-19 all make life tougher on teens. Things should
be monitored closer on social media to stop spreading so much negativity and sexual
activity needs to be thought through and consensual before participating in it. Parents
should try to be more understanding and notice how their school affects them. These
are all little things we can do in order to help the rate of mental health illnesses
decrease, not only for teens but for people of all ages.
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