Ielts Essays: From Examiners
Ielts Essays: From Examiners
Ielts Essays: From Examiners
2020
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IELTS ESSAYS
FROM EXAMINERS
Task 2
COLLECTED BY
DAVID KOWIE
Essays From Examiners
Contents
Foreword................................................................................................................................................... 7
Simon-ielts ............................................................................................................................................................... 8
1. Festivals............................................................................................................................................. 9
2. Extreme sports ................................................................................................................................ 10
3. Responsibilities of businesses ......................................................................................................... 11
4. Climate change................................................................................................................................ 12
5. Online news .................................................................................................................................... 13
6. Crimes ............................................................................................................................................. 14
7. Old and New.................................................................................................................................... 15
8. Wild animals.................................................................................................................................... 16
9. Child Education ............................................................................................................................... 17
10. Celebrities ................................................................................................................................... 18
11. Job and Money ............................................................................................................................ 19
12. Hobbies ....................................................................................................................................... 20
13. Hobbies – trends or not .............................................................................................................. 21
14. Historical sites ............................................................................................................................. 22
15. Unpaid work ................................................................................................................................ 23
16. Communities ............................................................................................................................... 24
17. Male versus Female in Unis ........................................................................................................ 25
18. Cultures and Advances................................................................................................................ 26
19. Advertising .................................................................................................................................. 27
20. History & Literature .................................................................................................................... 28
21. Parental care ............................................................................................................................... 29
22. Salaries ........................................................................................................................................ 30
23. Economic goals versus other goals ............................................................................................. 31
24. Minority Languages..................................................................................................................... 32
25. University students ..................................................................................................................... 33
26. Punishments to drivers ............................................................................................................... 34
27. People’s relationships ................................................................................................................. 35
28. Financial support to artists ......................................................................................................... 36
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Simon-ielts
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1. Festivals
Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals;
during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
Some people argue that we no longer remember the original meaning of festivals, and that
most of us treat them as opportunities to have fun. While I agree that enjoyment seems to
be the priority during festival times, I do not agree that people have forgotten what these
festivals mean.
On the one hand, religious and traditional festivals have certainly become times for
celebration. In the UK, Christmas is a good example of a festival period when people are
most concerned with shopping, giving and receiving presents, decorating their homes and
enjoying traditional meals with their families. Most people look forward to Christmas as a
holiday period, rather than a time to practise religion. Similar behaviour can be seen during
non-religious festivals, such as Bonfire Night. People associate this occasion with making
fires, watching firework displays, and perhaps going to large events in local parks; in other
words, enjoyment is people’s primary goal.
However, I disagree with the idea that the underlying meaning of such festivals has been
forgotten. In UK primary schools, children learn in detail about the religious reasons for
celebrating Christmas, Easter and a variety of festivals in other religions. For example, in
late December, children sing Christmas songs which have a religious content, and they may
even perform nativity plays telling the story of Jesus’ birth. Families also play a role in
passing knowledge of religious festivals’ deeper significance on to the next generation. The
same is true for festivals that have a historical background, such as Bonfire Night or
Halloween, in the sense that people generally learn the stories behind these occasions at an
early age.
In conclusion, although people mainly want to enjoy themselves during festivals, I believe
that they are still aware of the reasons for these celebrations.
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2. Extreme sports
Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be
banned.
In recent years, extreme sports have become increasingly popular, and some people argue
that governments should prohibit them. I completely disagree with the idea that these
sports are too dangerous, and I therefore believe that they should not be banned.
In my opinion, so-called extreme sports are not as dangerous as many people think. All
sports involve some element of risk, and there should always be clear regulations and
safety procedures to reduce the possibility of accidents. People who take part in extreme
sports are usually required to undergo appropriate training so that the dangers are
minimised. For example, anyone who wants to try skydiving will need to sign up for lessons
with a registered club, and beginners are not allowed to dive solo; they must be
accompanied by an experienced professional. Finally, the protective equipment and
technology used in sports from motor racing to mountain climbing is constantly improving
safety.
While I support regulations and safety measures, I believe that it would be wrong, and
almost impossible, to ban extreme sports. In the first place, we should all be free to decide
how we spend our leisure time; as long as we understand the risks, I do not believe that
politicians should stop us from enjoying ourselves. However, an even stronger argument
against such a ban would be the difficulty of enforcing it. Many of the most risky sports, like
base jumping or big wave surfing, are practised far away from the reach of any authorities.
I cannot imagine the police being called to stop people from parachuting off a mountain
face or surfing on an isolated beach.
In conclusion, I would argue that people should be free to enjoy extreme sports as long as
they understand the risks and take the appropriate precautions.
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3. Responsibilities of businesses
As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities.
Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly common to
hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I completely agree with
the idea that businesses should do more for society than simply make money.
On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a
competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to cover its
running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and utilities. On top of
these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and innovations if they wish to
remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or meet the changing needs of
customers, any concerns about social responsibilities become irrelevant. In other words, a
company can only make a positive contribution to society if it is in good financial health.
On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising profit;
they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and managers
have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For example, they could
pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of life. I also like the idea
that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to support local charities,
environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead of trying to minimise their
tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that company bosses should be
happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their social
responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
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4. Climate change
Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way
to live with it.
Climate change represents a major threat to life on Earth, but some people argue that we
need to accept it rather than try to stop it. I completely disagree with this opinion, because I
believe that we still have time to tackle this issue and reduce the human impact on the
Earth's climate.
