Name: Progresstro NIM: F1022181032 Class: B2/PPAPK Semester: 5 Subject: Language Assessment

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Name: Progresstro

NIM: F1022181032
Class: B2/PPAPK
Semester: 5
Subject: Language Assessment

A Trip to Pasir Panjang Beach


By : Prisilia ( NIM : F1022161019)

Last year, at the end of the year, my husband and I decided to spend our
holiday at Pasir Panjang beach, which locates around 135.9 kilometers from
Pontianak.

When we arrived at the beach, we were surprised to see the beautiful


view of the beach. After having a quick dip in the ocean, which was really
cold and windy, we realized that there were not many people there. We
thought that it happened because it was too windy there during that time but
we finally realized that it was the Christmas holiday so almost all of the
tourists who are used to spending time there went back to their country.

After spending few times swimming on the beach, we bought some hot
chips at the takeaway store nearby, and we rode our bikes down the beach for
a while, on the hard, damp part of the sand. The next day we visited the Kura-
Kura beach. There, we were amazed to see the high wave owned by this
beach. Because it was so high that nobody was brave enough to swim at that
time.

The third day there, we decided to go home when we finally made it


back home, we were both totally exhausted because of the trip but we were so
happy to travel such an amazing West Borneo province has.
Scoring Rubric of Writing
Adapted from Brown (2007)
Aspect Score Performance Descriptive
Content (C) 4 The topic is complete and clear and the details
30 % are relating to the topic
- Topic the topic is complete and clear but the details are
- Detail almost relating to the topic
the topic is complete and clear but the details are
not relating to the topic
the topic is not clear and the details are not
relating to the topic
Organization (O) 4 Identification is complete and descriptions are
20 % arranged with proper connectives
- Identification Identification is almost complete and
- Description descriptions are arranged with almost proper
connectives
Identification is not complete and descriptions
are arranged with few misuse of connective
Identification is not complete and descriptions
are arranged with misuse of connectives
Grammar (G) Very few grammatical or agreement inaccuracies
20 % 3 Few grammatical or agreement inaccuracies but
not effect on the meaning
Numerous grammatical or agreement
Inaccuracies
Frequent grammatical or agreement inaccuracies
Vocabulary (V) Effective choice of words and word forms
15 % 3 Few grammatical or agreement inaccuracies but
not effect on the meaning
Limited range confusing words and word forms
Very poor knowledge or words, word forms, and
not understandable
Mechanics (M) 4 It uses correct punctuation and capitalization
15 % It has occasional errors of punctuation
- Punctuation and capitalization
- Capitalization It has frequent errors of punctuation and
capitalization
It is dominated by errors punctuation
and capitalization
Total Score
4 + 4 + 3 + 3 + 4 = 18
4 x 5 = 20
18 : 20 x 100 = 90

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