Reading and Writing - Odt
Reading and Writing - Odt
Reading and Writing - Odt
“Lorelei remained fixed in place, control stolen from her body. So this was it. She was going
end up just like all the others, she thought as she watched the figure at the other end of the
beach walking towards her, slowly closing the distance. She felt gripped with a mixture of fear
and desolation.”
You may think that reads okay, or you may not. But either way, let's compare it to what
happens if we rewrite it to follow the Action and Reaction Cycle:
“There was a figure at the other end of the beach, walking towards her.
Fear gripped Lorelei, stealing control of her body, so all she could do was remain fixed in
place. So this was it. She was going to end up just like the others.
In this example the first paragraph is only a single line, but it is an, external, indisputable fact.
There's a figure, he's at the other end of the beach, he's walking towards her.”
Next we have the Reaction, first the gut (fear gripping her), then the instinct (all she could do
was remain fixed in place), and finally her rational thoughts about the matter (deciding she's
about to meet her doom).
Hopefully you'll agree that the second version is much stronger, and plunges into the story so
it feels more real, much more so than the first one.
So if you've got a scene that you feel is somehow lacking immediacy or there's just something
not quite right that you can't put your finger on, try hacking it up and rewriting while religiously
following the action and reaction cycle, and you should find some impressive results.
2. Creative narrative
Learning Can Be Scary
This excerpt about learning new things and new situations is an example of a personal
New situations always make me a bit nervous, and my first swimming lesson
was no exception. After I changed into my bathing suit in the locker room, I
stood timidly by the side of the pool waiting for the teacher and other
students to show up. After a couple of minutes the teacher came over. She
smiled and introduced herself, and two more students joined us. Although
they were both older than me, they didn't seem to be embarrassed about not
knowing how to swim. I began to feel more at ease."
Does this sound familiar? This is the Incredible Hulk movie from 2008. Notice the
adjectives and nouns used to describe the Hulk: “Mammoth”, “green beast”,
“monster”. These words grab the reader’s attention. Also, look at the final two
sentences. The soldier wants to chase down Banner, but the question is left for
the reader to wonder what will go on next. This is one of the ways to bring
suspense (the feeling of not knowing what will happen).
3. Catharsis
There are infinite numbers between 0 and 1. There’s .1 and .12 and .
112 and an infinite collection of others. Of course, there is a bigger
infinite set of numbers between 0 and 2, or between 0 and a million.
Some infinities are bigger than other infinities. A writer we used to
like taught us that. There are days, many of them, when I resent the
size of my unbounded set. I want more numbers than I’m likely to
get, and God, I want more numbers for Augustus Waters than he got.
But, Gus, my love, I cannot tell you how thankful I am for our little
infinity. I wouldn’t trade it for the world. You gave me a forever within
the numbered days, and I’m grateful.
During the night shift at Wirth Memorial Hospital, a man walked into the Emergency Room wearing a
monkey costume and holding his head. He seemed confused and was moaning in pain. One of the
nurses ascertained that he had been swinging from tree branches in a local park and had hit his head
when he fell out of a tree. This tragic tale signified the moment at which I realized psychiatry was the
An interesting tale, yes, but what does it tell you about the narrator? The following example takes the same
anecdote and recasts it to make the narrator more of a presence in the story:
I was working in the Emergency Room at Wirth Memorial Hospital one night when a man walked
in wearing a monkey costume and holding his head. I could tell he was confused and in pain.
After a nurse asked him a few questions, I listened in surprise as he explained that he had been a
monkey all of his life and knew that it was time to live with his brothers in the trees. Like many
other patients I would see that year, this man suffered from an illness that only a combination of
psychological and medical care would effectively treat. I realized then that I wanted to be able to
help people by using that particular combination of skills only a psychiatrist develops.
5. Persuasion
A law should be passed that bans the use of a cell phone while driving. Too often I have seen
people driving recklessly while engaged in conversation on a cell phone. They can't seem to find time
to exercise proper vehicle functions or safe driving procedures because they are too busy gabbing on
their little phones. One hand holds the phone to the ear, and the other hand might be used to steer. In
fact, a study has shown that more accidents are caused by people using cell phones while driving than
by people who are drunk while driving. The need for restricting cell phone use, then, is clear. These
careless people are endangering you and me on the public streets, and I personally believe the time has
come to call for an end to this needless and potentially dangerous practice.
The writer clearly presents his opinion using the persuasive purpose. A key characteristic of persuasive
writing, a persuasive claim, is evident in the first sentence of the essay when the writer proclaims, "A law
should be passed that bans the use of a cell phone while driving." The writer bolsters the claim using
another characteristic of persuasive writing, support, when he employs the personal appeal to tell of his
own observations of careless driving. He brings the logical appeal into play by introducing evidence of a
study that concludes that cell phoning drivers cause more accidents than drunken drivers. A third
characteristic of persuasive writing, a general warrant, appears when the writer suggests that the streets
belong to everyone and they should not be endangered by cell phone users. Other characteristics of
persuasive writing, such as appropriate language and a direct address of the reader, are also apparent in the
essay. The presence of these various characteristics of persuasive writing demonstrates the writer's
effective use of the persuasive purpose.