There are various measures that governments and individuals could take to prevent, or at
least mitigate, climate change. Governments could introduce laws to limit the carbon
dioxide emissions that lead to global warming. They could impose “green taxes” on drivers,
airline companies and other polluters, and they could invest in renewable energy
production from solar, wind or water power. As individuals, we should also try to limit our
contribution to climate change, by becoming more energy efficient, by flying less, and by
using bicycles and public transport. Furthermore, the public can affect the actions of
governments by voting for politicians who propose to tackle climate change, rather than for
those who would prefer to ignore it.
If instead of taking the above measures we simply try to live with climate change, I believe
that the consequences will be disastrous. To give just one example, I am not optimistic that
we would be able to cope with even a small rise in sea levels. Millions of people would be
displaced by flooding, particularly in countries that do not have the means to safeguard
low-lying areas. These people would lose their homes and their jobs, and they would be
forced to migrate to nearby cities or perhaps to other countries. The potential for human
suffering would be huge, and it is likely that we would see outbreaks of disease and famine,
as well as increased homelessness and poverty.
In conclusion, it is clear to me that we must address the problem of climate change, and I
disagree with those who argue that we can find ways to live with it.
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5. Online news
Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspaper will remain
the most important source of news.
The Internet is beginning to rival newspapers as the best place to find information about
what is happening in the world. I believe that this trend will continue, and the Internet will
soon be just as important as the traditional ones.
On the one hand, I believe that newspapers will continue to be a vital source of information,
even in the Internet age. Firstly, newspapers are the most traditional means of
communicating the news, and not everyone wants to or is able to use the Internet instead.
For example, old people or those in rural areas might not have the ability of opportunity to
get online, while many of us simply prefer newspapers even if we do have Internet access.
Secondly, newspapers can be trusted as reliable sources of news because they employ
professional journalists and editors. Finally, many people like the experience of holding and
reading a paper rather than looking at a computer screen.
However, the Internet is likely to become just as popular as newspapers for a variety of
reasons. The main reason is that it allows us much faster access to news in real time and
wherever we are, on different gadgets and mobile devices. Another key benefit of online
news compared to newspapers is the ability to share articles, discuss them with other
people, give our views, and even contribute with our own updates on social media. For
example, there has been an explosion in the use of platforms like Twitter and YouTube
where anyone can share their news and views. A final point is that this source of news is
less damaging to the environment.
In conclusion, I disagree with the view that newspapers will continue to be the main source
of news, because I believe that the Internet will soon be equally important.
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6. Crimes
Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often
argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of
committing a crime.
In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak
from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became
involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like.
They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous
lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I
imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex¬offender.
The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.
The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be
much less effective. One option would be for police officers to visit schools and talk to
young people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to
lawbreakers when they are caught, but young people are often reluctant to take advice
from figures of authority. A second option would be for school teachers to speak to their
students about crime, but I doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of
information about this topic. Finally, educational films might be informative, but there
would be no opportunity for young people to interact and ask questions.
In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have turned their lives around after
serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from committing crimes.
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It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible
with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated,
I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.
On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less
relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a
profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and
diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being
eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps
the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards
gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives,
are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.
On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the
modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard,
doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit
young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are
perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world,
young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of
backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I
believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense
of community and neighbourliness.
In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s
world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.
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8. Wild animals
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of
resources.
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals
because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do
not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing
special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or
encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why
we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre
of land in order to feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for
us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.
I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the
protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists
agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests
produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed
these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh
the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the
natural balance of all life on Earth.
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I
believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
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9. Child Education
Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay
taxes that support the state education system.
Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to
contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with this view.
For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for private
education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount of tax reduction for
these families, and staff would be required to manage this complex process. Secondly, we
all pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may not use. For example, most
people are fortunate enough not to have to call the police or fire brigade at any time in their
lives, but they would not expect a tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were
given a tax discount for sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation
where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich.
In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that supports public
schools. It is beneficial for all members of society to have a high quality education system
with equal opportunities for all young people. This will result in a well-educated workforce,
and in turn a more productive and prosperous nation. Parents of children in private
schools may also see the advantages of this in their own lives. For example, a company
owner will need well qualified and competent staff, and a well-funded education system
can provide such employees.
In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for people
who choose private education.
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10. Celebrities
Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their
achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.
It is true that some celebrities are known for their glamorous lifestyles rather than for the
work they do. While I agree that these celebrities set a bad example for children, I believe
that other famous people act as positive role models.
On the one hand, many people do achieve fame without really working for it. They may
have inherited money from parents, married a famous or wealthy person, or they may have
appeared in gossip magazines or on a reality TV programme. A good example would be
Paris Hilton, who is rich and famous for the wrong reasons. She spends her time attending
parties and nightclubs, and her behaviour promotes the idea that appearance, glamour and
media profile are more important than hard work and good character. The message to
young people is that success can be achieved easily, and that school work is not necessary.
On the other hand, there are at least as many celebrities whose accomplishments make
them excellent role models for young people. Actors, musicians and sports stars become
famous idols because they have worked hard and applied themselves to develop real skills
and abilities. They demonstrate great effort, determination and ambition, which is required
for someone who wants to be truly successful in their chosen field. An example is the actor
and martial artist Jackie Chan, who has become world famous through years of practice and
hard work. This kind of self-made celebrity can inspire children to develop their talents
through application and perseverance.
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Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree
with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I
believe that other factors are equally important.
On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic
needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and
education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to
cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on
enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves.
Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but
that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a
family.
Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in
our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely
important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example,
can make a huge difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life.
Secondly, many people’s feelings of job satisfaction come from their professional
achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they
earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute
something positive to society.
In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I do not believe
that money outweighs all other motivators.
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12. Hobbies
Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge. Personally, I
believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the statement
that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be enjoyable.
On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. One example of an activity that is easy
for most people is swimming. This hobby requires very little equipment, it is simple to
learn, and it is inexpensive. I remember learning to swim at my local swimming pool when I
was a child, and it never felt like a demanding or challenging experience. Another hobby
that I find easy and fun is photography. In my opinion, anyone can take interesting pictures
without knowing too much about the technicalities of operating a camera. Despite being
straightforward, taking photos is a satisfying activity.
On the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. If an activity is more
challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction when we manage to do it
successfully. For example, film editing is a hobby that requires a high level of knowledge
and expertise. In my case, it took me around two years before I became competent at this
activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I did when I started. I believe that many
hobbies give us more pleasure when we reach a higher level of performance because the
results are better and the feeling of achievement is greater.
In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, but difficult hobbies can be equally
pleasurable for different reasons.
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Some leisure activities become fashionable for a short time and then disappear when a new
trend comes along, whereas others seem to be perennially popular. I can therefore only
partly agree with the assertion that hobbies reflect changing fashions rather than our true
interests.
On the one hand, it is true that many hobbies are simply passing trends. Children and
teenagers, in particular, are attracted to whatever activity is currently popular among their
peers. My 10-year-old niece, for example, seems to have a new interest every month, as she
joins in with the latest craze that sweeps through her primary school. Over the last year or
so, she has been obsessed with Rubik’s cubes, fidget spinners, squidgies and slime. In a
similar way, there have been several different fitness trends for adults over recent years,
from jogging to yoga to circuit training, and I doubt whether the majority of participants
continued to enjoy those activities in the long term.
On the other hand, many people spend their free time doing popular activities that are far
from trendy. One good example would be the game chess. Children and adults who enjoy
playing chess are certainly not following a new fashion or wasting their time on something
that they do not truly like. On the contrary, they are passionate about a game that has
existed for hundreds of years, and they find it inherently fascinating and absorbing. I would
say the same about many other hobbies, from reading to swimming.
In conclusion, while some people are attracted to the latest fashionable hobby, others
choose their pastimes for more genuine reasons.
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It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local
residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea.
The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or
historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going, which means that
the resident population already pays money to these sites through the tax system.
However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Foreign tourists contribute to the
economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and
services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. The governments and
inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and
encourage people from the rest of the world to visit them.
If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural
attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on
holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on
visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Paul’s Cathedral.
These two sites charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote
the nation’s cultural heritage. If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices,
there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important
buildings.
In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas,
and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local residents.
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Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the
individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force
all teenagers to do unpaid work.
Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being
given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding
as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on
top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should
encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure
activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.
At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young
people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and
fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only
lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and
parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is
forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.
In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we
should not make this compulsory.
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16. Communities
We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be
concerned with our own communities and countries.
Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are
problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try
to help as many people as possible.
On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In
most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way.
It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for
those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer
time or give money to support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways,
from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our
doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that
we should prioritise local charity.
At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our
national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious
than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when
children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals
in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small
donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our
local area.
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In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities. However,
I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every
university subject.
Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic.
Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If
a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need
enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one
gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For
example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to
fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.
Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to
base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the
best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and
women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if
they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate
for a place on a course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with
lower grades or fewer qualifications.
In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would
be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.
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Some people believe that technological developments lead to the loss of traditional
cultures. I partly agree with this assertion; while it may be true in the case of some
societies, others seem to be unaffected by technology and the modern world.
On the one hand, the advances in technology that have driven industrialisation in
developed countries have certainly contributed to the disappearance of traditional ways of
life. For example, in pre-industrial Britain, generations of families grew up in the same
small village communities. These communities had a strong sense of identity, due to their
shared customs and beliefs. However, developments in transport, communications and
manufacturing led to the dispersal of families and village communities as people moved to
the cities in search of work. Nowadays most British villages are inhabited by commuters,
many of whom do not know their closest neighbours.
On the other hand, in some parts of the world traditional cultures still thrive. There are
tribes in the Amazon Rainforest, for example, that have been completely untouched by the
technological developments of the developed world. These tribal communities continue to
hunt and gather food from the forest, and traditional skills are passed on to children by
parents and elders. Other traditional cultures, such as farming communities in parts of
Africa, are embracing communications technologies. Mobile phones give farmers access to
information, from weather predictions to market prices, which helps them to prosper and
therefore supports their culture.
In conclusion, many traditional ways of life have been lost as a result of advances in
technology, but other traditional communities have survived and even flourished.
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19. Advertising
Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and
not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree
or disagree?
It is true that we are increasingly surrounded by advertising by companies that want to sell
us their products. To some extent I agree that advertising has an impact on sales, but I
would also argue that we do need most of the goods that we buy.
Advertisements can certainly tempt people to buy products that they might not otherwise
want. A good example could be the mobile phone. Every year people can be seen queuing to
buy the latest models, even when they already have a perfectly good phone that does not
need replacing. Perhaps it is the influence of marketing that leads us to make these kinds of
decisions; we want to say up-to- date with the latest fashions or own the newest high-
status device. The high sales of the iPhone seem to support this idea.
