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    The document is a draft of an argumentative essay arguing that schools should provide more nutritious food. The author feels their draft could be improved by using better words and putting in more effort. They learned that being passionate about a topic makes it easier to write about. The essay argues that providing healthy foods in schools would help prevent obesity, give kids more energy to focus in class, and ensure kids get their daily fruits and vegetables. While some may argue against it, the author believes nutritious foods are important for children's health and development.

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    The document is a draft of an argumentative essay arguing that schools should provide more nutritious food. The author feels their draft could be improved by using better words and putting in more effort. They learned that being passionate about a topic makes it easier to write about. The essay argues that providing healthy foods in schools would help prevent obesity, give kids more energy to focus in class, and ensure kids get their daily fruits and vegetables. While some may argue against it, the author believes nutritious foods are important for children's health and development.

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    The document is a draft of an argumentative essay arguing that schools should provide more nutritious food. The author feels their draft could be improved by using better words and putting in more effort. They learned that being passionate about a topic makes it easier to write about. The essay argues that providing healthy foods in schools would help prevent obesity, give kids more energy to focus in class, and ensure kids get their daily fruits and vegetables. While some may argue against it, the author believes nutritious foods are important for children's health and development.

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    The document is a draft of an argumentative essay arguing that schools should provide more nutritious food. The author feels their draft could be improved by using better words and putting in more effort. They learned that being passionate about a topic makes it easier to write about. The essay argues that providing healthy foods in schools would help prevent obesity, give kids more energy to focus in class, and ensure kids get their daily fruits and vegetables. While some may argue against it, the author believes nutritious foods are important for children's health and development.

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    Taylor Romney 4:00 A

    In my essay, ”Nutritious Food for School”, is an argumentative essay that is supporting

    the idea of providing more healthy foods for schools. This essay was written in response

    to a classroom assignment deciding if you support having healthy foods in school.

    Everyone had the same topic, either you support the idea or don’t. I only wrote one draft

    with lots of typo’s. I feel that my final product reflects my support for the main topic, but

    could be written better. In my essay I could have used better words and actually put in

    more of an effort but I tend to give up easily. I learned that if I support something that it

    makes me more passionate about the subject. It made it easier to write the essay

    because I want my opinion to be heard.

    ​Nutritious Food for Schools

    Do you think that schools should provide more nutritious food? I think that this should
    happen to all of the schools in Utah. I think this because it will help kids stay healthy, give kids
    energy, and overall help kids get all of their vegetables and fruits every day.
    First, most kids in America are becoming obese. This is because children are not
    staying healthy, and active. To be able to prevent children from becoming obese we can help
    schools provide more nutrients base foods. This will not only make kids from not becoming
    obese, but will also help other kids just stay healthy in general. Nutrients are a very good thing
    to have in your diet. Without nutrients you would not have energy. Without energy you would not
    be able to do things and then everyday life. Overall, we need to keep our children and our
    schools healthy.
    Second, healthy foods keep our kids energized. Without energy kids will not be able to
    stay through hours of school without falling asleep. And without school/paying attention in
    school we will not be smart and without our education we will not succeed in life. We will not
    have jobs no more families to support. Energy is a very good thing to have and one of the
    biggest ways to get energy is nutrient foods. All in all, we need to keep the children in our
    schools energized. Once again, without nutrients we are not able to do so.
    Lastly, we need to give the kids at our school the daily dose of fruits and vegetables. As
    well as dairy and protein. Overall, we need to provide the children at our schools all the
    categories of food from my plate. Without fruits and vegetables you will not be healthy nor will
    you be energized. Those two categories are really big topics to speak about and things that you
    really need to have in order to live a happy and healthy life. And one way to do this is to get all
    your daily doses of fruits and vegetables. It does not matter if you were getting this through pills,
    vitamins, or more. As long as you are getting these things that is all that matters. So, we need
    nutrient foods at our schools to provide these things.
    Some may say that this is not needed. Most children at our schools will disagree with
    this logic. They will disagree because kids like their ice cream, cookies, beef sticks, rice crispy
    treats, fries, chicken nuggets, and more. But, what we could be doing is giving them the same
    things but healthier ways. We can get them salads. We can give them sweet potato fries instead
    of regular potato fries because they are more healthy. We could give them chicken instead of
    chicken nuggets. We could give them soups, steaks, sandwiches, peanut butter and jelly
    sandwiches, and a lot more.
    In conclusion, I truly believe that we need to provide more nutritious food in our
    schools. I understand that it will be more expensive but that is the route that people should give
    to children instead of giving them the possibility of getting fat, or becoming obese. People die
    from obesity. Actually a lot of people die from obesity. If we are to take five children almost
    always two or three out of the five are fat. Being fat is not a very good thing to be. It can ruin
    your life. Not only should our schools be providing more nutrient foods we should also be
    providing more activities for our kids to do to stay healthy. But, that is very unlikely so we should
    at least be giving children at our schools healthy foods. Overall, I believe that we need more
    nutritious, healthy foods at our local schools in Utah.

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