My Favorite Author
I have read many books, however I appreciate authors of adventure writings. These days I read
Harry Potter, which is written by J.K.Rowling. Therefore my favorite writer is J.K.Rowling. The Harry
Potter is a main writing of J.K.Rowling. The book is separated to 7 parts. Actually, I read a number 2
named Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets. J.K.Rowling`s second book is just as funny,
frightening and unexpected as her first, Harry Potter & the Sorcerer's Stone.
She is known as a writer of world famous Harry Potter series. Needless to say, she received several
awards such as Hans Christian Andersen Award or The Edinburg Award. The magazine Forbes
estimated on February 2004 her property approximately about 576 million pounds, nevertheless she
is the first millionaire, who gained all money by writing books. At the moment, she is the richest
woman on British Isles.
J.K.Rowling was born in July 1965 in England and grew up in Chepstow. She earned a French and
Classics degree. Joanne visited Paris for one year and after the return, she started work as a
researcher at Amnesty International among other jobs. She got an idea about Harry Potter book
during the train journey from Manchester to London. At the final stop, she had created all the figures
and the basic plot of a first part called Harry Potter & the Sorcerer's Stone. Then, she moved to the
Portugal where she got married. In 1993 she gave a birth to her daughter Jessica Rowling. When
the marriage ended, she returned back to the Edinburg. The first Harry Potter was published in June
1997. Further six parts of book were published in the next 10 years. To tell the truth, the second title
Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets was number 1 in the adult hardback bestseller charts for a
month after publication. All parts are translated to 44 world languages. Rowling has written two
supplement books, too.
Professional Background
Joanne Kathleen Rowling (pronounced rolling) was born on July 31st, 1965 in Chipping
Sodbury, Gloucestershire, England. Rowling writing career started at the age of six when she
wrote a story called Rabbit. Since then Rowling has graduated from Exeter, worked as a
teacher and been an unemployed single parent. Divorced and living on public assistance
Rowling wrote Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone at a table in a café during her
daughters naps. When Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone was bought and published by
Bloomsbury in 1997 her life changed dramatically, the Harry Potter series has since then won
numerous awards and become a tremendous success around the world.
Like that of her own character, Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling's life has the luster of a fairy tale.
Divorced, living on public assistance in a tiny Edinburgh flat with her infant daughter, it was
Harry Potter that rescued her. First, the Scottish Arts Council gave Rowling a grant to finish
the book. After its sale to Bloomsbury (UK) and Scholastic Books, the accolades began to pile
up. Harry Potter won The British Book Awards Children's Book of the Year, and the Smarties
Prize, and rave reviews on both sides of the Atlantic. Book rights have been sold to England,
France, Germany, Italy, Greece, Finland, Denmark, Spain and Sweden.
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The Early and Family life of J.K. Rowling is what makes this biography worth reading.
Don't expect much in a critical review of her writing. Sean Smith has done readers a
service by exposing so much misinformation and setting the record straight about
some of the basic factual information about the life and writing career of J. K. Rowling.
•J.K. Rowlings: The Wizard Behind Harry Potter, unauthorized biography
Author: MARC SHAPIRO
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Books by J K Rowling
Harry Potter has never been the star of a Quidditch team, scoring points while riding a
broom far above the ground. He knows no spells, has never helped to hatch a dragon,
and has never worn a cloak of invisibility.
All he knows is a miserable life with the Dursleys, his horrible aunt and uncle, and their
abominable son, Dudley — a great big swollen spoiled bully. Harry's room is a closet at
the foot of the stairs, and he hasn't had a birthday party in eleven years.
But all that is about to change when a mysterious letter arrives by owl messenger: a
letter with an invitation to an incredible place that Harry — and anyone who reads
about him — will find unforgettable.
For it's there that he finds not only friends, aerial sports, and magic in everything from
classes to meals, but a great destiny that's been waiting for him... if Harry can survive
the encounter.
The Dursleys were so mean and hideous that summer that all Harry Potter wanted was
to get back to the Hogwarts School for Witchcraft and Wizardry. But just as he's
packing his bags, Harry receives a warning from a strange, impish creature named
Dobby who says that if Harry Potter returns to Hogwarts, disaster will strike.
And strike it does. For in Harry's second year at Hogwarts, fresh torments and horrors
arise, including an outrageously stuck-up new professor, Gilderoy Lockhart, a spirit
named Moaning Myrtle who haunts the girls' bathroom, and the unwanted attentions
of Ron Weasley's younger sister, Ginny.
But each of these seem minor annoyances when the real trouble begins, and someone
— or something — starts turning Hogwarts students to stone. Could it be Draco
Malfoy, a more poisonous rival than ever? Could it possibly be Hagrid, whose
mysterious past is finally told? Or could it be the one everyone at Hogwarts most
suspects...Harry Potter himself!