On the other hand, I believe that most people do not buy products because of the
advertising alone. There are other good reasons why we make these choices, and there
must be some kind of need before a person makes a purchase. New versions of products
almost always have improved features that buyers may want. A new car, for example, may
have greatly improved safety features, or it may be more economical to run, or it may
pollute less. A new phone may allow the user to communicate more quickly or effectively,
thus enhancing their quality of life.
In conclusion, while advertising obviously influences our buying behaviour, I do not agree
that people make decisions that go against their real needs.
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People have different views about the teaching of national versus global literature and
history in schools. Personally, I support the idea that children should study first and
foremost the great books and historical events of their own countries.
There are several reasons why I believe that schools should focus on teaching national
literature and history. Firstly, children enjoy learning about where they live, and by
studying the ideas, culture and history of their own countries they begin to develop a sense
of identity. At the same time, this approach is appealing to parents, who studied the same
books and historical events and can therefore help their children with school work. English
children, for example, read Shakespeare and learn about the Battle of Hastings just as their
parents did, and there is educational continuity across the generations. Finally, an
emphasis on national literature and history gives educators a narrower teaching scope,
making curriculum design an easier task.
By contrast, the study of global events and foreign novels could cause unnecessary
difficulty and confusion for school pupils. For example, I do not see the point in presenting
Russian or Chinese history to a British child who has not yet studied the history of his or
her own country in detail. Surely the child would be more able to comprehend historical
events that took place in London than those that happened in Moscow or Beijing. Similarly,
any exposure to international literature is likely to require the teaching of a foreign
language or the use of translations. Young people at primary or secondary school age are
simply not ready for such complications.
In conclusion, I would argue that it is undesirable for schools to cover aspects of foreign
history and literature; they should ground their pupils in the local culture instead.
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It is true that parents shoulder a huge responsibility and that raising children is by no
means an easy task. However, I completely disagree with the idea that we should therefore
force all mothers and fathers to attend parenting courses.
In my opinion, the idea that all future parents should take a parenthood preparation course
is completely impractical. Many prospective parents have jobs and busy schedules, and
they may not be willing or able to attend regular parenting classes. This raises the question
of whether those who missed the classes, or perhaps refused to attend, would be punished.
I believe that it would be wrong to do this, and it would therefore be impossible to enforce
the idea of compulsory training for parents. Besides, even if parents could be forced to
attend, I doubt that people would agree on what good parenting entails, and so it would be
difficult to create a parenting course to suit everyone.
As well as being impractical, I would argue that training courses for parents are
unnecessary. Mothers and fathers have been raising children without any formal help or
official interference for thousands of years. Parenting skills are learnt from family
members, friends, neighbours and the surrounding culture. Perhaps more importantly,
adults learn to be good parents by instinct, by trial and error, and by getting to know their
own children; for example, a good parent will try different strategies when faced with a
badly-behaved child, and will gradually develop an understanding of what works to correct
the behaviour. None of this requires the intervention of a taught course.
In conclusion, while compulsory parenting lessons might seem like a good idea, I believe
that such a scheme would be unworkable and largely pointless.
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22. Salaries
In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some
people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments
should not allow salaries above a certain level.
People have different views about whether governments should introduce a maximum
wage. While in some ways it may seem reasonable to allow people to earn as much as
companies are willing to pay, I personally believe that employee remuneration should be
capped at a certain level.
There are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to allow people to be paid
extremely high salaries. If companies offer excellent pay packages, they can attract the
most talented people in their fields to work for them. For example, technology companies
like Google are able to employ the best programmers because of the huge sums that they
are willing to pay. Furthermore, these well-paid employees are likely to be highly
motivated to work hard and therefore drive their businesses successfully. In theory, this
should result in a thriving economy and increased tax revenues, which means that paying
high salaries benefits everyone.
However, I agree with those who argue that there should be a maximum wage. By
introducing a limit on earnings, the pay-gap between bosses and employees can be
reduced. Currently, the difference between normal and top salaries is huge, and this can
demotivate workers who feel that the situation is unfair. With lower executive salaries, it
might become feasible to introduce higher minimum wages, and everybody would be
better off. One possible consequence of greater equality could be that poverty and crime
rates fall because the general population will experience an improved standard of living.
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People have different views about how governments should measure their countries’
progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe
that other measures of progress are just as important.
There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for
countries. Firstly, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment,
and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress ensures that more money is
available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. For example, a
government with higher revenues can invest in the country's transport network, its
education system and its hospitals. Finally, a strong economy can help a country’s standing
on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power.
However, I would argue that various other forms of progress are just as significant as the
economic factors mentioned above. In particular, we should consider the area of social
justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself. For example, the treatment of minority
groups is often seen as a reflection of the moral standards and level of development of a
society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging the progress of a modern country
should be how well that country protects the natural environment, and whether it is
moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of a nation could
be measured by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of its residents.
In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country’s success, but social,
environmental and health criteria are equally significant.
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It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Although it can be
argued that governments could save money by allowing this to happen, I believe that these
languages should be protected and preserved.
There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of
money. Firstly, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive
education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state
will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This money might be better spent on
other public services. Secondly, it would be much cheaper and more efficient for countries
to have just one language. Governments could cut all kinds of costs related to
communicating with each minority group.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that governments should try to preserve languages
that are less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a means of
communication; it has a vital connection with the cultural identity of the people who speak
it. If a language disappears, a whole way of life will disappear with it, and we will lose the
rich cultural diversity that makes societies more interesting. By spending money to protect
minority languages, governments can also preserve traditions, customs and behaviours
that are part of a country’s history.
