Letter To Flavia

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Amber Sosa

32555 Deer Hollow Way


Temecula, CA 92592

August 27, 2019

Flavia Bipkins

Flavia Bipkins Residence


32145 Meadow Lane
San Francisco, CA 94131

Dear Ms. Bipkins: thank for taking the time to read my letter, I hope it may be of service.

As a second-year IB Art student, I recently heard about your current dilemma about the type of
painting you should donate to the ​Children’s Memorial Hospital. ​Your extensive art collection
has been a topic of discussion in my class and it’s gracious of you to consider even donating in
the first place. In regard to this problem, I wanted to present my arguments about which
painting is best suited.

Since this painting will be displayed in the family lounge, the Claude Monet painting, ​Water
LIlies ​is the most fitting. When people, specifically families are going through something as
nerve-wracking such as their child experiencing surgery, the most neutral and calming painting
is better suited. For centuries, Monet paintings to many are bright, tranquil and neutral. It brings
the type of emotions one may wish to have during an anxiety inducing moment. When you
compare this painting to your other choices, it really sticks out in terms of visually and
emotionally. ​The Persistence of Memory b ​ y​ ​Salvador Dali, with the melting clocks, is far too
lost in translation and the last thing a family member would want to think about during a critical
moment is the passing of time. Especially time’s connection to death, it’s a very cynical reminder
to the families waiting. Although I have given the second painting some thought, and it does a
very good job of being distracting. Abstract tends to anger some since it can be so hard to
understand nor be understood at all. It especially lacks a brightness of colors and generally in
environments where there’s going to be children, bright colors are vital. As well as the last one
with the dancing girls in blue is too moody. Paintings with people shouldn’t be considered since
it’s only a reminder of the family's child. The melancholy color palette also doesn’t match well
with the general environment of a children's hospital.

To sum up, the Monet​ ​is the best painting of your collection to donate to the family lounge. It’s
simplistic, visually pleasing, distracting but not too hard to think about. It’s bright pastel like
palette and setting in nature is the best appeal to general audiences. I’m sure that families in the
waiting room would appreciate its presence as they wait for their ill children. I’ll be very curious
to see what you choose and I hope that this letter has sparked an influence in your decision.
Thank you for reading.
Sincerely,

Amber Sosa

Ms. Amber Sosa

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