For twelve long years, the dread fortress of Azkaban held an infamous prisoner named
Sirius Black. Convicted of killing thirteen people with a single curse, he was said to be
the heir apparent to the Dark Lord, Voldemort. Now he has escaped, leaving only two
clues as to where he might be headed: Harry Potter's defeat of You-Know-Who was
Black's downfall as well. And the Azkaban guards heard Black muttering in his sleep,
"He's at Hogwarts... he's at Hogwarts." Harry Potter isn't safe, not even within the
walls of his magical school, surrounded by his friends. Because on top of it all, there
may well be a traitor in their midst.
It's the pivotal fourth novel in the seven-part tale of Harry Potter's training as a wizard
and his coming of age. Harry wants to get away from the pernicious Dursleys and go
to the International Quidditch Cup with Hermione, Ron, and the Weasleys. He wants to
dream about Cho Chang, his crush (and maybe do more than dream). He wants to find
out about the mysterious event that's supposed to take place at Hogwarts this year, an
event involving two other rival schools of magic, and a competition that hasn't
happened for a hundred years. He wants to be a normal, fourteen-year-old wizard.
Unfortunately for Harry Potter, he's not normal — even by wizarding standards.
Joanne Rowling was born on 31st July 1965. Dianne, her younger sister,
was born almost two years later and Joanne’s earliest childhood
memory is of Dianne’s arrival. She, her sister and her parents lived in
Winterbourne, Gloucestershire, until Joanne was nine, when the family
moved to Tutshill, near Chepstow.
J.K. Rowling first had the idea for Harry Potter while delayed on a train
travelling from Manchester to London King’s Cross in 1990. Over the
next five years, she began to plan out the seven books of the series.
She wrote mostly in longhand and amassed a mountain of notes, many
of which were on scraps of paper.
2. Because it was the most and top grossing and best selling books of
hers that inspire most of the readers. It was the best books that she
ever made. It was consist of fantasies and magics.
3. J.K. Rowling wrote this book and the rest of the series because she has a passion
for writing, especially about things that are mythical and fiction. She loves to make up
stuff other people would not think about and she has her own style.
Activity 1
My passion for computer engineering started as soon as I had my first computer and got the
opportunity to study its structure. Throughout my primary education, I was sure that I would
attend a university to study computer science, and after being admitted to the National
University of France (NUA), I have decided to devote my career to computer technology
improvements. I believe that our future is closely related to computing systems.
Therefore, during my university studies, I have spent my spare time working as an assistant at
an NUA testing laboratory. However, I have come to see that the use of light in order to
transmit data can be limited in comparison to radio waves. There is a great amount of
possibilities that can be developed due to this technology. There is a great need of professional
research which involves analyzing technical environments from the perspective of using the
visible spectrum, preferably built upon a comparative analysis with other types of spectrum.
The visible light spectrum is 10,000 times larger than the radio-frequencies spectrum. I wanted
to uncover other possible technologies. Thus, my decision to enter graduate school was made.
My first exposure across these studies came from the Southern School of Technologies, where
I received my MA in Computing Technologies, on an agenda setting and framing while working
on my research paper based upon the comparative analysis of spectrum types. Meanwhile, I
had noticed the lack of English-language books on modern engineering available, even at the
French National library. I had struggled to find some literature while traveling abroad and
ordered books from online bookstores, but the more I read, the more I understood that French
and European engineering theory was detached from research work done in the US.
The PhD program at Boston University has been an intellectual lifeline for me. In addition to
the literature of which I can only dream of reading, I have also met brilliant engineers who have
inspired me to think deeply about my own research interests. Their studies based on
comparative spectrum analysis made me ponder the possibility of applying theories from the
Southern School of Technologies to visible light communications (VLC) research.
I want to surmise whether Smart Lighting ERC is able to exploit its capacity with suitable
electronics. As to the research of Southern School of Technologies, the intensity of the light
signal can be controlled rather well, and a large variety of techniques can be applied to this
signal. I wish to study how VLCs can be designed under conditions of the core center outcomes
of increased safety, energy efficiency, productivity and health. My fluency in several successful
research assignments and my resulting familiarity with modern technological theories puts me
in a unique position to implement this research.
I am fortunate to join a team of pioneers in my field through the newly created French
Technologies of Future (FTF) organization after my graduation. In addition to my direct
responsibilities, I am also taking part in numerous seminars and lectures, organized by the FTF
and its partners. Moreover, I have also became a technical researcher at the laboratories of
FTF. All my activities that I mentioned above are an excellent preparation for my doctorate
program, as I am achieving a better understanding of spectral processes within and outside
France. I make strong relationships with native and foreign engineers for exchanging scientific
knowledge – their expertise and studies will benefit my future research work.
Sincerely,
Genesis B. Palangi
Activity 3
Genesis B. Palangi
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Bayberry Heights, Massachusetts 02630
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[email protected]
November 14, 2018
Michelle Price
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