In conclusion, it may save money in the short term if we allow minority languages to
disappear, but in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact on our
cultural heritage.
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People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to
what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to
be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone should be able to study the
course of their choice.
There are various reasons why people believe that universities should only offer subjects
that will be useful in the future. They may assert that university courses like medicine,
engineering and information technology are more likely to be beneficial than certain art
degrees. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that these courses provide more job
opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore an improved quality of life
for students who take them. On the societal level, by forcing people to choose particular
university subjects, governments can ensure that any knowledge and skill gaps in the
economy are covered. Finally, a focus on technology in higher education could lead to new
inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that university students should be free to choose their
preferred areas of study. In my opinion, society will benefit more if our students are
passionate about what they are learning. Besides, nobody can really predict which areas of
knowledge will be most useful to society in the future, and it may be that employers begin
to value creative thinking skills above practical or technical skills. If this were the case,
perhaps we would need more students of art, history and philosophy than of science or
technology.
In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only on the most
useful subjects, I personally prefer the current system in which people have the right to
study whatever they like.
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People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make our roads safer. In
my view, both punishments and a range of other measures can be used together to promote
better driving habits.
On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage people to drive more
safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid
repeating the same offence. There are various types of driving penalty, such as small fines,
licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these
punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences.
As a result, we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that they
follow the rules more carefully.
On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in several different ways
that do not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important to educate people properly before
they start to drive, and this could be done in schools or even as part of an extended or more
difficult driving test. Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For
example, signs can be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to
calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly. Finally,
governments or local councils could reduce road accidents by investing in better public
transport, which would mean that fewer people would need to travel by car.
In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I believe that other road
safety measures should also be introduced.
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People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others
nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in
the past.
There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each
other now. Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living
has increased so dramatically. For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for
help when buying a house. Property prices are higher than ever, and without help it would
be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to
be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families. This
means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from
grandparents and babysitters for child care.
However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these
days. In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means
that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. We also have more freedom
to travel and live far away from our home towns. For example, many students choose to
study abroad instead of going to their local university, and this experience makes them
more independent as they learn to live alone. Another factor in this growing independence
is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each
other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.
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People have different views about the funding of creative artists. While some people
disagree with the idea of government support for artists, I believe that money for art
projects should come from both governments and other sources.
Some art projects definitely require help from the state. In the UK, there are many works of
art in public spaces, such as streets or squares in city centres. In Liverpool, for example,
there are several new statues and sculptures in the docks area of the city, which has been
redeveloped recently. These artworks represent culture, heritage and history. They serve
to educate people about the city, and act as landmarks or talking points for visitors and
tourists. Governments and local councils should pay creative artists to produce this kind of
art, because without their funding our cities would be much less interesting and attractive.
On the other hand, I can understand the arguments against government funding for art. The
main reason for this view is that governments have more important concerns. For example,
state budgets need to be spent on education, healthcare, infrastructure and security, among
other areas. These public services are vital for a country to function properly, whereas the
work of creative artists, even in public places, is a luxury. Another reason for this opinion is
that artists do a job like any other professional, and they should therefore earn their own
money by selling their work.
In conclusion, there are good reasons why artists should rely on alternative sources of
financial support, but in my opinion government help is sometimes necessary.
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It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals before they are
cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is morally
wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal experimentation for the
development of medicines.
On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. To use
a common example of this practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness so that the
effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such research argue that
humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all
creatures should be respected. They believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the
suffering caused, and that scientists should use alternative methods of research.
On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always be
available. Supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that a certain
amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved.
They argue that opponents of such research might feel differently if a member of their own
families needed a medical treatment that had been developed through the use of animal
experimentation. Personally, I agree with the banning of animal testing for non-medical
products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where new drugs and medical
procedures are concerned.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animals for vital
medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.
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When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue
their education. While there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, I would
argue that it is better to go to college or university.
The option to start work straight after school is attractive for several reasons. Many young
people want to start earning money as soon as possible. In this way, they can become
independent, and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family. In terms of
their career, young people who decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may
progress more quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn
practical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead to promotions and a
successful career.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies.
Firstly, academic qualifications are required in many professions. For example, it is
impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a
result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they
tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, the job market
is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for
one position in a company. Young people who do not have qualifications from a university
or college will not be able to compete.
For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likely to be
successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level.
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31. Museums
Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people,
while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
People have different views about the role and function of museums. In my opinion,
museums can and should be both entertaining and educational.
On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain. Museums
are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collection of interesting objects that
many people will want to see. The average visitor may become bored if he or she has to
read or listen to too much educational content, so museums often put more of an emphasis
on enjoyment rather than learning. This type of museum is designed to be visually
spectacular, and may have interactive activities or even games as part of its exhibitions.
On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education. The aim of
any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know.
Usually this means that the history behind the museum’s exhibits needs to be explained,
and this can be done in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides to talk to
their visitors, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed
commentary about the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an important role in
teaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects of life.
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In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large
cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and
negative consequences in equal measure.
The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader
economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become
more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult
who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or
her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such
individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development. From an economic perspective,
the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. This is likely to
benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that
rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the
opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people
who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry. They miss out on
the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and
they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps
the trend towards living alone is a negative one. Secondly, from the financial point of view,
a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents. While this may
benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be
faced with rising living costs.
In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and
detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
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It is true that cities are seeing a rise in smaller families and one-person households, while
the extended family is becoming a rarity. In my opinion, this is a negative development.
As families become smaller, the traditional family support network is disappearing, and
this can have a negative impact on children as they grow up. In a nuclear family or single-
parent household, childcare becomes an expensive and stressful part of daily life. Without
the help of grandparents or aunts and uncles, busy parents must rely on babysitters,
nannies and after-school clubs to take care of younger children, while older children may
be left alone after school and during holidays. The absence of adult family members can
mean that friends, television and the Internet become the primary influences on children’s
behaviour. It is no surprise that the decline of the extended family has been linked to a rise
in psychological and behavioural problems amongst young people.
The trend towards people living alone is perhaps even more damaging because of the
psychological effects of reduced human interaction. Individuals who live on their own have
nobody to talk to in person, so they cannot share problems or discuss the highs and lows of
daily life. They forgo the constant stimulation and hustle and bustle of a large family, and
are left to their own devices for extended periods of time. The lack of human contact in the
home is necessarily replaced by passive distractions, such as television, video games, online
chat rooms or Internet surfing. This type of existence is associated with boredom,
loneliness, and feelings of isolation or even alienation, all of which are factors that are
known to increase the risk of mental illness.
In conclusion, I believe that individuals thrive when they are part of larger family groups,
and so it is worrying that many people are choosing to live alone or in such small family
units.
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Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that
these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more
likely to have a harmful impact.
On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers,
are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-
life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and
creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are
useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer
simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world
tasks, such as flying a plane.
However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can
be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent
rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress
through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of
addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when
homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in
obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of
exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant
than the possible benefits.
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It is all too easy to obtain a credit card and then to run up debts which are difficult to repay.
In my opinion, the disadvantages of credit cards far outweigh the advantages.
Many people consider only the benefits of owning a credit card. It is true that a credit card
gives you access to money and the facility to pay it back later, like a loan. This could be
useful for emergencies or something expensive, like a holiday. In addition, having a credit
card is more secure than carrying money around with you. If you lose your wallet or purse,
or if you are mugged in the street, a quick phone call to the bank means that the card will
be instantly refused if anyone tries to use it.
On the other hand, credit cards encourage people to spend money they do not have. I would
never have a credit card for this reason. Debts can build up and leave people in real
financial difficulties. When people cannot pay their debts back, everyone suffers: those in
debt may lose their homes, the banks lose money, and the whole economy suffers. The
enticing message of ‘spend today, pay tomorrow’ should not seduce US into embracing this
philosophy. As my mother used to say: it will end in tears.
In conclusion, listen to the advice of the older generation. Do not be tempted by the ease of
using a credit card, because it may result in mounting debts which cannot be paid back.
(Peter Walton)
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It is true that online courses are becoming a common feature of university education.
Although there are some drawbacks of Internet-based learning, I would argue that there
are far more benefits.
The main drawback of the trend towards online university courses is that there is less
direct interaction. Students may not have the opportunity to engage face-to-face with their
teachers, and will instead have to rely on written forms of communication. Similarly,
students who study online do not come into direct contact with each other, and this could
have a negative impact on peer support, discussion and exchange of ideas. For example,
whereas students on traditional courses can attend seminars and even discuss their
subjects over coffee after lessons, online learners are restricted to chatting through website
forum areas. These learners may also lack the motivation and element of competition that
face-to-face group work brings.
Despite the negatives mentioned above, I believe that online university courses are a
positive development for various reasons. Firstly, they allow learners to study in a flexible
way, meaning that they can work whenever and wherever is convenient, and they can
cover the material at their own pace. Secondly, the cost of a university education can be
greatly reduced, while revenues for institutions may increase as more students can be
taught. Finally, online learning offers open access to anybody who is willing to study,
regardless of age, location, ability and background. For example, my uncle, who is 65 years
old, has recently enrolled on an online MBA course in a different country, which would
have been impossible in the days before Internet-based education.
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Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing
populations.
It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before.
Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can
take steps to mitigate these potential problems.
As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several
related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be more
people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of
younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less
money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing
population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will
include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have
to look after their elderly relatives.
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described
above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults,
perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue
a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to encourage
immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally,
money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital
healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to
arise as the populations of countries grow older.
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Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also take
steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay will discuss
environmental problems and the measures that governments and individuals can take to
address these problems.
Two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions
from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a
devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the human population increases, we are
also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes
rivers and oceans.
Governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution. They could
introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable
energy from solar, wind or water power. They could also impose ‘green taxes’ on drivers
and airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged to use public transport and
to take fewer flights abroad, therefore reducing emissions.
Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment.
They can take public transport rather than driving, choose products with less packaging,
and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for
shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass, plastic and paper in their car parks. By
reusing and recycling, we can help to reduce waste.
In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking
after the environment.
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It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced
films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments
should promote local film-making by subsidising the industry.
There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the
films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain
countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular
locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond films are examples of
such productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. Another reason why these big-
budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses,
and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality,
low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison.
In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. In every country,
there may be talented amateur film-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to
prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people
need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing
high-quality films. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in
employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist
numbers. New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of
the Rings' films, which were partly funded by government subsidies.
In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of
locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently
dominate the market.
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It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of househusband, while more
women than ever are the breadwinners in their families. There could be several reasons for
this, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.
In recent years, parents have had to adapt to various changes in our societies. Equal rights
movements have made great progress, and it has become normal for women to gain
qualifications and pursue a career. It has also become socially acceptable for men to stay at
home and look after their children. At the same time, the rising cost of living has meant that
both marriage partners usually need to work and save money before starting a family.
Therefore, when couples have children, they may decide who works and who stays at home
depending on the personal preference of each partner, or based on which partner earns the
most money.
In my view, the changes described above should be seen as progress. We should be happy
to live in a society in which men and women have equal opportunities, and in which
women are not put under pressure to sacrifice their careers. Equally, it seems only fair that
men should be free to leave their jobs in order to assume childcare responsibilities if this is
what they wish to do. Couples should be left to make their own decisions about which
parental role each partner takes, according to their particular circumstances and needs.
In conclusion, the changing roles of men and women in the family are a result of wider
changes in society, and I believe that these developments are desirable.
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41. Happiness
Happiness is considered very important in life.
It is no doubt true that the majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. While
the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult to describe, there do seem to be some
common needs that we all share with regard to experiencing or achieving happiness.
Although it seems almost impossible to give a precise definition of happiness, most people
would agree that there are some basic preconditions to achieving it. Firstly, it is hard for a
person to be happy if he or she does not have a safe place to live and enough food to eat.
Our basic survival needs must surely be met before we can lead a pleasant life. Secondly,
the greatest joy in life is usually found in shared experiences with family and friends, and it
is rare to find a person who is content to live in complete isolation. Other key factors could
be individual freedom and a sense of purpose in life.
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What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country's success?
The relative success of different countries is usually defined in economic terms. There are
several other factos, apart from the economy, that could be used to assess a country, and in
my opinion education is the most important of all.
Standards of education, health and individual human rights should certainly be considered
when measuring a country’s status. A good education system is vital for the development of
any nation, with schools, colleges and universities bearing the responsibility for the quality
of future generations of workers. Healthcare provision is also an indicator of the standard
of living within a country, and this can be measured by looking at average life expectancy
rates or availability of medical services. Finally, human rights and levels of equality could
be taken into account. For example, a country in which women do not have the same
opportunities as men might be considered less successful than a country with better
gender equality.
In my view, a country’s education system should be seen as the most important indicator of
its success and level of development. This is because education has a considerable effect on
the other two factors mentioned above. It affects people’s health in the sense that doctors
and nurses need to be trained, and scientists need to be educated to the highest level before
they can carry out medical research. It also affects the economy in the sense that a well-
educated workforce will allow a variety of companies and industries to flourish, leading to
trade with other countries, and increased wealth.
In conclusion, nations can be assessed and compared in a variety of ways, but I would
argue that the standard of a country’s education system is the best measure of its success.
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Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music
that is heard everywhere nowadays?
It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world. Music is a vital
part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and I would argue that traditional music is
more important than modern, international music.
Music is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives. As children, we are
taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means of learning language, or simply as a
form of enjoyment. Children delight in singing with others, and it would appear that the act
of singing in a group creates a connection between participants, regardless of their age.
Later in life, people’s musical preferences develop, and we come to see our favourite songs
as part of our life stories. Music both expresses and arouses emotions in a way that words
alone cannot. In short, it is difficult to imagine life without it.
In my opinion, traditional music should be valued over the international music that has
become so popular. International pop music is often catchy and fun, but it is essentially a
commercial product that is marketed and sold by business people. Traditional music, by
contrast, expresses the culture, customs and history of a country. Traditional styles, such as
...(example)..., connect us to the past and form part of our cultural identity. It would be a
real pity if pop music became so predominant that these national styles disappeared.
In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and I believe that traditional
music should be given more importance than international music.
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In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make?
Has this been a positive or negative development?
It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between people.
Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion there are both
positive and negative effects.
Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social life.
Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to interact
without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like Skype create new possibilities for
relationships between students and teachers. For example, a student can now take video
lessons with a teacher in a different city or country. Finally, many people use social
networks, like Facebook, to make new friends and find people who share common
interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face to face.
On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation between
people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was limited to
written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, interactions by email, phone or video are almost as
good as face-to-face meetings, and many of us benefit from these interactions, either in
work or social contexts. On the other hand, the availability of new communication
technologies can also have the result of isolating people and discouraging real interaction.
For example, many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing with
their peers in the real world, and these ‘virtual’ relationships are a poor substitute for real
friendships.
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What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life?
It is true that some people know from an early age what career they want to pursue, and
they are happy to spend the rest of their lives in the same profession. While I accept that
this may suit many people, I believe that others enjoy changing careers or seeking job
satisfaction in different ways.
On the one hand, having a defined career path can certainly lead to a satisfying working life.
Many people decide as young children what they want to do as adults, and it gives them a
sense of satisfaction to work towards their goals and gradually achieve them. For example,
many children dream of becoming doctors, but to realise this ambition they need to gain
the relevant qualifications and undertake years of training. In my experience, very few
people who have qualified as doctors choose to change their career because they find their
work so rewarding, and because they have invested so much time and effort to reach their
goal.
On the other hand, people find happiness in their working lives in different ways, Firstly,
not everyone dreams of doing a particular job, and it can be equally rewarding to try a
variety of professions; starting out on a completely new career path can be reinvigorating
experience. Secondly, some people see their jobs as simply a means of earning money, and
they are happy if their salary is high enough to allow them to enjoy life outside work.
Finally, job satisfaction is often the result of working conditions, rather than the career
itself. For example, a positive working atmosphere, enthusiastic colleagues, and an
inspirational boss can make working life much more satisfying, regardless of the
profession.
In conclusion, it can certainly be satisfying to pursue a particular career for the while of
one’s life, but this is by no means the only route to fulfilment.
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46. Equality
In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality
and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in
egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are
possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual
merits.
What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?
In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and the
same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.
Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe that all
children should have access to free schooling, and higher education should be either free or
affordable for all those who chose to pursue a university degree. In a society without free
schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier
families would have access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be
better prepared for the job market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of
some but harm the prospects of others.
I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people’s freedom
to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose their motivation
to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, I believe that most people
would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their potential if they thought that they
lived in a fair society. Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had
wasted their opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to
demotivate people because they would know that the odds of success were stacked in
favour of those from privileged backgrounds.
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It is true that genetic engineering is a key area of modern scientific research, with broad
implications for all human societies. While I accept that this field of technology may have its
dangers, I believe that the benefits of genetic engineering outweigh the drawbacks.
The negative implications of genetic engineering are often discussed in terms of two key
areas, which are food production and the cloning of humans. Genetically modified crops are
already being grown, and people are concerned that they may damage whole ecosystems as
foods become resistant to diseases and natural predators. But perhaps even more worrying
is the possibility that humans could be modified or cloned. Some people imagine a world in
which cloned humans are used to fight wars or to provide body part replacements.
Although perhaps not a threat to life on earth, the implications of such practices would be
unprecedented.
A more optimistic prediction, and one that I favour, is that humans will find ways to
mitigate the risks and use genetic technologies in a responsible way. From the food
production perspective, genetic engineering could be the solution to famine in developing
countries, if, for instance, crops can be grown more reliably in harsh conditions. From a
medical perspective, scientists may use genetic engineering to produce vaccines, to cure
diseases, or to correct a genetic defect before a child is born. If properly regulated, even
cloning can be done in a way that improves lives. For example, the cloning of individual
organs, such as a heart or kidney, could be permitted for transplant purposes.
In conclusion, I am convinced that genetic engineering will have a positive impact on our
lives, and that people's fears will be unwarranted.
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48. Choices
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do
you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often said that modern life presents us with an overwhelming number of choices. I
completely agree with this, and I believe that the Internet and globalisation are the two
major factors involved.
It is undeniable that the Internet has led to a dramatic expansion in the number of choices
that are available to us. The number of online media options, for instance, is now almost
endless. There are countless websites offering entertainment, news, videos, on-demand TV
and music streaming, many of which are free. I would argue that this abundance of media
leads to confusion on the part of the average user, as we have to make so many decisions
about the content that we consume. A personal example of this trend would be the fact that
I had a choice of just four TV channels when I was a child, whereas I now have access to
thousands of films and series through services like Netflix.
Alongside the influence of the Internet, globalisation is making the world smaller and
compounding this problem of too much choice. Cheap international flights have made
overseas travel possible for millions of people, but this also means that we are faced with a
world of options when deciding where to go on holiday or even where to live. We no longer
have the limited but simple travel choices of our grandparents’ generation. The same is
true if we look at the increasing tendency for young people to study abroad. While the
opportunity for overseas study seems appealing, many students are confused about where
to go and which path to take.
In conclusion, we are faced with a huge number of options in most areas of life nowadays,
and this is often more bewildering than beneficial.
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People seem to be either excited or worried about the future impact of artificial
intelligence. Personally I can understand the two opposing points of view; I am both
fascinated by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive about its possible
negative effects.
On the one hand, the increasing intelligence of technology should bring some obvious
benefits. Machines are clearly able to do many jobs better than humans can, especially in
areas that require high levels of accuracy or calculations using large amounts of data. For
example, robots are being developed that can carry out surgical procedures with greater
precision than a human doctor, and we already have cars that use sensors and cameras to
drive themselves. Such technologies can improve safety by reducing the likelihood of
human errors. It is easy to imagine how these developments, and many others, will steadily
improve our quality of life.
On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence
may harm us if we are not careful. In the short term, it is likely that we will see a rise in
unemployment as workers in various industries are replaced by machines or software
programs. For example, self-driving vehicles are expected to cause redundancies in driving
jobs, such as lorry drivers, taxi drivers and bus drivers. In the medium term, if intelligent
technologies gradually take jobs away from humans, we may find that people become
deskilled and lose their sense of purpose in life. A longer term fear is that computers
become so intelligent that they begin to make decisions without human oversight and
without regard for our well-being.
In conclusion, while intelligent machines will no doubt improve our lives in many ways, the
potential risks of such technologies should not be ignored.
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It is true that we are increasingly surrounded by advertising by companies that want to sell
us their products. To some extent I agree that advertising has an impact on sales, but I
would also argue that we do need most of the goods that we buy.
Advertisements can certainly tempt people to buy products that they might not otherwise
want. A good example could be the mobile phone. Every year people can be seen queuing to
buy the latest models, even when they already have a perfectly good phone that does not
need replacing. Perhaps it is the influence of marketing that leads us to make these kinds of
decisions; we want to stay up to date with the latest fashions or own the newest high-status
device. The high sales of the iPhone seem to support this idea.
On the other hand, I believe that most people do not buy products because of the
advertising alone. There are other good reasons why we make these choices, and there
must be some kind of need before a person makes a purchase. New versions of products
almost always have improved features that buyers may want. A new car, for example, may
have greatly improved safety features, or it may be more economical to run, or it may
pollute less. A new phone may allow the user to communicate more quickly or effectively,
thus enhancing their quality of life.
In conclusion, while advertising obviously influences our buying behaviour, I do not agree
that people make decisions that go against their real needs.
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